Date: 30 Dec 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow! She is just as scary as E!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Love it!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
He's a deviously smart man that Edward! He got the confession he wanted from Tanya and now comes the repercussions. Nice work! I look forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh wow! That was awesome!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:27 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Ahh! This is so good!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Awww! This was so good!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
He is one cool SOB. Can't wait until he meets Bella again.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 9
great chapter!!!!!!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love Edward the evil bastard
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it, cant wait to read more. Hopefully we get updates like we have been, i guess were getting spoiled
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
damn! more please :)
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow that was awesome. I loved the longer chapter. However I cant wait for him and Bella to get together.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
NO, NO NO NO YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME!!! I WAS ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT, THEN BAM, CLIFFIE!!! FML.... However I loved it and I love you. Can't wait for more..... :)
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
evil laugh - she got what was coming to her!
now for edward and bella time!!! (please)
update soon
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
Do I dare say it? I think I will ..... There is no better way to kill ur wife by means of kindness .... And I bit of revenge in telling her that she killed her dad n lover....I am so loving this... This torture his is inflicting on her!!!!!!! Can't wait for more. This story has me Ray, loving every minute of it!!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it!! Can't wait for more.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
Looking forward to more
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
wow he is diabolical. She deserves it though.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh next chapter soon! Amazing!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
Personally speaking, Edward might be frightening, but I'd be far more afraid of his Mother! Gotta love Elizabeth and her balanced view! Superb bit of work there. Bravo! I look forward (?) to seeing how Edward deals with Tanya and her traitors. Bella's reintroduction to Edward's world ought to be something! I have a feeling though, that his Mother will truly like her. I look forward to your next update! Thank you again for all the hard work you put in...it shows.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:10 AM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
love it plz update soon!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter! And loving the quick updates :)
Date: 29 Dec 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
great... when do we hear from Bella? did get pregnant? or was she pn the pill or some type of protection? i dont remember Edward using a condom. cant wait to read more :)
Date: 29 Dec 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
I thought this was a great chapter. You know, some may think that Edward's weak for going to his mother, but you know what? I recall several years back, there was a report on the news that one of the most notorious mafia families in Sicily was headed up by a woman. They reported her to be evil and heartless. Just 'cause your a woman doesn't mean your soft. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks, Maria
Date: 29 Dec 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Looking forward to more
Date: 29 Dec 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
wow !! mama bear protecting the family..
Date: 29 Dec 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Just read the last 3 chapters.....whoohoo, this is gonna be good!!!!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ooooohhh plot thickens! Update soon
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh, so good! Thank you for the chapter!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love Elizabeth!!!!! More more more! Thanks
Date: 28 Dec 2013 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
Mama is just what he needed she is a wise evil women that nows what has to be done for her family love it.
Date: 28 Dec 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 28 Dec 2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
Damn! Elizabeth is evil...I love her great update
Date: 28 Dec 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
oooh Mama E is bad ass
Date: 28 Dec 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hmmm I dont think I cared for this chapter too much. I loved the affection he showed his moma and the girls but this chapter....I think it just makes him look weak and he needs his momas orders to do his job. :(
Date: 28 Dec 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter. So glad you're back to writing this one again. :-)
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
Good chapter, wow it seems like its Elizabeth that is the driving force behind Edwards ways, I suppose what makes him a strong leader, he just needs a strong woman like that behind him, hopefully bella may be that for him?
Please send more chapters I know it is the christmas holiday but this story has too much potential and I can't wait to see how it turns out 😊
Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ah, Elizabeth. What a peach!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh i like Liz. :-)
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bye bye Tanya.....
Date: 26 Dec 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
great chapter!
Date: 24 Dec 2013 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
I was so happy to see your updates I stayed up till going on 3:00am to read them. It's Christmas Eve here now! I have to tell you how very much I love this story. I' anxious to find out what Bella's been doing since she quit and even more anxious to see how she takes Edward's reappearance. Again, thank you for an exciting, and well written piece. I look forward to seeing where you lead us! Thank you and Merry Christmas!
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2013 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yup, thought so. Can't wait to see what happens to her.
Catherine
Date: 24 Dec 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 24 Dec 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yea, I can't wait!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love it. So dark and so good
Date: 23 Dec 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
This is sooo good! I'm glad you didn't forget this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
It was really good Tanya is in trouble. What will Bella say when she sees Edward ?
Date: 23 Dec 2013 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG....love this. Everytime I think I'm waiting too long for the next update.... you write this and pow.... I'm hooked again. Love your writing and can't wait to see where this is going to go...
