Date: 05 Aug 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
I absolutely loved the portrait that was portrayed that Bella had painted. Now, since I always review on ffn too let me get right to my point? I did not, I repeat, did not like how Aria just flew into Edward's arms boo hooing. IDC if it was about her husband & son, it just wasn't right and esp. in front of Bella. And, yeah, she can call him Eddie? I'm disgusted is what I am. And, when Bella wants a word he has to go and reassure Aria that he would be right back????wth??? He owes her nothing and I'm so glad that Bella reinforced what he felt when he had seen Phil kissing her. Then, to top that, Edward blushes but then smirks.....smirks??? Please!! It won't happen again but, theres that but, she needs help. What did Aria expect that Edward could do for her anyway, huh? He's not some FBI or cop, he's just a photographer. IMO he's always been lucky that Bella is like she is and comes up with that business card. hmmph!! See ffn for my other opinion. ;o) ty, you really brought out some emotions in me this time, besides with those naughty pictures. wink, wink
Date: 03 Aug 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow, what a portrait!
And holy hotness! *wipes forehead and pats face dry* The hawt sexy goodness - many times!!! Gah! And the ILY's!! Whoa! Woot woot!
And oh to be in love in Rome... promising to do such naughty things with a gelato... when WHAM! A cockblock as cold as ice! Bella is so awesome! She just brushes that shit off her shoulder Jay-Z style and was like, "The cold never bothered me anyway."
LMAO! Gawd, loved loved loved this chapter, woman!
Mwah!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh wow what a vacation fist Aro and now his ex wow will they be able to find her family and damn Edward just couldn't help himself he had to tell Bella that he is in love with her I loved it more please
Date: 03 Aug 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
HMMMM!!!! IT STARTED WITH SEX AND DECLARATIONS OF LOVE FOR EACHOTHER THEN HIS EX MAKES A PLEA. MMMM!!! MMM!!! WELL NOW WE HAVE TO WAIT AND SEE WHERE YOUR MAGIC TAKES THEM NEXT. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 02 Aug 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
oh dear! I wonder just how dangerous for Bella it's going to be to accept help from a mafia Don like Aro! Is this a set up?? This story has me on my toes and salivating!! I wonder how you will take us from her to the big reveal. Guess I'll wait a week to find out, you evil cliffie mistress, you!!
Date: 02 Aug 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh that was awesome!
Date: 02 Aug 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm so glad Edward stood up to Aro, probably helped to show Aro that he wasn't and won't back down. I was all with Bella on tripping Aria, lol.....but I think shes doing the right thing by calling Aro for help. Love, love love this!
Date: 02 Aug 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
WOW! WHAT A GREAT CHAPTER, O LOVE THE ANGST NOW. EDWARDS KIND OF AN IDIOT,SORRY. UPDATE SOON PLZZ!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love this story!!! :-)
Date: 02 Aug 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wowsers Aro loves putting people on the spot doesnt he. Glad Bella was able to do it. Hmmm Aria huh? ah well. there had to be a little bump for them.
Yippee for the ILY's
Date: 02 Aug 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh fuck...i hope seeing aria doesnt bring those love feelingsup again
Date: 30 Jul 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
I can't guess, honestly, how she will react. Makes me nervous! LOL
Date: 30 Jul 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aww. :( Stephen is breaking my heart. I had high hopes for him.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
I AM SO GLAD BELLA TOLD EDWARD WHAT REALLY HAPPEND WITH PHIL AND THAT PHIL'S STUPIDITY DID'NT CAUSE PROBLEMS BETWEEN THEM. I SO WANTED EDWARD TO SAY THOSE THREE LITTLE WORDS! OH HELL MARRYING HER IN ITALY WOULD HAVE BEEN GREAT! THEN ONCE SHE FOUND OUT HE WAS OR SHOULD I SAY IS ANTHONY HE'D ALREADY BE HER HUSBAND BUT THEN THAT WOULD BE TO EASY WOULD'NT IT???? (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
Omg, love your story can't wait for more.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh boy well at least Edward didn't jump to conclusion and just called Bella to find out what really happened now how will this trip go it is off to a great start update soon
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 27 Jul 2014 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
LOL, yeah, Aro seems a little creepy! Yay for Edward for telling Aro not to disrespect Bella. Tho, I fear Aro may blurt out Edward's little secret...
xo
Date: 27 Jul 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
Aro and Phil are both extremely huge ewwwwwwww's! Love the story!
