Penname: Toolman [Real name: Dan
Member Since: 01 Dec 2013
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Summary: 
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29581 Read Count: 26677
Alice, Bella, and Rosalie have been picked up in a scoop of humans by the Volturi to be used as slaves and for various businesses they have in their dealings with humans. Bella and Rose are chosen as sex slaves, while Alice is chosen to be eventually changed for the bureaucracy due to her potential for see the future. What will happen to them?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29581 Read Count: 26677
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Toolman Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Date: 03 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
This story is incredibly mixed up. I'm unsure where I am when I start a new chapter. I think the concept is good but the writing and the grammar and the first person, third person narratives are all very poor.