[Report This]Date: 09 May 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 36
Loving it! Fantastic as always.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 36
So sad that it's almost over. Thanks again for posting here, i'm loving re-reading this.
Date: 09 May 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 36
BUT... YET THE END IS NEAR. SO SAD!
Date: 09 May 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 36
Can I just say one more time that I looooove Chaos!
Date: 09 May 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 36
Love how they took down the Volturi. Who was in charge of it?????? What happened to the Volturi? Are they in prison? They need to be. I do not want them coming after Bella and Edward again. So glad that Charlie and Bella are together again. Loving this story.
Date: 09 May 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 36
Woo Hoo for Charlie getting out ok. those kids are just too cute.
Date: 09 May 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 35
Glad E stopped her from going off half cocked. LOL for Garrett
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 36
Did the bombs destroy the Volturi compound?
So this all started with a group of kids being immunized. Renee, and all the females, became infertile so she searched for enhancements and alternate methods of treatment. Resulting in a super-human. Remy. Will Edward water down the gene pool if they have children?
Cassie wnd Cullen's explanation of Charlie's existence is adorable. And yes, Charlie is a miracle. In Bella's eyes.
Date: 09 May 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 36
Finally they got Charlie back!! And the Volturi won´t be able to hurt them anymore YAY!!!!!!! Great Chapter!!! Thanks
Date: 09 May 2014 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 35
Still lovin it.
Date: 08 May 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love this Bella. She is refreshingly different. I don't think that it is possible for me to not enjoy your stories.
Date: 08 May 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 35
James is a perv and deviant.
Date: 08 May 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 35
Amazing story. I like hkw you guy write. I look forward to more.
Date: 08 May 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 08 May 2014 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 35
Poor Bella. But I do agree on liking this James and I'm so glad. I chuckled out loud at his wink and then shaking all over the floor. That is too funny. thanx ;o)
Date: 08 May 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 34
Whoa, another surprise?? Dang and I agree with Stark, Edward, they'll find Charlie. No problems. ;o)
Date: 08 May 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 34
14??????? Can't believe it's nearly the end, loving it still xxx
Date: 08 May 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 35
I so enjoy this! And I think this is such a funny James, a very welcome change of the usual things;)
Im pretty sure the Volturi won't know what hits them, with the Stark-Army marching in their hide out!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 35
The scene where Bella realizes she may have missed any possible signs that her father could have survived just about wreaked me. She has been on her own, so to speak, for quite a while now and the thought that her father has been out there, being used to get to her must be heart wrenching.
James/Spike is a delightful character. A good balance to Edward's usually gruff exterior.
That was quite the confession from Garrett/Clark. Sookie is in good hands where he is concerned. But, Bella will be the best prophylactic these two will ever need! hahaha
Love the new nickname for Bella....The Boss's Wife!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 35
Love this story but you should of just made the twins Bella's although that would still need explaining.
Date: 08 May 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 35
jajajajaj Spike is sooo funny and I really like bella she ripped a new one into garret!!! I hope they are able to find Charlie soon!!!! Thank you so much for the Chapter I liked it!!!!!
Date: 08 May 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 35
Yes it is always nice to read about a dissent James...great chapter
Date: 08 May 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 35
let's go kick some Volturi ass! and then find Charlie....
Date: 08 May 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 35
I do like James. It's nice that the villains are different in this story very refreshing!
Date: 08 May 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 35
I feel so sorry for Bella. Bless her heart . I like what they are going to tell the kids. Love that Edward zapped James.
Date: 08 May 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 35
ABSOFUCKINLUTELY STILL ENJOYING. READ YOU SOON.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it! More, more, more please!!!
Date: 08 May 2014 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 35
I like this James to he is funny and he cares about Bella and Edward he may be a little slimmy but he is a good guy. I think that is so sweet about telling the kids about there grandma because Bella will be there mom forever. I think it is cool there is no dening the DNA.
Date: 08 May 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 33
Wow, you guys really wrote a very surprising different story here. I've been intrigued since the beginning. What a twist. ;o)
Date: 08 May 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 32
IDK for sure and I'm tired of speculating cause I'm always wrong, lol, so I'm onto the next chapter. My only guess would have been to find out who Stark really is. ;o)
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 34
There's so much going on, I'm having trouble keeping everything straight.
