Date: 04 Jul 2014 5:07 PM Title: Prologue: Gravity Pulls
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 01 Jul 2014 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 Getting Back What I Gave
Aha cocky Damon gotta love him!
Date: 26 May 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 3 Once Upon a Time
Cute chapter
Date: 24 May 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day
Oh my, so exciting!
Date: 22 May 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 28 Just Another Day
oooh evil sneaky ending. Can't wait for more.
Date: 15 May 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 27 Still Fight While I Can Fight
oh mikael....you're gonna regret that you jerk
Date: 09 May 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 26 Eye of the Storm
hmmm sounds liek demitri is gonna try something that is going to get our girl hurt or something.
Date: 04 May 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 25 Hide No More
Loved it. ROFL for "caving" the Bitch and The Icky brother.
Date: 30 Apr 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 24 Why Don’t We Go
yummy pics. LOL Barbie.
OOh love that hotel. LOL for snarky Damon talking to the vamp.
Date: 30 Apr 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 23 A Moment of Love
Glad Bonnie is looking with fresh eyes now. Glad Elena has accepted elijah too. Wonder what Stephan will have to say about that.
Date: 30 Apr 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 22 Diamonds From Black Dust
Liked seeing Damon's thoughts on everything esp Bella's alt future. Yummy lemony time too.
Good insights from Elijah talking about Damon with Jasper.
Date: 30 Apr 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 21 It’s Now or Never
Love that lake picture.. Hmmm is Stephan under a spell of some sort? Glad Bonnie is behaving now.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 20 You’re Dead Alive
cant wait to see who else you throw into the mix. When is Peter getting there?
Date: 27 Apr 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 A Fighter, Dancing Through the Flames
Loving the bas ass team
Date: 27 Apr 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 18 Everything That Kills Me Makes Me Feel Alive
While I love a good Bella/Jasper story, I love her putting him in his place here
Date: 27 Apr 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 17 I’m Sorry I Hurt You
Poor Jasper. Wow B's mom got around. LOL
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 16 I’ve Dreamt Alone
Well I'm not liking Demetrius. What wanker.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 24 Why Don’t We Go
This chapter was steamy and fun! I really enjoyed it. :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 23 A Moment of Love
This chapter was excellent, I really enjoyed it!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 15 All Systems Go
Woo Hoo for Vampy Bella!!!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 14 Light Start to Tremble
Woo hoo for Lemony time. ???”but think about it, Ian?” why is she calling him Ian? Sweet speech he gave. Yey for making him/her thiers. wow Beautiful Ring. ooooh gotta love that first orgasm. yum. yummy mating time!!!!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 13 Lives In A Dream
Interesting theories on the Cold Ones. oooh yummy dry humping time. Love her automated house. so cool. Stephan is so annoying. oooh Elena did something smart. hmmm enhanced hearing.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 12 Whenever I Feel Lost
Glad B is happy with hum. D is so sweet cooking for her. I like it. B really gets into research mode huh? Such a yummy flirt he is. We just got a Keurig at work. I love it. Mating soon I hope. I’m getting worked up waiting. LOL.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 11 I Want Your Beautiful Soul
Can’t blame B for being skeptical. But cool info from Elijah. B with more powers, cool. Ceremony sounds cool. Ah I like protective D. oooh Daddy E is not happy about the bite. I like take charge E. Cant wait to see the confrontation with the Volturi and the CUllens, esp Fuckward
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 10 Will Give You The Strength To Go
well guess that proves the relationship of B and E then. Sometimes I wonder if Elena is brain damaged. She never seems to be able to keep up. Ah well. oh elijah knows alot about the Sparkly ones. Ugh put Stephan out of his misery already. Jeez
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 9 Dream of Paradise
Bonnie deserved what she got if she tried to do it to B. Dayum thats a bigg ass closet. Yummy car. LOL for throwing the eraser and B being a mutt of many lines. Surprised Stephan “allowed” Elena in. Swwet the way D is taking care of her. At least Elena is being somewhat reasonable.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 8 I’ve Never Been Perfect
they are too cute together already. she def is a book addict. Good speech B. This meet and greet ought to be good. Oh Stephan is going to make an arse of himself I can tell. LOVE your Bella. Elena is such a ditz. Love her shocking everyone practically speechless. Like her standing up to them all too, esp Bonnie. LOVE her mirroring Bonnie back at herself. Serves her right, self righteous biatch.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 7 I’m Bared Boned and Crazy for You
Love sleeping/snuggling time. LOVE that house. Stephen does remind me too much of brooding Fuckward. Ah so she avoided sex in college. good for her. better pants off…..lol. smart with multiple rings and objects and smart to bring some to her place. wow b…. getting a roomie already
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 Made to Never Fall Away
awww D has a crush….LOL. Damon speechless???? stop the presses.
