Date: 14 Jan 2014 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter. Loved it!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 1:50 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
Has a chapter been missed? :)
Author's Response:
No. There was a two week time jump and there is a reason for that
Date: 14 Jan 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
Im confused what happen to the gun to her head and now their hugging I'm missing something
Author's Response:
There was a two week time jump and there is a reason for it
Date: 14 Jan 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
How did we get here? Last chapter he had a gun to her face...i'm confused.
Author's Response:
It's a two week time jump and there is a reason for it
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
PLEASE!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!! AFTER READING THE LAST 12 CHAPTERS I REALIZED THIS IS THE FIRST MAFIA STORY THAT IS'NT SUGAR COATED IN SOME WAY. GREAT STORY SO FAR.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
WOW! This is such a beautiful story. Looking forward to read the next chapter.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Shit this is good I can not wait to read more
Date: 12 Jan 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
Now that cliffs is intense, chilling, and quite possibly perfect! Kudos! Outside of Edward's world how weird must it be to know someone is saying,"No, I don't want you to die. But if you insist, please let me kill you so it will be easier for you. The other way will make you wish you were dead far more!" I can not tell you how much Iam looking forward to their exchanges and healings!
Date: 12 Jan 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG! I can't wait for more ;)
Date: 12 Jan 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
great chapter! more bella and edward please :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2014 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
No can't end there, good chapter,very good please send more
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Father Edward is a monster! He wants to kill the son of envy. Edward is very intense and possessive, i love a possessiveward, but Bella is scared and needs to be protected.
I loved it, I'm eager for more. Thank you.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
A foot and an eight inch difference. Wow is all I can say!
Date: 12 Jan 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 12 Jan 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love this story. Found it on fanfic...but I prefer this version :)
hope you will update soon!
Date: 11 Jan 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
hmmmm Sounds like we have more Bella Backstory to hear. Wonder what Carlisle is going to do to Daddy Dearest?
Date: 11 Jan 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Again. Wow. Speechless here. The father really? Bella has to be a little brain damaged right (lol)?!? Great chapter.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Holy shit! First, great chapter. Second, meanest ciffe ever!!!! Love it
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow! And that's an understatement! Great chapter. I knew that Edward's dad killed Tanya, but to turn the Russian mob loose on him & Bella was unexpected. I like that Bella is so feisty too. Edward's mom can be just as sinister as him, so I can't wait to see what she does when she finds out what her husband has been up to. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks, Maria
Date: 11 Jan 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
Omg omg omg....
Date: 11 Jan 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow! This was one hell of a chapter. Love this story. Thank you!
Date: 11 Jan 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
He is trying to scare her that will work. Edwards dad is not going to live much longer.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow! This is something, so it was Edwsrd Sr that killed Tanya, huh, here I thought it was momma, Elizabeth. Come now Bella you know you want to stay with Edward!
Date: 11 Jan 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
This story has the best twists and turns! Thanks so much for sharing. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
6'7" Edward is a freaking hulk! Not to worry though: he just wants to prove to Bella that she does want to live.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
HmmmYou told us that Ed Sr. was not involved with him being put in jail but here it says he was, unless....... lol
And how could you leave it here?????? lol That is just cruel.
This was a great chapter. Thank you
Date: 11 Jan 2014 5:16 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
Uh oh!
Date: 11 Jan 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
Looking forward to more
Date: 11 Jan 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Did not see that coming
Date: 09 Jan 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward better figure it out. I feel so bad for Bella. Edward needs to show her that he really loves her and that she is not a whore.
Date: 09 Jan 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is sooooo good! Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Good chapter but I thought the sons knew that edward snr killed Tanya , beginning to think there was more to Tanya and her father in laws relationship then anyone else knows about please more chapters soon
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love this story
Date: 08 Jan 2014 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 08 Jan 2014 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG! I love this story ;)
Date: 08 Jan 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for the update! I cannot wait to read more.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
Nice! Very nice! She is he center of his world, isn't she? Even if Edward himself has yet to recognize how much. Her introduced to Edward's family should be interesting! Thanks for another great chapter.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh wow, I loved this chapter! I cannot wait to see Edward's reaction when he finds out the truth behind her death! I also cannot wait to see more between Edward and Bella :)
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
Damn! That I so e of the most inventive ways to kill someone I have ever read! Blue- ring octopus, huh? I adore it! In a strange way, Tanya is almost better off this way. Another winner!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
It is love pure love. She is so afraid poor thing
Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
I bet Bella was scared shitless. Well at least she told Edward that she thought he treated her like a whore.
