Reviews by Trekgeezer
Summary: Past Featured Story

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.

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MT came in at #5 on the top ten stories completed in March 2020 as voted by visitors of www.twifanfictionrecs.com. Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 51167
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2011 Updated: 31 Mar 2020
Reviewer: Trekgeezer Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Well, now that I've read all 29 chapters pretty much (almost) without stopping, cuz I just couldn't put it down, I don't know what to say except, WOW! This is a really amazing story. I never realized what a person who is victimized in this way goes through afterward. It's not something you can understand if you haven't experienced this kind of trauma. You did an incredible job of laying it out there in a real way. The relationship between these two is sometimes shocking; the extent of their feeling for one another. Well, now I am absolultely in need of the next chapter! I think that the two of them need to continue to see the doctor to work through their issues, although, some of them are supernatural in nature and cannot be discussed in her presence. She asked the question that pretty much summed it up: Who takes care of Edward? Maybe now he will let her take care of him the way he takes care of her. If he can allow this even before she is changed, well, that would really be something. Thank you so much for writing this story. I cannot imagine what it has taken for you to be able to do this. It could not be easy for you. You are an excellent writer. Thank you, thank you. Congrats on the job! Sounds like it's a really interesting one. I wish you all the best.



Author's Response:

Thank you so, so much for your kind review. It means a lot. Tackling this subject in a real way is important to me, even though it's not an easy one to read or write. Thank you for taking the journey with me and these characters. It's nice to hear from someone who appreciates its sensitivity. 

And I liked your comment about it really being something for Edward to let her take care of him even before she's changed. That's something that I felt wasn't done well in the books. The characters and their relationship wasn't developed enough. Being physically equals is one thing but Edward and Bella also needed to grow and strengthen their relationship internally as well and it needed to happen BEFORE Bella was changed. It seemed as if SM felt that having Bella physically his equal solved all their problems. But there was much more to it than that in my opinion. 

Thanks again for reading and reviewing. 

xoxox

~Lisa

Reviewer: Trekgeezer Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great first chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Summary:

 

He walked down the shore and that was when he saw her. She glowed under the light of the setting sun, her dark hair tousled by the sea wind. He couldn’t help but notice how exquisitely beautiful she was. As he walked closer to her, he noticed her tears and heard her cry. Written for Fandom 4 Autism.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8350 Read Count: 1317
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 12 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Trekgeezer Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a sweet story. So lovely. Thanks.

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: Trekgeezer Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Meeting Isabella Swan

Well, this is a great start. Looking forward to more. Thanks.



Author's Response:

sorry for the late response and thank you for the review.