Date: 27 Jul 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well at least E talked to her about it instead of getting all hateful and ignoring her. Ugh Aro is a dog.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 27 Jul 2014 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
OMG! I am so very excited for more of this story!!! :)
Date: 27 Jul 2014 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
Aww cock block lol. Love the chapter
Date: 27 Jul 2014 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Aro is completely disgusting! I am so looking forward to next weeks chapter! I have a feeling it is going to start of with a very Big Bang! ;)
Date: 27 Jul 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
yes indeed! creepy Aro! So I wonder if Bella finds out in Italy that Edward and Anthony are one and the same. You said chapter 21 and this is only 2 chapters away! I'm also thinking that Phil is a bit creepy too, so hope he's dispatched soon!
I hope you enjoyed your trip and arrive back home safely!
Date: 27 Jul 2014 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
ew, dirty old man!...lol! Can Aro take care of Phil!? jk,,,maybe!, she's given Phil too many chances, next has to be serious action
Date: 27 Jul 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loving this
Author's Response:
Thanks, rclaurel3!!!! xoxxo
Date: 22 Jul 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 21 Jul 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
THIS CHAPTER FELT A LITTLE TOO SHORT BUT... THAT'S JUST ME ALWAYS! WANTING MORE!!!! I HOPE EDWARD CUMS BACK GUNS LOADED ( NOT LITERALY..OR YEAH! MAYBE I DO MEAN LITERALY )LOL READ YOU SOON.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ohhhhhhhh shiiiiiiiiiiiiiit! Why that (***^^%$#$^&&*)!!! He planted the paps there! Urgh! Do not like this one bit! >:(
*scrolls back to the beginning of the chapter in pursuit of happiness* ;)
xo
Date: 20 Jul 2014 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my, was I thankful for those pics this time, hubba hubba. I'm just stressed cause I know what chapter were at and what's about to happen. Stress is not the right word, but hey, you understand, right? I am glad Edward is visiting/surprising his mom but I bet he's second guessing it now what with what he read online and saw. Phil IMO is very much acting like a stalker, IDC how much he wants Bella. He's suppose to be an upper crust kind of person and you just don't act that way. He is not listening at all to Bella and that is disrespectful at the very least. ty for another update, till next time, oxox ;o)
Date: 20 Jul 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh thank goodness he is always up to the challenge of a rival. I really didn't mean to quote the "I of the tiger" song. I would like to put a bluet in Phil's head. He probably called the paps.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ugh Phil is really pushing it. Hope E gives her the chance to explain.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
Sure there's compaction we all know Edward doesn't lose
Date: 19 Jul 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
Phil must of planned all tnat, because its to much of a coindince for a picture of them "kissing" to be snapped as well as mention of the hand holding. I dont trust phil
Date: 19 Jul 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Mmmmm ! Not good, definitely not good for possessive Edward. There is some competition, indeed. It's time to take the big guns EddyBoy ! Thank you for this great chapter.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh wow they are hot together hehehehehehe but Edward is so sweet too now did Phil plan that picture hmmmmmm will Bella tell him about it
Date: 19 Jul 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
Damn papparazzi! They always slant things to what they want them to be, not caring about the reality of the situation....I don't like Phil, not one bit! He can't take no for an answer. He's the kind who ends up forcing a woman because he thinks that "no" is foreplay, not a final answer....ugh! I really eagerly anticipate the time when she realizes he's Anthony....or when he tells her....however she finds out! Thanks, Dishie!
Date: 19 Jul 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Phil Is delusional and I think he could be dangerous
Date: 19 Jul 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG! Well, I guess they are going to have quite a conversation later! ;) I am really enjoying this story and I am excited for more!! :)
Date: 19 Jul 2014 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
Not liking Phil right now, but I do not understand why Bella doesn't tell him that she is already in a relationship with someone. Of cousre, Phil is creepy and may decide to eliminate his competition. Edward seems to have taken the picture well considering they just promised to be exclusive. Oh yeah, way to start off a chapter!!