WOW she is a hell of a researcher. ah he sees the scar. can understand the anger there. wow putting his blood in the system….she really does trust him. aww for snuggle time.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 5 Uphill Struggles over Years, The Fear.
Ok I love this waterfall more than the last.
Bet that was the easiest tell he ever had. LOL for her shocking him though. oooh weather boy and lightning. lol for him calling E Fuckward. oooh She broke and entered???? Love it.
Wow He’s laying it all on the line. Yea Elena always was kinda snotty on the show
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 4 No, I’m Not Alright.
busy beaver she is. lol for our snoopping raven. Therapist was a good idea I’d say along with the Sensei. oooh so she made a move???? Go Bella. Love that backyard. GAWD to have money to do things like that. awww Damon is impressed…He is so cute. LOL for Bella the Staples Flirt. ooooh secret trading huh? Wow he jumped out with the big one huh?
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 3 Once Upon a Time
Love the waterfall pic. Hope Mr Raven wasnt peeking at her hidey hole spot. LOL for thinking she’s away from the Supernatural.
OMG I WANT that tub and view. She really loves her books huh?
LOL for Damon stalking her in the grocery store. Nosy Ned isnt he? At least he realizes he made her uncomfortable. Glad she got a laugh and smile at the end
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 2 Getting Back What I Gave
LOVE the kitchen. oooh smart contractor. B chose well with him. Cool that Charlie is in the know now. Meh for porshe. Woo hoo for Corvette, esp if a classic one. Loving Snarky Bella. Game on indeed Damon.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 Long for the Unseen
Liking where you are going with this. Renee’s death does sound suspect. Would love to have a house like that.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 5:21 PM Title: Prologue: Gravity Pulls
Love it already. HATED that he got away with the breakup that way.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 23 A Moment of Love
Loving it! Keep it up. Thanks for writing.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 Long for the Unseen
I didn't think I would like thi
s. But you got me. LOL! So I will continue. Thanks for writing.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 23 A Moment of Love
Loooooove it. Keep going.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 21 It’s Now or Never
I very much enjoyed this chapter! It was really good and very interesting. :)
Date: 06 Apr 2014 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 20 You’re Dead Alive
This story is so very interesting. Loveee ittt
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 20 You’re Dead Alive
I really liked this chapter. Very interesting!
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 19 A Fighter, Dancing Through the Flames
I love the way Bella was able to stand up for herself and back up her words. I like the way Damon and Elijah are there for her but let her have a leading role in her own life. :) I also like Jasper. Terrific chapter!
Date: 16 Mar 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 8 I’ve Never Been Perfect
Hi, just wanted to say how much I am enjoying your story. Will we see an appearance of Edward and the Cullens in the future? For closure? I am just curious. Aloha, Jane
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2014 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 18 Everything That Kills Me Makes Me Feel Alive
Oh my! I absolutely love your story! I admire your storyline and writing ability, along with how well you kept and changed so,e key characteristics of these characters.
One of my favorite parts about each chapter are the beautiful pictures of waterfalls. My favorite was Multnomah Falls since I'm very familiar with it.
I can't wait for the next update!
