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Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'M GLAD YOU'VE SHOWN HIS SOFTER SIDE AND THAT BELLA HAS HAD A CHANCE TO SEE IT BEFORE SHE FINDS OUT HIS OTHER IDENTITY. ALTHOUGH FROM YOUR OPENING A/N YOU'VE HINTED THAT TROUBLE IS... CUMMING??? (NOT TOO MUCH ANGST PLZ!!!)  I WAS HOPING SHE'D FIGURE IT OUT AND MAYBE MESS WITH HIS HEAD BUT NOT BE TOTALY UPSET SINCE SHE DID ALLOW IT TO HAPPEND. BUT... THAT'S JUST ME. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

I hope you like how it's written, Bobbysgirl. Thanks so much for the cups as well. See you soon. xox

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)



Author's Response:

You're the best debsmac ... thanks for the cups. You are always here and on FF and I want you to know I appreciate it very much. xoxo

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

i hope she doesnt react too badley

great chapter



Author's Response:

I think you'll like it, Mrs. Vixter!!! xoxxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh wow!  I loved this!  I cannot wait for the next one!  Thanks for answering my question :-) 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Rah. xoxox

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE PLZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, WAL70 ... I just posted. xoxo

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 11

So, is there more to the story with him and Aria? I know you already know how this will go but I think Edward should give Bella some bullshit about building their relationship & getting to know each other without sex getting in the way. I don't know how that works in real life. But they make it sound like a good idea in other stories I've read. ;p

Author's Response:

Sex doesn't get in the way with these two!!! I hope you enjoy the story and thanks for the cups!!!! xoxox

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

I thought they both were gonna piss on her. Lol. So, it seems Bella knows Anthony is Edward, if only, subconsciously.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, krazi!!!!! xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 11

I am so excited to see what will happen next!  Question, how old are they supposed to be?  



Author's Response:

I answered your question in the author's notes, RAH ... just for you!! See, I do read your reviews.xoxox

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 11

I can't believe Emmet rushing in like that and blurting out stuff about Edward's past.  

I love how cozy & confident Bella is with him at the club.  I want him to really kiss her and just throw caution to the wind! 

Reviewer: Love to drive like a vampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hope you will update soon I can't wait to see how long it takes for Bella and Edward to let their feelings show. Wow Stephen is a CREEP I am glad Bella is not with him and is not alone in the same room with him. Stephen was so sweet in the beginning and now he is all possesive I don't think Bella needs his exact brand of crazy and creepy in her life.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 11

BELLA IS QUITE THE WANTED LADY OF THE HOUR IS'NT SHE NOW???? POOR EDWARD HAS HIS WORK CUT OUT FOR HIM. OF COURSE WE ALL KNOW WHO SHE BELONGS TO BUT THE JOURNEY GETTING THERE IS SO WORTH THE WAIT. GO EDWARD!!!!!!! READ YOU SOON,

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 11

Well, Edward is sure taking possession quickly isn't he? tee hee And yes, Stephan is  a pushy little sucker alright. But Phil is a sneaky one, barreling into her office like that when he knew Edward wanted a moment alone with her. I don't necessarily like the fact that five days went by w/o Edward contacting her though. If he's interested he'd better show her more than that because there's a line behind her wanting attention. I hope he's careful about not being stand offish either since he was 'Anthony' at first and has that fear she's going to recognize him. Get a grip and a plan real soon there Edward. yeah. thanx ;o)

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow this chapter rocks!

 



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Thanks, Islandgrits!!! xoxo

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow that guy just doesn't know how to listen she said  to stay away and he shiws up at her work place hmmmm and now Edward sees he needs to show her they real him and hopefully have her fall for him like he did her update soon



Author's Response:

Yeah, she has her hands full of persistent men. Glad you enjoy it and I'll see you next Saturday. Oh, and thanks for the cups!!! xoxox

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 10

Just started reading and I love it!! Looking forward to more!! Thanks

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much amcullen!! xoxox

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow  Stephen and Phillip both seem like men who take what they want regardless of what the woman says.  Hate men like that. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, she has her hands full, but there's a reason. But just between you and me, Stephen is gone. I hate men like that too. Pests that they are. Thanks for reading and for your review. xox

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 11

Stephen is past pushy now... he's entered the creepy/stalker phase...