Date: 19 Jul 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Grrrr! ok, Phil has a death wish! wtf is wrong with him, he planted that freaking photographer didn't he!? I thought Edward would be more upset but i just hope that means if Phil is pulling out the big guns, Edward will pull out a bazooka! That clueless psycho needs therapy, too bad Bella didn't clock him.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
That is hot! I hope you will post more.
Date: 17 Jul 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
I am so scared for Edward. when Rosalie outs him with the pics from Jasper. Bella is gonna be soooo mad. but i did luv their first time together!!!
Date: 17 Jul 2014 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
yeah, baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! who needs panties!!!!??
Date: 16 Jul 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh, we are definitely enjoying the pictures!!!!!!!!!!!! woo hoo. I want rooftop sex!!!!
Date: 16 Jul 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
i don't know if i can stand anymore fun, whew!! i am spent now.
Date: 16 Jul 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
i am so jealous!!! I want a tantric chair and my very own Anthony!!! Boo Hoo!!
Date: 15 Jul 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
holy moley, i am thoroughly enjoying this story. i have a massage scheduled for today, too bad Stephen won't be my masseur.
Date: 13 Jul 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
Finally! Excellent story so far! Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, LeslieE and thank you for he coffee cups!!! xoxox
Date: 12 Jul 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
Holy snap that was erotic and I need more soooooo much more and what will Edward say when jasper tells him about showing his work to rose update soon
Author's Response:
So glad you liked the lemon, mommymac!! Thanks so much for the coffee cups, I love those!! See you Saturday!! xoxo
Date: 11 Jul 2014 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
This was so great! I loved the interaction with Vicky! What Bella says about not being introduced was priceless!!
I wish after their love fest she reconsiders going to meet his parents but I'm guessing she will still be a bit gun shy & won't go.
The love scene was fantastic! I loved how he was able to experience more things with her visually. And always my favorite where he tells her she is his & that he wanted her from the very beginning.
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it 2mpix!!! See you Saturday!! xox
Date: 11 Jul 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
WOW...that was great!
Author's Response:
Yaay, so glad you liked it, Islandgrits!! xox
Date: 10 Jul 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
Omg ,I love love your story best story on here so far .fuck the haters you are doing great keep it up. Can not wait for more.
Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
I just found this story and havent been able to put it down
To say I was thinking of it in my sleep last night is kind of scary
But take that as a complement . When a story stays with me like that.
Im dieing to see when and how the truth comes out. I suspect Bella might figure it outmor maybe has already...........just my thoughts. I will anxiouslh be waitjng on the nexg installment.
I
Author's Response:
What an honor to hear you say you thought of my story in your sleep because I have so done that when I love a story like that. if you are a member of FaceBook, you should join Dishie's Stash. Thanks for reading and I'll see you Saturday.
Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
That stuff with Victoria was some of the most hilarious dialogue I've read! I love it when Bella told her she didn't want to meet her. Just sinfully delicious! And speaking of that.....I can't help but wonder just when Bella will begin to recoginze his touch. I mean, each man has a particular feel to them and she can't help but notice sooner or later, can she? Well done, Dishie! I also noticed that she kind of froze at the invitation to accompany him to Seattle and meet his parents....too much, too soon? Wise of him not to bring it up again. See you next time!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it, Judy. I spoke to quite a few women regarding the issue you bring up concerning recognizing touches, etc. Especially the oral sex part, when it happens. Of all the women I internvewed, they said that they would not be able to tell, nor would they even think about it. They said they would be in the moment with the one they are with. I think this totally makes sense because I wouldn't be able to tell the difference either and nor would I compare one man to another. I believe it's because we are reading this issue in the this story that we expect it when, in reality, it wouldn't happen unless Bella was actually looking for something comparable. Which she is not. I hope this makes sense. You and I think a lot alike on many issues that it's beyond uncanny. I believe if you honestly think about this, it will make sense to you. Glad you are enjoying the story, Judy. xoxo
Date: 10 Jul 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
Awesome chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much mct!!!! ox
Date: 10 Jul 2014 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'VE MISSED YOU BUT I HOPE YOUR HAVING FUN. NOW AS FOR THIS CHAPTER...BELLA HANDLED HERSELF PERFECTLY WITH VICTORIA. AS FOR THERE FIRST TIME AS EDWARD AND BELLA HMMM!!! ALMOST PERFECT. I SAY ALMOST BECAUSE I'M NOT A CONDOM PERSON. (NOT THAT I!! WEAR THEM) BELIEVE ME I UNDERSTAND THE REASONS FOR CONDOMS AND THEY ARE GOOD REASONS TO USE THEM BUT PERSONALLY I'M JUST NOT A FAN AND WHEN I READ I'D RATHER FOCUS ON THE ROMANCE AND NOT THE POSSIBILITY OF STD'S. IT KINDA KILLS THE MOOD BOTH LITERALY AND PHYSICALY. (LOL) IT'S FICTION AND.... OK I'M RAMBLING. YOU GET MY DRIFT (HE HE HE ) READ YOU SOON
Author's Response:
LOL, I totally agree with you on the condom thing. I have never used one before and believe it's a mood breaker. BUT, I only put this in the story because the fandom will call me on it without a doubt. Eventually they will quit using them as they become more comfortable with each other. So glad you like the story, though Bobbysgirl!! and as always, thanks for the teacups!!! Love you girl!!!!!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
:)
Author's Response:
Mwah!!!!!! Thanks for cups!!! xoxo
Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow..
just..I hope Edward's name for the pictures is not Anthony :S
Author's Response:
Nope ... not Anthony. Thanks for reading, MaluTara!!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
Gah, this is AMAZING!!!
Author's Response:
Yaay, so glad you like it, RAH!!!! xoxox
Date: 10 Jul 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh ho, did I love what was going on with Victoria....brillant. And their 'first' time, yowser. You built that up really good. I'm still flying. ;o) Love the naked pic of him standing by the bed......waiting & watching. yeah!! Breathless!! Have fun!! ;o)
Author's Response:
Oh, goodie, I'm so glad you liked it dowlingnana!!!! I like this next chapter as well. Lemony. xoxox
Date: 10 Jul 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
*big stupid grin*!!! i hope she goes with him to see his mom! it kills me that they're so happy now and in a few chapters, chaos erupts! no sign of the stalker, hope the moving company loses all his stuff!...lol
Author's Response:
LOL ... The mom visit comes Saturday!! See you then, mountainlion and thanks so much for the teacups!!!! xoxxo
Date: 10 Jul 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it! Now it's going to be interesting to see if she notices any similarities.
Author's Response:
So glad you like the story, romance4me!!! See you Saturday! xoxo
Date: 10 Jul 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
FANFRIGGENTASTIC!!! :)=)
Author's Response:
LOL ... you crack me up NeNee!!! See you Saturday. xoxo
Date: 09 Jul 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
So.. he is slipping up and talking like Anthony. He has to make love to her like Anthony. Even if she hasnt seen him. Things will have to feel the same, right? Kissing would have to be the same.. right??
How long before she figures all this out??
The new artist is Anthony... Damn Bella is going to be hit from all sides.
Author's Response:
Yes, things would have to be the same, however, Anthony and Bella didn't kiss much. Only a few times, really. As I explained to another reader, I interviewed quite a few women on this subject, women who are not readers of this story and they feel that they wouldn't even think about comparing men. That they would be in the moment of who they are with. This makes total sense to me, but I feel it's because as we read this story, we expect her to compare when she probably wouldn't. I feel it would be more the mannerisms that would catch her attention more than anything. See you Saturday!!!
Date: 09 Jul 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
*melted*
Author's Response:
Thanks Louise Clark!! And thanks for the teacups!!!! xox
Date: 09 Jul 2014 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter! So hot!! I am dreading the chapter that she finds out he is Anthony... :( I just know she is going to feel so hurt that he didn't try to explain before this relationship went so far.
