Date: 07 Apr 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think Mr. Newton is an ass and not to inform Bella about a call and hiding a case file is just lowest behavior!
Charlie is an ass as well, only caring about himself:(
Edward... I'm sad she was giving him the cold shoulder - even as he changed his ways. But from what we know about Bella, she's a bit scared of what could/would happen when the baby comes. And with her upbringing, well, I'm not surprised...
Did she faint?!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bella. Mr Newton is definitely a jerk
Date: 07 Apr 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
hopefully edward and bella work things out and bella is ok
Date: 07 Apr 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 07 Apr 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Charlie needs a kick up the arse, so its just as well that ' good old Bella ' wasnt around. Maybe now he'll grow up !
Date: 07 Apr 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
Charlie is a selfish sob
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2014 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
Stupid, immature, fifty yr old baby, he sure deserve it what happened to him. Poor Bella, I think Beth she deserves of break. Can wait for the next update.
Date: 07 Apr 2014 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
Aww edward is trying to takecare of her...and is weaseling in her life lil by lil
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Soon she will be in her third trimester, and will be horny as hell. She better plan ahead.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
LMAO I love persistent Edward, he's a riot.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm start to really REALLY LOVE this story
can't wait to read more
Date: 06 Apr 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you Nikki! Feel free to update often!
Date: 06 Apr 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
He's quite persistent, but that's what you need to be like if you want something bad;)
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Drool...what a picture.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
Charlie and Edward have hit it off. And since dad has no problem with age why should Bella right? lol. Think it's funny that Charlie came to Bella to help him break up with Kate. And Edward? He is so swoon worthy.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
looking forward to more
Date: 06 Apr 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
So happy for another update!! I'm loving Edward's concern right now. Charlie would drive me to irritability.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
Your Charlie is different. He makes me laugh. Love that Edward wants to help Bella. But what will he do when there is a crying baby involved?
Date: 06 Apr 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
I like edward he doesn't take no for an answer, he will worm his way into her heart
Date: 06 Apr 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
LOL. Charlie and Edward have more in common than men so far apart in actual age should have!! Shirtless Edward is more than welcome to mow this old woman's lawn too....love the story!!
Date: 06 Apr 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is a hoot!
Date: 06 Apr 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
something tells me that his pitch to be her friend is only the tip of the iceberg. I'd like a sexy younger friend, even if I was pregnant by an anonymous sperm donor.....
Date: 06 Apr 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
Looking forwards to the next chapter
Date: 06 Apr 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
So he lives beside her. How convenient. What is Edward up to?
Date: 06 Apr 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
OHHHH I love the little banter between these two :) looking forward to seeing how their relationship grows each day.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well it's a good start. Lots of people start of as friends.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Repost .... A spelling error here or there sure can make a difference in communication, lol.
So there we have it .... the mystery of the baby daddy. Bella's history with men is not to promising. She needs a good guy. Could it be she has found one in a younger man?
And what do we think of Charlie? Hmmm. He is quite the character. He pulls no punches with what he wants. Does he seek the virtual fountain of youth or has he simply not found a woman his age that can replace the wife he lost all those years ago?
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is so damn adorkable. If he keeps at it he will get into her heart too. Besides he'd be good for her. She's just too damn serious.
*psst* has he donated any sperm lately?
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Man if a guy kept calling an older woman, i'd be pissed...even if i was older than him.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yep just friends. Famous last words.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
first shot, good for him
Date: 06 Apr 2014 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
Liking it so far, this should be a fun one.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Charlie is an ass.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
hahahaha pushed him out! that is funny
Date: 06 Apr 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Charlie is a real piece of work! Men like him are the reason that old women like me go looking for younger men! Bella should take Edward up on his offer.....
Date: 06 Apr 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
my, he is forward, isn't he? my favorite kind of man!! geez, Mike and Jessica are so stupid to think they can get away with that.....
Date: 06 Apr 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
So since I like all of your stories that I've read so far, I'm reading this one too! Love the premise.
Date: 05 Apr 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
charlie's an idiot , un fortuanately i know a few men like him ,i'm happy to be with hubs of 26 yrs
Date: 05 Apr 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Not her best day, that's for sure...
Date: 05 Apr 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 05 Apr 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Enjoying your story so far. Looking forward to more :)
Date: 05 Apr 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Looking forward to reading more
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Charlie needs to grow up
Date: 05 Apr 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loving this new one! Charlie is a piece of work! Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
Date: 05 Apr 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Charlie is hilarious.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow her dad is in denial and needs a reality check wow that was a train wreck and he needs to pay attention to his daughter not his play thing
Date: 05 Apr 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
wooooow charlie is just terrible I would be so embarrassed to have him as my dad
Date: 05 Apr 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, Charlie is an idiot! No wonder Bella has issues with men with him as her example. SMH.
Date: 05 Apr 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent start!
Date: 05 Apr 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
Not the best way to start for him...
Date: 05 Apr 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love this snarky Bella!!
Date: 05 Apr 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was so good!
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
A cocky Edward is always hot!
Date: 04 Apr 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
Lol she shoved him back out the door.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
You never say older chick to a woman...man edward you don't know how to woo the ladies
Date: 04 Apr 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
Holy shot embezzelling wooow,shot down! Bella a partner? :)
Date: 04 Apr 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am glad that Bella is in the clear on the money issues. Edward is definitely a little forward. lol. Can't wait for more.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well I hope he gets better at pick up lines. She lets her guard down.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Happy birthday;)
Thats an interesting plot you girls put out there - again something I didn't see coming;)
So Bella is pregnant already... Cute! I love that women can make those decisions on their own! But I would like to have another set of helping hands with a baby... I'm sure it's not easy to be on your own with everything...
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Mike and Jessica are pretty low to steal let alone from their family. It's a good thing Bella is so anal about her expenses. Also, Edward...SMH! LOL! :)
Date: 04 Apr 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jessica and Mike?!!! Hate to be them if and when they are caught.
Bella and Edward. My, my. The dance has begun. He is young and flirtatious. Not so much smooth as outright in his effort of seduction. She is older and wiser. Not to mention she the snarkier edge. It was fun to watch them in this chapter and one can only imagine it is going to get a whole lot better. :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hahahahaha wow he is a little full of himself but will he keep trying
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
It would be cool if he the sperm donar
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Again I'm loving this story
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
That darn Jess and Mike. It's always something...
I'm liking Edward.
Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
9, just for the time being.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Looking forwards to the next chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
He think she was just going to say yes because he was young poor boy.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really like first chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oooo new story so excited!
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG this sounds like it is going to be another good story from ya'll. I can't wait for more.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
looking forward to more
Date: 03 Apr 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
This looks so good! I'm looking forward to more. I hope they fire Jessica too. :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this already.
Date: 03 Apr 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm thinking this one will be fun.
Thanks.
Date: 03 Apr 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to read more. This sounds very interesting!!!!!!
Date: 03 Apr 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fertile Dreams has all the earmarks of a good story, Looking forward to more. :)
Date: 03 Apr 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more :)