Date: 08 Feb 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love this story.... Can't wait for next chapter.
Date: 08 Feb 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
there is something more with that girl. Bella is a relative or something.
Date: 08 Feb 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
OK, so I don't trust Isabella Jr. Too much of a coincidence... XOXO, Cheri
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow! Eerie coincidence?
Date: 08 Feb 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 08 Feb 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
WOW just wow, is it a set up by Marcus...to many coincidences
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
Such a good story, I'm with Edward this is getting pretty strange!
Date: 08 Feb 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
Be strong and smart Edward, resist temptation. Oh boy I have a bad feeling
Date: 05 Feb 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved dark velvet and lovng this one as well....keep up the good writing!!!
Date: 04 Feb 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Holy shit!! I have just read Dark Velvet all the way through and finished all there is of this!! A lot of stuff happened!! Please update soon, I can't wait to see Bella and Edward get back together!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2014 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh oh what now? It's still a sad situation I just hope that maybe they can work things out
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2014 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
lol Edward's life is total chaos all the time:)
I'd totally forgotten about little Eddie. Big Eddie better play nice or Bella will go for his jugular!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
"I'm going to be someone's father. Damn...that's messed up." lol I gotta agree with that:)
So far Edward's acting like always (lol) & Bella's acting like I'd expect under the circumstances. The way Esme acted was a big surprise for me. The ultimate sin any MIL could do:( Bet Bella feels like an unloved incubator right now.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was sitting here wondering how in the world there could ever be a HEA considering the situation. Then I realized I haven't read anything promising a HEA::))
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
oooh bella
Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
what a story.. sad so sad she does not want a baby that is half hers. I get it but why kill a baby?
Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow!!!!! I lot in this chapter!!!!!! I am loving this story just like the last one!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing with us. Now I have to wait for the next update. Hope it is soon. I want to know why Edward's grandfather called Nonna!!!!!! I am not sure I would trust little Eddie or not. Glad that Rose and Emmett's baby got here ok. I busted out laughing with Ronnie hit Edward. Bella know that Edward killed her parents but she does not know that Ronnie helped....right? Hope you update soon.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
What the hell happened with Esme????????????? WOW!!!!!! I was not expecting her to react like that. I am glad that Bella did not back down from her. Proud that she yelled back at her. I did laugh a little when Carlisle told Edward that they were having dinner at his house and it would be no getting out of it that Esme was packing her gun!!!! lol
I am glad that Bella let Carlisle examine her. I am thinking that once she heard the heart beat that maybe her heart softened some to the thought of having the baby.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMGosh!!!!!!!!! I am glad that Ronnie gave her some time. But I just do not see how this is going to work between them. He killed her family!!!!!!! I can understand why she would feel like she betrayed her family. I was a little surprised at first that Edward was back to his rude self with her. I know he was upset with her trying to have an abortion but I thought maybe he would play the nice card and try that at least at first. Off to read the next chapter!!!!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow. Send him to a hotel? I forgot who little Eddie is? Oh wait. I remember. How could he have no where to go. Should we trust him? Bella held her own in both chapters. Thanks for the update.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow. I was expecting maybe Carlisle or Esme. Never did I think Little Eddie would show up. Just...you shocked me. Great update.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
I kind of feel sorry for Little Eddie. He never asked for screwed up parents. Bella is being so mean and cruel. I hope Edward is not taking coke anymore. He needs to be sharp to deal with all the crap and Bella the shrew.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella, poor Edward. I hope everything is gonna be ok. Thank you!
P.S. Hey, by the way. It`s okey, I wasn`t really offended. It`s just because of the whole situation here, we`re trying to protect Ukraine any way we can.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nothing like adding just a little more drama to the house!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
So good. Bella's pain & anger & sadness were flying off the page. I feel so connected to her. What to do w/ E. I still love him especially that he said I love you but how can B ever have a HEA w/ him.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh Lord, what a mess. I love it!
Date: 28 Jan 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 28 Jan 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH, THANK YOU! PLZ UPDATE SOON,ALSO I ALMOST MISSED IT BECAUSE THRES NO BANNER. LOVE YOU!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
Does B know Ronnies involvement in her families death?
Date: 28 Jan 2014 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
What a clifhanger ilove it cant wail till the next chapter
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved the chapteras always! So heart breaking for them both, buti love Ronnie is there, sticking up for her.
Omg can't believe little Eddie is there, wondering how that is gonna go!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well, well isn't that a kick in the pants, are we forgetting who off'd Little Eddie's mother! Hum think about it Bella, you have every right to be pissed off, totally get it! Consider this, "He who is without sin, cast the first stone" regardless, Edward can't change the facts, but he did save you! He loves you and you love him, you would be a wonderful mother! This storyline and story is so freaking good, love all of your stories! Just so you know
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
Glad Ronnie has her back. E is a dickhead. Hope Esme falls down a flight of stairs on her face.