Date: 08 May 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 34
Yeah, Charlie. But, what have they done to him? Love this story, fun, funny, intriguing, mystery, love, family... It's got it all!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 34
The Volturi want to replicate Remy. She is the ultimate warrior. Quick to heal, fast learner, brilliant strategist and all human. Biologically rather easy to reproduce.
Did Hawk shoot Kahn?
Thanks for not killing off Bill Black.
I just knew you would find a way to keep Charlie alive. But is he a detriment to Bella's survival at this point and time?
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 34
"Eh, we all hear you, you were talking out loud, Boss," lol lol omg I'm actually embarrassed & it wasn't me that talked:::)))
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 33
(So far) I was wrong in my Masen/Volturi speculation but what Bella found was way beyond what I expected. I remember Edward used donated eggs instead of Tanya's. Considering how much Bella's life intertwines with the Masen's, I'm surprised I never once wondered where the eggs came from:)
Date: 07 May 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 34
Will they find Charlie? Are they going to take down the Volturi?
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 34
Just what every super-villain wants!
World Domination
by the way of Super Soldiers!
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 32
"Please, Albatross, let me deal with this?" I kinda feel for Edward. He's head of the 'family' but a 21 yo female is 100 times more capable than he is & he knows it!
"Yeah, shut it or I will drop you on your ass." "Shut it or I'll have my woman drop you on yours," "Oh, the big man using a little girl to defend him?" "Oh, the big man, that gets beat up by the little girl," love the banter:) Glad Stark isn't having too much trouble keeping his man-card.
"They both seem to pick up on the fighting very easily—even more easily than some of the adults—which troubles me a little" Another speculation popped into my head!
Ok, I may be an idiot but one of my past speculations is screaming at me -- The Masen is the Volturi
Date: 07 May 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 34
I'm curious who of them has heard enough of his BS and shot him... I'm not sure it was a wise move yet either, because it seems he could have more information to get them:(
OMG! I'm glad the blacks are almost all out, it's sad that Bill has had to allow his son to be killed, but I guess the son he knew died a long time ago...
Will Bella led it slide that someone has had a loose finger?!
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 34
Holy snap I so didn't see that coming at all wow now how will she find him and will she find out what they want with her update soon
Date: 07 May 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
"It has been three hours since she started beating us up; please put a stop to it." lol lol lol There's been no mention that Bella's been cut, bruised or even out of breath::))
Date: 07 May 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 34
A new race of killer. How are they going to find Charlie and how will he be when they do.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 34
Could Nahuel be her father, maybe he secretly donated sperm so Renee could get pregnant which would explain how they got Renee's eggs to create Cassie and Cullen - IVF. It would also explain why Charlie and Renee hid from Nahuel the fact that they had had Bella, they seemed pretty desperate to not reveal to Nahuel that Bella existed and it would explain why he was so desperate to get hold of her once he became aware she existed.
Can't wait for the next update, hope it's soon.
Date: 07 May 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 32
I must say the nicknames are frustrating. I mean they are cute and all but it is frustrating as hell because I cant keep up on who is whom. I have to keep going back to the list and that is frustating too.
Date: 07 May 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 34
good chapter. Nahuel is now dead, right? so i guess it's off to the Volturi to find Charlie next.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 34
Holy shit ,omg god love it ,still can't figure out whats next but I can not wait to read it.great story.
Date: 07 May 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 34
o m g that is so cool
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2014 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 30
Ah, a rogue faction within the Volturi. I've been wondering lately about the fact that Aro, Caius & Marcus aren't Volturi in this story....or are they::))
"...when killing her could help cure us" I suspect killing her wouldn't cure them. The cure is either in her blood or more likely her intelligence could create a cure. Either way, her death means no cure.
"Because," "Because, why?" "Yes, because I said..." lol lol groan:( I hate when parents say this::))
Date: 07 May 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 34
Love the twists and turns!
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2014 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 29
"She better have clothes on, Edward," "Nope, I've already taken them off and been sampling her fine body, now go away," lol best response Edward could make::))
Date: 07 May 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 34
OMG!! This is great!! :)
Date: 07 May 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 34
Great planning B. Ugh Nahuel just had to pull something out of his arse huh?
Date: 07 May 2014 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 34
Yay, Charlies alive! I have no what the Volturi really want, you just keep me guessing :)
Date: 07 May 2014 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 34
Oh my gosh! I sooooo hope Charlie is still alive and Bella can have her father back. I just hope they have not abused him all those years. I still want to know who is the head of the Volturi.
