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A Family Affair by nickeyd26 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

This story picks up a year after Edward and Bella were married.  He changed her on their honeymoon and there was no baby or confrontation with the Volturi.  Bella realizes as they return from a trip to celebrate their first anniversary that the Cullens have been keeping a secret from her.  Now, they want her to join in on the fun.

 

This story contains slash, fem-slash, polyamorous groupings…ah hell.  It is a damned sexual buffet.  If you are not into that sort of thing or if you are under 18, then just move along little ones.  This story is NOT for you.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11296 Read Count: 13861
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 23 Nov 2010
Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Family Affair

So I took a break from 'A Voice' to get some shiat done around the house... and I found this little fuckhot story. Panty warning needed! My husband is gonna thank you when he gets home from work!! LMAO. Gotta have a smoke.... or five!

 

 



Author's Response:

Tee hee hee. ;)  Yeah, I had a good time writing this one.  Tell your husband that he is very welcome!  My mister also gets the benefits of my reading and writing explorations.  I think that is why he never complains when he finds me on the computer.

 

Thanks for the rating and review!

Nickey

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Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 144925
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Yep thought it would be Mike! Oh I can't wait to see how you work him in to the mix!! Great Christmas Day!



Author's Response:

Don't judge Mikey too quick.  *wink*  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter! Loved Alice;s POV! Laffed outloud at her decorating the room and thinking Walmart wasn't so bad! Who is this mate?? Loved the Toys for Tots, my father is the Chairman of the Fire Fighter's Toy Drive in our city, such a great cause!
Alrighty on to the next !! Honk honk for climax!!



Author's Response:

I'm a huge supporter of Toys For Tots.  I have my kids bring some of their unopened toys to the bin each year.  They get so much from birthday parties and whatnot that they'll never use.  

Alice is a bit nuts.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OH my, this looks to be very fun!



Author's Response:

Welcome to my crazy story.  It'll be an emotional roller coaster throughout the story.  Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I was litterally shouting at my computer screen... Eddie is such a douche. I love how Alice is going on their honeymoon... seems appropriate LOL. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Edward is an absolute freak of nature.  Can you believe that Alice is actually going honeymooning with the happy couple as a chaperone?  Weird.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh wowzers. I love Esme's POV...fantastic. And who is this brother??



Author's Response:

Esme can be a firecracker, but there's a lot more lurking beneath that strong personality that'll eventually backfire on her.  You'll have to read on to find out who the brother is.  :)  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love love love how you brought Victoria, Riley and the others in. Can't wait for the wedding of the virgins!



Author's Response:

Victoria, Riley, Irina, and Laurent were all just victims of circumstance in the Twilight books.  I wanted to see what would happen if circumstances were a bit different for them.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Fantsticly, fun! Love that Victoria is Alice's new sire!



Author's Response:

That master's bite will come into play tremendously in future chapters.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am so happy that Bella realized that she had been quite selfish when it came to Jasper. What he did was really shitty, but now she knows why. As for the women... holy hell I wanted to slap 'em all. And Carlisle too.
I had one of those weddings... not mine, everyone elses. If I could do it all again, it would be on a beach! LOL. Great chapter! 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter.  I do have to warn you that the impromptu wedding will come back to bite Jasper in the tuckus.  *wink*

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I really liked having Amanda's POV. It is nice to know that she is thinking about actual things and isn't just a brain full of mush...LOL.
Drunkward was very funny!



Author's Response:

Yes, Amanda's brain is developing nicely.  Drunkward was adorable, wasn't he?  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh Oh I know who Alice's mate is!!! Or at least I think I do!! Great chapter! Love teenage Amanda!



Author's Response:

Amanda's growing up, isn't she?  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

LOVE Mike!! I have always had a soft spot for him, and I love that you aren't making him a dick! I sorta kinda feel bad for Alice and I think it was nice of Jasper to calm her. Cant' wait to see what happens next! Great writing all around, I have no idea how you keep everyone straight! I love that they are usually all in a chapter and I love all the different POVs!



Author's Response:

I could never understand why Mike Newton is so maligned in fanfic, the only thing he did was have a crush on Bella while in high school.  Alice's NPD is a serious disorder, she'll need help from everyone. Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

fabulously fun! Love Bella and Rose's time together! And I loved Emmett taking care of his family!



