[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2014 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
they should have told him
Date: 18 Jun 2014 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh shit the family knows one of his secerts....i think if they knew what dimitri and hedi did to him his family will kill dimitrii for edward... Now esme will feel guilty because now she knows why bella left edward.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh dear Lord, oh so good! Goodness I love this story
Date: 17 Jun 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
So is Little Eddie working with him?
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
"Does he seem a little weird to you." lol that's pretty funny coming from Weirdward::)) If Eddie's weird, that makes him a chip off the old block!
Amazing that Edward didn't know about Dimitri. Feeds my speculations over who Eddie is working with:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
I bet Eddie is doing something with Dimitri. Edward better have him followed 27/7. I don't trust either of them.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 16 Jun 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
HOLY CLIFFHANGER! THATS WHO HAS BEEN PICKING UP EDDIE! EDWARD SHOULD BE GIVING A SHIT... LOVE YOU AND LOVE THE NEW STORY TO! THANK YOU
Date: 15 Jun 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh wow Sam actually gave needed information.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
I knew it was dimitri who has been picking eddie up.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
Did Eddie give the gun to demitri because Edwards fingerprints are on it?
Date: 15 Jun 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
WHAT? ????? Edward's grandfather is out of jail. How did that happen? How did the family not know? Does Eddie know? ? This could mean trouble for Edward and Bella. PLEASE update again soon. Please! !!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 15 Jun 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
thanks for the uodate
Date: 15 Jun 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
That's who is behind Eddie
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
there is where the gun went.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
ok how is it that he didn´t know that????
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
E's gun is going to be used against him.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
"....he had a smile on his face as well. Was there something wrong with the staff in this hospital?" lol lol
E & B really are made for each other:) They are both nuts!
Date: 07 Jun 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
hmmSkankya and Eddie are up to something....together or apart remains to be seen.
Aww poor B. Preterm labor sucks.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
Please somebody tell me he prayed out loud and she heard him.... please pleaase update soon
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
This was such a good chapter. I hope Edward and Bella work this all out. They truly need each other. Bella would be lost without him.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2014 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter, hope all will be okay. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
Such a dark Edward, so nice to see his softer side. Have my fingers crossed for baby... XOXO, Cheri
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
It's been a while since the last update so I had to start over to remember what was going on. I hope there isn't such a long pause for the next one.
Date: 04 Jun 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks goodness you updated!!! Pls dont take to long to post the next one.... Love ur story?!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Been in her position twice they are both 6ft tall and perfect, does not always work out hopefully it will in their case.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love it can't wait for more.
Date: 04 Jun 2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
LOVE IT! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!
Date: 04 Jun 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is so sweet in this chapter. Well about Bella any way. Lol.
What is up with Tanya? ? She has to be working with someone. Can't wait for more.
Date: 04 Jun 2014 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
another great chapter
poor edward i know he is a bastard but he loves his kitten
Date: 04 Jun 2014 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aweeee Bella must forgive Edward i cant take this much longer, and please let the baby be oké
Date: 04 Jun 2014 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
I think he should have killed Tanya. She will hurt Bella eventually and Eddie must be behind it because he wants to hurt Edward.
What a hard story this has been. I keep hoping that some thing will happen and then Bella will want this baby and stop what she is doing. I get loosing your parents is hard that way and to find out your husband is the killer. The problem is in that life the mark is made and carried out and it is not like he wanted them dead he was just the tool. The person who ordered that is the one you want to hate.
Date: 04 Jun 2014 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
great chapter
Date: 04 Jun 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
PLEASE DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 04 Jun 2014 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
Awww...I am really begining to detest Bella about now. Even with all the pain in his face and etched upon his heart at the possibility of losing either of them, she still is a raging bitch to him. Something has to give and soon. I feel so bad for him, and especially the baby!
Date: 04 Jun 2014 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Poor baby and bella
Date: 04 Jun 2014 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
I feel so sad for Edward! Bella, is wanting the baby now too. I don't think Edward even realized that.
Date: 04 Jun 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hope she and the baby are okay. Tanya better watch out!
Date: 04 Jun 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
***sighs*** I am sorry I am just really frustrated at this point. I just dont think Bella acting this way for this long is right. It has just become very disappointing to read.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am so addicted to this now! I have spent the entire weekend reading to this point from both stories! I can't wait for more. Great job!
Date: 20 May 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
So glad for an update on this! I left it a few days before I read it just so I could savour it longer :P Love your writing, You are amazing :)
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
It's like I have 2 people in my head yelling out their opinion::)) One keeps saying 'Bella should forgive Edward' then the other one yells 'but he murdered her family'! I'm at a loss:( I do suspect she will eventually forgive him & they will have a HEA but I doubt it will be easy or overnight.
