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I like to read and I like to write and I particularly love to play with Stephanie Myers Twilight characters.
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My life drastically changed after I saw an ad online; I still cannot believe that I answered it! I never expected it to turn out like this, but anything was better than before. When the pain became too much to bear; I realized that love heals.
This is a BDSM story A/H E/B HEA
Beta'd by: RAH070890
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21554 Read Count: 112988
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I have just read this from the start. Personally I find such short chapters irritating, but I know others prefer them so I'm not complaining too much!
I think the idea of a father allowing his daughter's rapists to go free like in this story is very implausible without there being some other factor that (presumably) will come out in the next few chapters. The love at first sight I get, sort of, but the auction, when Bella was set OK and had an 'in' to find a Master more openly and able to exercise choice I don't understand.
So far not too much BDSM taking place. Are the other memebers of Edward's family in the lifestyle or just aware of Edward's choice?
I liked the twist of having Aro involved in Bella's kidnapping - I didn't see that one coming at all!
MB