Author's Response:

LOL ... yeah, he's toast! xoxo

Reviewer: Donna239 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my! Edward has to tell Bella about Aria if things start to get serious between them...which it looks like is going to happen.

I don't think Bella is going to take the. Ewes of Edward being Anthony very well. But, I think it will be better if Edward tells her instead of finding out for herself. At some point, their relationship is going to turn sexual.

I am hoping Bella ends up with Edward and the tantra chair.Lol!

Author's Response:

Yeah, that chair is cool!!! xoxox

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 11

I'm glad that Stephen is out of the way now. It seems that Edward arrives at the right time. Thank you for this good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind review and for reading my story. I'll see you next week. xoxox

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks, Deb, and for the cups! xoxoxxo

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love this story! I do not like Stephen and I am not sure about how this chapter ends. Although,I am excited for more! :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it, NeeNee. Trust me, it gets better! See you next week. xoxo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

Why didn't Emmett get there quicker? Love him! <3 <3

Hope Stephen is charged with stalking or something. He's no longer hot in my book. :(

Thank God Edward swooped in and saved the day! I don't think it will be long before they share their feelings, either. Yay! ;)

xoxo



Author's Response:

Edward is her Superman!! I really can't wait to post the chapters I've already written. This story is so good, I love it. Thanks for cups, Louise Clark!!!! xoxxo

Reviewer: Kris_73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

I write a quick love note here hoping that I could be thr first. A girl can hope. Romance is in the air. I can feel it. 



Author's Response:

You were!!!  WooHoo. Thanks sweetie!!!! xoxox

Reviewer: becky Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 6

damn you write good lemons! I love the lemons thats for sure but the truth is that I love your writing and the depth of your characters.  I can picture what your writing and that takes talent! so thank you for your amazing lemons but mostly thanks for sharing you awesome talent with us!

Reviewer: becky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

Damn! Hot as fuck! Love it! 

Reviewer: becky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

awesome story !! i dont normally like reading stories written in 3rd person but once i read the first chapter of your story i was hooked! original and well written with a hot story line, makings of a great story!! thank you for sharing your amazing talent!

 

becky

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 10

Well well well now Edward made a move wow I was surprised it was so soon but it was perfect now will Bella open herself up to him and what will happen when she finds out Edward is Anthony update soon I loved it

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

It is sad about Anthony and Isabella, but it is so good about Edward and Bella. I hope she is understanding and doesn't go off when she finds out the truth. Edward did the right thing since he wants a true relationship with Bella. I just worry about Bella and her temper.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love this Edward!!!  Awesome chapter!!  :)

 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow!  I love the pics! ESPECIALLY the shower shot of Edward! That picture could be it's own chapter and we could all just look & drool. ;)

Great planning on your part on how they could continue on.  I couldn't even try to guess.  It was smart of Anthony to end it.  I really thought that when Edward said good girl after she took the shot she would have gotten an inkling of who he is.  Granted she did take cues from him when he signaled her to step away from Stephen.  

I am wondering if the party was a set up between alice & Rose to purposely push Edward & Bella together?  I'm happy Bella turned Stephen down & was bold enough to make up a coffee date with Edward.  

I'm looking forward to Bella's bought a next chapter.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 9

You definately did not disappoint in the hot & steamy department! On top of a garage parking lot might just be even better than the subway! What is going o happen at Alice's party?  I can wait to read chapter 10!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wahoo! Here we go. :)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it. cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh is this going to be bad or good when Bella realizes that Edward and Anthony are one and the same...

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love this!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

Will Edward just upped the stakes.....now when and if they make love won't Bella know it is him.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 10

This. Is. AWESOME! I love it all!! Edward makes me fall to my knees! ;)Love him! :)=) Excited for more!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it, not Kate! Though!  I love the pics,  hot sexy shower manip.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 10

Gah!  Love a possessive Edward!  Cannot wait for their date!  Question, how old are they supposed to be?  Just wondering :-) 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 10

I want Edward to move fast now, but will Bella forgive him when she finds out??

