Date: 27 Sep 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it can't wait for more 😀
Date: 27 Sep 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 28
Ahh, At Last! I am hearing Ella James in the background.
Date: 27 Sep 2014 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 28
Love when you Post
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2014 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 28
So happy they are together. I have to admit he was hot as Anthony! But he is pretty sexy as Edward too. Edward has a romantic side that Anthony didn't.
Date: 27 Sep 2014 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 28
Excellent chapter, with all the emotions at the right places.
It's a pleasure to read your fiction. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 27 Sep 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 28
Can't wait! :)
Date: 27 Sep 2014 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
OMG!! I love this so freaking much!!! :)=)
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 28
Yes they talked and are moving on and damn they are intense and so erotic it's beautiful I loved it update soon
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 28
Whew!......lol, loved it!!!! so happy for them, i can't believe just the epi is left! i don't want it to end!!! so in the epi we are covering, Phil's fate, the 'chair', and B & E's future....right? ;D
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
Finally... The part I've been waiting for is going to be here.. Thank you! Thank you!
Date: 26 Sep 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh my this story is soooo good! I caught myself tearing up something terrible.. Please keep up the good writting, you are good. If you write another story with Bella in it please don't make her so mean and wine all the time...
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 27
This chapter was a tearjerker.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 22 Sep 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 27
Yes, he finally waking up. The anticipation was....long. :)
Date: 21 Sep 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 27
Yes he is waking up! I can't believe there ar only 2 more haters left! I really, really, REALLY hope we get to see her experience Anthony and be able to look at him. Please!
Date: 21 Sep 2014 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
Yeah!!!He's awake!!!!Update soon!!!
Date: 21 Sep 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
*sniff* so sweet! I think Edward heard all that Bella said to him. Hope Phil rots in jail!
Date: 21 Sep 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 27
Love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 27
Yay good chapter!Aww it sucks poor Edward I hope he pulls thru!!!...
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 27
OMG ! I love your story.I cried on this chapter can not wait for more .thank you for writing this.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 27
First I love how you used Riley for the female nurse's name, that is awesome. And what a sweet change to the twiight saga. Then the fact that Carlisle used a credit card on Edward's lung totally blew my mind. My s-i-L is a surgical tech and I went right to him with that question and as he told me even more I just sat here in awe. thanx so much, ;o)
Date: 20 Sep 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oooh glad Jasper and all rallied around b and the parents.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
Yay! Great but scary chapter.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh my he is going to be ok wow and poor Bella but he spoke is he awake update soon
Date: 20 Sep 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
WOW, that is an intense chapter, I love it. I didn't cry, because I know this story has an HEA, but all those emotions are intense. Bella is considered part of the Cullen Family now, by Esme and Carlisle.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
Aww he heard her
Date: 20 Sep 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMGosh! !!!! So many emotions in this chapter. I am si glad that he is coming out of it. Love love this chapter! !!
So glad that Bella got to hit and kick the fool out of Phil.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 27
yes! he is coming to! this was a harrowing chapter to get through but I know you will bring us out the other side to the HEA we've all been longing for....I love that you make it realistic and don't just get him better in one chapter. I love all the things she is saying to him....things that maybe she'd have more trouble saying if he were awake...
Date: 20 Sep 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh my, what a wonderfully written chapter! The highs and lows, the sweetness, the tears... just beautiful!
xo
Date: 20 Sep 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
*wipes tears* OMG! I was beginning to panic when they threw Bella out of the room!PHEW! I love this whispered words!
So excited for the next update! I love this story. :)
Date: 20 Sep 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
OK, my eyes are filled with tears, but they haven't fallen. Loved it!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
sniffing back tears...
Wow.. I have cried! You are good!
He is awake. (Thank you very much!I didnt think you would kill him off, but...)
Looking forward to more :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
*blows out a shaky gust of air* he hears her! thank goodness! no coma, whew.......he just needs rest. let that stupid mother flower rot in jail! great chapter (though my nerves were shot...lol)
Date: 20 Sep 2014 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 27
Aaaaahhhhhh!!!!! Ok. You need to pretend tomorrow is next Saturday. Just saying. This is so good. I need more. :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMG,Omg! Please post soon .LOVE YOUR story can. Of wait for more.
Date: 17 Sep 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
OMGosh! !!!!! Really! !!!!!!!!! This is a HUGE cliff. You have left us hanging over the Grand Canyon. Now I have a wait for an update. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! !!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love this chapter. They are making small progress.
Date: 17 Sep 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
Love me some Esme time!!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
I am thinking that Bella is starting to forgive him just a little.
Date: 17 Sep 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella is going to be upset with Rose. Basically Rose is doing the same thing as Edward did. Keeping something from her and going to tell her later. So was Edward.
Date: 16 Sep 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMGosh! !! OMGOSH! !!!!! I am speechless. I am sooooooo glad that I do not have to wait for an update. I am so off to read the next chapter. I don't know how I expected her to find out but that was not it. How is he going to get out of this.
Date: 16 Sep 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
Glad they are having fun in Rome. I wondered if Bella would ever meet Aria.
Date: 16 Sep 2014 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
My mouth dropped open when Aro asked if Bella was a good fuck. How rude. Love Edward and Bella teasing each other.
Date: 16 Sep 2014 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
How does Rose know that Edward is the photographer? I don't remember Jasper telling her in the other chapter? Phil is going to be trouble. I hope Edward will give Bella time to explain.
