Reviews by JKFlowers1
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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

Nice chapter I can't wait for hubby to retun to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Mr Grey he is a dumb ass, why does he never think on a personal level of His own family first? Ana i so right.  I am liking the drama, oh that office sex such a turn on.... Wonderful!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

it felt really real them bring back at Escala. All that chat about the past, the fibes are so normal and sexy, as always cannot wait for more! I am feeling a little nervous with all this Amy chat and Ana going on about CG missiing "it" though.

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Grace is so cute I can just see her pulling on Christian's sexy chest. Loved the breakfast tease and the shower scene.   As always looking forward to more!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

What excitement is on the way!  Why would he even give money fror Leila's art work.... I do not like it....can we have the more now, it is needed.  Thanks still loving this.

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

So so good. Those kids are all adorable, shell in the bowl, flour everywhere so down to earth and funny and they are still talking about their antics over the phone, they never stop.  

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

Not sure I like connatations associated with this Phylis, I hope there is no history / or situations between her sn and CG...

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

Is the date night going to be ruined or will Mr CG be his sweet, oh my god drop dead gorgeous make your stomach turn self. Nice lead into the drama.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Something does not feel right, why and what is he up to. Togo bad bad bad.

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my this so made me laugh, this book is brilliant!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Finally finished, my heart was pounding reading chapter 106; thankfully Ana found all to be well; she was so strong going to Escala I love her. It would be so good if you could get a lake night tv series of your scripts, wow it would be just wow.  I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

I just cannot wait for the next Chapter, I wish I had not read this book so quickly but I was hooked.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Chapter 12, certainly will dray tuned, I hope Mua is okay?

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

I do hope Teddy sorts himself out at school, it is heart breaking.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Oh no, Teddy off to boarding school does not sound good.  Why does CG push it so? Where is this going to go next....

 

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Great chapter and so much more to look forward to.  2 parties where will this venture... 

Merry Christmas and excited for the store in the New Year. 

Thanks.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

A club in LA sounds like it might be an interesting night. Ana's dress sounds as sexy as ever. I am loving the continuation of their lives, more please.... 

I so want to go to Portland and Seatle after reading your stories.  



Author's Response:

That's interesting because when I get blocked, I pull up the Earthcam that looks down on Seattle. It's live streaming and I look at Escala and the traffic and boats and wonder what Christian and Ana are doing.  Is Christian at work or are they at Escala or a restaurant. I know it sound silly, but it works.  I'd love to go too.

thanks.

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Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

Nice build up to the night and the food sounds delicious as always.  I have never tried oysters, since reading your work I have been craving trying them.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Well I too was worried about CG's guilt, I hope he is not hiding something else. Wow public toilet sex with Miss Kavanagh listening, what ever next...   The actor, film rights to Ana's book I can feel something risky looming from this.  Bring on the next chapter please if it is ready now!  I love it.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

I loved the normality pulling through in this chapter; the kids actions and their love woth CG is just mesmerisising. I cannot remember who Lorna Blakely was? it is coming to and end oh no!



Author's Response:

Lorna is Tommy's biological mother. 

Still a lot more to go  and probably another story  that takes us farther in the future after this.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Only Mr Grey can make going for a burger exciting! Nice chapter.

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Absolutely loved it, Ana is just wonderfull, so perfect and good for Mr god himself CG. I do not like Lorna and I am so worried where that could ge heading, I hate the fact that Christian has been to see her.   

 

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Nice, Tommy now an official Grey how lovely!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

This is so nice it reminds me of my family birthday parties. You write so enjoyably well.  Thank you!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

Only just got chance to read this, good as ever but I feel uneasy with CG trip. You are so good at keeping us on the edge of our seats. Please continue looking forward to the next episode tomorrow!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Thanks, it was a lovely surprise to just see chapter 137 when I was meant to be putting the clothes away.  Just read it, it was mind crazy to hear their conversation and antics, absolutely wonderful.  Looking forward to their next call.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

So sweet to hear CG with Grace, that little ring how nice.  I need to stop reading and save 2 chapters at a time to read, one just is not enough. But thank you it is great I cannot wait to see them visiting Sarah.

