Date: 07 May 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 07 May 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it so far :)
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
He is such a giving and loving partner. I would jump through the hoops to feel so desired. He definately cares about her.
Author's Response:
Hey sonogal, you are so right. He is very, very loving, isn't he. I can't wait for you to read the next chapters. I'm very happy you can see how he feels for her. Thanks so much for the cups, sweetie. xoxoxxo
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
OH YEAH "THE CHAIR" BEST THING I'VE EVER ASKED FOR IT'S STILL NEW SO I'M STILL LEARNING TOO. (THANKS FOR THE IDEA) I READ THIS CHAPTER TWICE BECAUSE IT SEEMED TOO SHORT BUT THAT'S JUST ME ALWAYS WANTING MORE. (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Hey, Bobbysgirl!!!! That chair is the bestest everrrrrr. Everyone should have one!!! I'm so glad you love the story and as usual, thanks so much for the tea cups!!!! xoxox
Date: 04 May 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am sorry that you are losing readers, however I don't think it is because they are thinking of 'Anthony' as a drunk, they know that it is Edward - it is Bella that doesn't know and therein lies the problem. To think that Bella could carry this on for any length of time without seriously questioning her sanity, wanting / needing to talk to somebody about it and having to find out who is 'Anthony' is unrealistic.
Yes I know this is fiction and I know this is your story and you have every right to do exactly what you want with it, but every story of this type (relationship based) has to have some remblance of reality or it just becomes a fantasy. If you want people to read and review you, unfortunately, have to take their opinions into account.
I have no idea where you are hoping to take this story so I can only give my opinion based on what you have written so far and I think you have the potential for an excellent story, but I do hope that this 'secret' is just the beginning and not the 'middle' or 'meat' of it. I can't help thinking that the big reveal should come sooner rather than later and the bulk of the story should focus on the aftermath of the reveal. I think that has the potential for the best story rather than the big reveal closely followed by the conclusion which to me would be a waste of an excellent opportunity, but as I say this is just my opinion. Sorry it took me so long to say all that.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great update! Looking forward the looks and second guessing at the party.
Author's Response:
Thanks dpennell007! I'm glad you liked it and thanks so much for the cups! xoxoxo
Date: 04 May 2014 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
You just get better & better! Or should I say you make them get hotter & hotter! I can't believe anyone in their right mind would stop reading this story. It too delicious to walk away from! It is their loss! You are AMAZING!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! I needed to hear that! I love this story and it's so difficult not to give it all away when the story is being questioned!!! I'll see you next week. xoxox
Date: 04 May 2014 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you for adding pictures!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like them. It's really fun isn't it? See you next week! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2014 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
:) loving this
Author's Response:
Deb, you're the best! Thank you so much and for the cups, I appreciate it!!! xoxxo
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2014 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
I LOVE this story
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, Twifan!!! I love the cups too!!! See you next week. xoxo
Date: 04 May 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
So erotic!! Wish my husband would buy one of those chairs!! Kids would probably think it was a "play chair" just for them! ha ha Great chapter-- love to see when you update!
Author's Response:
Google the chair and see the video ... so stinking sexy!!!! See you next week. xoxox
Date: 03 May 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
oooh yummy yummy. That chair sounds like a great investment.
Author's Response:
Thank you theladykt. I appreciate it.
Date: 03 May 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
I absolutely love this story because it so erotic. I don't understand why people would quit reading it. It's hot and makes me wish I was in her place! I don't know how they are going to be separated for a week. Lots of sexting I guess! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
So glad you like it romance~ I like it too. It sounds so great in my head! Thanks for reading! xoxox
Date: 03 May 2014 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow! I loved this one! One noticing, and one question. When Jasper says "when you return from your trip up north", shouldn't it be "down south" since Edward is going to South Africa, not somewhere in the Arctic? Also, Edward says that Willoughby calls him Mr. Anthony, but just a little while before that, he calls him "Mr. Masen".
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it Rah!!! No, he's going northern New York state on a personal picture taking trip. The Africa trip doesn't happen for a few more months. Stay tuned. :)
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love this story. I hope you some how figure out how the 2 worlds can come together because they are so perfect for each other. This can't be a short term fling. It is surprising that the other people on the train don't have singed clothes from how hot this couple is.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2014 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
:-)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the cups, bb!! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella's lucky Alice got pissed and said something to her. Most people would have just done like Rosalie. She would have lost two friends without even realizing until it was too late.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to find out what the rest of his plan is!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
Every story I've read of yours so far has been really awesome...I absolutely love this story - it's sexy, mysterious, though a little frustrating that they don't know who the other one is, yet it's exciting. I just hope Bella doesn't hate Edward when she finds out his true identity.....can't wait for more chapters!!
