Reviews by jenniroxy
Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72878
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: jenniroxy Signed
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm glad you continued also. I'm an angst wimp so I'm surprised I started this and had no idea where it was headed. Idk what you have in mind for the sequel but I'm there. Excellent writing and story. Thank you for sharing 

Reviewer: jenniroxy Signed
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Thank god!! I'm so glad she got justice altho I don't think this will be over for her :( Thanks for updating here. Happy to see you writin again!

Summary:

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Dancing with the Devil cost Bella a piece of her soul. Will she earn her redemption? Or be lost forever. Sequel to Carlisle's Gift.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76020 Read Count: 33911
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2015 Updated: 27 Aug 2022
Reviewer: jenniroxy Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Happy to see you back. Hope there's eventual happiness for Bella and Edward and everyone 

Reviewer: jenniroxy Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

WHAT THE F......

Reviewer: jenniroxy Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So glad that Jasper is there for her, even if she's reluctant to it. She does need to talk to Edward but I completely understand that talking to anyone about what she went through would be hard, especially if they don't know where she's coming from or if they care for her and maybe in her own way she's protecting him from hearing what she went through. Hope Bella and Edward make it out together on the other side 

Reviewer: jenniroxy Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Poor Bella. I feel horrible for her and all the girls. Ill be here for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: jenniroxy Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm intrigued to see what's gonna happen here. I hope we can get more glimpse into Bella and Edwards relationship and see Bella heal. 



Author's Response:

probably not, but I might write it as an outtake.

Reviewer: jenniroxy Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Leah is beyond help in my opinion. I know she went through a lot more than a lot actually but I can't help but kinda hate her and the way she's treating Bella. I'm hoping Bella will be ok. Very curious where this story is going 

Reviewer: jenniroxy Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Aww this broke my heart. I thought maybe they were steering in the right direction just to have the chapter end this way. :( I know it won't be easy and with everything Bella is feeling and going through I can't blame her for wanting to be Edward's main concern and for feeling jealous. I feel terrible for them both but mostly Bella, obviously. Ready for the next chapter. Thank you for writing this. 



Author's Response:

There are a lot of layers to work through here for sure. Thank you for reading and reviewing.