Author's Response:

Tennessee was great.  This chapter showcased the two couples that are closest to each other and Bella and Rose's time together does foreshadow future events.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Bahaha, Peter deserved it!!!
Totally agree with Jas[er giving Carlisle the talk. They arent little kids, and them being punished is just weird. Carlisle and Esme take the whole parent thing a little to far sometimes. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

You're right about Carlisle and Esme, and this chapter is the start of Carlisle's breaking point.  You'll see what I mean in roughly ten or eleven chapters.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Tanya and Charlotte aren't being smart at all... they are kinda selfish not thinking about how they are affecting the family. I'm thinking that the Volturi are going to step in here soon... too many incidents are being erased. Love that Eddie and Amanda are building their relationship. TOTES JASPER's WAY!



Author's Response:

Tanya and Charlotte were immature and selfish.  Tanya will be remorseful, but this is going to affect Char's relationship with Pete in a serious way.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Great chapter! Love virgin Edward he is such a teenage boy LOL. Too bad about Peter and Charlotte... but it is tru, Jasper needs to stop blaming himself. Hoping that the Rabbit isn't what bring the attention of the Volturi LOL!!!



Author's Response:

You're really hooked on the Volturi, aren't you?

 

Virgin Eddie's cute, isn't he?  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Noooo not the blonde locks!!!!!!
Great chapter! Love that you took them to Canada!



Author's Response:

I had to sheer those locks.  They were getting unruly.  Canada is great!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Love it! So happy for them, the family really does treat them so differently. Are we going to find out why? I feel bad for the guys, they really were trying to be understanding and have a talk. Esme is really pissing me off, you weren't kidding about about her personality backfiring!



Author's Response:

Yes, you will find out why eventually after Esme really goes haywire. Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Bella has everyright to be pissed, His answer was totes lame. I am guessing there is more to the Amber/Jasper relationship. Jasper just gets his mate back then royally fucks up again.That being said, I am kinda getting tired of Bella running off. I get that she is pissed, really I do, but if she wants to be treated like an adult, she needs to act like one. I think she is pretty selfish and it doesn't seem as though she is taking what Sushmita very seriously, and I think she needs to. She definately had a hard human life, but in the end she has comeout on the other side with a familty that loves her and who seem to be working on their overbearing protectiveness.

LOVE that Bella and Riley are Peter's great-grandchildren! Such a great story twist! Happy that Peter was able to find out about his past and is feeling complete!
Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Don't worry, things will all pan out soon.  Well, in a couple of years.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Soooo Maria IS the second demon!!
Fabu chapter! Great to see Bella and Jasper are getting back on track! Love that he wouldn't let her run again and that she sat down and told him where to go about the overprotectiveness. Loved the toga party and am happy that Alice is now part of the family.



Author's Response:

J and B are back on track for sure.  I told you.  They needed the time apart.  A big reason is because much of the relationship was forced upon Bella by Jasper and she was never allowed to grow up and be independent.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Hey Mama!
Thanks for fabu chapter #41! I love, love love Bella's advice to Rose. It was awesome to here her admit that you can't work on a relationship alone! Jasper and Bella have a great thing going now, hopefully the others can work on their relationships.



Author's Response:

Bella learned while she was gone from Jasper that nothing was getting resolved in her relationship.  *wink*  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

LOOOOVE IT! Love Felix and Gianna! Love Alice... too funny, glad her and Mike are working on the lovin's! Ncie to see the rift between Bella and Charlotte is starting to heal, and that Char is taking on the role to train her. I too forget that Bella is still really new, she is more human than all of them.
Getting nervous as to what is going to happen in the five years. I'm feeling some emotional chapters coming.



Author's Response:

Felix, especially, is going to be an important addition to the family.  Everyone is working on their relationships with each other.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Mother of midlife crisis' is right! Holy Hell!! I totally get why though, I think I would have one too!! LOL.
Very very sad for Emm. I can't believe he shouldered that pain all by himself for all those years. Happy to see him and Rose are working things out.

Now I have to ask... how do you keep everything straight? This story is wonderfully detailed and full of twists and major characters.
Great chapter and great writing all around!
Can't wait to see what happens next with Carlisle!



Author's Response:

It's Carlisle's time now, watch and see how he and Esme completely unravel.

