Date: 22 Dec 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Omg...what's going with bella, is she okay...and omg how is she going to take edward being there...can't wait to read more...
Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Omg!! Hot, hot, hot!! I'm greedy, I need more!!!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
OH SNAP! That was amazing! I really love how Edward put Tanya in her place! I cannot wait to see how that goes down ;) I also cannot wait to see what happens next for Isabella and Edward
Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
So glad to see this updated!! Shits going to get really interesting now!!
Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Love him putting Skankya in her place. Ah Jasper tailed he huh? guess that reunion is not going to go well.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
More more more please
Date: 22 Dec 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
FUCK YA! Lol great chap! Cant wait for next!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2013 8:29 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
enjoying one of faves
Date: 16 Dec 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
oooh E's not going to be happy the boys don't know where B is. Wonder who the rat is going to turn out to be?
Date: 16 Dec 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Well I guess B didn't have much of a choice, but she didn't seem as scared as I thought she'd be. Ah well ooh she figured out the pills huh? Wonder where she is going to run to?
Date: 16 Dec 2013 8:48 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
oh wow. How does she owe so much money to the loan sharks (I'm assuming). Ugh Jessica is a whore as usual. Ugh. awww poor B. Guess she didnt realize who owned the place. An overnight bag huh?
Date: 16 Dec 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
ooh E is a bad ass huh. Uh oh. B is stealing from the mob??? sooo not smart.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 8:28 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
oooh an interesting start. Love the pic.
Date: 14 Dec 2013 6:44 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
awesome. hoping for an update soon :) more please.
Date: 18 Oct 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Wow this chapter was much shorter then the other ones. I cant wait for Edward to divorce his wife and go get Bella.
Date: 18 Oct 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
That was amazing until he told her that her debt was paid. Yeh I think Bella feels like a whore now. I am curious about the pills though. What were they?
Date: 18 Oct 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
This is awesome. Literally I LOVE THIS STORY.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 10:10 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
This is such a good story. I hope you continue writing it. I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 04 Oct 2013 6:09 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Please update I am greedy and need more!
Date: 11 Sep 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
all I can say is PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I am soo looking forward to MORE! Love this!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2013 11:24 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
love this story so much please update soon :-)
Date: 11 Sep 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
WOW, you sure have my interest here! I love reading STRONG Edwards and Mobwards are my favorites
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2013 9:01 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Ahhh I hope this gets updated soon!!!! So so good!! I wonder if the boss knows that miss Jessica cuts the employees checks???
Date: 11 Sep 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Great characterizations, wonderful build up, and one hell of a seduction scene! I can't wait to follow along. Just curious though, how long is it between Bella's visit and Edward's release? Thank you for all the hard work!
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Loved it, can't wait to read more...
Date: 09 Sep 2013 9:41 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
I'm so glad that u updated!
Can't wait to read more
Date: 09 Sep 2013 9:14 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 09 Sep 2013 7:00 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Cant wait to read more. Do u have a update schedual? Hope to read more soon.
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Great ending.
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Can't wait for more
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
What happened to Isabella? So how old is Edward and how long has it been since Edward saw Isabella at the prison? I can't wait for the next update please let it be soon. Will the chapters be longer? I just love the story, I am addicted already!
Date: 09 Sep 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
what a cliffy please please please update
Date: 09 Sep 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Shit is going to hit the fan now
Date: 08 Sep 2013 11:34 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
This was AMAZING! I cannot wait to see what happens next, now that Edward is out of prison! YAY for an update!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2013 10:51 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Okay so where is Bella I would think that he would want to see her.....
Date: 08 Sep 2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Thanks for the awesome update! I am really looking forward to more. We want to know what has happened to Bella, what's happened to Edward's wife and what is Edward going to do about both of them now that he is out.
Date: 08 Sep 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Oh so good. Ready for more updates and to see what is going on with Bella. Thanks
Date: 08 Sep 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Great chapter! Please please update again (and quickly)!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2013 8:50 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
i cant wait for another chapter!! i love this story and im wondering now what happened to bella?
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Damn can't wait for more
Date: 08 Sep 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Loved it, brilliant story update soon :)
Date: 08 Sep 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Yea!!! So happy for an update. It was so worth it. I can't wait to see what the Devilward does now that he is out. Or what he has to say about Bella. Great update.
Date: 08 Sep 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Uh oh look out for Edward. So I wonder who ratted him out
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2013 11:33 AM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
Hello
I was wondering when you might be updating next, really love the story an hope you continue with it!
please update soon! Please please please
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 3:38 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
I love this shit! It's good cant wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Great story. How often do you update. How long will the story be. I love long stories and will you be doing a sequel
Date: 07 Jul 2013 2:56 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Please continue writing. I love what I have read so far.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:00 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Oh I need more of this one that is for sure !!!
Date: 01 Jul 2013 10:55 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
What was the bet about? What is Bella gonna do? What will Edward do next?
Date: 01 Jul 2013 4:57 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Poor Bella she think he just used her and that was all not that he was going to keep her forever. What is Bella going to do with the pills??
Date: 01 Jul 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
lovin this story! cant wait for the next update!
