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Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2022 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 20 Oct 2022 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 20 Oct 2022 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 20 Oct 2022 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 20 Oct 2022 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Reviewer: Mamma White Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2022 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapters can't wait for the rest! Please continue! 

 

Reviewer: klrtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2022 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Rereading after many years and loving even more if that's possible. xo

Reviewer: klrtwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2022 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Rereading after many years and loving even more if that's possible. xo

Reviewer: klrtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2022 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Rereading after many years and loving even more if that's possible. xo

Reviewer: WeirdKailey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2022 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story so much, probably my fourth time re reading. Your writing is amazing, and I hope you get a book deal soon. Thanks for writing a great story, hopefully we'll get a few more chapters soon 🥰❤️

Reviewer: charlieromeo Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2022 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story 

Reviewer: charlieromeo Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2022 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story 

Reviewer: charlieromeo Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2022 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story 

Reviewer: charlieromeo Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2022 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story 

Reviewer: charlieromeo Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2022 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story 

Reviewer: Katiekatq Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2022 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

Heeeeey, wassupp? Wanna try givin this story another go? We miss you! Hope all is well<3 Love from all your loyal followers 

Reviewer: Katiekatq Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2022 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

Heeeeey, wassupp? Wanna try givin this story another go? We miss you! Hope all is well<3 Love from all your loyal followers 

Reviewer: Katiekatq Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2022 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

Heeeeey, wassupp? Wanna try givin this story another go? We miss you! Hope all is well<3 Love from all your loyal followers 

Reviewer: Katiekatq Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2022 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

Heeeeey, wassupp? Wanna try givin this story another go? We miss you! Hope all is well<3 Love from all your loyal followers 

Reviewer: ksweid Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2022 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 23

Desparately wanting an update to my all time favorite story.  I reread it every few months....please?

Reviewer: ksweid Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 23

Desparately wanting an update to my all time favorite story.  I reread it every few months....please?

Reviewer: ksweid Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 23

Desparately wanting an update to my all time favorite story.  I reread it every few months....please?

Reviewer: ksweid Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 23

Desparately wanting an update to my all time favorite story.  I reread it every few months....please?

Reviewer: starlight8 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2022 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 23

Hi I hope you finish this story. I hope you publish this story it's great 

Wishing you all the best.

Reviewer: starlight8 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2022 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 23

Hi I hope you finish this story. I hope you publish this story it's great 

Wishing you all the best.

Reviewer: starlight8 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2022 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 23

Hi I hope you finish this story. I hope you publish this story it's great 

Wishing you all the best.

Reviewer: thebluefaerie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2022 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I've followed your writing for quite a long time. Over 10 years, in fact!! Every update to your stories, while long awaited, is always much enjoyed by me. And I will continue to wait patiently and eagerly for another addition from one of my very favorite fanfiction authors.

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too. 

Thanks 

Laura xx

 

 

Reviewer: indian Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2022 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

Dying for the next chapter I can’t wait to see what you have next for them.

Reviewer: ksweid Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2022 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 23

I reread this again tonight...it's my all time favorite story.   Please I'm begging you, finish this story.  Thank you

Reviewer: Strawberrywine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2022 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story, this is about the 10 or 15th time that I have read this. Can not wait to find out what happens next

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: LauraMorrison06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx

Reviewer: ced2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2022 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 23

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! I've read and reread the story multiple times in preparation lol!

Reviewer: charlieromeo Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2022 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 23

ok i definitely have not read this chapter and oh no! it's the last one. I mean i've stuck around with you since you first published this story. i've gone through three pen names. i'll stick around for another 5 years until you feel like updated. smooch. hope you're doing well! can't wait to read more. ill read mate tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 22

i love jutta

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 21

time for some people to die. i'm also on my third glass. best. night. ever.

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 20

my mind is playing tricks one. have i read this before??? I know based on the date that you've updated since i've last read it but im just like bellaslashedhisfreakingneck!!yeeeeesss! lol

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 18

Men. If i die you must find someone else. Like bitch. That's my choice. Don't tell me what to do. If i want to stay single for the rest of my life because you died then i very well damned will do so!

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love this little free family.

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

Does Lina represent anyone particular from the source material....Leah...? lol

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 13

I love Ro-se's character in this. You really pulled her fierceness and loyalty from the source material along with a sweetness.

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 12

I kept thinking through this whole chapter how Emundi called Ro-se his "little flower" and it about broke my heart. 

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 11

I hated remembering this chapter. I'm so sad for Ro-se. 

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 10

""Should I stop?" I whispered." hahahahahaha

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm thoroughly drunk right now. But I'm gonna make my through this. And happily. I mean "Your mouth is glorious." says it all. 

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

I feel like I need a more descriptive passage dedicated to Edvard's manhood. 