Author's Response:
So glad to hear that you enjoy my stories. For Silence, all I can say is just hang in there ... you know she's going to find out, right? Thanks for the cups!!!! I like those. xoxox
Date: 27 Apr 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
I can understand him having to be gone all the time with working for a magazine, but if he would just ask her she might suprise him, or is that he wants her and who ever he can also in Africia or any other place..I don't see as that is fair that he might be able to have sex and she can't....its the same thing if they were in a relationship
Author's Response:
He's having an adventure. xoxxo
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
So much going on in this chapter! So much potential foreshadowing, if I may guess? And then the finger fucking on the crowded subway? Holy hotness! Though I wonder if Bella truly has Stephen off her mind completely? ;) And of course while they're away from each other, they gotta have phone sex! hee hee
Author's Response:
Stephen is a passing fancy. This only gets better. Thanks for the cups ... I like cups. xoxox
Date: 27 Apr 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Every chapter gets me please post soon would love to read Edward an Bella hangout with friends
Author's Response:
LOL ..you will have to tell me the story behind your name! Every Saturday I post and I post a teaser on my FB Dishie's Stash page. Hope to see you there. xoxox
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
:) Good dirty fun!!! :)
Author's Response:
That's right ... Good. Dirty. Fun. And he gets even better. xoxox
Date: 27 Apr 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love how these stories can take me into a world that I can only dream of. Not that I'd do something like this, but, one should never say never. wink, wink Dang you dress Bella very stylish.......adore the pics. I dream of dressing like that as well as having such a condo as well. ;o)
Author's Response:
You soooo get it! One reads to go to places they've never been, where they want to go and experience. Thanks for always being here dowlingnana!!! oxox
Date: 27 Apr 2014 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
I LOVE how they are crazy for each other! Leaving her scent all over her that has to be the kinkiest! If Alice is in the office she is going to smell her. Edward will be needing to stop off at home & change ;)! I'm glad they met & got along, it will make it better in the long run. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Tee hee. I'm so glad you are enjoying it!!!! xoxox
Date: 26 Apr 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
So amazing! I wonder how they will deal with his absence. Maybe he will make a mold of his cock for her?
Author's Response:
You will see, my pretty! I can't wait. xoxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks, debslmac. Love the cups!!!! oxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
HMMMMM !!!!!!! HMMMMM!!!!!!!! WOW!! IF I WERE BELLA I'D BE LOOKING FORWARD TO LOTS AND LOTS AND LOTS!!!!OF SELF PLEASURE. AFTER BEING LEFT LIKE THAT THE THOUGHT OF THOSE FINGERS, OH AND LET'S NOT FORGET THAT TONGUE WOULD BRING ME TO MY KNEES. ( MOP PLEASE!! LOL ) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Hey you! Tee hee. I love it when you guys get into it. So many have bounced me because they can't handle it!!!! Thanks for the many cups sweetie. xoxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
That subway scene was so freaking hot! I loved it. Gotta go...
Author's Response:
Teehee. Glad you are enjoying it as much as I do. Thanks for the cups babe. xoxxo
Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
As much as I enjoy the process of this story I am really waiting for the fall out. Luckily I am patient and will wait till the end! Great build up so far.
Author's Response:
LOL ... the fall out is coming. You know he's going to get caught. xoxox
Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ack they are so HAWT together. B is going to feel really betrayed when she finds out I'm afraid. Ah well. Until next time.
Author's Response:
I haven't written that part yet, but I sure have it in my head alright. I can't wait. Thanks for reading theladykt!!! xoxox
Date: 26 Apr 2014 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response:
xoxox
Date: 21 Apr 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was rec on FB! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Schweeeet. I love hearing where ya'll heard about my stories. Hope you like it!!! xoxoxo
Date: 21 Apr 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
That why we read fanfiction, so we don't have to go out there and be reckless, Thank f...
i'm a pharmacist and am gracefull ( is that even a Word in english?) for every responsible adult. Not my favourite task to sell emergency contarceptives and Hep.C tablets, I can tell you!
thank you for sharing
Daniela
Author's Response:
Yes, graceful is a word in English, but I think you may mean grateful, or thankful. I am going to give each and every one of my readers the benefit of the doubt of knowing that Edward and Bella are two very responsible adults and take care of contraception. Plus, they haven't actually had sex ... yet. Just a little touchy feely thing going on so far. But it's bound to get hot in here soon. xoxox
Date: 21 Apr 2014 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
I have to confess, I don't like Alice, manipulative bitch that she is, and she did it again. I liked the Way Bella dealt with her in rear view better: hush, go take your place on the sideline nosy f...