Date: 16 Sep 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love love love this chapter! !!!!!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 26
No fair!!! Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 15 Sep 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Will Edward ever tell her that he was/is Anthony? ??? I can not believe that Phil is moving to New York just in hopes that Bella will develop feelings for him.
Date: 15 Sep 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love love love this chapter!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love them being playful with each other.
Date: 14 Sep 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love that Edward can tease Bella about her time with Anthony
Date: 14 Sep 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love the pictures. I am thinking that Bella is feeling that Edward and Anthony have some same qualities.
Date: 14 Sep 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Can't wait to see how Edward tells Bella that he is her mystery man.
Date: 14 Sep 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
I was a little surprised that Edward called it off with Isabella like he did. Glad that they are getting to know each other.
Date: 14 Sep 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loving the pictures! !! I like how Edward can not stay away from her. Love that he got her something to eat. That was sweet.
Date: 14 Sep 2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 26
Cliffie's suck, but this chapter didn't! Finally Bella pulls her head out of her behind! So I guess Edward won't be able to leave for Ireland for a while nor will he be able to have Anthony make an appearance for a while either since he probably can't overly excerpt himself after two gun shots. Bummer! Hopefully, Bella will be his nurse!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
Nooooooo!!!! Someone stab Phil
Date: 14 Sep 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
You shot Edward??!! Wow.. never saw that coming...
Looking forward to more
Date: 14 Sep 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad that Edward is feeling a little guilty. I am wondering what Bella is going to think about all of this when she finds out that it is Edward.
Date: 14 Sep 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 26
OH SNAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No words! I know you won't leave us hanging for long. I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh hell to the no! Are you flippin kidding me?
GAH!
Carry on ;)
Date: 13 Sep 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 26
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh wow I loved it but holy snap I thought she was ready but she was still holding back but right when she is tell him so Phil comes a ruins it will Edward survive will they catch him update soon
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh dear Lord in Heaven! What a cliffie! Oh such a great chapter!
Date: 13 Sep 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 26
Omg!!! Did not expect that!!!
Update soon please!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 26
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
He cannot die - he just found put that she still loves him! Damn you Phil! Hope you turn the gun on yourself!
Please please please update ASAP.
Date: 13 Sep 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
HOLY CRAP I so didnt see that coming.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMG! no you didn't!!!! Where is Carlisle!!!!!????? He brought a gun to an opening??? knew something was mentally wrong with Phil, holy crap! get Edward to a hospital quick!!!!
Date: 13 Sep 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
OH no you didn't..............cya on the flip side. ha ha ha
Date: 13 Sep 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well, I knew Phil was crzy, but that was unexpected. Can't wait! Write fast!
Date: 13 Sep 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMFNG!!! OMG! OMG!! This is so crazy fantastic!! OMG!! I love this! :)=)
Date: 13 Sep 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
OHHHHHHHH That's very hard to read, the last part. Phil ! WTF ! That is some drama.
Why, but why all this fucking men think that a women is a possession ?
Thank you for this great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 26
Classic cliffie, Dishie! EEEEEK!
LOL, Love it!
xo
Date: 13 Sep 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
Damn, fucken psycho phill
Date: 13 Sep 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
CLIFF HANGER OF NOTE! can't wait for the update!
Date: 13 Sep 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 26
Damn No cliffy......she just told him she loved him....weren't there any security their.....chest wounds can be tricky on the plus side if he survives he won'[t be going away for a while..
Date: 13 Sep 2014 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
I meant to tell you earlier that I really like the pictures. Loving this story.
Date: 13 Sep 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMGosh! !! This chapter was so hot!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Sep 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well well well Bella has had a very adventitious night.
Date: 12 Sep 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love this chapter. Glad that Bella has finally gotten that stick out of her ass. Lol. Can't wait to read what Edward's plans are.
Date: 12 Sep 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the picture. I can't believe that Ginna acted like that to Alice. Can't wait to see what Bella's reaction is going to be when she gets that text.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
So Edward does know it was/is Bella on the train. This could get ready interesting. Can't wait to see where you go with this story.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMGosh! !!! Did Edward know that Bella was the girl from the club?
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2014 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 25
This was a great chapter. I am glad that Bella finally heard the truth. Phil is just slimy.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMG did I love the pictures. wow! Esp. the one that's suppose to be Bella looking out over the land, but the other one of her was beautiful too. Once again yes Seth needs to be fired but so glad that Edward called him out on it right to his face. And oh yeah, give it right back to Phil Edward, lol, good job. Cya' on the flip side. ;o)
Date: 07 Sep 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you! I do love this fic...T
Date: 07 Sep 2014 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 25
There is a little competition between Phil and Edward. Edward really love Bella, but does Phil really love her too ? Or is it for him just for the fun to win and ruin her ?
I had to read twice Edward's declaration to Alice about Bella, it's so sweet.
Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2014 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh hoh!! Woo hoo! Go, Bella! So she never hung up, huh? Sneaky! ;)
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Poor Bella. I totally understand that feeling of needing to "return to your roots" as she put it.
xo
Date: 06 Sep 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
oooh Phil is getting more and more creepy. Cool that she heard him talking and learned a little.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
Pure genius on your part for her still being on the phone. I can't stop smiling! Phil is such a pig & I'm glad that Edward reprimanded Seth. Now how will things go when he picks her up? When he drops her off will he be invited up to her apartment so they can have some freaky Edward/ Anthony make up sex?
Date: 06 Sep 2014 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 25
so glad he didn't disconnect the call like he thought.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love the pictures and this chapter. She will get there!