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

Oh, Bo Peep already loves CG, just like us all! Nice chapter thank you!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

just what the doctor ordered, great stuff, Tommy catching them was fun. their sexisease gets better and better. I loved it, thank you!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

Those teachers can keep their hands and thoughts to themselves. Lovely baby talk.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Yep, like everyone has said great chapter and still more suspense to keep us hooked?

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

Oh I think they so want the little girl.  To tooth brush womderful, your writing is pso good. Love it!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

I hope peep gets better and they do,take here home. Your story cuts right through every emotion, so good!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

Such a good chapter, love, sex, hilarious kids and action on its way.Mr Grey is so sexy when he is steamed up from work and dragging Ana along is brilliant. cannot wait for the next part to the stir

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Loved the chapter, they are wonderful together as a team! Looking forward to CEO mode at the meeting....

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

A few months into their relationship, Taylor and Gail spend Thanksgiving together – with Gail’s sister.


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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Taylor/Gail
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3972 Read Count: 310
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2012 Updated: 22 Nov 2012
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was hilarious.

Summary: Past Featured Story

"It's canon, Jim, but not as you know it."  This is Kate and Elliot's love story as it unfolded alongside Christian and Ana's. Ever wondered what happened on their first night together? What about those conversations between Kate and Christian in Portland? What went down in Barbados and how did Elliot get invited in the first place? And the big reveal of how much Elliot might already know about Christian's lifestyle. This story follows the plot line from Fifty Shades of Grey, with some borrowed dialogue to add authenticity, however, you need to forget all of the assumptions that you may have made about them and their relationship.  They won't exactly be OOC but they have a lot more going on than you ever knew.  Their love story is a lot more powerful than EL James ever told us.

 


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Elliot Grey/Kate Kavanagh
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45069 Read Count: 5197
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2013 Updated: 11 Jan 2014
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 If You Leave Me Can I Come Too

Actually have enjoyed this and looking forward to more...



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I hope you stick with it.  I finished this book a long time ago and getting through the edits while I write the fourth book on Mia and Ethan is time consuming, hence the inconsistency with updating.  If you want more head on over to the blog.  Sx

Back to Us by wordrunner Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

"And even though I know somewhere in his twisted heart he loved me as much as I still love him—maybe more, in some ways—I know I couldn't stand to live with him anymore. He was killing me, slowly and painfully, and I had to go."


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 205120 Read Count: 65049
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2013 Updated: 25 Feb 2016
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have just finished, thanks for adding the rest of the story. It was a magical end, I loved it, and so tearfull the complete love study.

Ana's New Roommate by carriej56 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Ana Steele is a young woman with a lot on her mind. Her career is in turmoil, her finances have taken a nose dive and her personal life revolves around her two best friends that share her flat, but things change and Ana's world could come crashing down around her... 


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Alternate Universe
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7425 Read Count: 830
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2013 Updated: 21 Sep 2013
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi, I have found it on FF, what I have read so far is so good, I am meant to bad cooking the diner!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Enjoyed, can you let me know what the story is called on FF, so I can read more of the story? Thanks

All's Fair by Greytosteele Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 161]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Christian Grey has proven himself in the business world. At thirty-one, he finds himself bored with life. The world of mergers and acquisitions no longer holds the same thrill. He wants more. Frustrated with government red tape and corrupt politicians, he decides to run for the Senate. Enter Anastasia Steele, an up and coming star in the political arena. AU fanfic.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134692 Read Count: 26481
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2013 Updated: 10 Mar 2021
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loving this, really good scene between Ana and the two Greys, the discription and sex appeal of Ana is amazing, please keep writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Check out my Pinterest page for pictures.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - She's gone

Looking forward to them making up, I enjoyed the chapter an god suspense of Christians anxiety!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - You. Are. Mine.

