Date: 13 Apr 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
He is turning into the Edward we all know and love.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
Charlie needs to grow up.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
This Edward is very persistent.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved the story, so sweet. Thank god Charlie finaly grow up. I'm sad to see this ending but hoping to see wat you both come up with next.
XOXO Maria João
Date: 13 Apr 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Charlie is very unCharlie like. If dinners with him go like that all the time, I would be making up excuses to distance myself from him.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is coming on mighty strong there.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great story! Loved it!!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for sharing!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you ladies! Loved it!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love the story that Edward tells Bella to keep her distracted. Perfect! !!!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
That was an excellent ending! I've enjoyed this story so much. I'm very glad Charlie finally "grew" up. Mia and Edward's relationship was adorable too. Thanks so much for sharing this with us! :)
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
I enjoyed this one very much :)
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
I loved it!!! Thank you
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
What a lovely end to a lovely story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us. :)
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Another brilliant story ladies! I look forward to the next one (and next chapter of TTOO) x
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
It goes without saying but I'll say it anyways. Thanks a billion. Loved it. You two are the greatest. Where can I send a tip? Jk jk. Terrific. Bravo.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
It was great as always!
I loved that Charlie could get his head out of his ass, even if it took him a while... Better late than never, right?
Edward was sooo great with little mia, I'm sure he's going to be just as good with his boys;)
Thank you, once again, for sharing your great talent and putting so much time for writing for us away from your RL's!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
loved the ending !
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
I very much enjoyed your sweet little story and it was over with far too soon for my liking! Thank you so much. Older Bella and younger Edward is my absolute favorite kind of story!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
loved this story
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
Very sweet story, and Edward was amazingly cute and mischievous! Yay for a HEA! :)
Date: 13 Apr 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved, loved, loved it! Very cute story. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
This has been a fun story to read. How could anyone not love this Edward. Charlie may not have bee the perfect father but I did get quite a few laughs at his expense. Loved Bella. It was fun to read all of Edward's antics in trying to woo his girl. Mia was so much fun to read too. Smart little girl. I just hope she continues to follow her dreams and stays on course to be just like her mommy and daddy. I sure would hate the thought that she would grow up to be a used car salesman. With that much charisma she could do some major damage. lol. Nah, just havin' fun with ya. Thank You So Much for sharing Fertile Dreams with us. :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved your story and looked forward to every update. Thank you for Bella and Sweetward and thanks for changing Charlie after he met Sue.
I don't imagine we would be lucky enough to get a sequel???
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was lovely!! :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
Now that is a Kasi and Nicky style chapter! Haha.
Very thoughtful proposal.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
thank you for the update...great story..Charlie is a hot mess!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Charlie is a real piece of work. Will he ever really change? Doesn't matter, does it? Love the proposal and the lemon to seal the deal!! Only one more chapter? :-(
Date: 12 Apr 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
So very sweet and caring... I love that
Date: 12 Apr 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
That was great!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
I loved it wow Edward just keeps proving thqt he is a good man and that he is perfect for Bella and hopefully Charlie can prove himself to be a good dad and grandpa update soon
Date: 12 Apr 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad to see that Charlie was finally 50 years old in his actions. Loved the story.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Are you sure this is the unedited version? Because I see barely any difference with the chapter on FF.net.
Author's Response:
Yes because the sex scene all be it short was omitted from ffn
Date: 12 Apr 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yes. Quite the proposal. While we are at it, let's not forget those perks.;)
Date: 12 Apr 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad that Bella has admitted het feelings for Edward. I hope Little One is ok.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
I can't believe that Charlie acted like that. Wow, Edward is filthy rich.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love this Edward!!
Date: 12 Apr 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
These past few chapters were wonderful. I hope Charlie opens his eyes soon!
Date: 12 Apr 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
awwww their such a cute family!
Date: 12 Apr 2014 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
Aww edward is romantic
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love it wow Edward knows how to woo a woman damn he is good heheheh he is sweet and caring but fun too update soon
Date: 11 Apr 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 11 Apr 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
My heart fills with simple happiness for these two. Correction. These three. :) I wondered if Esme might not be older that Carlisle. The way he tells her he will propose to her ..... *swoon*
Date: 11 Apr 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Really loving this....edward is just so....urhhhhh.....wonderful xxx
Date: 11 Apr 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh, I remember those days. Glad all arrived safetly
Date: 11 Apr 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved his distraction! :)
Date: 11 Apr 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
So sweet and lovely to read. I really enjoy both your stories I am currently reading!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
Talk about picking you moments, but he did keep her distracted.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
How sweet. Edwards a great husband and dad already.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
Sigh... Such a sweet little family:)
Date: 11 Apr 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
So wonderful. They are going to make a wonderful family.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
I loved this chapter, it was so sweet. :) I like that Edward has always looked for an older woman because that is what he saw growing up. :)
Date: 11 Apr 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 11 Apr 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
That was perfect. Everybody OK with her being older and the baby is fine.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love him so happy she is feeling the same for him
Date: 11 Apr 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my ! Good that she told him of her change of heart! He's such a cutie and a keeper for sure! Bad that her water broke too soon! 6 weeks early is doable these days though. I think the 3 of them will make a wonderful little family!
Date: 11 Apr 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Charlie sounds like a way bigger asshole than Mr.Newton, I hope Bella starts sticking up for herself.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
About time Bella got her head out of her ass
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good chapter, lots of info and it moved the story along beautifully.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Poor bella right when edward and bella move foward the baby grts in jeopody
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Finally she has come to her senses and seeing Edward as a man and that she isn't that old.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ever is a long time. Hope it works out for them. What is Charlie going to do now that he is a grandpa?
Date: 10 Apr 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think I say this every review but Edward is the best!! I'm so glad Bella finally admitted her feelings for him too. :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
What a beautiful chapter! I hope Bella and her little one are alright. I hope Charlie is making changes in his life too. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
WOW!!! REALLY!!!!! WET HUH???? (HE HE HE) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
Can you all the smiles at computers throughout the world right now? Sure there is a certain amount of fear for little one and Bella but with Carlisle in his scrubs and Edward by her side we just know it is going to be alright. Of course faith in our author helps too. :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh, this is so sweet.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Whoa! Jump Back Jack and Hold the Phone! How cool is this twist?!!! Just think they will be spending a whole hella lot of time together now and we are already seeing a few cracks as Bella's resistance crumbles a little. Way To Go, Edward! Slow and Steady wins the race. Well, it's not exactly a race but my excitement and enthusiasm is the same. :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
dang poor edward didn't get any.. now he will have to wait at least 6-8 wks.. aww
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think it is great that Bella finally realized her feelings. Bella needs to be loved so bad. She needs to loved by a real man, who won't use her. Charlie is worthless.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm super happy we finally have a kiss!
Date: 10 Apr 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is absolutely wonderful. Liked that Carlisle was able to give Bella a little peace of mind. Edward staying down the hall in his father's office is so sweet. And coming by in the nick of time the following morning was priceless. Bella sure held her own with the mean nurse. And shame on the nurse for causing Bella more stress. And thanx a lot. It is only 10:15 am here. Breakfast is behind me lunch a couple hours away and all I want to do right now is eat bacon and eggs. lol.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Timing isn't on their side...
I hope little one and Bella get out there okay:-S