Date: 18 Sep 2013 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
There's nothing pretentious about him, he's all real. A tough guy, but not so tough now with Bella, his Achilles.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
Sexybeastward
Date: 18 Sep 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
He's a bit of a ms pig. Like many men were back then. Thank god for the feminists movement, r.i.p. Helen Gurley Brown.
So, why am I still such a fan of the Edward character, my what a tangled web you weave Lexi.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
Rosalie keeps talking about "I bet we just made a baby". I'm wondering if she's already pregnant and going to try to pass the baby off as Edwards. She's brought it up way too many times. I'm always suspicious. It would be even worse if it was Carlo's baby. Anyway, I'm looking forward to them breaking up. I just hope he can stop being a manwhore. I hate when he's like that in stories.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2013 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
loving this story
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2013 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
THANK YOU!!! FOR THE SMILE.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh Lord.. His daughter's friend. Old pervert. LOL
Date: 18 Sep 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Kinda agree with R, but people already think bad about B because of the kid, esp since Jacob goes yelling about it around town.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Feel sorry for Rose and ANgela.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm B has no shame huh? Course E doesnt either.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
B is really playing with fire.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow Aint he a real piece of work.... but gangster were that way back then.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
hmmm sounds like Jake is a wannabe thug.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
hmmm interesting start. Cant wait to see where you go with it.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Absolutely loving this story and as wired as it may sound I am loving this Edward. Can't wait to hear what Bella has to say. Thanks for posting on TWCS too.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm not getting a strong sense of the times and and society may have be male dominated but that doesn't translate to morality. Mostly I feel like the events are being related but I don't feel the emotions behind them or any rhymn or reason to them like I usually do in your other stories. And that's regardless to whether I agree with the actions of the characters. Also don't see any center or the why of the story.
Author's Response:
I honestly don't understand what you're trying to say here. Sorry.