[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
What on earth could Jane give Edward?
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
Are things really crumbling around Edward's feet?
Date: 26 Aug 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope Edward is able to get the baby back to his family. I wish Edward and Bella could get away for awhile to work on their marriage. They have so many people trying to separate them. I hope Bella comes around and gets over her anger. Edward really does love her and the baby.
Date: 26 Aug 2014 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
You are an amazing author. I think I have read your stories about 5 times each now and I like that you have an interesting plot and a modern Bella. It is so much better when she is actually smart and stands up for herself. Also really like your other story about Edward begin the Devil. I hope you continue that one as well. Thank you so much for sharing your story :)
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
I LOVE ALL THE DIRTY DETAILS. UPDATE SOON PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND SOME LEMONS TO PLZ,WE HAVE NOT HAD ANY FOR A WHILE.....PLZ!
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love Edward in this mood...
Date: 23 Aug 2014 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm so glad Bella confronted Nonna. She is getting ballsy in her last trimester!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
PLEASE DON'T TAKE SO LONG TO UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter. Love his soft side when it comes to children
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
It's been a while between updates so I'm going to have to refresh my memory.
Does B realize how hard her personality has become? I'm not quite sure I like her this way.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella made me proud. Standing up to Non a like that. You never know when or if Non a will have a gun on het. Lol. Can't wait for more. Love this story.
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
So glad nonna has come around
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
I m frankly shocked that Edward wants to get the baby back to his parents! Maybe there is some hope for him.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ahhhhh love this!! Need more
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 15
Glad nonna and Bella made up.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
if it is really his baby. Oh my Bella is going off the rails. She is getting better but what could push her back?
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
Such a great story. I'm so happy the Bella talked to Nona.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
Glad Bella finally confronted Nonna. OOOh Janey's in trouble!!! Love it.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
These are some fucked up people. Great chapter.
Date: 22 Aug 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
TY for the update love this story
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2014 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward can't be the father of this child. Bella can't handle much more. These 2 just need to disappear.
Date: 06 Aug 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
it's a great story please update I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 04 Aug 2014 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
Finally! At least now they are talking about it all. I can only think it will make them stronger as a couple. Loved the update and the fact that Bella didn't play the blame game! Thanks for updating! I look forward to more!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
I dont know, I am getting tired of all the other babies that are supposed to be Edwards. Why cant it just be Bella and Edwards baby?
I want Bella and Edward to be together again and not this "I need my space." I just dont understand how Bella can tell him she loves him but then say she needs to leave? It seems like the whole story is them trying to get back together. All this angst is just not my thing. I mean I love a good crime/mystery but this just......I dont know I would rather Edward just find out who is responsible and pop a cap in his ass already and let Edward and Bella get back to their Dom/Sub relationship.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 01 Aug 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
They have finally reconnected! Now what does Jane have up her sleeve?
Date: 01 Aug 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
I wouldn't want a present from Jane ever.
Date: 01 Aug 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh course stop right there so I go nuts waiting right along with everyone else. Sigh..
Thanks
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 14
wow seems like it has been forever HURRY back
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh Lord what's the present! I am so happy they finally talked! Bella is right things will never be the same but they are truly in love with one another, therfore it's time to start again.
Date: 01 Aug 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG! I CANT BELIEVE YOU LEFT IT THERE! I HAVENO CLUE WHAT THOSE TWO WANT, PLZ,PLZ UPDATE SOON!!! LOVE YOU
Date: 01 Aug 2014 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh shit what does Jane have?
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG!!! Wonder what her present is. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 01 Aug 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
well at least they've talked some things through. Nonna needs to be pissed at Caius and Dem for giving a hit on kids.
Date: 01 Aug 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yay!! You updated and on my birthday!!! It made this chapter all the better!
Author's Response:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY Nikaka!!!
Date: 01 Aug 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
I am glad that Edward and Bella have come to some type of understanding for now. What is going on with Jane and Tanya? PLEASE update again soon! !
Date: 01 Aug 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
Why does the writing seem choppy?
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
WTF ... HUH??????