I must hold grudges 'cause I'm still angry at Esme for slapping Bella. Must have pushed one of my buttons:) The moment I noticed an update for this story I thought 'Esme slapped Bella. The bitch'::))
Date: 17 May 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope Bella forgives him. Love the story
Date: 16 May 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope they can hurry up and work this out. They are perfect for each other. They are both so stubborn.
Date: 15 May 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for the update I was waiting for it soooo bad!!! Update soon I love your writing.
Date: 15 May 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
Nice handling of Tanya and thank you edward for finally telling a little bit of truth. Can't Wait for more.
Date: 14 May 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well I so hope she settles down and starts to accept him because this baby needs two parents. If he is going to love her then he has to stop having that apartment.
Date: 14 May 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for the update! I'm so glad she is letting him touch her & be a little closer to her.
Date: 14 May 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 14 May 2014 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
She finally finds out that he throw up the contract. Hope they talk soon.
Date: 14 May 2014 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
wow
great chapter
i know bella is hurting but why cant she just accept that she is different and edward cares about her more than the others. she is young and imature but if she listened to him she would see
Date: 14 May 2014 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh how I missed your updates hub UN wow I would of fucking decked her fucking bitch that's gotta be hard to hear lol bring in devilward is it weird I'm in love with that chatacter
Date: 14 May 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
REALLY!!!!! AFTER SO LONG AND THAT'S ALL WE GET???? WHAT A BUMMER. OH WELL... READ YOU SOON.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2014 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love your story ,can't wait for the more.
Date: 14 May 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bellas starting to thaw out...edward better tell her about almost cheating on her before she finds out from someone else. I feel for bella, shes between a rock and a hard place.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
I have a feeling she won't leave Edward willingly.
Date: 14 May 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, intense. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 14 May 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
hot damn that chapter was a mess ! loved it.. cant wait till thenext one
Date: 14 May 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
THAT WAS TO SHORT! I WANT MORE! BUT I STILL LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 May 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
Can't blame B for being pissed off. E has a lot of grovelling to do with all the lies, compounded lies he's told
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love reading your stories! The first time I got introduced to them was when I was looking for a mobward fic. I searched up "mobward FICs on Google and it led me to fanfiction. Then from there there Some person asked if anyone knew any great mobward FICs and someone recommended your story and I checked it out. Let me just say that I fell in love with this story from the moment I saw the fantastic banner and read the summary. I have to admit it took me a long time to get to chapter 8 of dark lies but it is so amazing that I stayed up past midnight just to finish your chapters. I cannot get enough of your stories and God! Ur such an amazing writer! I hope u never stop writing and that you continue to post for dark lies. I really hope Bella and Edward get a HEA so that I can sleep at peace during the night lol. Thanks so much and keep up the good work 😊
Date: 09 May 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love both of your stories please update soon.
Date: 04 May 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
Please update your stories again soon!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
ohhh solo upset i have run out of chapters. please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Please, please, update soon
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am so excited about this sequel....please don't wait long to continue it....Dark Velvet was the best.
Thanks,
Ruby2sday
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
Please update soon! I absolutely love your story so far and hope to see an update soon!
Date: 05 Apr 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
love this story so damn much!
Date: 03 Apr 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh God! Victoria's revenge was priceless! And I think it's Jane who has the bright blue eyes ;) but I also wouldn't be surprised if it was Eleazar or James. I can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
New to this site, love this series, please update soon!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, loving this!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
Di du dummmm. Ok who is it and when is Bella going to start healing herself? Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
["Have a fucking seat Ed, you're blocking my view," Ronnie said, pulling up two chairs. The fucker sat down. He pulled out a bag of popcorn, he had beer and two smoky bacon bagels.] lol Ronnie is a great character:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2014 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
could that be Eddie? So will they get back to their dom/sub relationship at some point?
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am so glad I have found the sequel can't wait for more
Date: 27 Mar 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
This can't be good.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Crap!!!!, what now?
Date: 26 Mar 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG! Who isn that!!!! Great chapter Cristina!!!! Loved what Vic did to Marcus!!!!!
Date: 26 Mar 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
That was really great that Victory got to take her revenge on Marcus, but I know that it is not going to help her. She has to deal with her demons on her own. I am glad that Ronnie is insterested in her now too.
As for Bella, well I figured someone was going to take her. Hopefully whatever happens is going to make her realize that she really does love her baby and Edward. I hope you dont kill off the baby, that would be devestating to Bella and to Edward. They would not be able to come back from that. She would blame herself because she never wanted it in the first place and he would blame her for the same reason. So yeah, dont do that please.
Date: 26 Mar 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 26 Mar 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMGosh!!!!!!!!! I am sooooo glad that Victoria got her revenge. Who stopped Bella? As always you leave me wanting more.
Date: 26 Mar 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
That was such fantastic closure for Victoria. I thought Felix punishing him was so perfect! I hope Bella doesn't get kidnapped. I also have hope since Bella has been sleeping in his bed. That baby is beginning to soften her.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
loved Ronnie and Victoria