Date: 11 Dec 2017 3:17 PM Title: Prelude
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Date: 25 Mar 2017 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
Just finished reading this story and could not put it down. Are you still planning a writing the sequel because I really want to read it.
Date: 13 Sep 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
I have truly enjoyed reading your story. I am off to your profile to see if you have started posting the sequel. Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 12 Sep 2015 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 26 Daddy?
Renee is a piece of work. We still do not know who was sending the child support
Date: 12 Sep 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 25 Murder He Wrote
Glad things went ok with Aro. Can't wait to see what all Bella collectedfrom Aro's mind. What in the world is going on with Renee? I still do not understand who was sending Charlie child support. At first I thought Renee but then in the other chapter it was said that he wad sending it to Renee. Sowho is sending it?
Date: 12 Sep 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 24 In Conclusion: C + S = 12
Oh I LOVE your story Daddy's Precious. I am glad that Edward and Bella have Marcus. For some reason I think Edward and Bella are going to take over the Voltera and King and Queen of the vampires. I also wondering if Jasper and Alice are truly mated.
Date: 12 Sep 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 23 Blacks Friday
Glad the Blacks got their justice. Can't wait to see who is control the other members of the family. I am thinking it is Alice.
Date: 12 Sep 2015 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 22 Linked Forever
Glad they got their wedding and not Alice's wedding. Charlie took the cowards way out. I hope Billy and Jacob get what they deserve. Wow, floating in air. How did that happen?
Date: 11 Sep 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 21 The Beginning of the End
O knew her transformation would be complete as they got married. I am glad that Bella got to tell Charlie off. Just wondering what was going through Charlie my dad about what she did.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 20 Negotiations
I hope Bella really let's Charlie have it. Loved the proposal. I just know Alice is going to betray Edward and Bella at some point.
Date: 10 Sep 2015 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 19 Dialing In
Who in group was making Emmett do that to Edward? Then again and at the end of this chapter. I am thinking Alice or Carlisle. Alice has a lot of resentmenttoward Bella. Can't wait to see Charlie 'so reaction to when Bella tells him she is leaving. I can't believe that he has not noticed that she has not been at the house.
Date: 10 Sep 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 18 Birthday Ball?
So Alice is jealous and Emmett is just a pain in the ass.
Date: 09 Sep 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 17 I'm a Vampire!
Hope we find out more about Charlie and Billy. Loved the present she chose
Date: 09 Sep 2015 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 16 Full Stride Institute
Like her 1st hunt. Not sure about Bella's dream. But is was kind if funny. I don't understand Alice not liking Bella being able to tap into her powers. Why does that bother her so bad.
Date: 09 Sep 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 15 Her Lion Finding His Kitten
That was some hot sex. What is Alice's deal? Why can't she leave them alone?
Date: 09 Sep 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 14 The Original Takedown
LLoving Bella's powers. I am seeing that Emmett is not really a nice big teddy in this story. I am also beginning to wonder about Alice and how nice she really is.
Date: 09 Sep 2015 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 13 Unwanted Visitor.
So Bella can "harvest" other vampireside gifts or powers. That is awesome. Happy she put Tanya in her place.
Date: 08 Sep 2015 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 12 Being a Mutant
I knew she was slowly changing. The blood cellsand the venom was a little technical for me but I think I understood what you were going for. Can'twait for Bella to put Tanya in her place.
Date: 08 Sep 2015 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 11 What the Fuck!
Glad Bella is enjoying some luxuries. Wonder what Charlie is going to think when he gets back. Oh, I can not believe that Edward did not kill Mike for laying his hands on Bella.
Date: 08 Sep 2015 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 10 Mated!
They are finally mated completely! !!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 9 Revelations and Discoveries
Is Bella slowly changing from the venom she takes in from Edward's kisses? What child support is Charlie receiving? Who is it from? Renee?
Date: 08 Sep 2015 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 8 Comparing Notes.
I love seeing the interview works of Bella's mind. You do bring up some good points.
Date: 08 Sep 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 7 Transcribing Embarrassment
Loved the talk she had with Carlisle.
Date: 07 Sep 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 6 Frustrations under the Microscope
Glad Edward had someone to talk to. Love the tree house. I am really enjoying reading your story. Thankyou for sharing with us.
Date: 07 Sep 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 5 New Beginnings
I think Charlie 's comment in the other chapter about Billy sharing has something to do with the drugs or having sex with someone.
Date: 07 Sep 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 4 Meeting the Family
I like your Rose . So glad that she has Bella's back and is going to help her. Glad she has some new shoes.