Date: 17 Jul 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 15 Jul 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
I so want to put the smack down on Nonna. Stupid mean old woman. Bella is not her dad.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
Another great chapter. I hope Bella stays.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
"...and realize that Bella is more than a traitor's daughter that I married..." Oh, great. All poor Bella needs is Nonna going all mafia grandma on her:(
"Our house now looks like the front line. There is always a heavy presence on the street. Some of the neighbors have complained, why, I don't know" lol lol lol It's amusing that Edward lives in a neighborhood not a compound::))
Date: 13 Jul 2014 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Bella, now Nonna is against her. I hope she gives Nonna a good tongue lashing! I also really really hope that Edward & Bella have some lemony goodness so they can reconnect. ;)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
More errors than usual in this chapter, but still a good one!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
your story is great I can`t wait for mor chapters !:)
Date: 13 Jul 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
PLZ UPDATE SOON I BEG OF YOU!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORIES SO MUCH, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am so happy that you updated! I love this story, well all your stories! I just know Bella will come around. She has to right? Qs for what Tanya is up to, hum...... just not sure!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
good to hear from you
Date: 12 Jul 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor bella, edward kills her family yet nonna is pissed at bella. I cant picture the tattoo, i wonder what it looks like. Loved the chapter. She thinks edward wouldnt touch her cuz of the weight gain and edward thinks bella dont want to be touched. Bot these two are on different pages. I want them to make up but st the same time I dont because if someone killed my family I couldnt forgive them. So how old are bella and edward again?
Date: 12 Jul 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
If u updated daily it still wouldmy be enough hunny love it where's devilward I miss him so
Date: 12 Jul 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ahh. don't stop.. ugh.
Date: 12 Jul 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow Nonna et al have a lot of nerve ignoring her that way. don't blame b for wanting to leave though.
Date: 12 Jul 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
I do not know how Edward can keep hanging on. I am getting sick of Bella's not giving in. Maybe it is worse for me because I know she has feeling for him and the baby but she is being stubborn and wanting to walk away. Why? I do not know. They are different people and dealing with different issues and she is holding everyone including herslef to a standard that no longer exists. Plus, he had to kill her family or he would have died too. He has been victimized over and over and now she is punishing him for it all over again. I mean, he SAVED her. I am rezally begining to think that she is just a bitch and needs to get a reality check. I am really not liking her.
Date: 12 Jul 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh god bella
i really want to slap her she is playing with his feelings and thats shitty
really not happy with this bella i know what edward did was beyond bad but he didnt have a choice in his lifestyle
give him a chance bella what have you got to loose
Date: 12 Jul 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Excited to get this update. I feel sorry for Edward, for Bella, and for Nonna. They are in o screwed up life.
Date: 12 Jul 2014 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
loved it update soon
Date: 10 Jul 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hot damn, the truth is revealed! Can't wait to see what will happen next!!!
Date: 07 Jul 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh holly shite Batman ......
dah dah dummmmm m.
ok finished ready dark velvet when you finished writing it, but dum ass me didn't put you on author alert so that I knew when you stared this one.
So just caught up ..... Trust me your on author alert now Batman.
On the edge of my seat.
Only have to say one thing slightly bad (I hope)....... I think Bella forgave Esme to quick .... Come on who would take a slap from a women then forgive her not to long after, you would have to be really good at turning the cheek & to me if that was the case then Bella would have forgiven Edward & everything would be peaches & cream & strawberries & hey why not chocolate as well & we all know it ain't no peaches, cream, strawberries or chocolate ........ Just sayin....see not too bad....
As I said caught up know & waiting with well..... at least chocolate to read.
Keep up the good work
Date: 30 Jun 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well can't wait to see their reactions to that.
Date: 26 Jun 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
I LOVE this fiction!! I loved the first one a lot, but this continuation is a completely stand out piece writing wise. You are always faithful to your characters, you are always sensible in regards to plot line, you name it. Kudos and I can't wait to read more! Thank you for all the love and care you put into all your work!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm sure that revelation went over like a happy little tune. Or not!
This is all going to make a whole lot more sense to Esme not that the truth is out in the family. Will Edward admit that Ronnie was there as well?
Will he also confess that Eddie is his son or will he save that tid-bit of information for a moment when Eddie is in the presence of Demitri? That should also be well received!
I think that Edward and Bella have turned a corner in their relationship. Maybe the mutual hate of Edward's grandfather will bond them tighter. At least I hope the beginnings of a new start are springing forth.
I can't believe that Carlisle and Nonna both new that Demetri was released.
Put the pieces together Bella. You're a very smart girl.
I'm finally caught up to the rest of the fans. I need more though! It's my drug of choice.....hahahaha.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 11
WOW,that's who Tanya has been seeing and who has been picking up Eddie every morning. I knew it had to be him!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
Is is possible that Eddie is spiking Bella's food to induce labor? The more obvious situation would point to all the stressful situations that Bella has found herself in over the past few months.
Who is Tanya working for, Demetri per chance? Is she part of the take Edward down plan?
Is Edward far enough out in front of his adversaries that he will see the assault before it hits?
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well, Tanya was taken by surprise as Bella revealed things that only someone very close to Edward would experience. That set her on a course of aggression. I wonder what Edward's men said to Tanya to get her to shut up?
I hope Edward realizes this is his chance to begin to right the wrongs that are keeping him from his wife.