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 10

As Always hot hot

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

HOLY CROW AND OMG, THAT FIRST PIC THERE OF EDWARD IN THE SHOWER. WHEW, I NEED ONE AFTER SEEING THAT. YEAH BB. LOVE THE PICS ON HERE, IT HELPS WITH HAVING VISUALS THAT GO ALONG WITH THE STORY. I LOVE SEEING THE OUTFITS, THE CONDO'S, THE YUMMY MEN, ESP. EDWARD OF COURSE. SO, ANTHONY DELETED THEIR TRYST BUT EDWARD IS ON THE MOVE NOW TO MAKE BELLA HIS. AND AFTER HIS WORDS THERE WITH STEPHEN HE HAS ALREADY MADE A CLAIM. OH, OH THIS IS SO GOOD. I LIKE HOW ROSE WAS ON EDWARD'S LEFT SIDE AND ALICE WAS ON HIS RIGHT AS THEY SPOKE ABOUT BELLA. YEAH, THOSE TWO WANT B&E TOGETHER AND IMO THEY WERE JUST 'HELPING OUT'....YA' KNOW, LOL. THANX ;O)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

SHORT BUT TO THE POINT! THANKS FOR MY SATURDAY "SMILE"  I REALLY NEEDED IT. WOW! I TRULY HOPE IT ALL STARTS GOING IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION FOR EDWARD AND BELLA. MAYBE THE MORE THEY SEE OF EACHOTHER  SHE WILL MAKE THE CONNECTION AND MESS WITH HIM IN A TEASINGLY WAY INSTEAD OF BEING UPSET ABOUT SOMETHING SHE WAS EQUALLY TO BLAME FOR. ONE CAN HOPE. READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

Glads she got the job.  Woo hoo.  Love the pics you put in.  

Reviewer: princessjustine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 10

Glad their little rendezvous is on pause for now and they can move on with no pretenses. Still can wait for the fall out, looking forwars to when the s**t hits the fan! 

Reviewer: amberbrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

10

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 10

This chapter makes me smile.

Reviewer: dpennell007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

You pulled it off. Excellent update!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

*squees like Alice* OMG, OMG, OMG!!! I probably don't have to explain how hot that was right?! *fans self* 

LOL, Edward-1, Stephen-0

Please tell me Bella heard that! Dayum!

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 10

now edward has to win over bella as anthony won over isabella

loved it

well done

Reviewer: JenniferMariePattz Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

Well, Hell, if you're gonna use David Gandi (sp?) as Phil, forget Edward, lol. David is so fine!



Author's Response:

You got that right, Jennifer! Thanks so much for reading and for he tea cups. xox

Reviewer: angel1215 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 9

Phil, Stephen and Edward/Anthony! Wow, how lucky can a girl get. Yet, the one she dreams of and desires is the one she doesn't even know.  Or, at least she doesn't think she knows.  So the s--t is going to hit the fan you say. Can't wait. With Phil and Stephen lurking around her, he's going to have to make a move soon or take a chance on losing her. Bring it on!



Author's Response:

She's just pretty, classy, rich, well adjusted. Every man's dream. This next chapter will take care of Stephen. One down. xoxox

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

Her decision not to have sex with anyone else, at first I agreed with it because from my perspective I know who her mystery man is. But looking from her pov it's not a wise choice, especially with how lonely she's been feeling. I'm still on the fence w/ that one. But the right choices and smart decisions are boring to read, so I don't know what I'm talking about.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Janell. She's on the fence too. It was a sad attempt of monogomy between the two lovers. Thanks for reading and for the tea cups. I appreciate it. xoxox

Reviewer: angel1215 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 8

Goodness, where do you find these hot guys?  Phillip is one good looking man.  Sounds like Rose is attracted to him.  Hmm!  I guess we'll see.  I'm kind of scared as to who will be running the New York gallery.  Please not Tanya.  And, we don't need Jake either.  I hope these two are no where around.  I wonder how long it will be before Anthony gives up the charade.  I have a feeling the "jig will be up" before he gets a chance to fess up.  Still loving this story.  Great job!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Edward has started to figure out Bella. She is shy, but tries to hide it through being business Bella. She is strong and confident. Anthony has pulled out the more adventurous Isabella. She hides in shy Bella. Bella would be embarressed to be Isabella around her friends. Hopefully Edward Anthony can help Bella be her complete self.



Author's Response:

Thanks sologal. I think you may be onto something. Thanks for tea cups!!!! oxox

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, sweetie. xoxxo

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 9

don't blame your rant.  those guest reviewers on FFn are plain nasty.