Date: 07 Sep 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
I am enjoying reading your story. Glad I found it.
Date: 07 Sep 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 2 Edward
Very interesting version of Twilight
Date: 07 Sep 2015 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
This is very intriguing. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 23 Aug 2015 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
Absolutely loved the story. Though I've read it before I still love it. Though I'm wondering when you're going to publish the sequel. I went to your profile and it's still not up after all this time. So I'm just wondering if your even still planing on writing it :)
anyway fanned you you for this story :D
Date: 08 May 2015 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
loved it and cant wait to read thr sequel!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
Simply a beautiful story.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2014 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
I loved . It is as good if not better then the original saga
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2014 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 25 Murder He Wrote
thank God there is a sequel
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2014 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 24 In Conclusion: C + S = 12
that is because you are awesome
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2014 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 23 Blacks Friday
you are a great writer
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 17 I'm a Vampire!
dying to know what Alice's problem is and it doesn't feel like her and jasper are mates
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 15 Her Lion Finding His Kitten
wow
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 14 The Original Takedown
so cool
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2014 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 13 Unwanted Visitor.
she is powerful if she can use everyones powers
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 10 Mated!
so good
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 2 Edward
great
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
absolutely AWESOME story ;D your alice is the alice i always thought she was ;) i cant wait for the sequel to be posted ;) thanks so much for posting this story ;D
Date: 16 Jul 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 8 Comparing Notes.
this is an awesome story thanks for sharing it with us ;D btw i noticed a sentence was missing from this chapter from the word r32?
Date: 16 Jul 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 17 I'm a Vampire!
I love Edwards new look. The gift was very thoughtful. And I thought buying the wedding dress and things before you were engaged was bad luck. Lol
Author's Response:
My thoughts were just that the MATING had already taken place, the WEDDING is just a human convention they adhere to to play out their subterfuge. Being mated is eternal and a bond a thousand times stronger than marriage which has an inbuild system to dissolve it..
Date: 16 Jul 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
A fabulous read! Thank U. :o)
Date: 15 Jul 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 14 The Original Takedown
I'm really shocked that Emmett really is a ass. That makes me sad. It's very interesting how Bella is feeding off everyone and not just Edward. I wonder if Edward will be sbke to use Bella's powers once she has changed completely.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 6 Frustrations under the Microscope
I love Kate. She really is great.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 4 Meeting the Family
Poor Emmett he really doesn't think. I hope it doesn't take long for Bella to realize that he means well.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 Edward
No fight at all. I'm glad that they have all rallied around her so fast.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
The poor thing. I'm so glad the Cullen's came. I think they are just in the nick of time.
Date: 12 Jun 2014 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 16 Full Stride Institute
Is there an authentic movie you are referring to in this chapter? I know you mention Mathilda, but I've searched it and cannot come up with anything. Please let me know, as I'm curious! Thanks!
P.S. Love the story.
Author's Response:
The whole thing is based on the book Mathilda by Roald Dahl. The movie reference is for the 1996 movie Mathilda based on the book. http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0117008/?ref_=fn_al_tt_10
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
Absolutely loved the story.
I can't wait for the sequel! !!
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
loved the story can't wait for the nexy part.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
I absolutely loved your story. Sorry I'm usually a "story stalker" lol cannot wait until the sequel! Still can't get over the amazing imagination and effort put into this and I have read soooooo many fics to date. No rush on the next one as I will patiently wait for a masterpiece, just know that I opened the first chapter and was unable to put it down short of passing out from sleep deprivation. Hope this finds you well.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
Fantastic story! Well written, grabbed you from the very beginning and never let you go! I am really looking forward to the sequel!!
Catherine
Date: 28 Mar 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
fantastic looking forward to parallax
well done
love edward as coven leader being assertive yummy
Date: 27 Mar 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 10 Mated!
youve gota love a vamp that kicks edward in his own arse for being old fashioned
well done
Date: 26 Mar 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
I am glad that Edward and Bella are having a chance to travel and see the world together. I am also glad that they did not break up the whole family. Alice was the problem. Edward and Bella might think they don't need anyone else, but having a family is wonderful. We need to have ties to others. Can't wait until the next part.
Author's Response:
Don't be afraid, Edward and Bella know the importance of their coven. But they need privacy right now both to finalize their mating, exploring the possibilities of their link, and to go over all the information to come up with a plan.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2014 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
loved this story. Looking forward to the sequel
Date: 25 Mar 2014 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
What a wonderful story! I have enjoyed each and every chapter. I await the sequel...... Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
Can't wait for the sequel. Malice is such a twit. Feel sorry for poor Jasper.