Date: 07 May 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
Well I didn´t see that coming. So charlie is alive that is very interesting. I´m glad they killed Nahuel, he was getting on my nerves. Ihope they get to the Volturi soon! Great chapter!!!! Thank you so much for the update!!!
Date: 07 May 2014 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
So, the kids are her siblings. Humm, interesting.
Looking forward to the demise of the Blacks.
Date: 06 May 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 33
That went way better than I expected;)
Date: 06 May 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 33
I knew it!! I love this story!! You are fantastic!! I can't wait for more!! :)=)
Date: 06 May 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow the Volturi have a lot to answer for.
Date: 06 May 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 33
oh my, they used his kids?! crazy! cant wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thats interesting that the twins are learning how to fight easier than others. I bet that the files that bella finds are related to the twins somehow. I am thinking that the volturi have done something and it has a link between Edward and bella's family some how.
Can't wait for more chapters!
Date: 06 May 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 33
Thanks for another entertaining chapter!
Date: 06 May 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 33
read you tomorrow!
Date: 06 May 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 33
wait doesn't that make bella cassie and cullen's sister?
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 32
Hey. Sorry been MIA. What a shake up to return to. First of all. I love Bella and her brain. The wristbands are awesome. Second, I can't wait til Jacob dies a VERY slow death. I wonder will we get to meet Nahuel? And lastly, OMG CASS AND CULL HAS THE SERUM IN THEM LIKE BELLA!!!! I just know it. AAAHHHHH!!! NOOOO or YESSS! I'm not sure how to feel. Thanks a lot (deadpan) lol. Luv u guys
E/k
Date: 06 May 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 33
You see i never really get it right!!! The near thing about this plot is that I really don't know what is going to happen next! Thank you for this update! I hope they get over with everything fast!!!!
Date: 06 May 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 06 May 2014 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 33
Great chapter as always. It has to be strange to know that the children you love as your own are really your siblings and your soon to be husband has children with your mother even if they didnt have sex to make them.
Date: 06 May 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 33
If Renee's eggs were implanted into Tanya then that would make Bella the twins sister!! Right??
Date: 06 May 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 33
Hopefully they'll draw out Jacob and Nahuels punishment, make them suffer for what they did. How did they get ahold of Renee's eggs, to use for Cassie and Cullen, so long after her death?
Date: 06 May 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 33
Hmmmmm......more xxxxx
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 33
I loved it wow I was right it was the twins but I so didn't see that it was Renee's eggs and damn Bella is ready for everything now how will the take down go update soon
Date: 06 May 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 33
So she is the mother of her half brother and sister ??? I love all the toys and places she has amazing love it.
Date: 06 May 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 33
Great update, I hope they wipe the Blacks out.
Date: 06 May 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow you blew me away with that chapter cannot wait for the takedown
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 33
I'm having a difficult time keeping everyones nicknme straight.
I have to admit each chapter recently, has me sitting on the edge of my seat.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2014 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 33
Ladies thank you so much for a AMAZING story!!!!..I love you guys...I look foward to your updates...I love the relationship Bella and Edward have..Cassie and Cullen are smart like Bella, Stark has his hands full....LOL...I can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 33
Loving it! Can't wait for more.
XoxoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2014 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 33
Huh, my random comment about the twins taking to Bella like a big sister was indeed true, imagine that!
Bella will now be raising her own siblings. Will that affect stark in any way?
The cave was very ingenious.
What other secrets do you have up your sleeve?
Looking forward the the take down of Jacob. Billy not so much. He was a friend of Charlie's.
Date: 06 May 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow I did not see Renee being the twins egg donor. I guessed that the kids had been injected with whatever Bella was. Edward held his temper well. I was surprised. Love the "safe cave". Lol. Can't wait for the next chapter! !!!!
Date: 06 May 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 32
OMG know what....they have something to do with what??? Waaaaas and know??? Damn!!! :s
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 32
I am so enjoying this story. Could it be that they (Volturi) has somehow lied about her parents; is that who she is threatening to kill if it (?) is true. Did start lie to her about something? All I know is I can't wait till tomorrow to find out!!!
Date: 05 May 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 32
Can't wait for more please update ASAFP.