 

oooh love the little school girl thing



Author's Response:

Thanks, sweets. I kinda liked the school girl thing too!!! xox

Reviewer: Kris_73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 9

I really, really like the fact that even though he started this arrangement, it is Edward who has doubts about this being enough. 



Author's Response:

High five!!!!!  

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

Gah! *fans self* 

Surely his parents will sell him their place! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Louise Clark!!! I think they just might! And thank you for the cup, I love the cups. xoxxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

Gah!! I'm a puddle of goo!  But, I loved this chapter!  I don't understand people who leave hateful reviews.  If you don't like it, don't read it!  My mama always said, if you can't say anything nice, say nothing at all.  Cannot wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, RAH. That's why I prefer TWCS. No guests here. Either you are in or you aren't. See you tonight. xoxo

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

I don't understand why people complain and continue to read. If you don't like it stop reading it. I like this story very much. Yes I have questions. Will Bella ever find out? I think I will just enjoy the story as it unfolds. It's been great so far.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 9

I love this story,  certainly realize that this is fantasy!   Another reason to love it so much!   :-)  Thank you for writing and sharing this with us

 

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

Have you seen the movie New Years Eve? Trip to Bali, check it off. Breakfast at Tiffany's, check it off. This reminded me of your a/n on the top. lol Check it off. No kidding! Must be new readers that don't know how you work. I've been reading some reviews on another story and I can not believe how rude or insensitive some people are. Get a life.....sonic boom. (Pitch Perfect)  So, shit's gonna hit the fan soon huh? Oh my! I only wish my dh was into fantasy type things, sigh* Cya' on the other site. Love it still ;o)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 9

Like always great

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 9

I have to start reading from here for now on. This is such an incredible story and I get all giddy when you update.  Bella was hard when they both met but all she had was her work.  I am glad that Alice helped her pull her head out of her ass and is really living. I hope all 3.5 men meet up at the cocktail party.  It will be interesting to her Edward/Anthony react to other men pinning for Bella's attention. 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

LOVED IT AS ALWAYS!! LOVE YOU AND PLZ IGNORE THE HATERS!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

loved this chapter

cant wait till the shit hits the fan

well done

Reviewer: Pillen-ilse Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh, isn`t your Phil Carano`s Carlisle? He`s so hot!

Thank you for sharing

Daniela

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

I HATE THAT YOU HAVE HATERS WHO DON'T UNDERSTAND THE CONCEPT OF "FANTASY" WE READ TO GET AWAY FROM THE NORM AND SOME OF US CRAZIES ( I WON'T MENTION ANY NAMES....ME LOL) EVEN TRY SOME OF THE CRAZY SHIT WE READ. SO DON'T FRET OVER PEOPLE WHO LIVE TO PUT OTHERS DOWN.  IT'S NOT WORTH YOUR PRECIOUS TIME. NOW... AS FOR THIS CHAPTER IT WAS TOO SHORT FOR MY LIKING BUT AS YOU KNOW I'M A DISHIE WHORE I'M NEVER SATISFIED I  ALWAYS WANT MORE! MORE!! MORE!!! (LOL) I'M GLAD EDWARD IS CUMING TO REALISE SOONER (HOPFULLY) RATHER THAN LATER HIS FEELINGS FOR BELLA ARE REAL. SMILE SWEETIE LIFES TOO SHORT TO LET SHIT GET TO YOU. :) READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 9

You NEVER disappoint! I loved it. Where is my husband??? Must find him now.

Reviewer: Texas Twimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 9

I am really enjoying this story! Excited to see how everything with Edward, Steven, and Phil plays out. I am anxious to see if Edward will get jealous and possessive of Bella, and realize he needs to pursue her as himself or come clean with her. Bella will be fun to follow as well as she struggles with her desire for an open relationship like Alice and Rose have, with her desire for the sexual relationship she has with Anthony. This story is getting so good. Can't wait for the next uodate!!!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 9

Hot damn that was good.....so it seems already bella has serpassed aria. Cant wait for more

Reviewer: mimi2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

loving the story! x



Author's Response:

So happy you are reading my little diddy. Thanks for youre review!!! xoxxo

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, babe. Always glad to receive a review from you!!!!  See you next week. xoxxo

 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 8

You made me laugh when Edward spit out his beer when looking at the lake.  I also loved it when he was walking away from her & he turned around and was smiling at her.  He is starting show some real interest in her.  I can't wait for your next update to see how Edward starts giving her attention & how she has to keep choosing Anthony.  I'm interested to see how long it takes for her to wish that Edward was Anthony. Also, it's a given your next update will be steamy & mouth watering so I'm excited about that too!  ;)



Author's Response:

You guys know it's getting close to the Edward and Bella show! I think you'll like it!!!! Thanks so much for reading!!!  

