[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2020 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Whew that was hot!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2020 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Whew that was hot!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2020 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Whew that was hot!
Date: 12 Nov 2017 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 24
That was quite the action packed ending.
I really like Bella & Carlisle together. I wish so much that Varner could be put away & they could be done with him. Hoping he doesn't follow them to San Francisco.
In regards to their relationship, as well as their friends relationships, I feel that San Francisco is going to be perfect. They accept so much there. Looking forward to the sequel.
Date: 12 Nov 2017 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 23
What in the world is going through Varner's head? He is totally a stalker & has some disorder.
they need to get out of Forks
Date: 12 Nov 2017 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow! That is sure one big settlement. But I really loved the condition they added that Dr. Gerandy had to apologize.
Great condition to add
Date: 04 Jun 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 24
Just finished reading this. I've shied away from it for a long time as I'm not a huge fan of non cannon stories, but, now, I really am wondering what I was so bothered about. Butterfly Betty has written a great story. Bella is with Carlisle, Edward is there but as Jasper's partner and all the other usual suspects are there as well. The story is packed with plot, none of which is laboured over, so it is very engaging, so before you realise what is going on you've been reading for longer than you intended and there is every possibility that you are going to sleep in for work and be shattered all the next day.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
Best chapter yet!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 24
I couldn't stop read...just finished. Need fore! Thanks = Xanath
Date: 15 Aug 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow. That town is certainly toxic. Great speech she gave Jake too. Glad Peter was there.
Date: 14 Aug 2014 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 24
I hope they are safe in San Francisco. I hope Varner gets what is coming to him. He needs to be put away. I am sad this is the end. But look forward to the second part.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
Sadly trying to get a TRO would probably be useless too. Can't wait for them to leave the small minded town
Date: 07 Aug 2014 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 23
Mr. Varner is such a creep.................
Hopefully he gets what he deserves in the next two chapters!
Date: 07 Aug 2014 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 23
Sorry you have been sick. Hope you are better. I can not believe that Mr. Varner approached her in the grocery store. He has some nerve. I am glad that all of them will be together in San Francisco. I am a little worried about Bella being there with the boys when Carlisle goes to close on the house.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 28 Jul 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
I can not believe that they put their clothes back on while they were covered in paint. How did Bella keep from getting paint allover the pictures?
Loved the story of Charlie helping that guy. Can't wait for more.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
Think Bella needs some counselling/therapy to get over all this and be healty for Carlisle and the boys
Date: 21 Jun 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 20
Well I think.. That you call that woman attorney that takes all those hot cases and she goes public with that and that school system and that DA would be buried shortly with problems.
Date: 21 Jun 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am dreading the next chapter.
Date: 21 Jun 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
I must say I did not like the line F... God. God is our judge not people. People have a habit of missinterpreting what God says. HE told us to Love one another. He said Judge not. So that is what I am doing with the rest of my life. I am going to not judge. Love my fellow man as best I can and try and understand that I am not their maker. I am just their sister in this life.
Good chapter other than that one line.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
he was there as a visitor not as an employee. Well his lawyer will have fun with that.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
My daughter and her husband are 11 years different. She was almost 21 when they met and 21 when they married. I said to myself she is old enough to make her own way and if he loves her then I need to be thankful not fearful.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
I get being concerned about your daughter. The person to talk to is Carlisle not the police especially since she is 18. You make sure he will not hurt her and she is doing this willingly.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thanks for giving us Edward and Jasper ' s background.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
Awesome story! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 19 Jun 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
I think it is time to sue. Go to the state da with the help of garrett. Go to every media outlet outside the state from newspaper to internet to tv. Use carlisle's family connections to rip that town a new one. Plus get hell out of that town.love this story.
Jukie
Date: 19 Jun 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
Jazz and E needed their say. Personally I'd be going to a big news outlet and telling all the towns dirty little secrets and suing like crazy.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 09 Jun 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow. I'd go to the press big time with all of this. ESP for the lying landlord and now the DA
Date: 08 Jun 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
I had a feeling in the last chapter that Carlisle ' s dad was miss understood. That he was truly wanting to be apart of their lives. I am glad that they got it worked out. I can not believe that Edward and Jasper got kicked out of their house. Poor Bella she can not catch a break. Glad she has Carlisle and the noys. Can't wait to see the boys reaction to their grandfather.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
~!~
*Owlish pairs of eyes blink at each other, speechless*
Peter open and closes his mouth, making no sound at first, until finally he finds the ability to speak.
"She... she did it. She put us together..."
Still stunned, I stare into his ruby eyes and only one thought crosses my lips.
"I'm dead. She killed me..."
Peter starts and then unbidden laughter fills the room as Peter throws his head back and lets out gut-wrenching bellows.
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Loved this chapter, I liked when Bella gave Sam and Jake a piece of her mind. I can't wait until they get out of that small town!
Love it!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Lmao! You know I love ya..... Right?
Date: 08 Jun 2014 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 20
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Bravo, Bella!
Hope Peter comes around. If Bella didn't make him understand she truly loves Carlisle, then he's an idiot!
Outdoor balcony sex was hot!
Date: 31 May 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
Love the lemon at the end. I have a feeling that Peter was not really judging Bella. I think he really likes her. I think that he is truly sorry for how he treated Carlisle after his wife died. I just think that Peter does not know how to communicate his feelings. Can not wait for your next update.
Date: 30 May 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love Bella standing up for them both.
Date: 30 May 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 30 May 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was great. His dad is a butt.
