Date: 21 Oct 2013 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
That bastard needs to be skined alive in front of everyone. Edward is sorry he did not protect her?
Date: 21 Oct 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
pls dont let this be another story where rose cant have any more children?
Date: 20 Oct 2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2013 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh! No, no he needs to die now!! I will be chomping at the bit until the next update...thank you for this story!!
Date: 20 Oct 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awww poor Ro-se. Can't wait till Jamarr gets whats coming to him.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
I bet it was Jamarr...thanks for the updates. Had I not checked my bookmarks, I wouldn't have known that you did. Thanks again!
Date: 18 Oct 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yes Edvard is right. Sounds like Tonna needs some action.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Tonna is a huge troublemaker. Surprised she isn't trying to get E for herself. I bet Jamarr was in the woods whacking off to them.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Woo Hoo. Wonderfully lemony chapter. You get a special blinky for that. Happy lemon Dance:
Date: 17 Oct 2013 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
yey so glad they finally talked and got back together. Ugh for Tonna (Skankya) and her selfish ways.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
She is lucky to have Jacob helping her, explaining things. He should have a talk with E too....... or maybe he has. Guess we'll see,
Date: 17 Oct 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad Jacob is looking out for her some. He should try to explain the whore thing to Edvard maybe? ewww Jetta Germs.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh Bella. Silly woman. Can understand why E feels rejected, but he doesn't get B feeling like a whore. They both have a long way to go. Damn Jamarr for messing even more with her head.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
B has a long way to go with her thoughts. But I can see why she's the way she is.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
one step forward two steps back. Grrr hate James so.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thinking E has many sides. Glad that Ardnis and Beni found each other.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. Welcome to the TWCS family. Have a feeling that Bella will be having regrets given her upbringing soon.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
maybe becoming with child might give him the push to marry her!
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
He will not leave her alone again he knows someone was watching them. Tonna is a nasty bitch
Date: 17 Oct 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2013 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
I sure am enjoying rereading this as you move it over here! I miss this story so much... real life can be such an unkind bitch. As always, sending positive thoughts your way!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
Eeeeeeeeeee! I'm so happy :-D I smell trouble with the ex-relatives, but hopefully they can work through any troubles together.
Date: 16 Oct 2013 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2013 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Oct 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
I just started reading this story and I could not put it down I absolutely love it an I can not wait for more!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2013 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
I ALMOST GAVE UP ON THIS STORY MID WAY IN THIS CHAPTER BECAUSE I COULD'NT TAKE THE PAIN OF THEM NOT BEING HAPPY AND FINALLY TOGETHER. I LIKE RUNNING AWAY TO A HAPPY PLACE IN A GOOD STORY A LITTLE ANGST IS OK BUT REAL LIFE CAN BE A PAIN IN THE ASS AND READING A GOOD LOVE STORY EASES THE UPS AND DOWNS OF LIFE. I HOPE HE MARRIES HER SOON.
Date: 16 Oct 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
ooohhh a child might be on the way??? exciting
now the question is when is edvard going to make her his wife and under what circumstances??
Date: 16 Oct 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
What happen to the one on ff you were farther with that one are you stilling updating that or did you take that one down
Author's Response:
FFN removed it
Date: 15 Oct 2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am glad that they are back together properly now. Really enjoying it and can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 15 Oct 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love this chapter they are so happy in there bubble of love
Date: 15 Oct 2013 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Now everything is out in the open, hopefully they both take in what they both said!!!
cant wait for more
Date: 14 Oct 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
What a brilliant update.....loved it loved it loved it.
Can't wait for more :))
Date: 14 Oct 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
I was so happy when she told him what was wrong with her
Date: 14 Oct 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
Finally together again!
Date: 14 Oct 2013 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
ah, my favorite chapter! How sweet is reconciliation and the admission of true feelings! thank you for giving us this beautiful story! twice!
Date: 13 Oct 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Can't wait for the next update :))
Date: 13 Oct 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it ;)
Date: 13 Oct 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it ;)
Date: 13 Oct 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it ;)
Date: 13 Oct 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it ;)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hope she pleases edward and becomes his again update soon please
Date: 13 Oct 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Don't screw it uo, Edvard! :p
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hi! Had been following this story on FF, checking in every now and then to see if you'd been able to update so am beyond delighted that you've decided to post it here. It's still a beautiful story even with the slight changes here and there. I really hope the RL is treating you and your family well and look forward to the next chapter, I know there are many more to come!
Best wishes, Nell
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Update soon please it is so good!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am loving this. Can't wait for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
i like it hope you update soon
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2013 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
Fingers crossed for a lemon! Scratch that...I have everything crossed in the hope they start to get back on track!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
YOU MAKE IT SOUND AS IF A SCREW UP IS EXACTLY WHAT WE SHOULD EXPECT IN THE NEXT CHAPTER.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hi I'm really enjoying this. I've only started it today and can't wait for the next update.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella is slowly coming to terms with her life! but at the same time all i have to say is men humhp cant figure them out no matter how hard we try!!!!
whats the bet the feast goes well but once alone the both screw things up, which might come to them finally telling each other their thought completley not bit and pieces!
cant wait for then next chapter - update soon
Date: 10 Oct 2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you so much for giving us this story again after it was so rudely removed at that other story site.....I am a faithful fan and reader of all your stories....