Now, how the hell did the Russians know about Isabella????
Great Chapter. I REALLY wish it was longer.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
great chapter. i like the darkness of this story. now that they have contact again i am hoping for more insight with the characters.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
Damn he is bad ass. I love reading him in action. Great update.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Holyyyy cow! Pleas update again soon!! I need more!! Loving this.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
hmmm so E is ennamored of our girl huh? Can't blame B for fighting back.
Date: 08 Jan 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
So Tanya is dead and somebody wants Bella dead too? Poor Bella, I wonder what has been happening to her since she last saw Edward? Please update soon!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
I feel like I have missed something. He goes to the apartment every night? Need more.
Date: 07 Jan 2014 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
looking forward to more
Date: 07 Jan 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
LOVED IT BUT I'M GREEDY, I NEED MORE!!!!! :)
Date: 06 Jan 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter!! Please update again soon!
Date: 31 Dec 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
This story is different but I'm liking it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 31 Dec 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
Could they not find the venom in her blood? He should have just put air in IV.
Date: 31 Dec 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
Isn't eMac going to be super pissed he didn't get to? Keep going. I want more. ;-)
Date: 31 Dec 2013 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 31 Dec 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2013 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
My God what a horrible family. Please keep writing. This is so good
Date: 31 Dec 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
OH SNAP!! I knew they were up to something, but I wasn't sure what. I cannot wait to see how Edward reacts to this news!
Date: 31 Dec 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
Now that Tanya is out of the picture I so want to find out what is happening with Bella. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 31 Dec 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
What the f please don't tell me senior ed it's a traitor
Date: 31 Dec 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
Now what and why didnt he just get rid of her at the cabin anyway good ridins
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
damn. great chapter
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
What a family!
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
damn. more please :)
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
They got Edward off the hook by getting him out of the hospital. He'll be upset that he didn't get the revenge he wanted. Did Edward Sr. have an affair with Tanya?
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
I knew Edward Sr. was a snake. He had something to hide from his family and he wanted Tanya dead.
I hope Edward takes care of his father too.
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it. I thought esme would have killed her. Great update
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
Damn! Will Ed Sr go down for Tanyas murder? When will we find out what has been going on with Bella since she and Edward were together? Please update soon! Love it!
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
oh, i loved it, that bitch deserved it...... I cant wait to read more..... Hopefully tomorrow like you said... Waiting patiently maybe. lol
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
okay....so @ll the rats are gone....the pigs are annoying...and a little slow if u ask me....i for one can not wait to see what happens next.....
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
While all this is going on with him....What's up with Bella she was attacked
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
This story is awesome! I can't wait for more ;)
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
Ah yes, Tanya is a goner! I love this story, thank you for the update!
Date: 31 Dec 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
Buh bye skankya. That cop really wanted to die huh
Date: 31 Dec 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
great chapter!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
Unbelievable can't Wait fir more
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow that was I total mind f -up brilliant, I can't even comment on how good this chapter is and can't wait for more I'm just anxious for him and bella to meet
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Brilliant! I loved it. I can't wait for more!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
The last two chapters were deliciously evil. Amazing. Love the darkness.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think it's much more scary to hear the things happening than to see them. She probably would have passed out from the sight of what was happening. Where's the fun in that? Just imagining what was happening to them, would eventually be happening to me, would have had me begging for death. Will we be getting to Bella soon? I want to see her reaction when she finds out Edward's out. Thanks for the quick update!
Maria
Date: 30 Dec 2013 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
She thought she mite getaway with her life NOT !!!!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
Holy...damn! That was beyond intense. I really had no idea where you were going with this at the beginning, but man! Bravo. Well thought out and written great update.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
OH wow, what an interesting punishment! I loved it! I cannot wait for more!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh how I love Mama Bear Elizabeth! Edward is not weak. Mama bear doesn't like it when others mess with her cubs. I cannot wait to see how Elizabeth (and Edward) handles this!