Oh i loved the chapter but I am worried about the tit for tat. What chemistry there is between them......

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Revelations

Oh no not another argument and that Elena I hate her.  LOOKING  forward to more......

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - I think I like you...

Really enjoying this, I cannot wait for their first kiss!



Author's Response:

Hopefully it lived up to your expectations.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - What's going on with us?

Great read; I wish Ros would bog off as we need some serious heat....



Author's Response:

It will be a few more chapters, but they'll get there.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?

Chapter 10, this was so hard to read just knowing Ana is hooking up with Eric, oh no......CG you are such an idiot X

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Piano in the Dark

Really heart warming, I loved it and am walking for more!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Coming out

Oh no that is a cliff hanger, why is CG seeing Red.  What a great girls night out, a drunk Ana who has said the 3 letter word, I cannot wait for the repeat.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confessions

I love this story, I am so glad she has told Brad that she is in love with CG.  Watching Nashville today I so needed my fix of Mr a Grey, so very happy to read your lovely update this evening.....  Bring on the next installment please!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Declarations

Lovely chapter, I so like this story. My stomach twinged when CG said those 3 words......

Sunsets by Henrika Fanfiction Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

Two people in need of change happen to meet. But what happens when they realize that their instant connection stems from their childhood? This is a story about love, fate and destiny.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 81131 Read Count: 10402
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2013 Updated: 25 Feb 2014
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Really enjoyed the chapter, so sweet CG chat with his dad. I did not like the doctor much!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Brilliant, it is going to continue.... I hope just how we like it.  

 



Author's Response:

:) Thank you! H xx

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am enjoying this story so far, it is a little different which is nice.....



Author's Response:

Thanks,  I'm happy you are enjoying it! Yes, I agree,  it's a bit different

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Very enjoyable, looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

I'm happy you are enjoying it! 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It seems weird that she is flat mate of Leila, I hope this does not mean something horrible coming up in the, story. Looking forward to Christian and Ans's first night together!



Author's Response:

To be exact she rents Leila's appartment. As for A&C being together... A few chapters to go ;) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great read, I can feel their passion, the suspense is getting to me. I wish the chapter was longer, but I am most certainly looking forward to the next one!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh yes, just what the doctor ordered, great chapter!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well, that was a pleasant meeting break; I think they need a strong tea and coffee now.  I am looking forward to Ana giving CG her Charcoal picture.  



Author's Response:

Definitely a refreshing break to the meeting :)

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This was a nice sweet chapter but I am certainly missing CG and Ana being stuck together. I hope he returns home soon!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

They are great together, so good to get home and have more chapters. Just need more now.  Thank you

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Short Stories of Christian and Ana Grey- Twenty Years Later.  No cheating.  All about the love.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156478 Read Count: 23184
[Report This] Published: 16 Dec 2013 Updated: 17 Dec 2013
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 34: The Tryst- Chapter 34

OMG, Chapter 34 The Tryst thankfully it was Ana I should have seen that coming,but totally  missed it.  I had a feeling they were going to walk into Ana being in CG's room, which would have been devastating.....

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Swan Songs- Part One - Chapter 56

What a beautiful chapter, so sad from both joy and pain, it Made me cry. The a Grey family are amazing.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Swan Songs Part Three- The End -Chapter 58

Every single short story chapter was so good and kept me hooked. Thank you 

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is a "What if" story-What if Ana said "No" to Christian immediately after seeing the Playroom for the first time. Would they find their way together or live their lives in different worlds?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72556 Read Count: 30609
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2013 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: First Date- Chapter 12

CG did seem a bit distant, can we have some more soon so we feel the that pull? I am 3/4 through your other story it is brilliant.....

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Date Two - Chapter 13

Exactly very hot, next chapter please.....

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Off the Floor - Chapter 14

I so love Ana what a perfect closing line. 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Third Time's the Charm? - Chapter 15

Hot, total sexual current. Mr Grey thanks for stopping by Ana's love nest.