 

Emmett's probably one of the strongest characters in the story.  More so than Jasper because he can think straight through his pain for the most part.

 

Somehow I manage to keep the characters straight.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Oh Esme, Esme, Esme is right... she has taken the whole mothering role to a whole new level. Clearly she is rediculously jealous of Rose and Bella. Which is ludacris... that is not what a mother does. I find it funny how she thinks that Riley is all sunshine and roses... I KNOW when push comes to shove Esme would be out the door if anything happened to between her and Bella. Seems as though her bond with Carlisle is completely gone... will Char be able to shed some light on that area?



Author's Response:

You're right on target with your deductions about Esme.  Yes, Char will definitely be shedding some light on this.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

When is Esme gonna get it through her thick-ass skull... she is not their mother... and she is losing them all quickly.
LOVE that the guests from India told her where to go when she called them her daughters. Love that Riley and PEter told her the fuck off!

The bonds of the family are incredible! I hope that Peter's future is just uncertain and he is just preparing for the worst.



Author's Response:

Esme's skull is thick, thick, thick and she forgot that blood is thicker than venom--meaning maligning Bella isn't doing her any favors with Riley and Pete.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Fantabulous chapter Mama!!
Sush's soul readings were amazing. I wasn't surpirsed that everyone was feeling love and concern for Bella. The family has grown leaps and bounds and are all on the same page. I truly hope that Esme is able to find happiness and join them once again. I think she will see what she has been missing if she does.

Good God Jasper IS  one horny toad! LOL, I always kinda thought Riley would be high maintenance when it came to his appearence. He does so much for everyone else so he deserves it!



Author's Response:

I hope the soul readings shed a lot of light.  As for Esme, she has a long way to go.

Riley is the ultimate metrosexual.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

LOVE IT!!! Esme got what she deserved and that includes a new mate. I feel bad for Alistar he was only doing what he thought was right. Love Bella and Carlisle's relationship and am happy to see that he is doing well in his new life.
Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Esme needs help, lots of it, and she's lucky that Riley's such a caring person.  

Carlisle is finally living life on his own terms.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

LOVE Chelsea and how she screwed around with the Volutri's bonds!Yea for Rex and Tanya!! Can't wait for the weddings! My, My that Carlisle is a horny devil!!



Author's Response:

If you think Chelsea is nutty now, just wait until the next chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Change them!! CHANGE THEM NOW!!!



Author's Response:

I take it you like Tony and Claude?  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74032
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions

Hey Nickey,

Sorry this is the first time you are hearing from me, but I just read and read!
Love this story so far! You are an amazing writer, and pull me right in to the story. I can picture them in the meadow. And speaking of the meadow, I may not have cried, but I definately felt all of the emotion.

Waiting eagerly for Bella to heal, so they can get to living! I am hoping that Emmett and Rose return soon to see their sister and the others!

I will do my damnedest to review more often!
Cheers,
April

 



Author's Response:

April,

Thanks so much for the review.  I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Picking Up The Pieces

Hey Nickey,

What a great reunion!! Love Emmett! So happy that Rose and Bella are in track!

Carlisle is one great guy! Glad that Charlie is doing well, and that time has helped him heal.

Great chapter all around!
Cheers,
April



Author's Response:

April,

Thanks so much for the review.  I hated sending Emmett away, but I loved bringing him back!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Which Life To Choose?

Hey Nickey,

Fabu chapter! Ohhh Kate, kate, Kate! So this will be what tests their relationship. Can't wait to see what Bella choses to do!!



Author's Response:

April,

Ok, so don't shoot me when you see Bella's reaction. {Hides behind laptop with bottle of wine}.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- The Witches of Alaska

Oh those bitches!!!
I completely forgot about Irina and Laurent. Rose rocks the sox, and I hope this doesn't set Bella back too far.

Oh course.  You know, you are not the only one who loves her.” - - love it!!

Great chapter, can't wait for Kate to try her action and get shut down!!!



Author's Response:

I love, love, LOVE writing Rose the protector.  But I also love the three Cullen men standing as a united front against the bitches!  I just love that visual.  Granted it would be better if they were all standing there shirtless with well worn 501's on...but that would have been out of character for THAT particular scene.  ;)

Thanks for the review my friend.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills

Ahhhhhhhhhhh, FINALLY!!
Bring on Bella's reaction!!