 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 8

WOW!! I'M GLAD HIS HEART IS FEELING THAT WARMTH THAT LET'S US KNOW WHEN THAT CERTAIN PERSON MEANS SOMETING MORE EVEN IF HE'S NOT SURE EXACTLY WHAT HE'S FEELING. WELL DONE! I HOPE YOUR DAY WAS FULL OF LOVE YOU DESERVE IT.  THANK YOU FOR MY MOTHER'S DAY SMILE. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bobbysgirl! Always glad to see your review AND the cups!!!! xoxoxxo

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2014 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 8

I'm glad to see Edward having a tad bit of guilt. That is speaking volumns and I wonder if he even knows it, lol. Her coming & leaving alone, not eating, just having all around different feelings. ha ha Just a note: too bad the pic of Bella on her laptop wasn't in pink pj's, sigh. I loved the pic of Rose's outfit....hubba, hubba. And, now we see Phil leering almost at Bella. Go Bella, having all these men vying for your attention it seems. Wow oh wow, what 'Anthony' has in store for Isabella............fanning myself. fan, fan.........thanx ;o)



Author's Response:

I love searching for the pictures for each chapter. I wish I could post more on the Stash. Anyway, I'm glad you are liking the story, sweets. xoxoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 8

Gah!!!  That was amazing!  I cannot wait for her to return now!



Author's Response:

LOL ... see you next week. xoxox

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

:-)

Author's Response:

Thanks, janell, and thanks for the cups! I like cups! xooxo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

Bella... Bella... Bella... LOL! Girl is a natural flirt! Can't believe she had such a long dry spell. *smh* 

Loved seeing her in her element (the gallery opening and her time with Rose). :)

Why doesn't Bella use Edward as the artist for her New York gallery opening?? :D  I know he's a photographer, but art is art. *shrugs*



Author's Response:

She is a flirt when it needed, I see. When she lets her hair down. I love your suggestion for who she will show at her NY gallery .... :)  Thanks so much for reading and thanks for your cups. I appreciate it. xoxo

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

DO WE HAVE TO WAIT A WHOLE WEEK? I LOVE IT BUT CANT WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL ... so glad you like it!!! xoxox

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 8

Sooo!! good. I am so glad he is feeling guilty.

Author's Response:

You have no idea how guilty he is. Thanks for reading, for your review, and for the cups!!!! xoxoxox

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews, deb!!! And for the cups ... xoxoxox

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 8

at least E feels a little bit guilty.



Author's Response:

LOL ... that's seems to be the consensus. His guilt is overpowering. I've written 16 chapters and I like where it's going, hope you do too. Thanks for your review theladykt!!! 

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

have loved all your stories

but this one so far is my fav

well done



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much, mrsvixter!!! I love that!!! thanks so much. xoxxo

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

Excellent can not wait for more

Author's Response:

Thanks rclaurel3, see you next week. xoxxo

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love that they are missing each other. Super story!



Author's Response:

They are missing each other, that's what's making this so touching. Thanks for reading and for your review. xoxo

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

:-)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Janell. And thanks so much for the cups. I love cups!!! xoxox

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! xo

Reviewer: dowlingnana Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 7

Dang woman, hubba, hubba. That wore me out too, bwahahahaha. Talk about erotic. Sorry you lost more reviewers. Guess not everyone can take erotica. I only wish my sex/love life were so hot. Long story, lol. Edward was quite brazen in the cafe, the little sneak. He's sneaky that way but his friends are catching on pretty quickly, tee hee. Cya' on ffn. ;o)



Author's Response:

Hey you, thanks so much for enjoying my story, sweets. I love this Edward and the more chapters I write, the more I fall in love with him. See you next time. xoxox

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

Absolutely loved it and can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, doll. See you next week. oxox

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2014 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2014 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it can't wait for more :)

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