Thank you for sharing
Daniela
Date: 21 Apr 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
WTF! Probably?! I honestly don't know, Thank god there's you to live vicariously through so I hope Bella does what her friends want: live a little
thanks for sharing
daniela
Date: 21 Apr 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
Drunk B is funny. Dayum that was HAWT!!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, just had to plug Cosmopolis!! glad you liked it ladykt. Thanks for reading my story. xox
Date: 20 Apr 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Really brave to trust someone, you think you've never seen or know very well, while performing such a sexual act. You did an amazing job writing this...can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I don't like to let my mindset go there. When I write these chapters, I prefer to go to where they are and not think about what's right and what's wrong in society. These are two young, verile, sexy individuals liv9ing a fantasy. That's all ... Like I said in my author's notes before chapter 1 ... Just Go With It. Glad you are reading it!!! Oh, it does become more "normal".
Date: 20 Apr 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, I am definitely having fun...not as much as Bella is, but fun!
Author's Response:
Yaaaay, I'm glad. I am too. It's been fun to write. Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can't wait for the next chapter to read where this story is going. I think they will get good use of that chair.
Author's Response:
Oh, I love tea cups ... especially five of them!!! Thank you. Yes, that chair will get much use. You should see the "how to" video!!! xoxox
Date: 20 Apr 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
Holy cow Edward aka "Anthony" is very HOT! He is going to have to carry her to a cab when he is done with her. There is no way that her legs are not going to be jelly!
Author's Response:
LOL...I know!!!! He turns her to mush many times .... stay tuned! xoxox
Date: 20 Apr 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Mmm... Love a dominating Edward ;)
Author's Response:
Me too!!! xoxo
Date: 20 Apr 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
So hot
Author's Response:
xoxoxox
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Deb, and thanks for the tea cups!!!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hot, hot hot
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Twifan and thanks for the tea cups!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
TANTRA CHAIR HUH??? I THINK I NEED ME ONE OF THOSE AND AN EDWARD TOO! WOW!! I'M STILL...... OK GOTTA GO ORDER ME A CHAIR AND SEARCH FOR MY HUBBY. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
LOL ... you're too funny, Bobbysgirl. And as usual, thanks for the tea cups!!!! xoxoxxo
Date: 20 Apr 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
This is what I love about fiction, it will take you to places that in reality you yourself would probably never enter. I love reading this here as well because I love the pictures and no standards like ffn has. I'll always still give a review there for you though. Just for you! Ahh, I wondered when Edward was going to start being possesive and he didn't disappoint. thanx ;o)
Author's Response:
You are the best dowlingnana ... truly. I love that you review on both sites and I love you for that!!! I copied your review and posted it on their FB group page so they would know how much it is appreciated that they allow the option to post pictures inside the chapters. Thanks again. xoxoxox
Date: 20 Apr 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wheww!!!
Author's Response:
I know right????? xoxoxox
Date: 20 Apr 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
What a closet! I want all the money (and her body) so I can dress like that.
Author's Response:
It is so much fun to dress Bella. Edward's wardrobe isn't bad either and I will be posting more of that here in future chapters. Thanks for reading. xoxox
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
FIRST I'M SORRY I'M FALLING BEHIND BUT RL HAS BEEN A TRUE BITCH BUT UNFORTUNATELY IT IS WHAT IT IS. NOW CH 3&4 WERE SO MUCH FUN TO READ MAKING ME REALISE.... HMMMM!!! I NEED TO START RIDING THE METRO HERE IN LA BECAUSE I'M MISSING ME SOME TRAIN ACTION OBVIOUSLY!!!!(LOL) I LOOK FORWARD TO NEXT WEEKS UPDATE AS ALWAYS. READ YOU SOON.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh baby, bring it!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love this chapter! Anxious to see how he's going to pull off their "date" without her seeing him at all. So glad to see Bella trying to mend her friendships-- can't wait till they go out drinking!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
hmmm tantric chair. Yummy possibilities.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oooo i cant wait till nxt time...plus something tells me bella bringing a date to the party will have edward jealous
Date: 13 Apr 2014 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLZZZZZZ!!!!!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh Saturday in this story can not come fast enough. The control he has over her is delicious!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
I read this on fanfiction, then came here to see the pictures.(Love them!) Looking forward to seeing how Edward keeps up the ruse.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
Each chapter is better than the last
Date: 12 Apr 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love this so far! Gah, a dirty talking Edward/Anthony ;-) Cannot wait for more!
