Date: 27 Apr 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 27
OH MY!! I LOVE this story!!! When is next update!? I can't wait to read more!! Thanks for another GREAT chapter!! :-)
Date: 27 Apr 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow!!!!!! This chapter was full of information. I can understand why Bella would be worried about Edward being upset with her. This chapter was very interesting.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 27
I've gone back over previous chapters, where is Penny mentioned? Loved this update.
Author's Response:
When he is doing his little self-love before sasha atempted to impale herself on him. Just revealed a couple of chapters ago.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
It's a bit wierd,that Jasper has never seen or remembered Bella from befor, when Daisy and Hawk are his parents.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2014 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
READING THAT LIST OF NICKNAMES IS A STORY IN AND OF ITSELF. (LOL) I'M STILL TRYING TO PICK MY TONGUE UP OFF THE FLOOR. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 27
This story is one of the best and different story lines I have ever come across - the story has twists and turns and just keeps me captivated. Love it!!! Can't wait for more updates.....
Date: 27 Apr 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
So much information in this chapter! I love how all of these people are intertwined. Jasper sure is shocked to learn that his parents know Bella and his father is her protector as well as her trainer. Edward is also quite surprised with all of these developments. His grandparents, mother, and the other people who have known all along about who Bella is. And, he's reminded once again of how smart she truly is. Although, I think them finding out that Bella is Dora actually takes the cake! !
Date: 27 Apr 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 27
great chapter loved it
Date: 27 Apr 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
This is a dizzying array of nicknames to remember! I read through the chapter twice and still reeling from it all. LOVE that she asked Stark to marry her! LOVE even more that he said yes! Who are the men coming to her door? Cleaners? Volturi? Jacob's men? I think I like Jacob's nickname most of all. Big dumb dog. It fits!
Date: 27 Apr 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 27
bloody hell what a web of secrets if anything this proves they can all keep secrets.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 27
Too many nicknames!! I am so confused: it's like reading something in a foreign language and having to stop every two lines to look up a translation. Looking foward to the next chapter now that I have the master key! ;)
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh, that makes a lot of sense! I really suspected that Bella was Dora.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
Now whos at the door...Marmaduke and company
Date: 27 Apr 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 27
I figured it would be someone in THE FAMILY but I am glad to know now. Funny that Stark remembered meeting her now.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ready to find out who these folks are!
Good update
Date: 27 Apr 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow she asked him to marry her she knows what she wants. Is Edward in shock Bella is amazing
Date: 27 Apr 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
Holy Crap! She is a machine! I love her!! :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 26
Please update soon that was to good to stop there.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh wow hes going to meet people! Still no clue is Aro one of them?
Date: 27 Apr 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 26
awww well hopefully they can find out whats going on. cant wait for more :)
Date: 27 Apr 2014 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loving this! I drop everything when I see updates!
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2014 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Reread all chaps till now... How comes that Aro is the only person Bella didn't gave a nickname to?? Could he be Guido? That way it would make sense that Esme remains Bella of Ms Honey and that she thinks Edward will be angry...
And could Hawk be Jaspers father Peter?
Can't wait to get the answers to all that is still mysterious! Love this story!
Date: 27 Apr 2014 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 26
Just read ch 25 and 26 together, and I'm gripped more than usual.....what happened to the two Voltura men.....did one get away and one get taken down????
Date: 27 Apr 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 26
BELLA KICKED ASS! I can't wait to see Jasper finally stay quiet from hear on out about trusting Bella. Poor Bella she thinks Edward is going to be afraid of her but I'm sure he is only going to worship her even more than he already does! There is nothing better than hot steamy sex after an adrenaline rush like they just had. Hint hint ;D
Date: 27 Apr 2014 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 26
White haired man? Caius maybe.
Good chapter.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow she is just Wow.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love spaceballs to funny.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
Go Bella, go Bella, go, go, go Bella. That white haired guy sounds like the one described as Dora, hmm? Well I should hope Edward doesn't doubt Bell'a abilities anymore, lol. Too bad, but Mike and Jane kind of got what they deserved. Sigh* Can't wait for the next chapter. yeah. ;o)
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
So amazing! Keep it coming girls! Love it!