TY for writing and sharing
Date: 25 Mar 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 27 That's a Wrap
You do a great job of wrapup! All bases covered and events explained. I loved seeing them sail off to that delayed honeymoon, and Christmas was just amazing. I almost stood and applauded when Jasper said,"good riddance". This has been a hell of a story and I look forward to Paralax, which I'm sure I'll enjoy just as much, if not more!
Date: 24 Mar 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 26 Daddy?
Wow, I have been blown away by this multi level story. I cannot wait for another chapter. I'm thinking Alice must have more she's hiding. Also can't wait to find out what's happening with Marcus and Aro... kudos on your storyline. xx
Author's Response:
Thank you, the final chapter is up, closing off all human storylines. The sequel will deal with the vampire stuff. And yes that has an equally intricate storyline.
Date: 18 Mar 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 26 Daddy?
I hope Bella and Edward can make Carlisle into the man he should be. Renee is a mess. I hope she likes prison. She does seem to like orange.
Date: 18 Mar 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 26 Daddy?
Whoa! Bella and Edward's powers just keep growing exponentially! That trick of diving into Carlisle's subconscous to change his way of thinking is amazing! Most entertaining was the confrontation with Renee, the scuzzy bitch! It warmed my heart to hear what Bella told her and to see Chief Cope haul her off to jail! I still want to know whose soft voice told Emmett to humiliate Bella and Edward. That is something that has to come to an end for the family to be happy. Thanks again for the rec's, I read and enjoyed both several years ago.
Date: 18 Mar 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 26 Daddy?
I enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for sharing....
Date: 18 Mar 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 26 Daddy?
wow I'm so loving this confident, bad ass Bella. Renee was hilarious!!!!
Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 25 Murder He Wrote
AWESOME!
Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 25 Murder He Wrote
good chapter.. Very detailed.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 24 In Conclusion: C + S = 12
Alice has lost her importance due to the fact she lied. Poor Jasper she just can not be his mate. She must have tricked him.
Author's Response:
Jasper will find his true mate when he's free of Alice, we can't leave him lonely now can we?
Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 25 Murder He Wrote
I hope Edward and Bella don't become too power hungry.
Author's Response:
They won't, they have absolutely no intention of leading the vampire world. They need however to clean up the coven and assume their natural role as coven leaders.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 25 Murder He Wrote
That swipe on religion was totally uncalled for. There are fiction books revolving around politics and religion so if I want to read one I know it's there before I start. This didn't have anything to do with either, so throwing that in there took me right out of the story.
Author's Response:
What swipe? It was a swipe at Caius which is part of the history of my vampires.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 25 Murder He Wrote
loving this
Date: 11 Mar 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 25 Murder He Wrote
Glad they made it through the inquisition without giving anything away. It sure helped to have Marcus on their side and for Bella to download Aro's mind, so to speak! What a shock that pretender to the throne has in store when they return to take their revenge! First, I suppose, they better see why Chief Cope needs Bella back in Forks! Sorry to hear this is nearly over, but thrilled to hear you have a sequel on the way!
Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 25 Murder He Wrote
Great chapter! Thank you....
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 25 Murder He Wrote
that was awesome!! was a bit confused when Bella was reading Aro's memories...it read like she was saying them, not the other way around. there is so much left to happen, yet only 2 more chapters - so happy your already writing the squel :) can't wait to find out how Marcus plans to kill Aro & his followers? how will he react to the news? and why the heck is it always Renee to throw in the monkey wrench??? see ya next week ;)
Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 25 Murder He Wrote
Great chapter. Can't wait for Aro and his evil minions to go down. Ugh Renee. What a PITA.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 24 In Conclusion: C + S = 12
I can't wait to find out what is going on with Alice. Marcus is so smart. He has made Edward and Bella even more powerful. I do hate all off the animosity in the coven (family).
Author's Response:
There's only one person who breeds the animosity in the coven, I have to tell you though that that is part of the sequel. Twilesque is about the mating bond and resolving Bella's human connections.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 6 Frustrations under the Microscope
loving the tree house
makes me want edward to build me one. sounds perfect
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 5 New Beginnings
love it
thank you
Date: 05 Mar 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 24 In Conclusion: C + S = 12
I think it is Alice that is causung everything. It will be interesting to know how Jasper will handle being lied to by her as well and who she is working with. It has to be someone but who is the question, and is Peter and Charrlet going to be in this?
