Date: 07 Jan 2015 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ummmmm noooo ; )
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2015 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait for more! ;)
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh please update soon. This is an amazing story and I'm dying to know what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward is there. He will take care of her.
Date: 23 Dec 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
I read both stories in 2 days. I couldn't stop reading . Excellent story and I hope Bella and Ronnie are ok.
Date: 20 Dec 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMGOSH!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope to goodness that they get her to the hospital before it is to late. I hope the Eddie believes Bella over Demetri. CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE AND MORE!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh please please pppllllleeeeeeeaaassseeee......tell me there is an update coming soon!!!!! I SO NEED MORE!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!
Date: 16 Dec 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 11 Dec 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great cbapter. Glad Eddie finally knows the truth
Date: 11 Dec 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hmm I wonder if Eddie was helping Edward all along and that is how Edward found her so fast. I hope Ronnie was not killed.
Great chapter.
Date: 11 Dec 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no you don't Cristina you can't leave it there
Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Now THAT is a cliffhanger!! Between the stress, Bella's pregnancy, the abuse, it is a wonder she hung on this long. Kudos! You handled all of it beautifully and my nails are a lot worse for it. Thank you for all your hard work!
Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
What a cliffy! Love it :)
Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward did find her. In time for her and their baby?
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
omg! 2 cliffies in a row::))
I hope Eddie is ok
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
terrible cliffie
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG! Don't leave us to long ,PLEASE !!(LOL). Hope soon,Great story love this chapter
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
Exciting chapter...whimpering, more, *Puppy dog eyes*, more.
Date: 09 Dec 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow! What a chapter! Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 09 Dec 2014 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh crap! Cant wait till next update
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope Edward got there in time
Date: 09 Dec 2014 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you for not ending his w/o Edward! I was worried!
Date: 09 Dec 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
I never understood Bella. She hates her child due to association with Edward. Edward was raped and doesn't want Eddie aroud. How is that wrong? If it was a woman it'll be ok, but because he's a man he should deal with it? Thats my only propblem in this fic, it's not right edward has to have thistraumatic time in his CHILDHOOD around him like his feelings don't matter, Bella was wrong to have and will do that.
I believe Eddie should go else where, yes it's not his fault but neither is it Edwards to deal with.
Hope mother and baby will be fine. Bring back Ronnie.
Date: 09 Dec 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Eddie there is noone in that mess that is not hurt.Dimitri is the one that needs to be shot.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
At least, Edward is there now. Hopefully Bella and the baby can be saved.
Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
Omg, that was good......... I just knew that he would find her! Hold on Bella! Please don't leave us hanging for long!
Date: 09 Dec 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Eddie. His world is crashing down around him and all focus is on Bella. I hope everything will be okay because if not Eddie will never forgive himself.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
Your are such a great writer. I love this chapter and how Bella realize what she did. Thank you hope this story never ends. Really love the characters and the story.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
Did Eddie kill his great-grandfather?
I hope Edward has the sense to keep Eddie in his sights and not let him pull away from the family.
Did Ronnie really die in the crash?
I hope the helicopter makes it in time.
A c-section is critical at this time. Bella may have lost too much blood. She'll need a transfusion.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh holy hell!!! I have chills. What a hell of a cliffhanger? At least Eddie now knows the truth, poor kid. They have to get Bella to a hospital in time.
Great chapter, I want more... more... more...
Sherry
Date: 09 Dec 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hopefully the bang was Demetri dying. Lying sack of pedophile crap
Date: 03 Dec 2014 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella's stubbornness finally got her and the baby in big trouble.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Finally got caught-up and all hell breaks out.
Holy hell!!! Right when it clicks she needed to step-up and be the mommy her child needs, she gets kidnapped. Damn, where is Edward? I hope her call connected and he heard what was taking place. Bella sure doesn't need to go into labor with the baby in breach position, that could end badly. You definitely have me invested in this story.
What a cliffy you left us with. Bravo my dear, fantastic writing.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
At least Bella confided in Alec about her feeling of being watched. No one should ever ignore that intuition With Alec calling out to Edward like he did, someone must be at the house.
Thank goodness Tanya and Jane have been eliminated.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm liking that Bella seems to be having a change of heart, slowly but surely. I was impressed she grew a backbone and confronted Nonna. Her realizations about her biological father/family seems to be helping her release some of her anger toward Edward.
Tanya's gonna get it. Jane is about dumb as a box of rocks.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
It's good Edward and Bella finally talked some things out. They need to work through so much that's happened to them. Good to see them still able to have some sexy times.
I can't wait to read on to see what Jane and Tanya or up to.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm really wondering what Tanya is up to, can't be good. Edward has the weight of the world on his shoulders. I'm really hoping Bella will have a change of heart soon.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damn, the Cullens just can't catch a break.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
I had a feeling it was that sick prick Dmitri that's been picking up Little Eddie before and after school.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
My heart aches for them.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
Tanya has some nerve. I thought for sure it was Jane Bella encountered. I really hope Edward has Tanya taught a lesson in respecting his wife.
I really want Edward and Bella to work things out soon and she excepts their baby and grows to love him/her. Even though I can understand Bella's hatred for what happened to her parents that Edward and Ronnie were ordered to do, but she killed Heidi on her own free will, so how can she interact with Little Eddie the way she does. There's no difference between her and Edward on that part.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
I absolutely loved how Victoria got her revenge/closer with Marcus.
