[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh wow just when she finely tells him she wants more from him she goes I to labor will Bella and the baby be ok update soon
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
So sad that little one is coming so soon and this way but happy that B and E are progressing. Hope that little one is going to be ok and that Chalie come to his senses.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Please hurry and update!! Great story.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
Super excited for progress and I can wait for the next chapter.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is really wonderful and I'm hating on Charlie right now. He's one selfish, self-centered dude!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
Just caught up with this story anad I am loving it.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love this Edward
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
This story keeps getting better and better! Can't wait to see the dynamics of their relationship change... they are so cute together!
Thanks!
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
So he must be a bit more mature than Bella expected! My son & I play Skylanders. It is pretty sad when the sales person at toys r us knows me because I'm in there with my son buying Skylanders & discussing levels with the sales person. ;)
Date: 10 Apr 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
I will stick to reading here or FictionPad as i don't want to be cheated with highly edited content... bring on the full fledged... Laughed when you said you were old... My idea of fun games were Pacman, Mrs. Pacman, and Centipede! Love that Edward decked Charlie. He should have done so once more since Charlie continues to be an ass..
Author's Response:
I played Pac-Man, Ms. Pac-Man, Cenipede, Glaga, Q-bert, Burgertime, Rally-x, SpaceInvaders and all those old video games. Funny story for you ... About 5 years ago, my middle daughter was 8-9 and she came to me all excited one day while I was in the kitchen cooking supper and she in a super excited voice says ... "Mom, MOM, I found the coolest brand new game on the internet, it is new and it is SOOOOOOOOOO cool, its called PACMAN!" I was liek yeah, and 30 years ago I was playing that same brand new really cool game
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
Trust fund baby Edward has just blown Bella's mind!
Charlie needs a reality check. Bella's right, she enabled his bad behavior by being his young caretaker. Not his daughter.
Were the Newton's covering up Mike and Jessica's whereabouts until recently?
Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Is Bella finally seeing Edward in a different light.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Damn, why does Charlie have to be so mean to his only daughter! I love that Edward is taking care of her and I hope she reconsiders him for a boyfriend.....I wonder what's in chapter 11 that has to be so severly edited for FFN.....no I really don't wonder, I can only imagine and look forward to reading all about it here on TWCS! Lovely little story!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella's forgotten to take care if herself and the baby!
Edward will swoop in and save her.
Date: 09 Apr 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Aww edward loves her
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
Charlie needs to man up and dump his play things without the help of his adult daughter.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
He's breaking through that tuff Isabella exterior.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
What is Charlie searching for? The love of his life died so now he just seems to want to get his rocks off.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Will Mike and Jessica be caught?
Edward sure is persistant!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing office politics already in play.
I'll jeep reading to learn more!
Date: 09 Apr 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
Really enjoying your story. Looking forward yo reading more
Date: 09 Apr 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
And Charlie still doesn't get it
Date: 09 Apr 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 09 Apr 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
Charlie won't win "father of the year" in this story...
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
Enjoying this, like that Charlie is really differentbut he is so self absorbed.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
I enjoy each new bit of info devulged in each update.
Date: 09 Apr 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved this chapter! Felt like I was right alongside Edward wanting to deck Charlie!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is a really good guy. Charlie on the other hand needs to grow up a little. I will be rooting for Bella and her baby. :)
Date: 09 Apr 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
So glad that Charlie got slugged by Edward. What a immature boy. Grow up Charlie. I hope Bella doesn't get sick of Edwards mothering.
Date: 09 Apr 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is so sweet and Charlie needs to go.
Date: 09 Apr 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
Charlie needs more than n just a punch in the eye he needs the Shit kicked out of him. Edward is amazing.
Date: 09 Apr 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
LOVE HIM
Date: 09 Apr 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
Can't wait for the next chapter. I love that Edward is her boss.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
I loved it wow Edward is beyond his years and her hero I can't believe her dad he needs to stay away update soon
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Is there another twist. Like Edward really is the donor. Love the story. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story. Edward is such a good guy. Bella needs him in her life. Charlie needs to stay out of her life. She needs to tell him to break up with his own suger babies. He is not a father. He is a leach that drags her down.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
Any final fansty game puts me to sleep. Love it. I wondered if he was there cuz he wanted to or had too. Aww good ole Aro.
Date: 09 Apr 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
I LOVE THIS EDWARD!!!! I wish he would've beat the shit out of Charlie. My lord how selfish can one man be.
Date: 09 Apr 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love it! Sometimes this is just the kind of story one needs...laughter, sarcasm, itsy Bitsy drama, limited angst!
Date: 09 Apr 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
Charlie is a douche bag . Edward trying to sneak in baby daddy role and boyfriend
Date: 09 Apr 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow edward is full of surprises
Date: 09 Apr 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
loking forward to more
Date: 09 Apr 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love Edward what a great guy. That nurse needs fired how unprofessional.
Date: 09 Apr 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMG good thing he is there
Date: 09 Apr 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
He is been determined to do something anything to help her
Date: 09 Apr 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
Now I'm wishing Edward could take off work & be with her but at least they can have their mornings & nights together?