-Kate
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tigger. Yes, my heart breaks for her too. See you Saturday!! xoo
Date: 09 Jul 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yey for E/B time. But why do I have the feeling that Anthony is the name that the private photos are under and B's gonna find out that way???
LOVED them messing with Icky Vicky.
Author's Response:
LOL .. Icky Vicky!! LOL. Yes, this all falls apart soon. We have to go to Italy first!! Thanks for reading my story K. xoxo
Date: 09 Jul 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 08 Jul 2014 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
Des cons...il y en a partout!!!
Vous êtes un auteur de talent. Svp, j'espère que vous prenez ces commentaires avec un grain de sel.
Une jeune grand-maman...
Date: 08 Jul 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
Gilet à col roulé et jeans pour un homme...j'adore! Si sexy!
Date: 08 Jul 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
J'aime vos photos.
Date: 06 Jul 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
I know it was the right thing to do him behaving himself at the hotel but I so didn't want him to. Phil is going to be an issue. I look Forward to seeing how Edward deals him. Victoria has me stumped! If he wasn't in love with her why was he engaged to her? Bella no doubt will put her in her place!
The photographer that Rosalie wants to talk about, I'm wondering if it's Anthony/Edwards work?
i'm not sure if I have mentioned this before or not but I LOVE when you show us pictures of what the characters are wearing!
Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Im thinking phil will be a rebound when bella finds out anthony is edward and feels betrayed and runs to phil..or phil offers a shoulder.
Date: 06 Jul 2014 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
I freaking love this as always!!! :)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
You did me in with the pic on FB...lol. oh my my, Edward better be careful... Bella should have just told Phil she was starting a relationship, what kind of stalker moves his life to be with a woman that has no feelings for him???? That's creepy, I actually want Edward to set Phil straight, yeah the idea is looking better and better. .lol!
Date: 05 Jul 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
This can not be good. Anything concerning Victoria. Why hasn't Edward made any moves to go forward with Bella?
Date: 05 Jul 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am already reading Counselor and yes it's fabulous so I hope your rec gives her other readers. I thought it neat with the hummingbird cloud and it reminded me of Carano's story Grand where Edward calls Bella his hummingbird in that story. ;o) Of course I love their banter with the pillow. Banter is always so neat as well as foreplay like, lol. I do wonder about Phil, he seems almost a bit controlling maybe or some underlying anger if doesn't get what he wants. hmmm. Now as for Victoria, wth? How did he become engaged to her when he had just told Bella he only loved one woman before and we all know that was Aria???? This ought to be interesting and yes, with V. involved it can never be good. Bella better hold her own but with Phil coming into the picture soon, well as I stated on FB, a bit of competition maybe just what is needed. Edward doesn't want another woman he loves to get by, right? laters babe, ;o)
Date: 05 Jul 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
I HOPE YOUR TIME AWAY WAS GOOD. AS ALWAYS A VERY ENJOYABLE CHAPTER. I LIKE THAT HE'S REALLY TAKING HIS TIME LETTING BELLA GET TO KNOW "EDWARD" SO VICTORIA HUH? WELL THAT CAN ONLY MEAN ONE THING "D R A M A !!!" (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 05 Jul 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
Way to leave us all hanging on for more
Date: 05 Jul 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
oooh, good one! can't wait for her to figure it out...
Date: 05 Jul 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
This is all building up to the big reveal in a few chapters and I feel the tension you're building, big time! The slip up in his voice at the end, in the restaurant at lunch, is only the beginning of the clues she'll notice, I think. Who the F is Victoria? Ex-fiancee?? I thought he was in love only once, to that woman who he told her about that got married and had a kid. The one from the beginning of the story. What was she, Israeli, or Egyptian, or something like that??
Your rec, Counselor, has got to be one of my favorite stories ever! I've been reading it, and it's companion pieces, Cygnet and Lost, from the beginning. I didn't know you were reading them too!! Just another thing we seem to have in common, dear.
Date: 05 Jul 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
hmmmm B's going to figure it out soon I fear. Ugh Phil is going to be an issue I think.
Date: 05 Jul 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ok. Edward said he has only been in love once and never told the woman. I am assuming this is Aria. So WTF? He was engaged to Victoria?