Date: 12 Apr 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yo baby, a tantra chair, gulp. Well well well, it's great to see Bella finally coming back to her once upon life. Going to ff now to leave my review. thanx ;o)
Date: 12 Apr 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
have loved all your stories so far this one shaping up to be very hot
im hooked already well done
Date: 12 Apr 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loving the story!
Date: 11 Apr 2014 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter! I think Alice is being unfair. She can't just blame all her issues about where she is in her life on Bella. Alice made the choice work as PA for 10 years. If she was unhappy she should of said so a long time ago.
Date: 07 Apr 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
oooh those naughty kids. Wow Gianna is a realpiece of work. Glad she's gone. Wow. Alice really blew up on her.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
This would be so thrilling.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
Started reading this last night on FanFiction, but came here today for the pictures. Very nice addition, so now I will follow here as well!
Date: 06 Apr 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hope Edward is a really really dirty boy lol in need of some dirty talk
Date: 06 Apr 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to see what he does when he gets her alone. Will he intercept her dinner date?
Date: 06 Apr 2014 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
I hope bella listens to alice and cuts back to make time for her friends
Date: 06 Apr 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
I wonder why edward doesn't want bella to know its him...though the mystery is hot. Is it wrong that i wish a stranger did that to me?
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loosie Goosie, ha, love it. Bella is just lucky that it's Edward behind her. Just think, it could be any man and someone not that good looking. (shudders) Oh, oh he's gonna use his parents apt. for some 'tasting' time isn't he? Then Bella won't know anything again unless she finds out who's place it really is. Oh yeah. I think it's sad though that Alice did what she did. I mean, I do understand the reasons, esp. about the wanting a life but they're friends. sigh. Anyway, love the story and still kind of trying to understand Edward here and what his game is. Guess I shall see. thanx ;o) I love the blue couch in the apt.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Hmmm it is very exciting to not know who it is but at the same time, I cant imagine he is going to go the whole summer with not telling her who he is. I mean that is insane. I cant imagine that at all.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love the pictures.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
love the pics good job i wanna know why she cant look at him did you say in previous chapters did i miss something hope they do a face to face soon the train thing still kinda creepy <3
Date: 06 Apr 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love the chase.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmmm wonder how long till B realizes its E and all hell breaks loose. hmmmm
Author's Response:
Hey you!! I'm so happy you are reading my story. I think you will be surprised!!! But some fun needs to be had. Thanks again for reading and for the review! xox
Date: 31 Mar 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
I forgot to mention in my last review that the gorilla song is so so so perfect for this story! Now for this chapter.... I enjoyed the pictures being added it only adds to the story. I loved that he spoke to her on the train. It is actually a perfect start to a relationship for her. It seems non- committal in her brain but she is already so addicted to it. I'm very excited about this story. The subway idea is pure genius! I have never ridden a subway but if I ever do I'm sure this story will come to mind.
Author's Response:
I love the Gorilla song!!! I listened to it while writing too. I'm glad you liked the pictures and hope to be better at posting them next week!!! I'm glad you like it!!! xoxox
Date: 31 Mar 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
All I can do is smile! Cocky Edward is the best!
Author's Response:
I love a cocky Edward too! Cocky, possessive, controlling, sweet, sexy, and smells good. All wrapped up in one. xoxxoxo
Date: 31 Mar 2014 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
LOVE IT! WHY CANT EDWARD ADMIT HIS FEELINGS FOR HER?????????? IS IT TO EARLY IN THE STORY? LOVE YA!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
love seeing the pictures with the story
i don't get that with fan fiction
love it
Date: 30 Mar 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love this pictures and the story!
