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Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!! Oh Edward is going to have more slip ups I am sure.....it might be a better idea to come clean rather then letting her figure it out on her own. Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 16

Excellent, Is Phil going to be a problem

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved their trip! Her cuddle time every morning... priceless! LOL! 

I don't like how Phil's moving to NYC. Not good. 

As for Victoria, I'm sensing a very interesting "conversation" is coming!

 

I'm missing Emmett, too... ;)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 15

So with summer finally here I have some free time to read again! Real life sucks when you have a job! Lol....love this new story...Can't wait to read more!

-Kate

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 15

LOVE IT, THANK YOU!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 15

Its about time for Edward and Bella to seal the deal.  I thnk she is definitely seeing the Anthony Edward similarities.

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)

 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

Sweet ending!

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

ha ha ha, Now that you've taken my thigh's virginity. I think it deserves a cuddle. OMG, roflmbbo, that was seriously funny. I was laughing out loud here. Oh to think what kind of pictures you could have posted....sigh* These two are truly getting closer and what a fun pair they actually make. thanx and have fun on your vaca  ;o)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 15

Wow what a fun day and nigjt but boy oh boy Bella wnd her naughty dreams hehehebe well they both got to enjoy it but wow I so didn't think Edward was going to talk about his ex that was big update soon



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it mommy!! And I like the coffee cups!!! xoxox

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 15

Awww...that was sweet of him to say...Bella's had her first feeling of the same desire with Anthony for Edward so I think it's going to be tuff on Edward to keep the secret from her for long...



Author's Response:

I know, huh? These two are killing me!!! xoxox

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 15

Gah! *squeeeeeeee!*

Loved this chapter so much! His confession... OMG!!!

Totally fangirling here!! 

xo ;)



Author's Response:

Oh, Louise, you are so stinking adorable! Thanks for always reading, reviewing and for the cups!!!! See you next week. xoxox

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh, I really love this chapter!! :)=)

Author's Response:

Very happy you like it NeNee!! xoxo

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, amcullen! See you next week, then! xox

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 15

*sigh* & *swoon* ;) loving this trip! Can't wait to see what happens when they go to bed next time!

Author's Response:

Hey, mountainlion!!!! LOL ... you hungry for lemons? Thank you as usual for the coffee cups!!!!!  xoxo

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it!

 

Enjoy your day/weekend/week in the country :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, lazydaisy!!! ooxoxoxoxox

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

This was such a sweet surprise.  I hope he took some of Bella sleeping.  I'm a photographer & I know that would be my most favorite pictures.  Bella's dream was funny!



Author's Response:

He did take some of her sleeping ... ;)  See you next week!!!! xoxox

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

WELL...AT LEAST HE WAS HONEST ABOUT HIS FEELINGS FOR HER AND ADMITTED HE'S LOVED BEFORE. GOOD FOR HIM  BUT WHAT WILL BELLA REVEAL. HMMM!!!! THANK YOU FOR THE EARLY UPDATE. THEY SEEM TO BE HEADED IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION BUT KNOWING YOU TROUBLE IS JUST AROUND THE CORNER FOR THEN (LOL)  ENJOY YOUR TIME IN QUEBEC. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

LOL ... you know me well, don't you? You know I can't leave well enough alone. Thanks for always reading and reviewing Bobbysgirl!!! And especially for the cups. xoxo

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

The subway sex was great!  It was a perfect ending to Anthony!  I love how steamy Edward & Bella are already getting.  The cabin stay will be hot & heavy.  The one thing I'm pondering..... does she end up pregnant from Anthony & is that how Edward has to come clean about who he is?  Since Edward knows she just had sex with someone it would make sense that if they have sex in the cabin he would use a condom. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

Her subconscious knows that he and Anthony are the same person.  I'm sure she will be startled and confused and hurt when she finds out. I think she will get over that, maybe after some time. I trust you to take us home here, Dishie, and give us another fulfilling story. Have fun on your trip.



Author's Response:

Hey, Judy. You are spot on...she's hurt, sad, confused, etc. But you know  love me an HEA!!!  See you Saturday. xoxo

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)



Author's Response:

Hugs for the cups, Deb!!! xox

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wonderful time they are having.  Great dates



Author's Response:

Thank you, Lady! 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 14

hee hee hee Loved this! So playful and fun! xo

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2014 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 14

I loved it. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hope you they get all hot an steamy on this road trip

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 14

hmm wonder how long to figure out e is anthony?   Yey for bike trip. Haven't been on one in decades but used to love it.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2014 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh wow Anthony just had to have her one more time and damn it was hot now Edward is being dreamy as ever now how will their weekend go hmmm sexy times for sure

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

OH MY!!!!! This is so fantastic!! I love this story! I am a bit worried that Bella will freak out a bit when she finds out Edward is Anthony. She may feel tricked or betrayed. Or she may be all 'thank god it's you' LOL I can't wait for more!! :)

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

Now that Bella has decided to let Anthony go she seems hell bent on sealing the deal with Edward.  Can't see see any similarirites yet?

