Date: 12 May 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
The kids are so funny how they believe every thing they hear about cooties and kissing. I love how they want Edward and Bella to get married and be the new mom. I love his protective/ jealous side.
Date: 11 May 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 31
I am hoping that Bill Black is a semi-reasonable person.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 38
She's pregnant. Can't wait for more!
Date: 11 May 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 30
The kids are so cute!
Date: 11 May 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 37
Sweet chapter. Sweet father/daughter reunion. Sweet wearing 'mom's' dress. Sweet all the way around. ;o)
Date: 11 May 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 29
Glad to see Edward get his BJ!
Date: 11 May 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 38
I am thinking that Bella is pregnant! !!!!!!!!!! Can't wait till tomorrow. You could give us an extra since today is Mother's day.
Date: 11 May 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 38
Her eggos is preggos lol
Date: 11 May 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 38
She's pregnant!
Date: 11 May 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 38
I can't believe chaos would put a pregnancy into the category of a parasite... It's multiplies huh?!
Date: 11 May 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 38
She is pregnant.
Date: 11 May 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 38
OMG!!! Are Stark and Albotross having a baby???????????????????
Date: 11 May 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 37
LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter! !!!!!!!
Date: 11 May 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 38
She is pregnant! ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 38
No want to read more I think Bella's pregnant and with multiples
Date: 11 May 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 28
So glad they did the deed. it seems inevitable that Edward and Bella would end up together. I was really sad to think that a Chaos was going to get blown up...
Date: 11 May 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 38
Bella is pregnant with twins or triplets.
Date: 11 May 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh wow it was good I was alone when I read this cause when I found out Jacob was marmaduke I was a little vocal yep hate Jacob. I like that they are sharing more of each other.
Date: 11 May 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 38
bellas pregnant
parasite lol
they do act like that sometimes....
Date: 11 May 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 38
Wow, Bella is pregnant with ...twins??
Date: 11 May 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
I thought in an earlier chapter that Edward had had Jane captured? So, one got away. Hopefully Bella did not kill the other Volturi agent, but knocked him out so they can torture info out of him. I am surprised that the men could get in the house. I thought for sure Dot Matrix would have tazed them at the door. I am glad to see Scorpia cone around...
Date: 11 May 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loooooove Bella's virgin alarm!
Date: 11 May 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 38
Great honeymoon . Parasite is that a baby
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 38
Wow that girl has some balls to stand up at their wedding and say that will someone get her help or will Bella have to kick her ass and wow the island was beautiful now is Bella pregnant with twins lol update soon happy mothers day
Date: 11 May 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 38
Sasha is really delusional. YEY for wedding. awww for kids wanting to go.
Uh oh Parasite......baby maybe?
Date: 11 May 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 38
Lovely wedding and honeymoon! I was slightly aghast that Sasha had the nerve to stand up at their wedding and give that revolting speech. Hopefully she can get the help she needs to get over Stark, and if not, too bad for her! I was ever so slightly disappointed that there weren't more details about honeymoon sex, but not enough to mar my enjoyment of this story. Virus? Could she be pregnant already??
Date: 11 May 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 38
Oh holy shit muffins! ;)
Albatross has parasites! :P I wonder how many parasites she has multiplying? I am so excited I can't wait! :)=)
Date: 11 May 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 38
She is pregnant lol
Date: 11 May 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 38
I think Bella just got knocked up...lol
Date: 11 May 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 36
Having all these knowledge and a super computer in their side really paid there;)
glad that Charlie was agreeable so fast
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 38
uhhhhuhhhh more babys xD
Date: 11 May 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 38
Well damn. Babies?
Date: 11 May 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 38
It must be a baby
Date: 11 May 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 38
Baby or babies yeah.
Date: 11 May 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 38
Too funny! I bet I know what this "parasite" is! :-)
Date: 11 May 2014 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
Mike is such a jackass. She could have easily ripped his cock off if he only knew. I love protectiveward.
Date: 11 May 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 37
*tears falling* This is so great! I am so freakin happy for them and all of their family! :)=)
Date: 11 May 2014 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 24
OMG! I have read so many stories I am ashamed to say, but in all honesty, this my favorite Bella EVER! You should really think about publishing this fic. It has everything that makes for a great story.
Date: 11 May 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
I thought Bella was going to save them, BUT it is going to be Chaos! So glad that Edward did not let Bella run!
So, it is the government that wants Bella. I think Aro has some splainin' to do.
Date: 11 May 2014 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 22
Not sure. It can't be a dog. I think chaos is a computer?
Edward was so worked up that one touch set him off. But, I would be pissed if I was Bella too. She needs to let him explain. Remember, she is technically a virgin and has never had an orgasm induced by a man. She is also sexually inexperienced besides her own self.So, I don't think she can really appreciates how men work in that regard.
i loved her story of how she lost her virginity and actually pictured that it was Edward!
Date: 11 May 2014 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 21
Please do not tell me that Edward is going to get killed! I am having bad vibes with the story Bella told about her dad. I am hoping that whatever happens, Bella will save him. I only read HEA, so even though I LOVE this story....please PM me.
Date: 11 May 2014 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
That was a total twist! I think Bella should tell Edward. It will alleviate any lingering fears. So, Bella is a genius and the government wants her?
Date: 11 May 2014 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
I have to say that I think these are my favorite kids in fan fiction. The things that they come up with have me laughing out loud.
i would have loved to have seen Edward's face when Bella told him about IM!
Date: 11 May 2014 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think the Blacks are the ones that killed Bella. Glad to see Edward and Bella's relationship progressing. I am hoping Bella will be the one to put an end to Jacob and a Edward to Mike and Jane. I think poor Jessica is dead.
