Date: 26 Mar 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
CHAPTER 8 I HOPE BELLA IS SMART ENOUGHT NOT TO BELIVE THAT WOMAN OR GIRL THAT JUST CAUSING TROUBLE../??/?SHE LOVE HIM ...
Date: 26 Mar 2014 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
OH PLZ THIS IS GOOD I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE !!!! LOL
Date: 26 Mar 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved Victoria's pay back....oh shit, who stopped bella?
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh no you didnt!!!! Cliffy? Ahhh! Is it Tanya? Go on tell me, I won't tell anyone ;oO
Amazing chapter. I loved how Victoria was scared and then took charged and owned Marcus ass ;o)
I can't wait for more!!!
Tho tut tut Edward. Not been home for 5 days?
Date: 26 Mar 2014 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
HMMMM!!!!!!!!! NOT TO BE MEAN BUT WITH EDWARD AND BELLA NOT BEING TOGETHER THE STORY IS SO SAD.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
Justice, sweet, sweet justice!
Date: 26 Mar 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
I really have sad feelings about them now. I think Edward loves Victoria. He might not realize it but he said he would never hurt her. HE would never leave her when that all started. She is more than a business partner. Bella is a lost cause. At this point All I can hope for is she finally keeps her baby and gets living quarters away from Edward so they can at least co exist. She is married to him but she is no wife.
Date: 26 Mar 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
Go Victoria. Glad she go her revenge. Malice is an annoying little witch. Go browbeat Edward.
Hmmm now who grabbed her at the end I wonder.
Date: 26 Mar 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 22 Mar 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
great story! please update again soon :)
Date: 21 Mar 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella needs to realize that no matter what happened to her parents, she loves Edward. She won't be happy without him or the baby.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
I LOVE THIS STORY YOU KNOW THAT! BUT ITS REALLY SAD RIGHT NOW, ICANT WAIT FOR THE LIGHT AT THE END OF THE TUNNEL! LOVE YOU!
Date: 21 Mar 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
While realistically I know this is fiction but to put yourself in Bella's place and try to imagine, much less understand what she is feeling is almost too much to deal with. I'm miles away from being Team Edward since he still hasn't done a damn thing to show Bella he's at least somewhat human but I'm struggling with this whole "you can have the baby" scenario as well. I get where she's coming from but as time passes and that baby begins to move and kick, I think she's gonna feel differently and we haven't even talked about when it's born-holy shit! I think we all know she won't be able to leave the hospital without the little one and even more than that, there's not a single person on the planet who would think Edward could walk away from his child or Bella. All of that makes for the coming weeks to be very interesting.
Date: 20 Mar 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well, they finally found Marcus. I am glad. I hope Victoria gets her revenge. I hate the Bella still does not want to have anything to do with the baby. She needs take the baby and save it from the type of life that it would have with if she leaves it with Edward. I still say that little Eddie is up to something. I don't know what but I do not trust him. I want to know who is picking him up.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 19 Mar 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ok I Am glad that Marcus has been found but I am pissy at Bella. She needs to really think. Edward is making an effort. Eddie still seems like trouble to me. Great chapter.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
I KNOW EDWARD DID A BAD THING TO BELLAS FAMILY BUT SHE CANT LEAVE THEIR BABY AND HIM SHE KNEW THE LIFE EDWARD LIVED AND WHAT TYPE OF PEOPLE HE ONCE WORKED FOR SHE NEEDS TO LET HIM EXPLAIN HIS SIDE OF THINGS AND GO FROM THERE
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
hmm ..Never did figure out what or who isbella dupe was or her plans. Eddie jr is making me nervous. Bella hmm not sure what to think of you either. I don't think eddie heard about her parents from esme i think marcus told him or could be working for them.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
I know I should not be mad at Bella for keeping this going because in real life we would be asking her how she could still love Edward. But I can't help but feel bad for him. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
does eddie have a weird crush on Bella? o.o
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2014 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Looking forward to Victoria getting her hands on Marcus
Date: 19 Mar 2014 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 19 Mar 2014 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think Bella has to have a real talk with Edward. She believed some people, but first she needed to hear Edward out. Now she`s making big mistakes. She needs to open her eyes before it`s too late. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2014 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
WOW! Where to begin. I am glad the fake Isabella is dead. Edward did great and that bitch got what she deserved.
I can't wait for Victoria to get her hands on Marcus and kill the bastard. I'm looking forward to the show. Can I get in the front with popcorn too?
I LOVE that Bella went into Edward's bed. I want them whole again, but understand why they are not.