 

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 14

I just got back from Alaska and a I hope you got my last two reviews, cause when I was there and hit submit a strange notice came up saying something about it maybe not making it thru??? So, if you didn't then I am sorry!! IDK why either, it's not like Alaska is a foreign country, lol.  I really liked this side of Bella too. She was really playful. You can see a stronger confidence coming out too in her as well. Tsk, tsk Edward with that whispering in her ear....she almost caaught on. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

Is this the 1st time bella and anthony/edward fucked without a condom? I hope Bellas on BC because if she gets knocked up she will try to track down anthony and edward will have to come clean. Cant wait for more

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

So, I know you wont tell me.  But whats gonna happen when she realised the Edward and Anthony is one in the same.   You know this is going to destory her!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow Bella and Edward are really hot.... What till Bella realizes she has the best of both worlds Edward and Anthony all rolled into one... Question is will she put two and two together when she has sex with Edward or will he have to tell her ??

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow!  So good

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wow. Just wondering if Bella is going to finally make the connection when she and Edward get it on.

Reviewer: annc Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Glad she ended it with Anthony. They were both so naughty on the subway and at his parents'  apartment. Don't know how Edward is going to get away with being Anthony. How would he by his parents' apartment since Bella has been there.

Dishie, love love love your stories - my very favorites.

Thank you!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh wow!  I really loved it!  I cannot wait for their weekend away!  Wonder how much longer until she figures it out?  Also, what will happen once she does?

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

I LOOOOOOOVE IT. Thank you for this great chapter.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

OH! NO! YOU! DID'NT!!!!!! JUST LEAVE US WET AND WANTING!! REALLY!!! YOU! YOU MEANIE!!!!  I'M GLAD "SHE" ENDED IT WITH ANTHONY AND IS CONCENTRATING ON EDWARD BUT I STILL FEAR THE TRUTH IS'NT GONNA BE PRETTY WHEN IT FINALLY CUMS OUT. AS FOR YOU MISSY I HOPE LIFE'S BEING GOOD TO YOU AND YOUR WORRIES A FEW :) :) :) READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

holy sass Bella! :D wow, i didn't think she was going to let Anthony have closure like that. but i hope since she ended it, she won't be dwelling on it anymore. that was hilarious the was she answered Edward about the thong....

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

I effing loved it! Anthony made a perfect exit and now Be can move on and explore their options... lol

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, I'm excited now.  More please!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: Donna239 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

OMG! So hot!! So, the first hint that Bella subconsciously is picking up on things that are similar between Edward and Anthony.

Reviewer: LisaVamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great story thus far! Eagerly awaiting more!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

I'm so glad you are sticking with this story!  That guest commentor must be a complete idiot to think this story Isn't worth reading!  

I am giddy at seeing how close these two are getting but still have so far Away!  The tantra chair conversation was very funny!  I also love that she admitted the painting was him right before he left.  

I have no idea what you have in store for another Anthony visit.  Will it be Edward or will it be Anthony? I can barely stand the wait!  :D

Reviewer: dopey5of6 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2014 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 13

Reviews are probably down because peolpe like me enjoy reading, but not typing. I hate typing but am enjoying the crap out of your story. So by all means, write on and let the haters know that they can just suck it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love this story. I think Bella knows in the back of her mind that Edward and Anthony are the same person, but she can't admit it yet. Her mind is slowly putting all the pieces together. I can't believe Anthony is coming back out to play. This is so exciting. Anthony is the amazing lover and Edward is the sweet and amazing boyfriend. Bella is so lucky to get both of them.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 13

LOVED IT!!!! MORE PLZZZZ!!!!

Reviewer: vvply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 13

Temperature is rising wonder what she will do when she finds out about Edward's secret. 

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

Mega FU*K them. Never stop what u r doing. Ur a great writer.

OMG!! He's going to tell her? Can't wait til next weekend.

E/k

Reviewer: vvply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Stephen,  I'd be will to console him. Yeah he very hot. Love you pics. Love reading anything you write thank you.  

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

Well, I cetainly like your story! What is Edward/Anthony about to do??

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

oh E  bringing Anthony back is a really bad idea.

Screw Guest Reviewers.

Reviewer: vvply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

That sure was a steamy chapter of lemons.

Reviewer: vvply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow Your Bella is pretty well off. I had been wondering how she was able to finance her first gallery. So Edward has some very elaborate plans for Bella,  feels sort of creepy but very titillating at the same time. Don't know whether she should meet up with him or not.