Author's Response:
They are fun, aren't they? xoxox
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
OK!!!!! NOW I WANNA KNOW DO WE HAVE A TRAIN HERE IN LA??????? CAUSE I WANT TO RIDE WITH EDWARD TOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ) HE HE HE ) OH YEAH!! I HAVE MISSED YOU! TRULY A PLEASURE READING SO FAR. I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Hey you!!! Oh, Bobbysgirl, just you wait. I turned myself on, just writing it!!! LOL. Thanks for always being here, and thanks for the tea cups. You know I loves me the cups. I missed you too girl and it's really good to hear from all of you again!! xoxxoxo
Date: 30 Mar 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loving the visuals!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Urmylyfnw (?). They will get better once I figure this out! :)
Date: 30 Mar 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really love the added pics...they always help with the visual aspect of the story. You would think with the chemistry they have for each other on the train would soon make her realize that Edward is her train guy...sensing him or recognizing his smell ? Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Oh, you guys don't think I have the scent thing covered? Phfft!!!!! Thanks for being here pamspastime. It's good to see all you loyal reviewers back again!! xoxxo
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I HAVE MISSED YOU!!!!!! I JUST CAME ACROSS YOUR NEW STORY AND SO FAR IT'S OFF TO A GREAT START. I AM SO HAPPY YOUR BACK!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey you!!!! Welcome back, eh? Glad to see you again and also for your lovely tea cups!!!! Thanks so much and I hope you like this one!!! xooxox
Date: 30 Mar 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can go with the fantasy. This chapter was hot!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I dig the fantasy too!! Glad you liked it! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Cullen!!! And thanks for the cups!!!! Love the cups!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok, if I had a hot and mysterious guy sexing me up on the subway, I don't think I would have the strength not to turn around and look at him. I like the pictures too. I got a good feeling that this is going to be as good as Rearview Mirror and I can't wait to read more. Thanks, Maria
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, Maria!!! I'm glad you enjoyed RVM!! I think you'll like this one as well. xoxox
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
Now I'll review on this site for you luv. I wonder how Edward knew & got to follow Bella on the train to begin with. Obviously his reaction and lack of acknowledgment to her at the club was the complete opposite. I love this site because of the pictures and I adored Edward's reaction to her outfit, esp. her stockings. Yummy!! And the beautiful comparison of the rose to her........awwwww. Exciting. thanx ;o)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your muli-reviews dowlingnana!! Good to see you here. I kinda like the pictures too!! Thanks for cups as well!!! xoxoxox See you next week.
Date: 30 Mar 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great second chapter want more
Author's Response:
So glad you like it. See you Saturday. xoxox
Date: 29 Mar 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think this is fun times she is so serious all the time she needs this to release her presure she is holding in . I am glad you dont lisen to assholes like guest that say crap just to be mean. I am loving your story.
Author's Response:
Thanks, troberts!!!! Glad to see you along with me on another ride!!! I'm enjoying seeing the old crew back again! xoxox
Date: 29 Mar 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
i think its hot and kinda creepy at the same time
Author's Response:
Me too, actually, but hot won out!!! :)
Date: 27 Mar 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story sounds so good,
Author's Response:
Thanks, sonogal. I think it is, and I hope you like it as well. The two people that have read it like it, so we'll see!!! Thanks so much for being here!!! xoxox
Date: 26 Mar 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it !!!! I think these two are going to have some serious chemistry :).. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks Pam. I think you will be pleasantly surprised!!!! xoxoxo
Date: 24 Mar 2014 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this already. What about that Stephen guy. You went into great detail about his looks but gave us very little about Edwards looks(yeah I know, bronze hair, green eyes), but Bella describe him as the most handsome guy she ever met and that is it. I just don't want that Stephen freak to be hotter than my Edward. What about Aria? Is she going to come back into Edward life to start trouble and please don't let her turn up with a little bronze hair baby. Her telling Edward that she is married and pregnant sounds suspicious. I just love Edward and Bella. I only read stories with them and only if it is a HEA, which I hope this would be. I have read all your other stories and always love the way you write the intense passion and love between Bella and Edward and how there isn't anyone else for them after they meet. They are it for each other. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you like it KBB. Yes, Stephen will play a role in the story and there's a reason why I didn't go into detail concerning Edward. No 1 is that there wasn't a connection between E/B yet, only a visual from across the room. Without going into detail about the story, I don't give spoilers, there's a reason for the madness, so just sit back and enjoy. You want so much information girl that would totally ruin the story for you!!!! :) I will tell you this....All HEA ... their relationship is intense passion as always ... and I update every Saturday. All I ask is that you keep an open mind and enjoy the story!!! xoxox