Reviews by DaizyC
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Wolf-Shifter and Earth Witch, Bella Swan, moves with her father to Forks, Washington to join the "Midnight Sun" Wolf Pack. After almost 21 years of living in hiding in the human world, Bella struggles to find her place amongst the Pack. There is so much she doesn't know or understand. Will she ever find her place when so many are against her? And why does she have such a strong connection to the pack's Beta, Edward? Will they both learn to follow their instincts, or will they simply be too stubborn?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Mate Series
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105198 Read Count: 32341
[Report This] Published: 07 Oct 2019 Updated: 16 Jan 2020
Reviewer: DaizyC Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 21: A Council Meeting

I love the story. Its really well written⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐.  But I feal a bit cheated. The story isn't over. It's not completed. I know some when the publish(this is publish quality ❤️❤️) then they put the story in more then one book. Often because the story is to long, to get more money or because it has some good natural endings. This is definitely not that. I really feel cheated because it doesn't feel like a good place to end the book. I hope you don't take this as a bad thing it isn't. I just try to tell that if I had payed for it I would need a little bit more before I would not feel annoyed... And it's not a oh I better buy the other book kind of annoyed. But more a... They are trying to cheat me kind of way. This is really a good story. Hope you will get published one day if that what you wish for🤞 thank you for letting me read your story for free. I loved it. Best of luck to you. 



Author's Response:

Hi there! Thank you for leaving a review! I've been trying to prepare my readers through the authors notes, but I do get what you are saying. If I do publish (something that isn't really a priority right now), I will definately think about it. For me I felt like the book needed a shift. Hope you enjoy book 2!