Reviewer: vvply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

Edward sure knows how to play the game.

Reviewer: vvply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

Like fiction Pad, but pictures here just adds special much to the story. Loving this story

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 13

The guest IMO is a coward if they can't use their name when they review...stand by your words instead of being two faced which i think guest reviwers are. So seems like edward is playing with fire and if he has Anthony pay bella a visit thats not fair to toy with bella let her move on. Btw....when I review i tend to talk to the characters im just that involved in the story lol

Reviewer: tobbis Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 13

+++++++++++++

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 13

I LOVE THIS! I LOVE ALL OF IT!! THE STORY, THE CHAPTERS ALL OF IT!!! I am reviewing because I love it! :)=)
Mean Guest reviewers SUCK!!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 13

Sorry about your guest reviewer, but I need to rant a second.

Edward is trying to show her that is a totally sweet guy.  And she is buying it, hook line and sinker,  then to decide that Anthony is coming back...WHY??  She is coming to grips that he is gone.

I hate this Edward/Anthony.  He is lying to Bella and is its going to blow up in her face, and his.  He is going to hurt her for no reason other than he can!

He is going to hurt her cause he is a coward!  Just grrr.. I hope when this all is discovered, when she finds out the two guys she is likes is the same asshole.   I hope she leaves him and finds someone that isnt coward!  That isnt afraid of showing his face and telling the truth.   Anthony is coming back, WHY??  Just to torment her more??   Edward saw the picutre she drew,  is he totally clueless????  

 What a JERK!!!

 

Rant over!

I think I'm looking forward to more!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 13

DON'T LISTEN TO THE HATERS... I like this story very much and will stick with you till the end... Now is Edward going to come clean about Anthony or he bringing him out to play one more time ?? Can't wait to see.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

HE HE HE!!! SOMEONE GIVING YOU SHIT? SWEETIE JUST PLAY ALONG AND LAUGH AT IT. YOU KNOW AND I KNOW THAT NOT EVERY STORY IS FOR EVERONE. I!!! HAVE YET TO DISLIKE A STORY OF YOURS AND I'M SURE I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE. SO DON'T LET ANYONE GET TO YOU!!!!!! NOW! I REALLY LIKED THIS CHAPTER IT WAS SWEET AND IT GAVE THEM BOTH SOME TIME TO GET TO KNOW EACHOTHER. IT APPEARS OUR EDWARD HAS A SOFT, SWEET, LOVING SIDE TO HIM. I CAN UNDERSTAND WANTING TO LET ANTHONY OUT TO PLAY FOR HIS/HER PHYSICAL NEEDS OR MAYBE PUTTING AN END TO ANTHONY SO EDWARD CAN BE HIMSELF. BUT... ONLY YOU KNOW THE ANSWER TO THAT. NOW DON'T YOU??? 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love it so pffffftttttt to your "guest"!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 13

He is being so sweet with her, but I am really wondering how Bella is going to take it once she learns he is Anthony.  She might be angry for him misleading her.

Reviewer: vggnns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 13

I don't care what other reviewers say...I really love your story. I think it's well written and intense. I also can't wait until Bella finds out that Edward is Anthony. Gonna be epic!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh dishie, screw the guest reviewer! I love your stories always have and look forward to your updates. If they don't like your story don't read it and don't comment!

Reviewer: jac4765 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 13

Anthony is coming back - why?? Just as Edward seems to be making progress with Bella he brings Anthony back, that seems a bit cruel, not sure I think much of Edward/Anthony. Hoping now that he gets his comeuppance one day, it will serve him right if Bella finds somebody else and I'm kind of hoping she does at the moment.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh snap!m. Loved this!  I think she knows more than she's letting on!  I cannot wait to see what Weill happen next :-) .  Don't let that "guest" get you down.  Your readers love you, no matter how many of us are there are.  

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh hell no! Dear guest, you can go play in effing traffic,  because this story is amazing and I can't wait for it to update,  so feel free to go spew your disgusting and vile comments elsewhere!!!! 

Now that that's out of the way, I loved this chapter just as I have all the rest.  It was so sweet how he took care of her. I can't wait to see what Anthony has up sleeve for his Isabella. Will be anxiously awaiting the next one. And please don't let stupid,  ignorant ppl sway you.  Your loyal readers and fans will always be here supporting and cheering you on. Keep up the excellent work!

Krazi

Xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks, Krazi, for your support and for the cups!!! Yep, Anthony reappears next chapter ... can't wait!!! xoxxo

Reviewer: deveraoux87 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

So.. Anthony going to visit. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Yep, he visit's Isabella. Sorry you didn't like the chapter ... :(  Maybe next week? xoox

Reviewer: Donna239 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 13

How is Anthony going to visit? Bella is not going to do anything with him because she likes Edward. Love the pink crutches and tantra chair! Love this fic!