Date: 09 Apr 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
Charlie needs a good kick in the nuts! I hope Bella turns her feelings around real quick. She needs Edward!
Date: 09 Apr 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yes, I 100% agree a shirtless Edward is always welcome to come & mow or just stand in the sun & sweat & glisten!
Date: 09 Apr 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
This Edward is very funny! I can just imagine him all cute & coy.
Date: 08 Apr 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Baby bunny must be dumber than a box of rocks and one fry short of a happy meal.
Date: 08 Apr 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think that has to be the worst line ever & the line that would never get a man a date. "I have a thing for older chics" what he really means is he has a thing for strong women.
Date: 08 Apr 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow she needs to kick Charlie out of her life until he grows up he is a jerk but thank goodness Edward is there for her he saved her and the baby now will things change between them update soon
Date: 08 Apr 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward to mroe
Date: 08 Apr 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
So where's Charlie in the mix , has he even been by? If she's got that much fire with the nurse maybe Charlie could get a dose ( without stressing her out)
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
Now she is going to need someone. Edward is too cute.
Date: 08 Apr 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
I just love this Edward!! Hopefully Bella will realize what she'd be missing out on soon... I really hope Edward's the one who gets to stay with her 24/7 on bed rest! Can't wait for update!!! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
This chapter was so sweet. I hope Bella will give Edward a chance now. He seems like he loves life and he's young at heart but he's mature where it counts. :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bad nurse is gone I hope. I can't believe she did that. I wonder if she will now say edward is baby father. Or more than if she does edward will accept it.
Date: 08 Apr 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just some info on Gestational Diabetes.
As the pregnancy continues blood sugar get higher. The only way you have low blood sugar with GD is a side effect of the insulin that some moms need to take to keep the blood sugar in normal range.
I had GD with my last two boys and was
on increasing insulin dosages as my pregnancy continued. My sugar did go low a few times as a side effect of the insulin shots some times.
Hope this info helps as GD can be very dangerous for both mother and baby if not taken care of.
Big fan of all your stories. Thanks for
always starting a new one as you finish a story.
Date: 08 Apr 2014 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Im thinking edward may insist on living with bella durning her bed rest.
Date: 08 Apr 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
So glad that Bella is over this let's not be friends
Date: 08 Apr 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am so glad that Edward was there to take Bella to the hosiptal. Glad that Bella let that nurse have it. That nurse was rude and un-professional. Glad that Edward is staying by her side. I am loving this story. j
Date: 08 Apr 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
i don't like nurse Rachett one bit! don't get the reference? think Jack Nicholson.....
Date: 08 Apr 2014 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm pretty curious how long it's going to take her to ask him out;)
Date: 08 Apr 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward was really taking care of Bella. I think she was a bit to harsh with him. Bella needs to watch her back at work with Mr. Newton. Charlie is definitely getting what he deserves. I am thinking that Bella just pasted out. She has not ate anything all day. She needs Edward to help take care of her.
Date: 08 Apr 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
JUST READED CHAPTER 6 4-8-14
Date: 08 Apr 2014 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved this chapter so ready for the next one !
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
Thanks good chapters
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thanks good chapters
Date: 08 Apr 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
well, Charlie is turning into an ass... Glad Edward is keeping an eye out for Bella as it appears her world is about to change
Date: 08 Apr 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
She can't figure him out
Date: 08 Apr 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
She has not had good luck in love
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
preeclampisa .. Her blood pressure got to high. I think charlie did it to himself. Edward I think is going to see her pass out and take her to the hospital.
Date: 08 Apr 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think Bella passed out from exhaustion. I do feel bad for Edward. I hope she ends up giving him a chance. Mr. Newton IS sabotaging her! First the missing file, then her car. I bet they were both him!
Date: 07 Apr 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think Newton snr is out to get Bella and will be happy to see her gone , I feel sad for Edward but maybe Bella will give him a chance soon and Charlie needs to clean up his own mess and stop relying on Bella all the time
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
E's only doing what she asked of him.
Date: 07 Apr 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
She has preeclampsia?
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
Not looking too good for Bella...
Date: 07 Apr 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it. Charlie is a selfish dick :-/
cant wait for the next update
Date: 07 Apr 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think Newton is out to get Bella. Charlie is selfish and Bella does not need to do his dirty work for him anymore. I would give Edward a chance.
Date: 07 Apr 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella being stubborn and Mr newton is looking to pin this sons crime on someone. Watch out Bella.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
He already proved himself to her. She needs to get her head out of her ass.
Date: 07 Apr 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh Edward. Bella added fruit loops to his wheaties and that just wasn't right. In Bella's defense her reasoning is valid. After all she has never led him on. Despite everything Edward has been nothing but wonderful to Bella. Ah but what will it take for her to see him as a man.
Charlie could use a little growing up. Perhaps he could follow Edward's example.
Bella sure had a crappy day. Did she ever take the time to eat? Is that what is wrong with her now. Lucky for her Edward came to the rescue yet again. :)
Date: 07 Apr 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Even though doning spermatoz is confidential. EDWARD's FATHER COULD Be A DOCTOR AND GeT AROUND THAT!and Edward living next door and all attentive is fishy to me.