Date: 27 Apr 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, action packed! This was great. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
This story is freaking amazing please update asap!!!!!! i love your bella she is beyond amazing.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
Holy shit. No wonder they want her.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wowzer! Very exciting!
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 26
I must admit I am confused as hell! Looking forward to some explanation in next chapter hopefully? Thanks! :)
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 26
Ah! so her DNA is altered for physical strength not just intelligence. I didn't see that coming but I like it. She is like a superwoman without the flying and cape.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 27 Apr 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 26
That was one helluva action packed chapter. Bella is a force to be reckoned with for sure and I sincerely hope that doesn't put Stark off....he said he'd love her no matter what! Why are the Volturi backing Black? Good question! Can't wait for more answers next chapter. This story is one very entertaining ride. Will Bella and Stark have sex before it's over? Sorry, but I'm pervy like that.....
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
nope, not a fan of Spaceballs, but know of it.....Mel Brooks, right? Anyhoo....This story just gets better and better with each reading. You are weaving one giant helluva mystery story here and I just love the futuristic technology!
Date: 27 Apr 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
really great chapter loved it
Date: 26 Apr 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
So Scorpia may have a redeeming quality yet. Who knew you could turn it around like that? Bella was kick-ass. Maybe that will shut everyone up!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 26
Hope you update soon. Loving this story.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
I said it before, I'll say it again, this story is marvelous!! It should be a movie! Kudos! Your writing reminds me of an onion - multi layered. Just when we think we have the whole picture.... Bang! You reveal even more layers. I look forward to each and every update and practically inhale them. Thank you for so much intelligent writing and so many hours of brainwork. By the way, I did love Chaos asking Jasper to close the door! Superb! Poor Peabody!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 26
This just keeps getting better!! I really hope you post again I am dying to know what Stark has to say along with Jasper. The older with Black sounds an awful lot like Dora's description to me
Date: 26 Apr 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella is bad ass. I don't think Stark will be afraid, but rather proud and probably very turned on!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it!! Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 26
I HAVE AN IDEA BUT I'LL LET YOU INFORM US ON YOUR TERMS. YOU DO THE MAGIC AND I ALONG WITH EVERYONE ELSE JUST READ. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
If anything, Stark will be amazed at what Bella has done, and basically all by herself. She singlehandedly protected everybody there and got rid of the bad guys.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
Can we have a few more updates tonight?
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 26
Fantastic loved it! More, more, more! Please!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 26
My heartbeat was increased from another story I read before this, but damn if this wasn't going to give it just another rush!
I sure hope, that she's wrong in her guess that Sookie or worse the twins fear her presence, but I couldn't stand it if Edward would too...
Donkey and Roscoe... They aren't only stupid as hell, but disgusting as well;)
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved the action.
I want my own Chaos.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 25
Miss Honey and Guido are obviously people that Edward knows well, but doesn't know that they have been part of Bellas life. Can't wait for the big reveal.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 26
Yeah chapters more chapters! :)
I loooove very much your story!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 26
thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you although I was left in the best part of the story!!!!!!!! yes bella is great!!!!! I think Edward will be surprised at first, but he loves bella very much, I think he will be very angry at what happened with those guys, maybe a little guilty for not being there for bella and his family. I don´t know maybe he will also feel very proud at the way bella handled the situation and I think he won´t question her abilities anymore!!!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
Edward said nothing would change his feelings for Bella. He might just be in shock of what she was able to handle. She saved everyone in the house. She should be thanked if anything. I want the next chapter, like now!!!!!! Do you even know how many people are talking about this story? Seriously, I was on Facebook the other day and saw a post about it by another fanfic author who is addicted and wondering if you would post another chapter soon! I love the nicknames and have started applying some to people in my life. My dog has quite a few already. Love this story!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
This chapter got confusing with all the nicknames. But the action was great. Poor Bella kick ass, but it takes a toll on her.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
Ok so Esme, Anna and Eleanor knew her mother. Why did Bella look so pale when she saw Eleanor though? Was it because she thought he would say something about her looking some much like her mother? Can't wait for more. Loving this story.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 26
can't wait for more :)
Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 26
Glad B got K to safety. Her sis is a real idiot. hmmm White haired man huh? Billy? Guessing he's not going to argue about her fighting anymore huh?
Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 25
Ohhh my god the suspense is killing me!!!!! Bella is badass!!!! I really like that you made her character different, she is sooooo cool with all of the knowledge she has!!!!!Spaceballs is a great movie, it is one of my favorites, although I like most of mel brooks films!!! Thank you so much for the bonus chapter!!!
couldn´t you maybe post one of those extra chapters you have today and post the usual update tomorrow? Pleeeaaasee with a cherry on top! I´m just kidding I can wait until tomorrow, although this story has me on the edge of my seat is so good. Thank you anyway :) :) :)
Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
Can't wait to meet Miss Honey and Guido.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love it,hope you post today can't wait to find out who is miss honey.i haven't seen that movie but now I has to go watch it.thank you for writing a wonderful story.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
1987..WOW I was 25 then shit I am up there in age lol...loved the Movie and Chapter
Date: 26 Apr 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
I never saw the whole space balls movie, only snippets here and there;)
Hm... The reaction from Yin and Cinna was really interesting! I'm pretty curious if my gut is right with them, too!
So, she couldn't do much in the kitchen with the girls, I'm curious if they'll get more bonding time.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
Gaagh! I love her smarts! Never read a genius Bella story before but I think I might start reading them now :)). Sooo, we learned more about Eleazer and Anna. So he will be mad when he see's who Guido is. This has got my attention. I am excited to find out who they are too.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 25
Spaceballs fav. line- "Man, We ain't found shit!! After they were told to comb the desert ( Is a hair pick considered a comb?). This is a fantastic story and I always get excited whenever a new update posts. Thanks for the regular updates and keeping my boring little life exciting with your words.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
Alright, I'm dying here...
Date: 26 Apr 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
great chapter loved it
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh boy hope they get them soon. Can't wait to see what happens when he meets Ms Honey and Guido. This I'd by far the best story I have read in awhile
Date: 26 Apr 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am so Anxious to fidn out who Miss Honey and Guido are.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
It's killing me not knowing who Miss Honey & Guido are.
I appreciate your faithful updates.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
You are too funny with the nicknames. hmmm so now Eleasar knows. B really needs to tell him soon
Date: 26 Apr 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
This thing totally rawks. MUST. HAVE. MORE!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 25
:) THANK YOU FOR THE SMILE AND THE UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
great story love it
Date: 26 Apr 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
love love love this story....you are an amazing writer.......
Date: 25 Apr 2014 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
hercules, love it! cant wait for more :)
Date: 25 Apr 2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
Hmmm, does Anna know who Bella is just like Esme did? Ha, I'm sure Edward is catching on more & more that there's more to Bella than he knows. He has already thought that. go Bella. If she can handle Emmett then she sure could handle Sasha. I can't beleive that Sasha even started again after he'd once again threw her out of his home. whatever!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow he really needs to listen to Bella when she says she can do it and better than his men she keeps proving her self when will he trust her word update soon
Date: 25 Apr 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awwww man! I really wanted to see Bella lay Sasha out! Edward really needs to stop underestimating her abilities. Seriously. And in what universe is it ok for Jasper to break into her condo while her and Edward are in there. I guess I could possibly be persuaded to underdstand his continued distrust of Bella, but his blatant disrespect of Edward is way over the line. I wouldn't mind Edward putting him in his place once and for all.
Love it all! Thanks for the consistent and frequent updates!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella really didn't give poor Emmett a chance::)) She needs to go back & show them what she's got....without killing anyone:)
It seems that a growing number of Edward's family have ties to Bella's past. Esme & by default Carlisle, Aro (& I suspect Dora also). I betting Anna somehow got in this group too. Seems Bella might have found a new/old family:)
Date: 24 Apr 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
I think Edward needs to have a little chat with Jasper and tell him that he needs to start following his orders. He may be the head of security, but that's all he is. Edward is the boss and he needs to start listening to him, not doing his own thing and contradicting everything Edward says.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 24
I love this one!!! I am so excited for more Badass/Kickass Bella to come out. Is her given name Renesme Isabella Swan? Swanson if you choosed to change the last name abit? Anywho, really looking forward to the next update.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 24
Anna was a surprise. Sure there is mkore to find out there. Hercules is very appropriate for Em, and I like it better than "muscles.". Sasha is a real piece of work and can't be trusted, I am sure. I have a feeling this "Dora" will come up empty against Bella's cover stories. Keep up the great work!