Author's Response:
Peter and Charlotte as of now have no role in atwilesque or it's sequel. I might change my mind though.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 2 Edward
very cool
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
looking forward to more
glad alice reached out and maybe bella might have a friend
Date: 04 Mar 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 24 In Conclusion: C + S = 12
Wonderful chapter. Love Marcus! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 24 In Conclusion: C + S = 12
Burned? That is utterly disgusting. At least donate them to a shelter. What a selfish biatch. And all the first class crap too. Sigh.
Loving this Marcus. Love him knowing Aro's true crap. Hmm what are they going to find in Ms Malice's bottom 4 layers I wonder.
aww what a nicee gift for Marcus. Love him putting Esme in her place. Interesting red from Malice. Love B's ideas about reincarnation. Makes me hopeful for Marcus. Poor jasper. Malice is a sneaky biatch.
Sound like some yummy power clothes for B&E.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Yes she is, Alice will be dealt with in the sequel. Marcus will start searching for his mate reincarnate. First we need to make Bella totally free from human involvements... There's still one person we haven't heard from.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 24 In Conclusion: C + S = 12
:)
Author's Response:
;)
Date: 04 Mar 2014 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 24 In Conclusion: C + S = 12
Your Marcus is probably the best one I've read so far! It's so different to have him mentoring Edward and now, Bella! His ability to see the bonds between vampires, humans, etc. is one Edward and Bella needed to learn who was causing all the trouble in the family. They are as prepared as they can be so this should go pretty well! I am kind of curious about how they will handle Alice's hatred of Bella, among other things! Hope there are no big problems with Aro!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I like my Marcus a lot too. In the sequel we will find out why Marcus and Edward are pulled together in a mentor pupil kind of way.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 23 Blacks Friday
I love this story, but I hate how Carlisle is made to look like a fool.
Author's Response:
A fool he's not, a severely damaged character is more apt. He isn't canon, and I strive to expose things I see as mistakes in canon. Carlisle should have taken a much more active role if he truly wanted to be a father.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 23 Blacks Friday
Good chapter. I like the Edward/Marcus link.
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 2 Edward
I like this story! I can't wait to see where it goes :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2014 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 23 Blacks Friday
:)
Date: 25 Feb 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 23 Blacks Friday
Good, good recs, I have both of them favorited and read, so far as they are written! I loved that Bella and Esme made all that food for the homeless shelters Thanksgiving dinners, even though the smell disgusts them something fierce! The secret communications with Marcus are enlightening, can't wait for the three of them to meet in person! The weird things going through the family like an evil virus making them act unlike themselves is puzzling, but I'm pretty sure it's Alice. Haven't figured out why she's doing it, unless she has lost her vampire mind!
Author's Response:
We all agree its Alice doing the nasty interfering with normal functions of the coven. I just like to make everybody think about the difference in her history from canon. Read the chapter again where they search the dump, Jasper clearly tells their history. What might be different in Alice remembering her past to canon Alice's blank slate.
Date: 25 Feb 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 23 Blacks Friday
Love that the blacks got what's coming to them. Hmmm me thinks Alice is somehow doing the controlling. but I guess we'll wait and see
Date: 23 Feb 2014 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 22 Linked Forever
What a way to celebrate the wedding, the mountain lion, Bella's completed change and start their married life together! The part about hovering several feet in the air was pretty spectacular! They really may be the most powerful vampires on earth right now! I can see Aro isn't going to like them one little bit. p.s., I'm glad Charlie is dead, good riddance to very bad rubbish!
Date: 23 Feb 2014 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 21 The Beginning of the End
I totally understand why you had to stop there, Bella's heart just stopped and her change is complete! I was thrilled that Esme destroyed that awful wedding dress and Emmett did the honors for whatever Alice had for Edward!
Date: 23 Feb 2014 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 20 Negotiations
I really loved that Bella proposed with that gorgeous ring and then Edward did the same thing with his heartshaped ring! The take down of those three disgusting excuses for humans can't happen soon enough. I'm still worried about Alice, something is seriously wrong there, I just feel it!
Date: 23 Feb 2014 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 19 Dialing In
Dollars to donuts, it's Alice sending those bad thoughts to everyone. She must be manipulating everyone, or trying to before Bella put a stop to it! She isn't playing fair, that's for sure,
Date: 23 Feb 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 18 Birthday Ball?
Read both Hunted in Seattle, and Unloved, Unwanted and they were both wonderful stories! Yours is right up there with both of them! I am loving this Edward and Bella, Rose and Jasper and Esme, and hope Carlisle, Emmett and Alice get their acts together! Emmett especially was awful at Edward's birthday, worse even than Alice.
Author's Response:
Link it girl, link it! Are you sure it was Emmett being nasty?