Date: 11 May 2014 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
I was thinking that somehow Dora was Bella's father and he really didn't died she learned get mad computer skills from someone. But, it probably is Miss Honey or Guido.
Why doesn't Esme like Bella? Does she know something?
And, of course Mike is a dirty cop. And, the GPS necklace will allow Edward to find Bella because I am sure. The bad guys are going to snatch her up at some point.
Date: 11 May 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
Yes! Bella needs to tell Edwardd everything. I think that Guido and amiss a honey knows that Edward is in the mob. They are not trying to talk Bella out of being with him...just the opposite. So, they have to think Edward is good. And, they did make the comment that he could protect her.
Time to stop running, Bella.
Date: 11 May 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
I think Bella needs to come clean with Edward. He can't protect her if he is kept in the dark.
Date: 11 May 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
They are just so cute together. They can't help but share things. Are being his grandfather. Bella's real eye color. I know he won't run he loves her.
Date: 11 May 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
I have no idea who Bella is but I love her. She is strong and kickass. Not mild and meek. When they finally have sex, it is going to be incredible. She has to come clean with Edward or he is never going to trust her.
Date: 11 May 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
Roscoe love it but I loved roscoe he is such a dork. Wonderful chapter. Love it so far.
Date: 11 May 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
Haven't quite figured Bella out yet. But, I think Edward could help her and I think that Jake or the Blacks are behind her father's death.
Edward assumes that Bella is too young to want to be with him and his kids. She thinks he won't want anything to do with her when he finds she has not told him everything. I hope these two do not fuck this up from so many assumptions. And, the kids were precious...loved the whole Bella is our new mom rant.
Date: 11 May 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
Omg poor Edward can't handling the naked teasing there. I love the playroom that is awesome. Jessica is an idiot.
Date: 11 May 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward cannot be fixed up with a woman! No!
Date: 11 May 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
Please let Bella be the new nanny! Then she can quit the library too!
Date: 10 May 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love Bella! I am going to go out on a limb and predict that Bella was the egg donor... She. Should be the nanny....just sayin'
love this story how do we follow on TWCS?
Date: 10 May 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 37
Ahhh, too sweet.
Date: 10 May 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 37
uh the wedding is next
Date: 10 May 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 37
I love your description of the unusual men's clothing for this wedding. It all sounds wonderful! Red bridesmaids dresses in not your usual color but I like that too! Wish I could see pictures of all this...Why are Charlie and Hawk trying to get Bella to leave Stark? I know it's a joke, of sorts, but Charlie said it twice! Love her idea of remaining abstinent until the wedding night. Not so sure that Stark does, though. He'll live! LOL!
Date: 10 May 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 37
That is so cool if that doent make you cry nothing will lol
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 37
Aww that was awesome spending time with dad and that they both walked her down the aisle.
Date: 10 May 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 37
Wonderful chapter. The dress sounds nice. Glad Charlie can be there for it all.
Date: 10 May 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
Donkey I love that. The kids are so cute with all the questions.
Date: 10 May 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
I knew she would quit or get fired soon enough that lady is crazy.
Date: 10 May 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ugh Edward is black boxers drool. They seem to have fun as a family. Yep Bella is a way better nanny.
Date: 10 May 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think it was was funny. I love how he picked her up and carried her to the office. The kids are funny with the double please.
Date: 10 May 2014 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh this is going to be good.
Date: 10 May 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
This is very good. Loving it.
Date: 10 May 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am thinking that the nicknames are wonderful. Glad Bella was there in time to save Cassie. Yeah Jessica is so fired.
Date: 10 May 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my gosh Emmett eats a lot. Jessica is not good I just have that feeling. Love how protective Edward is. Maybe Bella could the new nanny the kids love her.
Date: 10 May 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hmmm..... Interesting that she was reading up on him. I love how she calls him stark.
Date: 10 May 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
Finally have time to get back to this story. Loving it so far.
Date: 10 May 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 36
Charlie always likes to 'jump the gun' when it comes to Bella, lol. I love how they entered the Volturi and just simply took over. Awesome! Glad code one is over too so they can get rid of Sasha. yeah. thanx ;o)
Date: 10 May 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 36
So good. Its sad how short-tempered and nasty Charlie is written in fanfictions. Always with the anger and hostility first without knowing the whole story.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 36
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 10 May 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 36
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 35
U ain't lyin.. This is the best James ever. In any story I've read. Coming to a close huh?? MUST say NOT HAPPY. Can see so many more stories using this Edward and Bella. I love superhero Bella. I'm still crossing my fingers for more, but I'll live.
To WeeKitty and TaT. (Raising a glass)
Til next time
E/k
Date: 09 May 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 36
Loved this update, a lot of questions were answered.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 36
["Well?" he stands looking at us, as if he is ready to rip off my head.] lol oh, Charlie, you aren't really going there, are you?
Date: 09 May 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 36
I LOVE THIS!!! SO SO SO MUCH!!! :D
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 35
"You two ran just over twenty miles." How is that possible? With Bella, I understand, but Stark?
[...his body begins to shake and he falls to the ground..."Wow...that's really something, and it turns me on a little."] lol I like this James:)
For some reason I've always thought of Garrett in his 30's::))
Wow, no sex until 18. Bella's hardcore:)
Full disclosure, family secrets destroy:( Tell the kids asap! Actually, the whole family should be told:)
Date: 09 May 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 36
That is so wonderful they are together again one big family.
Date: 09 May 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 36
I do love the way Bella and Edward work as a unit now. These chapters have been amazing! To be fair, I read ahead on fb , but I just had to read them again I love the story that much.
Date: 09 May 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 36
This chapter brought tears to my eyes.
Date: 09 May 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 36
that was quick! glad all is turning out well...