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

It was around this time that I had a pretty good drunken honey mead buzz going on. Just in time too.

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

Fornicating lol

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

It was around this time I ordered honey mead off of door dash because might as well do this re-read properly. 

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 4

I was always so upset at Edvard's arrogance here. Espeically knowing he knew from the very beginning. He just couldn't get over that pride. I'm a bit more leniant with Bella's miscomunication considering she was you know...kidnapped and enslaved lolol

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 3

Knowing what I know now, uuuugggggggggh Edvard

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

These are familiar chapters now coming back to me. I've read this story so many times and still have so much love for it.

Reviewer: Lulu M Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

I see you've updated in my five year hiatus lol. So since its been so long I've decided to just re-read it all :) 

Reviewer: rockerfool Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2021 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 23

I miss this story. Every year I come back to it... please post another chapter this year. We still have a few weeks yet.

Reviewer: rockerfool Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2021 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 23

I miss this story. Every year I come back to it... please post another chapter this year. We still have a few weeks yet.

Reviewer: starlight8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2021 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 23

I really like this story, waiting patiently for the next chapter. If I may suggest that you make this story into three mini books, the beginning of this love story, second marriage and children making changes to unjust practices etc., third watching their grown-up children, take over and make the village stronger, self sufficient, etc. Just an idea to think about, with any twist and turns you may through into them. I  feel strongly that if you publish this story it will sell, may be send a copy to Netflix? They could make it into a movie? With all that is going on in this world, covid etc., people need an escape to simpler times.

I wish you good fortune and prosperity. You're a really good writer, like to read your stories, hope you finish them all.

Reviewer: starlight8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2021 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 23

I really like this story, waiting patiently for the next chapter. If I may suggest that you make this story into three mini books, the beginning of this love story, second marriage and children making changes to unjust practices etc., third watching their grown-up children, take over and make the village stronger, self sufficient, etc. Just an idea to think about, with any twist and turns you may through into them. I  feel strongly that if you publish this story it will sell, may be send a copy to Netflix? They could make it into a movie? With all that is going on in this world, covid etc., people need an escape to simpler times.

I wish you good fortune and prosperity. You're a really good writer, like to read your stories, hope you finish them all.

Reviewer: starlight8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2021 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 23

I really like this story, waiting patiently for the next chapter. If I may suggest that you make this story into three mini books, the beginning of this love story, second marriage and children making changes to unjust practices etc., third watching their grown-up children, take over and make the village stronger, self sufficient, etc. Just an idea to think about, with any twist and turns you may through into them. I  feel strongly that if you publish this story it will sell, may be send a copy to Netflix? They could make it into a movie? With all that is going on in this world, covid etc., people need an escape to simpler times.

I wish you good fortune and prosperity. You're a really good writer, like to read your stories, hope you finish them all. 

Reviewer: starlight8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2021 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 23

I really like this story, waiting patiently for the next chapter. If I may suggest that you make this story into three mini books, the beginning of this love story, second marriage and children making changes to unjust practices etc., third watching their grown-up children, take over and make the village stronger, self sufficient, etc. Just an idea to think about, with any twist and turns you may through into them. I  feel strongly that if you publish this story it will sell, may be send a copy to Netflix? They could make it into a movie? With all that is going on in this world, covid etc., people need an escape to simpler times.

I wish you good fortune and prosperity. You're a really good writer, like to read your stories, hope you finish them all. 

Reviewer: starlight8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2021 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 23

I really like this story, waiting patiently for the next chapter. If I may suggest that you make this story into three mini books, the beginning of this love story, second marriage and children making changes to unjust practices etc., third watching their grown-up children, take over and make the village stronger, self sufficient, etc. Just an idea to think about, with any twist and turns you may through into them. I  feel strongly that if you publish this story it will sell, may be send a copy to Netflix? They could make it into a movie? With all that is going on in this world, covid etc., people need an escape to simpler times.

I wish you good fortune and prosperity. You're a really good writer, like to read your stories, hope you finish them all. 

Reviewer: starlight8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2021 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 23

I really like this story, waiting patiently for the next chapter. If I may suggest that you make this story into three mini books, the beginning of this love story, second marriage and children making changes to unjust practices etc., third watching their grown-up children, take over and make the village stronger, self sufficient, etc. Just an idea to think about, with any twist and turns you may through into them. I  feel strongly that if you publish this story it will sell, may be send a copy to Netflix? They could make it into a movie? With all that is going on in this world, covid etc., people need an escape to simpler times.

I wish you good fortune and prosperity. You're a really good writer, like to read your stories, hope you finish them all. 

Reviewer: indian Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2021 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 23

Dying for the next chapter

Reviewer: WeirdKailey Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2021 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

Hoping you'll pick up this sorry again! Loved re reading it

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