 

Portal by ordlas Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Why was the house on the Sound put on the market? Christian learns the reason, with profound ramifications for him and his family.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52319 Read Count: 4675
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2014 Updated: 27 Oct 2014
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Perfect Fifth

Is there another chapter, I would like to see where this ghostly affair is heading....

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Ray Steele is a former Winston Cup winner struggling to finance and keep his NASCAR team running.  He has just got Steely, a very promising new driver.  He needs funding and sponsorship.

Enter Christian Grey, who take an interest in racing a business venture, however its the new driver that really peaks his interest.

AU, HEA, 


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Elliot Grey/Kate Kavanagh
Genre: Action, Adventure, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué, Sports
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57854 Read Count: 18458
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2014 Updated: 22 Nov 2015
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

What a women, Ana she is great....   Looking forward to hearing CG's feelings, after the steamy trailor scene.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh the supense, nice chapter. Good luck with your venture but I hope you can update soon, have missed this story!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Enjoying this different take on the story, looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

It is so nice that CG is smitten, staying the night helping Ana to relax was perfect. Good luck for your race Ana!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Another great chapter, when are the going to confess to daddy Ray?

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh I so want to go to Vegas. Nice chapter, can we have the next one now as well, want to see the world move......



Author's Response:

Vegas is Awesome :)  thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Lovely Jubbly, I hope Ana is getting Hooked.  Have a nice holiday! 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So good to see this chapter, nice one, enjoyed as usual......

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Air balloon, what a nice touch. The elavator sex, so much emotion. I then thought there was another chapter but to my disappointment 25 is empty, please update soon!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

When will yhe next chapter be up? Missing his!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wonderful, I hope she is happy!

My Life as a Sub by ordlas Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 135]
Summary: Past Featured Story

What was it like to be one of the fifteen? This is the story of a CG submissive, some time between Leila and Susannah; it takes place before Ana comes into his life.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 87651 Read Count: 29472
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2014 Updated: 17 Feb 2017
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Play time!

This is story is quite addictive, looking forward to the next episode!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Night and day

Again loved the chapter, so hot! It's great reading this stuff but so don't like the servant feeling of being submissive.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Baby I Can Drive My Car

This is going to be interesting. Speeding punishment, Mr Grey is going to enjoy that I am sure. Looking forward to the next chapter, I think.......

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Punishment

My word, that was very hot, great chapter but I feel so sorry for Severine even though she can handle it!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 8: I Can't Get No

Not a nice man, I know this is what it is all about but it is so frustrating. I am certainly looking forward to her explosion and I think it will be a big one! Thanks great chapter.

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Ragin' Cajun

I am so glad he if finding her a little interesting! Nice chapter!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: My Month in Review

Eating his complete diner off of her stomach, not quite as sensual as chocolate and cream. What is coming next, the pudding I am looking forward to this and I am sure Teebs is too.  

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: The Suspense Is Killing Me

What a girl handling that, he has got to be impressed. I hope her apartment hasn't been wreaked! Looking forward to more....

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Juju

nice one, who is after her?

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Will It Ever End?

I am glad he did not end it, they are so good together.  Really enjoyed it as usual but would love to have more to read sooner!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Piano Works

I too love seeing an update to this story. The piano scene, so hot I can just imagine that sky line..... Next chapter please now!

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Punishment Redux

Is he aware of the situ with Luke.... Not sure about his current activities and way with Serivine, I like her and she needs better?

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Ta Kill Ya

Teebs so respects the contract I really like her, I hope Mr power CG does not cancel the contract; I would love to see him jealous of Luke if something develops there....

Claiming by Lilith Blood Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

She could love me. She could even hate me. She could loathe my guts but she was not allowed to forget me. Love and hate, both can pave the path to obsession, especially when the thin line that separates them begins to blur. Warning: Dark!


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 122715 Read Count: 44801
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2014 Updated: 14 Jan 2017
Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Enjoying your storyline so far, look forward to the next episode.