Date: 23 Dec 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
Is Bella by any chance pregnant? I can't wait for when they finally meet.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 3:17 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
Omg please update soon!! Can't wait to read more!!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome! I can't wait for more ;)
Date: 23 Dec 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love this story. Please update soon.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
Damn! Heartless bitch! I had a feeling she had something yo do with it. Wow! Intense chapter. Great update.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
I LOVE THIS SOO MUCH! YOU P OSTED THIS BEFORE AND I DONT REMEMBER WHY YOU PULLED IT. PLZ,PLZ,FINISH THIS STORY PLZ I LOVE IT SO MUCH! THANK YOU SO MUCH, MERRY XMAS.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow. The druggie had that huge info and Carlisle couldn't figure it out? Is it true? And how is her father implicated? Great job.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 11:30 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Wow. So dark. I would really like him free of Tanya. Great chapter. Gimme more please.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2013 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
Holy Craps! I don't even want to know what he's gonna do to Demetri and Eleazar. I have a feeling it's gonna be worst than what just happened to Alecto. If that's posible. And as an Italian woman with a temper my husband says would scare the Devil himself when someone messes with my family, I would almost want Edward to deal with me than his mama. To bad, so sad for you Tanya. Can't wait for the next chapter! It's going to be great, just like the previous 7, but I have a feeling that it ain't going to pretty.
Merry Christmas or Happy Holidays, Maria
Date: 23 Dec 2013 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
update soon please!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
(GOOD!!!!!! MY GOD SO GOOD!!!
Girl you have a way with your words!
CANT. WAY. FOR. MORE, specially what was going to come for Tanya (bitch deserve hell!!)
love it!
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2013 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
OMG, I love this story it's so good, seriously good!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love this story, and i cant wait to read more......
Date: 23 Dec 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow anyone will think before even looking at Bella not. Edward could not get enough of the guys blood.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow ..... I am loving this so much!!! Mama is going to go ballistic !! Can't wait for more!!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
So good, so good, so good!! When are we getting more???? :)
Date: 23 Dec 2013 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
OH WOW...I knew Diavolo was wicked, but that was INTENSE! I loved every bit of it (and I don't normally like violence). I knew Tanya was connected, but wasn't sure how. I cannot wait for more!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
Tanya your going DOWN!
go edward go edward kill him!
loved the chapter and hope u update soo!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it! Can't wait for more.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
Can't wait for the next chapter. Poor poor tanya can't wait for mama bear to come out to play watch your back Tanya and for her father shame on him hope he gets want is coming for him
Date: 23 Dec 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
Another great chapter that just leaves you wanting more! Tanya is so screwed!! Haha
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
Words can't describe this chapter, pure brilliance, I knew Tanya had to have done something wrong, but why, the man gave her everything but she still wanted more did she not know who she was dealing with! Obviously not lol
please please please if there is more chapters feel free to spring them on us, don't leave it like this not yet. Now I do want to know what his mother is going to do to Tanya, Elizabeth seems like such a demure woman, Tanya obviously messed with the wrong so now I really can't wait to see what she is capable of.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
Omg... I so didn't see it being Tanya......oh boy can't wait to see what happens
Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh fuck crap damn shit more more more please please please
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
I am really enjoying this story. Especially liked this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens to Tanya.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ooh skankya is going to regret pissing off mama esme.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
Tough stuff!! Mama's revenge is not going to be pretty!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
What a wonderful chapter. I cant wait to see what mama does to Tanya. lol. Great Chapter.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
lol I think things are going to hit the fan. Something tells me bella is pregnant. lol That would be good.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Interesting now this for me is when the story will start to get heated, obviously edward is going to push for answers as to why she resigned, please say there will be another chapter soon I love this story to bits and just eager to read more .
If u r unable to send another chapter, no problem real life gets in the way, I wish you a happy christmas :)
Date: 22 Dec 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
wow it is getting so good. thanks
Date: 22 Dec 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
Oh I did read this. Its been awhile since you updated. I love it so far.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:56 PM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Another gret chapter! Hopefully more Edward and Bella in the next one :)
Date: 22 Dec 2013 11:56 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Love Love love. Fab writing as usual. I cant wait for the next chapter. Tanya what a bitch. Next chapter please :)
Date: 22 Dec 2013 11:51 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Oh my god! So worth the wait. I'm dying to see what happens to Tanya. Ah, I want more. I can't wait for this reunion. Great update.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 11:00 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Love it.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 6:58 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Love the story.
..... So when's the next chapter?
Date: 22 Dec 2013 6:28 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
I dont think he likes his wife lol. His dad is not as happy as his mom is. What has Bella been doing for the last 5 months???
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2013 5:54 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Mercy, I love this story! Very engrossing! Can't wait for him to do away with the wife Skank-ya! Happy Holidays
Date: 22 Dec 2013 4:20 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Oooooohhhh I am excited to see what happens in the next chap!!!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Love it :)
Date: 22 Dec 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Loved it!! Please update again soon.