Date: 25 Jan 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, awesome emotional ride
Date: 25 Jan 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
just read chapter 2 1-25-14
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow esme bless her is so off the mark it's untrue, I can't wait for the next chapter please let it be soon
Date: 23 Jan 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
These two need a serious talk and Bella needs to take care of herself. They love each other, but Bella is so angry. Edward needs to explain his side. No matter what the past can't be changed. She needs to forgive Edward because at that time he had no power. He was a pawn.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Are you going to finish this? I read "Dark Velvet" and loved it. Please finish this sequel and don't leave us with yet another unfinished story.
Date: 22 Jan 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
HOLY CRAP I LOVE THIS STORY! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, LOVE YOU! UPDATE SOON I BEG OF YOU!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
You have to update asap pleaseeeeeee. Im loving this story hard core!!!!
Date: 22 Jan 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
Whew, I thought my family was bad.
Date: 22 Jan 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my. Can't wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
E's an ass. He says he loves her & wants the baby yet he isn't doing anything to prove it. He's selfish.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I guess E doesn't believe in Pro Choice.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hey, thank you for the second chapter. I`m from Ukraine and I wanted to ask you not to use "the" before Ukraine, because it`s like the America, it`s an old rule. It`s a little bit offending. But anyway thank you.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry about that I had no idea I did not mean to offend anyone.
Cristina.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
I feel a show down coming. Great update.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very dark start. Happy to see the sequel. Great job.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
WOW GREAT CHAPTER
WELL DONE
Date: 20 Jan 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is still very sad.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow. This has gotten wild and crazy
Date: 20 Jan 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. I'm glad The both let Esme have it at least.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
I feel really bad for Bella. Not only was she blind-sided with the entire family showing up, but Esme going off on her and slapping her, too? Personally, I think Bella should have told them all why she left the way she did.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
loveeeee ittt moreeee pleaseee x
Date: 20 Jan 2014 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
Amazing...beautifully crafted.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
hmmmmmm!!!!!!!!! interesting. frustrating. infuriating. take your pick.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
B needs to just tell them all because E is too much of a pussy to do it. Waiting for B to throw herself down the stairs or something.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
wow cait wait for more please update soon please
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, ummm didn't see that coming! Mercy Momma C!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Omg i love esmee she is awesome
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wooooohh!! I want more! This story gets better and better with each chapter. ......
Can't wait for more!
Update soon, please!
Date: 18 Jan 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad he stopper but now I think we will have to lock her up to keep her. So glad for the new story as I missed them.
Date: 18 Jan 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 17 Jan 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yep. Big mistake Bella. Thank you!
Date: 16 Jan 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic so far!! I have a question, though, will there be any cheating in this story? Just asking because I don't like reading cheating of any kind and I'd prefer to stop reading now before it happens... :) Thanks a bunch
Date: 16 Jan 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm excited about the new story. Edward is really going to have to work for her forgiveness. I wonder how long he will have to grovel.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, what a mess. I had to go back and re-read the last chapter of Dark Velvet to remember where it left off. I am glad the story is continuing because this couple has a long, long way to go before things can be right. From Bella's perspective, it may never be right.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
GREAT START!!!!!!! I THINK BELLA NEEDS A SPANKING FOR TRYING TO KILL HER BABY DON'T YOU? UPDATE SOON!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG! I LOVE IT,LOVE IT,LOVE IT! I LOVE YOU ALSO! THANK YOU SO MUCH! UPDATE SOON PLZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Bella is going to make living together very difficult I'm upset for them both you know they will make a good couple, let's hope she keeps the baby
please please please update soon rating is a definite 10
Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Bastard!!! What, now he's gonna keep her a prisoner? Is he gonna torture her too?
Will he force her to have sex...ahhh that would be too much.
thanks for the great angst...love it!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely amazing. I loved it.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Right now I just want to give Bella a hug. She's hurting so much. I think, in the end, she will be happy she didn't go through with the abortion. But the way Edward is treating her, like she owes him something, are you KIDDING me? You killed her entire family!!! She owes you nothing! Yes, you spared her life all those years ago, but what kind of life does she have now. Heartbroken on her wedding day, pregnant with the child of the man who murdered her family, not able to trust her cousin who couldn't leave well enough alone, and now kidnapped and stuck with her husband who is apparently not going to let her go. I really want to punch Edward right now. I know he's hurting, but it's like he doesn't care if she is or not. And what happened with Tanya...I hope that doesn't become a recurring thing.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2014 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
looking forward to reading this
Date: 14 Jan 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
so glad this sequel is up. I hope she comes to love her baby and edward again
Date: 14 Jan 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!! Can't wait for more.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
not really a good plan to make her fall in love with him again,I hope they can work through this he has a lot of explaining to do
Date: 14 Jan 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Was so excited to see that you had released this early!! You have throughly captured my attention with your last story and this one just sucked me right back in! Looking forward to your next chapter and to see if they will be able to work their differences out. Thanks for sharing your talent with us all! :)
Date: 14 Jan 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh E You are digging a really big hole with her. While I don't agree with her choice or her comments, I can understand her thinking. She'll def be stuck now. Although this reminds me of a Criminal Minds story line where the evil mobster/terrorist kept his female from killing herself and the kid by default.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
yesssssssssssssssssssss, finally the sequel is here
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow cold hearted much....Welcome back!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
yes i love this edward
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well thank goodness, she's safe. Oh and you posted this early too! Thank ! :-) Love this storyline