Date: 23 Jan 2023 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
Just re read the story and caught up!! Still amazing
Date: 23 Jan 2023 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
Just re read the story and caught up!! Still amazing
Date: 12 Jan 2023 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
Can not wait for the end to come. I love reading and re-reading this story.





Date: 20 Dec 2022 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
At this point, I'm just devastated this story won't be finished. But on the other hand happy to have been on the journey at all. Thank you!





Date: 20 Dec 2022 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
At this point, I'm just devastated this story won't be finished. But on the other hand happy to have been on the journey at all. Thank you!
Date: 06 Oct 2022 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapters can't wait for the rest! Please continue!
Date: 24 Sep 2022 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Rereading after many years and loving even more if that's possible. xo





Date: 24 Sep 2022 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Rereading after many years and loving even more if that's possible. xo
Date: 24 Sep 2022 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Rereading after many years and loving even more if that's possible. xo





Date: 21 Sep 2022 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love this story so much, probably my fourth time re reading. Your writing is amazing, and I hope you get a book deal soon. Thanks for writing a great story, hopefully we'll get a few more chapters soon 🥰❤️
Date: 13 Sep 2022 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love this story
Date: 13 Sep 2022 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love this story
Date: 13 Sep 2022 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love this story
Date: 13 Sep 2022 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love this story
Date: 13 Sep 2022 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love this story





Date: 28 Aug 2022 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
Heeeeey, wassupp? Wanna try givin this story another go? We miss you! Hope all is well<3 Love from all your loyal followers





Date: 28 Aug 2022 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
Heeeeey, wassupp? Wanna try givin this story another go? We miss you! Hope all is well<3 Love from all your loyal followers





Date: 28 Aug 2022 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
Heeeeey, wassupp? Wanna try givin this story another go? We miss you! Hope all is well<3 Love from all your loyal followers





Date: 28 Aug 2022 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
Heeeeey, wassupp? Wanna try givin this story another go? We miss you! Hope all is well<3 Love from all your loyal followers
Date: 08 Jun 2022 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
Desparately wanting an update to my all time favorite story. I reread it every few months....please?
Date: 08 Jun 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
Desparately wanting an update to my all time favorite story. I reread it every few months....please?
Date: 08 Jun 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
Desparately wanting an update to my all time favorite story. I reread it every few months....please?
Date: 08 Jun 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
Desparately wanting an update to my all time favorite story. I reread it every few months....please?




Date: 14 May 2022 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
Hi I hope you finish this story. I hope you publish this story it's great
Wishing you all the best.




Date: 14 May 2022 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 23
Hi I hope you finish this story. I hope you publish this story it's great
Wishing you all the best.




Date: 14 May 2022 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 23
Hi I hope you finish this story. I hope you publish this story it's great
Wishing you all the best.
Date: 07 May 2022 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've followed your writing for quite a long time. Over 10 years, in fact!! Every update to your stories, while long awaited, is always much enjoyed by me. And I will continue to wait patiently and eagerly for another addition from one of my very favorite fanfiction authors.





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx





Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx
Date: 29 Mar 2022 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please finish this story ive been reading this for a long time and cant wait for the ending. Hope there is an epilogue too.
Thanks
Laura xx
Date: 24 Mar 2022 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 23
Dying for the next chapter I can’t wait to see what you have next for them.
Date: 19 Mar 2022 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
I reread this again tonight...it's my all time favorite story. Please I'm begging you, finish this story. Thank you
Date: 17 Mar 2022 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love this story, this is about the 10 or 15th time that I have read this. Can not wait to find out what happens next
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep coming back to this page hoping there is a new chapter. One of the first fanfictions i read so glad i found it again :) Looking forward to the ending for these 2 xx
Date: 07 Jan 2022 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! I've read and reread the story multiple times in preparation lol!



