Date: 14 Mar 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
I wish she'd have told them that it was Renee who hit her. Everyone will likely think Carlisle did it, no matter what she says, if she doesn't.
It's definitely not going to be easy on them.
Date: 14 Mar 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
I know that Dr. Gerandy is mad at Carlisle but how in the world can he throw Carlisle out of the hospital. He is a member of the community visiting his girlfriend and has not caused any problems for the hospital. Oh if I were Carlisle I would contact my lawyer and see about suing Dr. Gerandy's ass and the hospital. Glad that Bella pressed charges on her mom. Renee needs help.
Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
oooh Hope they sue Gerandy and the hospital for LOTS of money!!!!
Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ok seriously this is a little out of control and starting to ruin the story.. sorry I understand it's a 'story' but you are really pushing several enveloples.. best of luck.
Author's Response:
What is out of control and what evelopes am I pushing?
Date: 14 Mar 2014 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter even though I want to slap Dr. G up side the head!
Date: 14 Mar 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
Dr. Gerandy is a spiteful, close-minded son of a *****. Let's hope Edward and the rest of the staff threaten one hell of a shitstorm.... Hmmmm, something like the blue flu perhaps?
Date: 14 Mar 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
One can only hope that Bella will stop protecting her mother.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
They are so cute together, Bella and Carlisle are perfect together.
Renee is a horrible person, I can not feel sympathy for her. Life is about choices and Renee chose to ruin his life.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oooh Hope she presses charges this time. Renee is not going to stop being a PITA.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
OMGoodness I can not believe that Renee would do that. I hate that the kids had to see that. I hope Bella presses charges now. I hoe that she is ok.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMG don't leave us hanging!!
what a great chapter thanks :o)
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
looking forward to more
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
update soon
Date: 08 Mar 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
I know the people of the town would not like them being together. They have a long hard road ahead of them. Love that the boys already think of her as family.
Date: 07 Mar 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Small town do tend to be really judgmental.
Date: 07 Mar 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Renee aside, everything seems far too perfect. And I only say 'too' because I have a feeling (your E/N also aside), that it isn't your intention for it to stay that way. *looks up at the ax looming overhead*
Date: 07 Mar 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
I really am enjoying your story :)
Date: 07 Mar 2014 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
I understand that Bella is afraid, but they love each other and now she has children who depend on it. They will have many problems. Going but worth the effort.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bella! Renee is an idiot and James seemed unfair! I hope Bella does not give up on Carlisle and the kids, they are so cute.
Date: 01 Mar 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 01 Mar 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Liking this story
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
she should have stopped turned round and said. Renee is the one who slapped me after calling me a whore! Investigate that!!
Great story by the way..
Date: 01 Mar 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Renee is a real piece of work. Mr Varner too. Carlisle is such a hottie.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm disappointed. Disappointed that this story isn't finished. I'm enjoying it too much to not keep reading, but there's no more to read right now. :/
Please don't stop writing this! It's too good not to finish!
Author's Response:
I'm not done with it. I will have an update in a few days, I hope.
Date: 25 Feb 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
looking forward to more
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
I have heard that people can be really mean when they are drunk. I have never experienced that and I hope I do not. Renee was just wrong. I can understand her being upset and maybe mad but to call Bella all of those names. That was just wrong. I am glad that Bella went to Carlisle's. Glad that the boys were not upset to see them kissing. Can not wait for you to update. Hope it is soon.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
People can be so rude. I am glad that Bella has good friends in Alice and Rose.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love me some HOT Carlisle. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
I really like this one great job!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
update soon please
Date: 20 Feb 2014 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to reading more :)
Date: 20 Feb 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
awww She ought to press charges for assault. Ugh she's over 18. Leave the girl alone.
Date: 18 Jan 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
I definitely did not expect more of this. That's by no means a complaint, just an admission of surprise. And a pleasant one. He's a sexy one, and, though, other than your first chapter of this that made me curious enough to delve into, I never imagined myself wanting to read this particular pairing, I'm in for it in this instance.
See you next time. :)
Date: 01 Jan 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
When ever you get a chapter done I am more than willing to read it. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was awesome!!! To bad you didn't make it into more than a one shot!!! It has real potential. . .
Author's Response:
I might add more, you never know.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Are you planning to continue or is this only going to be a one shot? I would totally love to read more. Could be a really great story.
Author's Response:
I might. I have a few ideas for at least a few more chapters.
Date: 18 Jul 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it she is a very good babysitter ;) Thanks
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
that was Cute...carlisle naughty...too funny
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2013 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really loved it I wish you can make it in to a full story to see how things play out with Bella and Carlisle
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh BB I love it!!! *swoons*
You are my inspiration... How did you know I needed you? *tears up*
*hugs*
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh! Fantasies, will we to see any those...fingers crossed.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
could you turn this into a multi chapter story that would be totally awesome, but it is fine as it stands. Good luck with your compilation.
Jukie
Author's Response:
I might add more. You never know. Right now, I gotta get some of my other WIPS completed.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hawt Dayum!!!!! LOVE IT. I can see this expanding too!!!!
You get a lemon for the lemon
TY for writing and sharing though
Author's Response:
Hehe, I love the dancing lemon ;) Thank you so much, sweetie!
Date: 16 Jul 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
More!!!
Author's Response:
THere might be more at some piont ;)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
holy moley, you need to keep writing, and never stop. ha ha luv that Edward and Jasper are together. that is hot, too!!! thanks for sharing your talent. totally enjoyed it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much ;)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, that was a delicious cherry-popping bash. He popped hers and you popped mine. My Carlisle cherry, anyway. I've never read him in all his glory before. Bravo for changing that. And making me like it.
Author's Response:
Hehe, you're welcome, I guess. I think too many authors, and I'm guilty of this, too, make Carlisle to be stiff (no pun intended) and boring. By changing his personia and making him more youthful, I think it adds a bit of fun to the mix! And he's hot! I mean, like really hot!