Date: 29 Jun 2013 9:48 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
I LOVE IT! THANK YOU SO MUCH!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2013 2:21 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
great chapter cant wait to read more
Date: 29 Jun 2013 1:48 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
i reviewed on ffn so all i have to say is: That lemon was hot! okay bai
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2013 10:56 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
:)
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[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2013 9:27 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Wow that was one hell of a chapter absolutely loved it. Fair enough Edward sounded cold but I think he was serious when being told that she is his now, she is abit naive too as to think he don't want her.
i can't wait for the next chapter and u wrote a very convincing lemon,very hot under the collar here lol
Date: 29 Jun 2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
i love this
Date: 29 Jun 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
That was amazing. I just have one question/comment. In this chapter you say Edward has a " muscular six foot frame". But, in chapter 2 (or 3, depending on how you look at it), you describe Edward as "His tall six foot, seven inch frame looked lean and powerful and his seemingly unruly mass of hair was a unique reddish, copper colour."
Date: 29 Jun 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
wow, another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
What an incredible chapter. Outstanding lemon. Keep them coming. I look forward to the next chapter. I hope it posts sooner rather than later.
Date: 29 Jun 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
great story! please update soon!!
Date: 29 Jun 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Holy hell! First that was hot. Second, I want more!!!! What is going to happen with Bella? Does Edward have true feelings, or was it like she felt...an itch he had to scratch? What is Bella going to do now? Great update. **Hangs head, I still love your Edward**
Date: 29 Jun 2013 1:17 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Hey Ray - thanks for the shout out. I like that this Mobward has gray eyes, different. My favorite part of a line: abandon all pretenses of being a gentleman and began pounding into her at bruising speeds. I'll talk more to you via FB.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Omg that was so awesome. I'm kind of jealous of Bella now!! So he missed how she interpreted his comment at the end huh? Wonder why Emmett and Carlisle were upset that he did what he did. Do they think the same as Bella that all he wanted was to scratch an itch? I don't do face book but would love to have the link to see your trailer
Date: 28 Jun 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2013 10:32 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Holy shit! What an explosive chapter. I can't wait to see where this story is going. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
What's with the pills? I don't understand what's wrong with her also what was the bet? I'm kinds lost here
Date: 28 Jun 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
what are those pills !!
After reading the un edited version here , he might have not raped her but he's still an ass !!
Date: 27 Jun 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
I need more please more !!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2013 1:22 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
LOVE IT,CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
Date: 25 Jun 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
I'm so ecited for the next chapter!
Date: 24 Jun 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
Great chapter, cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
I can't wait to see how the meeting with Edward goes.... Did she borrow the money from people to pay for her schooling?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
Yes, Yes very very good, can't wait for more of this tempting story!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
Ohhh, looks very good
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2013 11:18 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
Interesting
Date: 23 Jun 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
Oh, Lord. Poor Bella.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
Oh dear poor bella I feel sorry I bet she is paying off a debt that her parents ran up. I can't wait for the next chapter it seems to far away.
I wondering what Edward is going to make her do, it's certain that he likes what he saw in bella but I do hope he hears her out. Now I'm thinking about it since emmett did his homework, who her parents are and etc could be not find out maybe why she's stealing? I don't know, I know it won't be documented if she's taken money out from a loan shark but I'm sure they have their ways in finding info out.
Speaking out loud an rambling again, love this story already and its only three chapters in :)
Date: 23 Jun 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
I just found this story and I really enjoyed the first 3 chapters and can't wait to read more. Update soon.
Date: 23 Jun 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
Great chapter! Loved it. so well written. Poor Bella, what a horrid time she is having.
Date: 23 Jun 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
Poor girl is scared to death. Will she tell Edward the truth
Date: 23 Jun 2013 12:57 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
I'm definitely hooked and can't wait to see what happens. So why was she stealing from them and who does she owe money to?
Date: 23 Jun 2013 12:50 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
Wow! Who was the man in the hallway? Great chapter!
Date: 22 Jun 2013 9:09 AM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
What a terrific start!! Can't wait to see this unfold. :)
XOXOXO
Date: 22 Jun 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
LOVE IT ! MORE PLZ!
Date: 20 Jun 2013 4:12 PM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
Wow, this has started out great. Love mobward. Can't wait for the next chapter. I read it first on ffn but I like the pictures imbedded here at twcs much better. They make the story better.
Date: 20 Jun 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
Someone is making her do it. He likes what he sees
Date: 20 Jun 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
Great start. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
Please tell me u r going to spoil us with another chapter tonite plllleeeeaaassse.
It seems like bellas being force to take that money but by who?
i can't wait for the next chapter honestly :)
Date: 19 Jun 2013 10:10 PM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
WOW!!!! You...that was amazing! Your Edward is...oh boy. I can't wait for more.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
I cant wait fir more...
Date: 19 Jun 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
Just don't make B fall for E's charms right away!!!!! She needs to be controlled somehow!!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
Well this story is different and I'm liking so far.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:28 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
Love it!!!! Interesting!!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 5:45 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
sounds interesting
Date: 19 Jun 2013 4:04 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
WOW! That is an amazing beginning!!!! I can't wait to get to the meat of it all. The seven deadly sins countered by the seven virtues was a great way to go. Amazing!!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 2:23 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
Yea :)
Date: 19 Jun 2013 1:21 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
Promising! Committing myself to follow it! After all...curiosity is not a sin is it? *winks*
Congratulations and bring it on!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2013 1:11 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
Interesting want to see how this story goes