Date: 03 Jan 2022 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love this story
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
ok i definitely have not read this chapter and oh no! it's the last one. I mean i've stuck around with you since you first published this story. i've gone through three pen names. i'll stick around for another 5 years until you feel like updated. smooch. hope you're doing well! can't wait to read more. ill read mate tomorrow :)
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
time for some people to die. i'm also on my third glass. best. night. ever.
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
my mind is playing tricks one. have i read this before??? I know based on the date that you've updated since i've last read it but im just like bellaslashedhisfreakingneck!!yeeeeesss! lol
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
Men. If i die you must find someone else. Like bitch. That's my choice. Don't tell me what to do. If i want to stay single for the rest of my life because you died then i very well damned will do so!
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love this little free family.
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 14
Does Lina represent anyone particular from the source material....Leah...? lol
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love Ro-se's character in this. You really pulled her fierceness and loyalty from the source material along with a sweetness.
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
I kept thinking through this whole chapter how Emundi called Ro-se his "little flower" and it about broke my heart.
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
I hated remembering this chapter. I'm so sad for Ro-se.
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
""Should I stop?" I whispered." hahahahahaha
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm thoroughly drunk right now. But I'm gonna make my through this. And happily. I mean "Your mouth is glorious." says it all.
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
I feel like I need a more descriptive passage dedicated to Edvard's manhood.
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
It was around this time that I had a pretty good drunken honey mead buzz going on. Just in time too.
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
It was around this time I ordered honey mead off of door dash because might as well do this re-read properly.
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
I was always so upset at Edvard's arrogance here. Espeically knowing he knew from the very beginning. He just couldn't get over that pride. I'm a bit more leniant with Bella's miscomunication considering she was you know...kidnapped and enslaved lolol
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Knowing what I know now, uuuugggggggggh Edvard
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
These are familiar chapters now coming back to me. I've read this story so many times and still have so much love for it.
Date: 15 Dec 2021 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I see you've updated in my five year hiatus lol. So since its been so long I've decided to just re-read it all :)
Date: 14 Dec 2021 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
I miss this story. Every year I come back to it... please post another chapter this year. We still have a few weeks yet.
Date: 14 Dec 2021 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
I miss this story. Every year I come back to it... please post another chapter this year. We still have a few weeks yet.





Date: 17 Nov 2021 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 23
I really like this story, waiting patiently for the next chapter. If I may suggest that you make this story into three mini books, the beginning of this love story, second marriage and children making changes to unjust practices etc., third watching their grown-up children, take over and make the village stronger, self sufficient, etc. Just an idea to think about, with any twist and turns you may through into them. I feel strongly that if you publish this story it will sell, may be send a copy to Netflix? They could make it into a movie? With all that is going on in this world, covid etc., people need an escape to simpler times.
I wish you good fortune and prosperity. You're a really good writer, like to read your stories, hope you finish them all.





Date: 17 Nov 2021 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
I really like this story, waiting patiently for the next chapter. If I may suggest that you make this story into three mini books, the beginning of this love story, second marriage and children making changes to unjust practices etc., third watching their grown-up children, take over and make the village stronger, self sufficient, etc. Just an idea to think about, with any twist and turns you may through into them. I feel strongly that if you publish this story it will sell, may be send a copy to Netflix? They could make it into a movie? With all that is going on in this world, covid etc., people need an escape to simpler times.
I wish you good fortune and prosperity. You're a really good writer, like to read your stories, hope you finish them all.





Date: 17 Nov 2021 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
I really like this story, waiting patiently for the next chapter. If I may suggest that you make this story into three mini books, the beginning of this love story, second marriage and children making changes to unjust practices etc., third watching their grown-up children, take over and make the village stronger, self sufficient, etc. Just an idea to think about, with any twist and turns you may through into them. I feel strongly that if you publish this story it will sell, may be send a copy to Netflix? They could make it into a movie? With all that is going on in this world, covid etc., people need an escape to simpler times.
I wish you good fortune and prosperity. You're a really good writer, like to read your stories, hope you finish them all.