Author's Response:

Well, Donna, you might not want to read next week then. :(

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

OOOOH yeah!!! *high five* *fist pump* *hugs* *mashed potato dance* 



Author's Response:

LOL ... you crack me up Louise!!! Thanks for the cup, girl!!!!! xoxo

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

loving this story



Author's Response:

Thanks, Deb! and for the cups, as always! xoxo

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

WHAT ? Some guys don't like your fiction ? No, not possible ! Your story don't suck, I'm very glad to read it. Thank you so much for sharing. And the guest or anonymous can go fuck themself.



Author's Response:

Yep, it's true. Someone who is supposedly my "friend" too. *shrugs* Thanks for reading Evelyne! xoo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 13

He's coming back (Anthony?????) but to give her closure right? it would be cruel of Edward (Anthony) to do things to her and then pursue her as Edward (am i making sense?...lol)

Author's Response:

Closure is a very good way to eplain it. Thanks for reading and for your review Mountainlion and for the cups!!!! oxo

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 13

THIS reader LOVES your story. It's brilliant. Keep on bringing it sweetie. Haters gonna hate. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks, BurchGirl. Thank you so much! oxo

Reviewer: ficfangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 9

I''m not used to thinking of Phil as a sex object.

Reviewer: ficfangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 7

Always enjoy seeing The Pretty One's face (or parts of it).

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 12

Excellent chapter, I love this fiction. And with the pictures, it's even more appealing. Thank you for sharing. Take care of you.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words, Evelyne. xoxo

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

What a great chapter? I loved it. Can't wait for more. I think Bella is figuring it out subconsciously.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much sonogal and thanks for cups! There's a lot of story to tell yet! xoxox

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

oooh wonder if she is having wishful thinking or knows subconsiously after the kiss?

oooh Italy sound great.



Author's Response:

You are the only one that got it right, ladykt ... she's wishful thinking and Edward realizes that. Good call! xox

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

Anthony?   well, we know who's she's dreaming of in her drug induced state. Her subconscious knows they are one and the same anyway... 



Author's Response:

Thanks biblepam! You girls are always thinking! Thanks for reading... xoxo

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 12

OMG! SHE CALLED HIM ANTHONY! UPDATE SOON PLZ, I BEG OF YOU! LOVE YA



Author's Response:

IKR? You are too funny WAL. I post every Saturday, if that helps. xoxox

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 12

Ooohh awesome chapter!!  Dying for when she puts two and two together!!  Please update soon!!  :)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, mct. I'm glad you are enjoying my story. xox

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 12

Does she know? Is she thinking of Anthony? Does Edward remind Bella of Anthony?

 



Author's Response:

Me thinks she may be missing Anthony a bit, eh? xoxox

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 12

Our you kidding your just ending with that?



Author's Response:

LOL .. I know, right? Sorry for the cliffie. xox

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

I loved this chapter,  yea, I think something clicked subconsciously from when he kissed her and carried her. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it Twifan. And thanks for the cups, I likey. xoxxo

Reviewer: karencullen2007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 12

Hmmmm maybe she's figured if out!!! Dang it we have wait a while to know what happens.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading karencullen ... there's a bit to tell in the story, but it's slowly happening. Thanks for reading. xoxo

Reviewer: Donna239 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

Subconsciously, Bella knows Edward is Anthony. Now, what is Edward going to do???

Author's Response:

The million dollar question. Thanks for reading, Donna. xox

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 12

OMG!! WOW! This is so fantastic! I loved that ending! Excited for the next one!:)=)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, NeNee!!! xoxox

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 12

I this she suspects Edward is Anthony.

Author's Response:

Maybe she does, maybe she might be missing him? 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 12

That kiss was super steamy! 



Author's Response:

Thanks 2mpix ... I need a lemon here soon, don't you???

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 12

I am so glad you explained where Bella's start up money came from. I bet Edward will panic thinking that since she called him Anthony, she knows who he is.



Author's Response:

He does panic...but what will he do next? Thanks for reading romance4me2. xoxox

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

XOXOXXO

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh wow they had some great dates and they both are falling fast and hard but does Bella know subconsciously that Edward is Anthony update soon



Author's Response:

They are falling ... hard and fast. Thanks so much for reading, for your review and for the cups!! xoxxo

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

Aww edward is trying to win her the right way goof for hi 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 12

Have I told you how much I love this Edward?! I'm goo right now! Gah!



Author's Response:

LOL ... I like this Edward too. And we aren't done. Yummy. (thanks for the cups!) xoxo

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