Loved the Karaoke! Jasper singing Achy Breaky was amazing! Sooo much hotter than mullet-toting-hightop-sporting Billy Rae!!!

Till next time!



Author's Response:

LOL.  I loved the karaoke part too.  Thanks for the rating and review.

 

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart

Hey Nickey!
Damn you and your cockblocking ways!!! We need some action!!!
Kate is going to make a complete fool of herself, I CAN"t WAIT!!!!
Great chapter!!!
April



Author's Response:

April,

I know, I know, I am an evil cockblocker...but not forever.  I promise.  Just keep reading.  I do not think you will be disappointed.

Thanks for the review!

Till next  time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- To New Beginnings

SOoooo worth the wait!! 

Love, love, LOVE that Carlisle doesn't coddle her. Edward would never have taken her skiing.  Maybe it is the fact that he is more comfortable with his nature, I don't know but what ever it is, I think that Carlisle is better for Bella in a way. Loce his reaction to Kate, and that he wouldn't let Bella shrink away.

Guessing we are going to see more of the three sparkly bitches, and I hope that Bella is turned by the time they return, that way not only can she shield herself from Kate's zappy hands but she can kick her ass too!!

Cheers,
April



Author's Response:

Oh, Bella and I have big plans for those three sparkly bitches.  Don't you worry. ;)

You hit the nail on the head.  Edward was never comfortable with Bella.  He did not trust himself much more than he trusted Jasper with a cup of O-.  Carlisle has been amongst humans for 3x as long as Edward had.  Being in a hospital setting, he also had daily practice at keeping his touch the perfect pressure.  Not only that, but he has been exposed to Bella's blood and knows he can treat her if she is injured without losing control.

Thanks for all the reviews hon!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Loving A Vampire 101

Perfect!

I assumed Carlisle wouldn't have any issues with his bloodlust (any story I have read with a B/C pairing he hasn't, and the thought never crossed my mind that he would in yours), but I really like that he did. Jasper was spot on, and I love that he was the reasoning voice to Carlisle, usually it is the other way around!!

Fantastic writing Lady!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much April!  See, I have to disagree with the other fics.  Carlisle may have amazing control, but he is still a vampire and a man.  His cravings can sometimes get the best of him. ;)  And don't tell me that you don't love a Carlisle that let's his beast out to play now and again...

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Yes

*TEAR*
And not for the proposal (although it was very romantic!)

When I was young my Grandparents always had a tree trimming weekend. It was a bigger production then any other holiday (except Christmas). We would all go out (30 of us!) and chop down a tree. They too had very high ceilings, and I always remember my favourite uncle getting up on the ladder to hang the lights. The staircase was also next to the tree and us grandkids would line ourselves on the steps and decorate that way. It was tradition for me, being the eldest grandchild, to hang the star on the top. And with our changing family, we do not do that anymore. I just lost that favourite uncle last month and that is one of my greatest memories of him!
Thank you for the memory!!

 

Now for my one complaint.... ABBA??? REALLY?!?!?

LOL great chapter Nickey, love that Carlisle and Bella are taking it slow.
Cheers,
April



Author's Response:

April,

Hey!  Don't diss on the Abba!  I love to listen to them when I am cooking. ;)

Thanks for sharing your wonderful memories with me.  I'm sorry to hear about your uncle too.  It is never easy to lose someone who is such a permanant part of our hearts.  When I was younger my mom and I did the lion share of Christmas tree decorating.  She died when I was 10 and now 24 years later, they are still some of my most treasured memories.

Thanks for the lovely review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder

MERRY CHRISTMAS !!!
Wowzers, do we get some panties as a gift?



Author's Response:

No, but you can go comando for the holidays...just a suggestion. ;)

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish

Fabu Chapter!! What a great moment for Bella and Jasper! So sweet of Bella to have Emmett walk her down the isle!
Love the toys and Alice's gift to Bella!

“Oh my God!  My ears!  It’s Jesus’ birthday for Christ’s sake!  None of that talk in front of the baby Jesus!” - - Laughed out loud and woke my child LOL.

Can't wait for SPRING!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO!  Sorry about your little one's interrupted sleep, but that is one of my favorite lines too.

Thanks for the review sweetie!

Till next time

Nickey