I also hurt for her and I want her to get as far away from Eddie as she can. I don't trust that little piece of shit.
The chapter was more than worth the wait. Thank you x x
Date: 19 Mar 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
I hope she dreams of all the good things she will have if she stays. I'm guessing she is having a boy. I can't see her wanting to leave a little girl motherless in this family.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
I hope there will be reconciliation between Edward and Bella soon. I like when they are fighting on the same side.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well he killed the girl Isabella. Wonder who she really was? Hmm? She was supposed to seduce him.
I just hate Bella is taking out her feelings on her own child. Even rape victims are able to see they are one of the parents they can love an innocent baby.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
Waiting for the rest of the family to find out why Bella wants to leave. The Isabella thing is really confusing with Bella being isabella too. Hope marcus dies soon and Victoria gets her revenge.
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
I was so worried about you, fearful you were sick. If you were hope you're better and thanks for the chapter!
Sorry, but I was glad he off'd that Isabella, never trusted her anyway, just like Eddie, and Jane, Marcus and Caius...... Kitten loves him, I know she does! Please take pity on him soon, I know she's young, hormonal and confused by everything!
Again, thank you for the update!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
Alright.....I am now anxiously awaiting for MORE !!!!!!
You got me so hooked in the prequel I rushed right over to see
what was going to hqappen between them.
Something tell's me the one watching is 'Eddie', & he knows more about
Marcus than anyone knows.
I can hardly wait for more updates. PLEASE HURRY !!!!!!!
Thanks muches for sharing your WONDERFUL story with me.
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
jdcm0630@yahoo.com (new email)
Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter! Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm guessing the anonymous POV is little Eddie. I'm also guessing they forgot to check out the license plate like Bella asked. Someone is filling that boy's head with lies.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
I hope that was not the creepy Eddie. There is something strange about that boy.
I hope Bella and Edward can talk and work this out. They do love each other. I can't believe they forgot to lock the door.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
DId Eddie follow them? Because that's creepy. Please update soon
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2014 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
So can't wait for the next chapter. So happy Bella is starting to forgive Edward. Great story
Date: 27 Feb 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh oh greAT CHAPTER. i wish they would talk. at least a little.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think the anonymous is eddie and demitri filled his head full of lies. I dont think eddie would hurt bella. I still think after the sex bella will say thank you then go back to hating him. I hope edward doesn't cheat on bella (even though he tried once before) but his attachment to russian isabella i'm thinking he might cheat with her and think he "loves" her since he is having a hard time getting bella to forgive.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I dont think is Eddie i think is Ronnie or even Aro. She hasnt spoke to Eddie that much i remember in the begining her talkinv to Aro and Ronnie a lot. I bet is Ronnie.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like this chapter!
Bella is always angry but she still loves her husband.
I was afraid that Edward is interested in Isabella...
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm going to guess the last part was Eddie?
How old is Eddie?
Date: 26 Feb 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow lil Eddie working for his grandfather/dad.
Bella messed up there big time.
Don't make it too hard on Edward will yah, he suffered alot in life.
Every one else do as you will lol
Kinda not looking forward to the up coming chapters, but follow I shall!
Date: 26 Feb 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bella. She is being pulled in so many different directions. How do you love someone that killed your parents?? How do you NOT love your soul mate??
I can not believe that Edward shot Fuzzy!!!!!!
I am thinking that the last POV here is little Eddie. I want to know who is picking him up in the morning?? Has Edward ever found Marcus?? I am wondering if Marcus is picking up Little Eddie. I can not believe that Edward's crew would let someone on their property and not check them out. I can not believe that they do not know who isi picking up Little Eddie.
Awesome update!!!!!! Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ugh this chapter really tore my heart...Great chapter
Date: 26 Feb 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
The anonymous must be Eddie. What crap is he starting now? E/B are finally trying to reconnect. I'm sure everything isn't going to be fixed with just a little romp but at least Bella is letting him touch her.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
I wonder if that was Eddie's pov
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
loved this. Is it Eddie watching them?
Date: 26 Feb 2014 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ah man... Is Eddie gonna be a turd ??? Update soon please!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
I N T E R E S T I N G !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! READ YOU NEXT WEEK!
Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
OH MY GOD SO GOOD! THANK YOU, THANKYOU, THANK YOU!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
Is Eddie the voyeur? He's obviously up to something with the way he reacted when Bella escorted him to the door.