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
More chapters please I'm attached to this story its crazy and whoever isn't reading this needs to cause its entertaining and different
Date: 09 Oct 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
He is protecting at all times love it
Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
Looking forward to more!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
hopefully jacob might be able to help bella understand more!
Bella what are you doing to yourself?
I can see edward is frustrated!
cant wait for more! update soon
Date: 08 Oct 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
I hope that they find their way back to each other soon.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
So very enjoyable this second time around for me.....
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
What a wonderful treat a new chapter already. Please keep them coming. I am so loving this story.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor girl is fighting with her beliefs and he love for her viking. So glad Jutta did not stay the night with him.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love your stories and please know I appreciate you taking the time to post at other sites especially with your life so hectic right now. Please know my prayers are with you and yours. My son has Asperger's Syndrome and is considered very high functioning so I can only imagine your everyday life right now. Your family should always come first in everything and the rest of us need to realize that. Good luck and God speed.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
I have fallen in love with this story and can not wait for the next chapter!
Date: 08 Oct 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
everytime i reach the end of a chapter i scream NNNNNOOOOOOO!
This story is addictive!
Pls update soon
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2013 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
This broke my heart! I need to see how they move forward. Thank you; I'm hooked!!
Date: 07 Oct 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
I cryed the first time I read this and now a second lol
Date: 07 Oct 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see I can read from TWCS. I am happy to re read and go with the flow. Keep up the excellent work!
Date: 07 Oct 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
You posted chapter 5 earlier today but it wasn't this chapter. That chapter, it seems, belonged further down the line in the story. You pulled that one and posted this one in it's place, yes?
Date: 06 Oct 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
OH SNAP! That was amazing!
Date: 06 Oct 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
God I love this story I am so happy to read it again. Thanks
Date: 06 Oct 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
They have much to learn from each other.....I am sincerely enjoying reading this again as you repost it here. This is one of the most lovely stories I have ever read and I fervently hope that you are able to finish it one day, despite all the difficulties in your life right now. All my best to you....
Date: 05 Oct 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm so glad to find this story again! I've followed it from the beginning. The new graphics are Fantastic !!!
Date: 05 Oct 2013 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
So.... Does this mean you will be updating. On ffn?? Or just transferring
Author's Response:
The story was removed by the moderators from FFN in the recent purge so it's not there anymore.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2013 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ohhhh please update soon!! I love this, I want desperately to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
PLEASE!!! UPDATE SOON!!! TRULY AMAZING.
Date: 05 Oct 2013 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh Bella when are you going to see when u and him are together he is more himself but in public he is what he needs to be!
update soon
Date: 05 Oct 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
It was all an act Bella he didnt mean it . Poor girl
Date: 05 Oct 2013 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Fun times she is so confused poor thing but she is having fun to ;)
Date: 05 Oct 2013 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad to see you repost this beloved story here! It's been entirely too long since I've read it, so I'm very happy to welcome you to TWCSL with a new review of every chapter. I'll probablly comment on what pops out at me as I go along. I'm sure I'll notice tons of things I didn't before, now that I'm more familiar with the world you have revealed to us from having read your story before.
I love Rose's greeting of Emmett. :D I'm enjoying the foreshadowing that this society (or at very least community) is much more open and genuine about their feelings.
Bless Esme's tender heart. Her jesture is so telling that she understands where the scars on Bellas back have come from -- violence from those in positon of authority in her past life. I see her as taking on Bella as a daughter from this very first moment. And that Bella is sobbing, missing her mother and finally venting the overwhelming emotions from having her world totally turned on it's head. Love this moment in the story and it makes me want to weep with her. I identify with both Esme and Bella in this moment.
It occurs to me the bath is her baptism into this new life.
Once again, I do enjoy how you had him desensitize her to her prior experiences. That said, it's hard to have the ExB connection dampened by the very real dualistic feeling she has. Her body tells her one thing, her mind another, and her heart is caught in the tug of war and goes with survival. Her universe has been stood on it's ear and she doesn't know what to trust. I watched the Elizabeth Smart interview tonight, and think your Bella has a lot in common with her. Bella's husband is the (in this case) lawful kidnapper, and absolute abuser, and Edward is the overt kidnapper, but tender lover she should have had the first go round. Life is never the direct route it "should" be, and that is reflected in your powerful story. It is titilating, but like Bella we are conflicted. We are forced to thing and evaluate, and analyze. This is a good thing. Good things are many times difficult. And not straight forward. Sometimes that convoluted journey is what brings the greatest rewards, and I think that's exactly what you are after demonstrating in this story you have so generously shared with us. Thank-you!
Date: 05 Oct 2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a wonderful story I loved it the first time I read it. This is the same Author just name change right???
Date: 05 Oct 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Gah, that was amazing :) I really loved it!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG they took this story down on ff what the hell for?
I so loved reading this story on ff!! Glad to be reading it again on this site!!
I'm sure those of you's who have red this story on ff knows what happens to Bella!!
So can't wait for the next updates!!
Date: 04 Oct 2013 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
i love this story a lot