Will Bella be able to get Edward to treat her like a partner not a possession?
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great, an ex-sub enters the picture.
Let's hope Bella gets up enough backbone to put the woman in her place.
Maybe Alec will magically appear since everyone else has left the restaurant.
Will Ronnie end up with Victoria?
Marcus obviously knows about Demetri's plan to use Eddie to take Edward out of the picture. Which one of them gets the drop? I'll bet Bella's the first to figure it out.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Will the conversation with Eddie trigger any red flags in Bella's mind as she thinks over the things he said and asked?
So glad Edward didn't fall for 'Isabella's' fake storyline.
I hope Victoria makes Marcus suffer by drawing out her torture.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG what a cliffhanger, can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm guessing that Eddie is the mystery POV. He was planted by Demetri to Ruin Edward. What happens when Eddie finds out that his so called father, Demetri, is not truly what he believes. Does Bella get to be the one that reveals the truth of the matter to the entire family as Edward recovers from whatever failed demise Eddie attempts?
Good thing the cocaine is a thing of the past. What about the cravings?
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
What a way to introduce the topic of the century! Ronnie has a way of pushing buttons to get through the issues he thinks need clearing up. Well, he did it this time. I hope Bella's fainting spell didn't cause her to hit her head.
Nonna must know something is up between Eddie and Edward. She wouldn't make random comments if she wasn't aware of something. What was the conversation she had previously with Demetri that had her so upset?
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Will Edward break down in front of her? Will he tell her what happened at the warehouse?
He is going to have a nervous breakdown if he doesn't deal with all the emotions running through his head.
Carlisle kind of surprised me with his cold blooded killing.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
I wondered when Little Eddie would be making an appearance?
Let's hope Edward's confessions, Ronnie's short but sweet beat-down on Edward and a full stomach will help Bella put things into perspective.
Will Ronnie be the one to explain the details of the hit on Bella's parents in a way that gives Him and Edward a bit of separation from the fact that they ruined her life? Will he tell her that they were unaware of the target and that children were involved? That Demetri is a sick twisted bastard that wanted revenge for his incarceration at the expense of children. Not that Bella will immediately forgive but it may allow room for Edward's love to heal a bit of her broken heart.
Maybe this new Cullen female, Emmett and Rose's daughter will help Bella want to love her baby.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I never expected Esme to be the one that went off the rails and proceed in full attack mode.
How will Edward approach this new development in their already tenuous relationship?
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Maybe Edward should find a way to move Gina closer to Bella.
Glad she was prevented from going through with the induced abortion. She would have never been able to deal with the eventual results. Realizing she is no different than her husband when it comes to taking innocent life. That would have eaten her up inside.
I'm a little flustered with Ronnie's loyalties. Where do they really lay?
Date: 23 Jun 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
"Watch your fucking language around my baby," lol lol hysterical on several levels::))
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2014 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
Omg, loved this chapter,can't wait for more .great story.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
cant wait for more!! keeps me up at night:)
Date: 20 Jun 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
NICE CLIFFIE!PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ! LOVE YA
Date: 19 Jun 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMGosh! !!!!!!! So excited to get this update. I am a little speechless. Edward told his family the truth. Wow. I think Edward is right about Dimitri and little Eddie.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm stumped on how Eddie plays into this, & why does Dimitri want B dead?
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
THANKS FOR THE FAST UPDATE
Date: 18 Jun 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well at least it is all out in the open. Nice and hard. I am glad she told him she loves him maybe just maybe you will write them together instead of what is going on. He followed an order and if he had not don't they kill them for not following orders?
Date: 18 Jun 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
Keeps getting better and better! So Demitri is trying to turn Eddie against Edward or use him to get to Bella, either way it is probably not good
Date: 18 Jun 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well shit, Bella has redemption and Esme must feel like shit for slapping her when she was only keeping her son's secret. But now the shit has hit the fan. Is he also going to tell them about Eddie and what took place? I do not remember if they knew or that Eddie is Edward's. But they need to know he is working with him and not them.
Date: 18 Jun 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
So now that HUGE bomb has been dropped! I'm so glad Bella told him she loved him. Thanks so much for the quick update!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope Edward tells his family the whole truth, even about Heidi and Dimitri abusing him. He also needs to tell them about Eddie. Secrets is what is ruining this family.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella is just accepting staying with E now? Didn't think she was ok with it. At least he finally got the balls to tell his family what he did. Can't blame e for being pissed at Eddie, but doing it with Sam there was stupid. Wonder if Eddie is going to help kidnap B or something now?
Date: 18 Jun 2014 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Dun dun DUN! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Date: 18 Jun 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
great chapter
Date: 18 Jun 2014 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hos mamma is going to beat his ass .... can wait till the next chapter