Great chapter
Date: 26 Feb 2014 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the chapter!! Is Edward going to cheat with Isabella? I hope not :(
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
i think little eddie is up to something
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
WOW .... OMG This is so good ... It had to Edward grandfather..?? Bella, Eddie, the baby...I HAVE NEVER BEGGED FOR A UPDATE BUT I WILL START TODAY... AND THANK YOU THIS ONE TODAY ..:) LOL
RATING 11
Date: 26 Feb 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh that was just cruel. lol. You gave us this wonderful update and they finally have a lemon for you to end it before the lemon ends and then for someone to walk in on them and not tell us who it is? Well I am thinking it is Eddie but I will have to wait to see.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
Who is anonymous?!? Is it Eddie? What a surprise! Great cliffie!
Date: 26 Feb 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think that was Eddie, he´s been very secretive
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
Don't know who that is. Eddie? I keep thinking that Isabella is added into this story for a reason. Edward is going to sleep with her and it will be a mistake. Oh then Bella finds out and it is the end of them.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
hmm is Eddie the anon POV or some other traitor. hmmm
I get that B is horny (I remember prego hormones) ,but he still has a lot to make up for before she lets him back into her heart. Sigh.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
looking forward to more
Date: 22 Feb 2014 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really need to know if this will be finished or not? I just don't want to get attached.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
This was a great chapter. I can't wait for more.
Date: 20 Feb 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
are you going to finish this???
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
"I don't deserve your forgiveness." I'll agree with Esme on that one!
"You left and these morons went nuts, and you left me with them," lol lol I was holding my breath, thinking Nonna was going to be a nightmare for Bella. Maybe not:)
"Is there a psychology degree shoved up your ass." lol lol lol
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Dun, dun, dun. Love it!
Date: 17 Feb 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow what an ending. She finally calmed down enough I sort through her feelings a little. Now if Edward would figure out what he wants without being drugged up and he can be reasonable they can move forward together. Great chapter. And what lies was little Eddie told? There is a whole lot of sh*t yet to hit the fan.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
we finally got the chapter that was teasing us for a couple of weeks.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh plz update soon I love this story there are so many way you can go with this story but plz keep bella and edward together ..and not have edward cheat on bella
Date: 17 Feb 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Whohoo awesome chapter
Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
HOLY CRAP! ARE YOU SAYING RONNIE KILLED THEM NOT EDWARD? PLZ DONT LEAVE US HANGING TO LONG!!!!!!!!! LOVE YOU SO MUCH! THANKS
Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
THANKS FOR THE CLIFFY.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
Maybe now she can start forgiving Edward & that stupid idiot can stop doing coke!
Date: 17 Feb 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hope Edward is not home hopped up on coke screwing the girl who is named Bella and looks like her. .That will happen I am afraid. There is no end to their sadness.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
I was wondering when or if Bella was going to find out that Ronnie was there that night too!!!!!!!! Poor Bella!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
Was there an explanation about Edward being Eddie's father? Ifso, whichchapter was it in? I can't figure out how I missed somethinglike that.
Author's Response:
It's in Dark Velvet there are numourous chapters where Edward talks about his suspicion and Heidi also confesses to Bella.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh Ronnie. You've added yourself to the shit list. At least Esme appologized. Too bad he son it's a wanker.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
How I see it, at the stage Bella is being childish.
you hate him, tell him. Say when this babies born im lraving you both.
Like, do any of you blame him if he moves on to a quick fuq? She has pushed him into drinking and drugs.
and takibg in the product of Edwards abuse as a child...Bella is a right bitch and seems to enjoy his anger on the issue.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Since I'm not usually one for believing in coincidences of that magnitude, my mind is going to store away the info about the girl named Isabella that Edward questioned. What are the chances::)) If it was all a setup, she deserves an academy award!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
I could just scream! I so want her to have a good reaction to him, but I'm figuring it is going to only cause a bad one. Bummer!
Date: 08 Feb 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
He`s so... I don`t have words. He needs her.
Date: 08 Feb 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Sorry E, but you've had it coming with the whole B situation. Marcus needs to die and soon. Disgusting Pigs
Date: 08 Feb 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh please forgive him bella
i know he is a shit but its edward
Date: 08 Feb 2014 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ok I feel for Edward in this chapter. I hope he does shit this part of the business down. Go Edward.
Date: 08 Feb 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
What is the deal with the girl that Edward and them just rescued?????? Why is her story so close to Bella's? Where is Marcus???? I hope he can help all those girls.
Date: 08 Feb 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love it cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
OOOOOOOOOOOH !!!!!!!!! C L I F F Y !!!!!!!! READ YOU SOON!