Oh fuck, it's Jane, isn't it?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
I knew the Ukraine Isabella was a plant by Marcus, didn't expect it be his mistress though. I bet he and Dmitri and the ones feeding lies to Little Eddie, and he's definitely up to something with Bella.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
Why do I think that is Eddie Jr. and he's been placed in Edward and Bella's home to get revenge for Heidi's murder, and it was Eddie Jr. that followed them down to the playroom?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
It's about time Ronnie takes some responsibility for his part. If they wanna get technical about it, Ronnie is the one that killed her parents. He's the one that placed the bombs on the cars.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Marcus is a sick bastard. That was just too coincidental, not to be a setup. At least hasn't pushed him away.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh bloody hell, they can't catch a break, can they? I really wanna know if Little Eddy is really Edward's child. This certainly isn't gonna be good on their already strained relationship.
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
Dayum, Esme broke bad. I hope Carlisle getting Bella to hear the baby's heartbeat will give her a change of heart as to how she feels about the baby. Edward killing her family is a large pill to swallow, but I've got my fingers crossed they work through it.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't tell you how excited I am he stopped her. I'm hooked.
Sherry
Date: 24 Nov 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 21 Nov 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh. Shit u. R killing me
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
[I pulled the trigger, watching his head fall back and the blood splatter on the back of the once white couch. "Can we go already? I have a date tonight," Ronnie said] lol lol
Date: 15 Nov 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well at least Edward's day went right. Ugh Demetri got her?!?! Poor Ronnie
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
This is a great chapter. Please,please make sure Ronnie is alive.
Date: 15 Nov 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! MORE PLZ!!!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Nov 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
OH PLZ UPDATE SOON
Date: 15 Nov 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter!
Date: 15 Nov 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well she did not want her baby now she may loose it all.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Demetri.............
Date: 14 Nov 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ugh...I liked Ronnie. And I can handle the angst just don't let Edward miss the birth.
Typical Bella scene this lol
Date: 14 Nov 2014 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm guessing dimitri & his wacka doo son! I really hope Ronny isn't dead! Bella just starts nesting & now she is kidnapped. CRAP!
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2014 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh dear Lord, I just knew this had to be coming! Dont hurt the Baby or Edward, or Bella...
Date: 14 Nov 2014 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
Dimitri? Ronnie's not dead? He was going to make such a great uncle.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
Welcome back! Long time no see! ;)
Date: 14 Nov 2014 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am pretty sure this is Edward's grandfather.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well, I can't say I haven't expected something like that to happen. Well, at least Bella woke up from her daze and she'll fight for her baby.
What a mean way of you to end this chapter. Please, don't let us wait too long for an update.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well crap. I wonder if edward voicemale heard it all. Let ronnie be ok. I am guessing eddie is in on it.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
Looking forwardto the next chapter
Date: 14 Nov 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
Its demitri who spoke at the end huh? Damn cliffy...oh i cant wait for more. Edward is going to hear on the voicemail of her being taken and is gonna freak!
Date: 14 Nov 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
OMGosh!!!!!!!!! You have GOT to update again soon!!!!!!!! PLEASE do not leave us hanging like this for to long. Edward is going to flip his lid when he finds out what happened. Who is sitting beside her?? I really hope that Ronnie does not die. I hope Bella does not go into labor.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
So, now I'm all caught up. I'm glad that Bella seems to loosen up a bit more. Of course, Edward has made lots of mistakes but as she said herself, if it hadn't been him who was sent to kill her parents, it would have been someone else who would probably have killed her too. He should have told her earlier but then she'd probably have run and been unprotected.
Anyway, I love the story and can't wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
"You...You look like Pipi Long Stockings," lol lol good one! I suspect Jane went to school in the short bus.
"She asked Bella with all the men coming and going if she knew who her baby's father was." lol lol I think I've had her as a neighbor::))
Date: 07 Nov 2014 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
Was really happy to see a new chapter love it and can't wait to read what happens next
Date: 05 Nov 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
She is slowly letting him in a little at a time. Can't wait for more. Wondering what Bella is sensing?
Date: 05 Nov 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
things are looking up with them.. I hope.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
Buh Bye Janey. Wonder if Eleazer gave them the slip and came in there in the end.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
In a review I love this chapter, Garnet question whether or not there was a hidden video. I am also wondering whether or not the house is swept daily for audio bugs as well as hidden video cameras?
When will Bella figured out yet that her only sense of safety and security comes when she is in the arms of Edward?
At least Edward is taking Bella's concerns seriously.
Edward really does love his unborn child.
How will Edward track down this Jessica and that is supposedly this little boy's biological mother?
Jane finally out of the picture!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
Aww edward and bella are so cute. Loved edward spending time with little kitten
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2014 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG! Love this story can not wait for more. I hope Bella stay's for the baby.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter. Glad they take her concern seriously
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2014 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you so much for the chapter, I miss this story the MOST of all my WIP I follow!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 04 Nov 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
That was a cliffie! I was super excited to see this update!
Date: 17 Oct 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love this fiction, there is so much in it. The characters are incredible, Nonna, Jane, Tanya, Victoria, and to top them all, Bella and Edward. Thank you so much for sharing.
Date: 14 Oct 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
I really feel bad for Bella. She has no choice in anything regarding her own life. Every choice have been taken away from her. She must feel so depressed, not far away from suicide. I understand her when she wants to get rid of Edward's child, a monster in her eyes.
And now Esme is in fury against Bella too, without even asking for an explaination. Can't she see that Bella is down ? Is Esme as heartless as her son ?
Very good chapter, thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
Does Edward believe Jane kidnapped the baby?
Well, Tanya is about to meet her end.
Edward needs to use Jane's stupid attempt to lure Edward back into her arms as a means to entrap her father and James. Taking out the family in one act of aggression.
Nice to see Nonna has realized Bella's biological family holds no connection her as an adult. Time to move forward as a united front.