Happy writing,
Mae
Date: 13 Feb 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 18 Everything That Kills Me Makes Me Feel Alive
ut oh. He is upset he has lost her. He just needs to stay and find out what this is all about.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:50 PM Title: Prologue: Gravity Pulls
i Have Never read a crossover story written so well!!! i Can't Wait For More!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 17 I’m Sorry I Hurt You
really good.. so Jasper is related to Renee. That is his pull as her relative.. hmm
Date: 02 Feb 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 16 I’ve Dreamt Alone
Girl you have out done yourself here. So really good. Too bad you don't get paid for this. It would sell. I know SM would want a piece of it. I am not sure if you can refer to them as anything without paying her.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 15 All Systems Go
I thought... that once this witch you have in this chapter was introduced Elena was already or soon to be a vampire.. Now I get you can change it all up. I haven't gotten to watch the VD this season at all and not much last season. Dish does not carry it where I live. So until we changed to Direct TV just last week I will be able to watch once again.. They are all vampires now except for the Wolves and the witches.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 14 Light Start to Tremble
whew.. TIme for a rest there..
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 13 Lives In A Dream
tease..
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 12 Whenever I Feel Lost
so sweet.. hurry up change her I am thinking this story is going to be sad one point or the other and I am not looking forward to Bella injured again.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 11 I Want Your Beautiful Soul
loved it.. Wait until Elijah finds Edward and the Cullens.. Not gonna be a good time in the old town that night.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 10 Will Give You The Strength To Go
as vampires I like the Vampire Diaries vampires looks and information. The Twilight vampires look fake. I am sorry they do that white they tried to achieve and the the marble bodies. Really?? How can you get an erection if you are already unchanging and marble? How can they talk? So many silly things that SM left herself in a hole with explanations.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 9 Dream of Paradise
The pictures in this house are so beautiful. I am not usually so taken with these but the library just took my breath away. Sigh..
I am really enjoying this. The fact she accepts Damon immediately and not waiting for some specified time like months or a year. I hate that and he is just what she needs. She defends him to Bonnie and Stephan. I loved that..
Date: 02 Feb 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 8 I’ve Never Been Perfect
loved it.. good job..
Honestly if you hate Kristen just don't tell me. I really like her and I do not like Rob. I try and let this go for the most part each of us have different ideas. Just don't tell me. I have been reading your stories and I want to continue.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 I’m Bared Boned and Crazy for You
good I agree. why wait when you can start today being happy.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 6 Made to Never Fall Away
very good.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 5 Uphill Struggles over Years, The Fear.
good.. tell her eveything. I like that. I hate secrets between lovers..
Date: 02 Feb 2014 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 4 No, I’m Not Alright.
This is similiar to something I read long ago. There are differences and I am finding them as I read. I see the pictures you added. You placed other actors in here well specifically a new Bella. I started to read a Peter /Bella story no long ago and the writer changed Bella and no one else. I said you know I think you might be a Kristen hater and I am sorry I will take a pass here as much as I like Peter/Bella. I really like your story and I read your work. I hope that is not the case here.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 Once Upon a Time
I think I have read this before.. Long ago. I think Ian is so handsome..
Date: 02 Feb 2014 2:54 AM Title: Prologue: Gravity Pulls
I liked this much better than the first one.. from SM. I like strong Bellas.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 16 I’ve Dreamt Alone
Seriously i think this is the best crossovers that i´ve ever read :D I couldn't stop reading it, now that i'm on this chapter i finally gave myself the time to review. This story is really good, it's clear to see you spent a lot of time on your chacarters, their backstory, the story it'self and the plot to make it interseting next to that the pictures in the chapter just add something to it( normally it irritates me).
Also i love how you developt the characters from how they were originally but, the still have the same (lovaboll and annoying)traits as before. I do have to say i love Elijah even more in this story than in vampire Diaries or the Orginals and i want to steal Bella's Library ( i just wan't that house).
All i can say now is Keep it up because i can't let this story go i think i may be adicted to it like with a really good book you just can't stop thinking about.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2014 7:51 PM Title: Prologue: Gravity Pulls
Nice! I am into this already. My only regret was that I found this on my lunch break and can't read it all in one sitting at the moment! Love it, and can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 16 I’ve Dreamt Alone
Loved it can't wait to find out who it is... Update soon please