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Bio:
Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Not sure who is complaining about the wait - I reckon its brilliant that you update weekly - some of the stories I read take way longer than that.... and take it from another Mum who doesnt even TRY to find spare time to write.... You are doing a brilliant job :-)
Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21773
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Love it - Bever read this story line before - please continue BUT you must go and fix this line - you have written CAN instead of CAN'T which I am sure you meant
"You were right; I saw it on her face the minute the words came out of my mouth. I do not think…I can leave now, not at least until I know she will be okay. So forget what I said watch her every move and text me so I can keep her safe."
Author's Response:
the line is right he tell Alice that:
I do not think…I can leave now. Which means Yeah, he is stupid enough to think he can still leave once she sees the light of his reasoning! not if she was a typical teenager whos feeling are hurt!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Um Duhhh - now re reading ithat sentaance again you are right... I hope u r continuing - its very good!
Cheers
Cathy
Author's Response:
Yes i am currently writing the next chapter with my beta so we should have it ready soon. Thanks so much!