Date: 20 May 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think he will questioned her but then might end up being ok with her.
Date: 20 May 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Again I say Bella needs to mentally get involved in believing in her relationship.
Date: 19 May 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
Can't blame phil for wanting to check him out before making him a partner. Uh oh Daddykins wants dinner
Date: 17 May 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Well the interview went well. I can't wait to see what Carlisle 's father's reaction is going to be. Hope you update soon.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am still up in the air about Daddy Cullen here, I cant wait to see which way it goes.
Love it!
Date: 17 May 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh, Daddy Cullen is not going to like it; he's going to be jealous and mean and maybe even treat Bella like a little gold diggy hussy...and then Carlisle is gonna slap him up side his head!!! Love your story, can't wait to find out how things go in the restaurant. I have to say I'm surprised Carlisle is putting on such a show for his father who has been so mean to him. Wonder how long they'll stay at the restaurant??? Hmm...Can't wait to find out!!! Next update soon please!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
Daddy Cullen better approve, LOL! And I hope they get the house! :D
Date: 17 May 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 15 May 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella needs to start mentally committing to the relationship. She emotionally is committing physically but to mentally.
Date: 12 May 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
I would be like Bella on the cost to the house. If that smaller size house was 2.2 million, what in the world did the other house cost? Love this story.
Date: 11 May 2014 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'd take either house, but I would prefer the one on the beach. ;)
Date: 10 May 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 10 May 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
Beach house sounds wonderful
Date: 08 May 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
This was an awesome chapter. I love that they are going to have family close to them. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Date: 06 May 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
Sweet chapter.
Date: 04 May 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wonderful chaper. Liked seeing into his background a bit.
Date: 04 May 2014 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
so glad I found your story...it's awesome...I'll read all the chapters you want to write!!!
Date: 04 May 2014 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2014 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
This chapter came out great BB! I love Emmett :)
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved the speech!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 26 Apr 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
Lol!!!!! Love Bella's speech. I hate the Alice ' s parents acted like they did. So happy that everyone is going to be together.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
ROFL Loved the speech.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hope you feel better soon. Thanks for the update. Glad that her friends are t h erected for her. I can not believe that they fired Jasper. That is just wrong. But they were looking for an excuse.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 19 Apr 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
Gotta love small town bigots huh? Nice that they'll go to ca too.
Date: 16 Apr 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow Mr Varner is a real piece of work. Glad Jasper was there.
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
I knew that Mr. Varner was going to make a move on Bella. I am so glad that Alice got Jasper. So Mr. Varner knows that Jasper is gay. I wonder how. Love this story.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 12 Apr 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yeah. I think it's time for them to move. I think the gang should follow too.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
You would be very naughty if you did not share with other!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
well gar just got a great pay day.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love this chapter. I am glad that they got their settlement from the hospital. Plus they made Dr. Grandy apologize.
Date: 05 Apr 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved the ensuing. Rofl.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Intense chapter, I'm so sorry Bella ... end with hurt the relationship with your mother, I hope she can forgive her. Tyler and Mike are so sweet ...
Date: 29 Mar 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Very emotional chapter!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
I missed reviewing this chapter some how. Sorry. Poor Bella. I hate that she is having to go through all of that.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am glad that Carlisle ' s family came to support her. I am also glad that she deck the good Dr. I was expecting her to get up and make a "speech" at the funeral and tell all of them to go to hell. lol. Love this story.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow gerandy is a jerk. Glad Carlisle's family came
Date: 29 Mar 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 25 Mar 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh that was so sad :'(
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
yep crying
Date: 25 Mar 2014 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, that was rough. I hate being an orphan even if I wasn't quite as young as Bella when I became one. It sucks. Thanks for writing such a hard chapter.
Date: 25 Mar 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
Surprised Dr Gerandy kept his mouth shut. Guessing Renee was drunk and started the fire? Wonder how long till the town blames B for the fire. Carlisle is such a great man.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Poor Bella! She has to face much prejudice, age is just a number, but people do not see that. I hope Renee has not done crazy or Bella feel guilty.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
LOVE ITMORE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
renee burned her own house wow
Date: 21 Mar 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 9
Caught that Forrest Gump quote. LOL. Wow Renee is a piece of work. Great job the cops are doing to find a deranged woman in their town. Ugh for the creepo teacher.
Date: 20 Mar 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, didn't see that coming. Please don't let Renee die in the fire and have all the guilt layed on Bella. Sequels are good.
Date: 20 Mar 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
OMGosh!!!!!! Is Bella ' s mom in the house? ??? I hope not. Bella would feel so guilty. .
Date: 20 Mar 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
I loved it, I hate Dr. Gerandy, he was very arrogant with Carlisle.
I hope everything is well.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Update soon please
Date: 16 Mar 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 8
sounds like LA would be a great place to start again.
Date: 16 Mar 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad that Carlisle suing the hospital. Glad that Garrett doe not have a problem with Carlisle and Bella.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
YES I am on an actual computer today! I can review!
This story has been amazing. I love it, and now we have Garrett and Marcus as Carlisles brothers. Perfect Trifecta! Now if we could get Bella into UCLA on scholarship we could have the brothers close and tada! Ah, my imagination, I love it too.
hugs BB!
Date: 16 Mar 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
Looking forward for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella and Carlisle! They have to face many problems, I'm glad that's worth all the suffering, love is always worth. The kids are so cute and Bella is wonderful with them, it will be an amazing mother.