Poor Bella! Or should I say Elizabella?

I hope that where ever Renee is she is living a nightmare too, it'd only be fair. Poor Charlie must be going out of his mind at their disappearance....well at least I hope he's noticed by now. I daresay he's the only person that can help her now (unless Edward's lurkng in the wings waiting to be a hero!)....guess I"ll have to wait to see!

Okay, I feel a strong need to go shower and scrub my skin raw *shudder*. Aro definitely has the market cornered on being an absolute creep.

Interesting that his view is that sex isn't to be enjoyed and only to reproduce. I can see how it is easy for a woman to not take enjoyment, but how on earth would a man take no enjoyment from a climax? I shudder to think what mind fuckery goes on to ensure this!

Poor Elizabella, I hope Aro doesn't take his anger at his uncontrolled lustful thoughts out on her.

Hmmm, so if they don't bare Aro's child they aren't considered "chosen", but do they get punished for it? And what on earth did Tanya do to get sent away and did she do so in a body bag?

Urgh, going to take that shower now. Love it ladies!

Oh and "I GOT MY ALERT"!

Dirty skeezy old man got right off on that punishment of poor Edward. I'd like to take that belt to his privates and follow it up with a decent caning, well if I could find the small item that is!

So Bella had a tiny flashback, her memory is in there struggling to be released from it's prison. Hope is not lost!

Poor Edward, not sure who to trust and he seems to be doubting those right now that he shouldn't. I just worry this guard scenario is another setup. Hopefully Edward can get to Elizabella soon, the longer Aro has her in his clutches the more chances of Bella losing herself forever.

Damn, I want to live in that cabin! It's gorgeous! Even better if Edward was living there too! ;)

Jacob to the rescue! I hope! Really hope he is clean and free from the clutches of James. I'm just waiting for your twisted minds to reveal that he's under his thumb! You must admit, you've thrown us through several loops this story!

I'm glad Bella got to tell him that she loved him. Alice & Jasper are just too adorable and Victoria seems like she's slowly starting to heal, even if she does have setbacks now and then.

I really hope they got to deal Lauren her punishment BEFORE they shut the school, stupid nosey cow!

Ok, I kinda got distracted from all the fuckery in this chapter from having the image of Edward in handcuffs thrust into my cerebal cortex. Of course said handcuffs were attached to my bedhead.

Anywho.....

Thank god his phone somehow managed to get dislodged. I wonder if it was from Bella's spectacular knee to the groin moment? We just have to hope that they can get to them before James realises it's missing and jams the signal somehow.

Poor Edward, what an emotional wreck. At first I wanted to snicker at his apparently sex change to girl, but seeing as though he just had his worst nightmare come true I overlooked the hysterics akin to a tween missing out on Taylor Swift tickets.

If/When they manage to capture James, I've got dibs on belting out some tunes on his cock cage with a pair of drumsticks. I think I'll start with Little Drummer Boy.....snicker.....

This was a great chapter ladies! I love how Bella has finally come into her true stretngth, standing up to James is a starting step for her healing.

I really hope Jacob allows Carlisle to take James to Aro. Though would that make them no better than James? Hmm, interesting ethical dilemma. I agree with Carlisle, the justice system and dodgy lawyers would no doubt allow him to get out of true punishment. I don't think there is any hope for rehabilitation for him which jeapordizes all of their lives.

*unfurls a long cat o' nine tails furnished with metal spikes* Mind if I help out on Aro's punishment team? <insert evil cackle here>

*claps hands loudly in a standling ovation before bringing fingers to mouth to wistle in appreciation, only to be distracted by left over chocolate on them*

That was a fantastic finale to an amazing journey! Thankyou for giving us all a ride...wait, that didn't come out right, you know what I mean!

I love that you kept the ending realistic, the fact that it's taken 8 months with 6 of them in therapy plus the support of friends to get Bella and Edward to a place where they are happy and trusting enough to reopen that side of their life. Also that they did infact need that part of their life still.

I can't believe it's all over red rover. :( At least there's still VO to keep me gnawing on my fingernails *claps hands gleefully*

Love you guys!

You've just combine my two great loves - The Tudors and Twilight! I have I told you how much I love you lately bb???

I am hoping her Italian Tony is none other than Prince Edward Anthony ;)

OMFG, I almost keeled over in hysterics when "Moonbeam" entered the scene. Hysterical! I am almost cringing in what this cleansing ceremony will be. It's such a shame Edward isn't there for it, it would have been interesting to hear how many expletives would escape him during that meet and greet moment!

Woah, that one chapter has me floored! Take your time bb, this story's gonna be worth it!

Love it! I saved it for after I had seen Deathly Hallows (Part 1), as I knew it would probably skew my view of these two!

Can't wait to read more of this awesomeness!

Who doesn't love a bad boy, even if he's a bit of a sleeze. Though you've got to be impressed with the scoring of twins!

Oooh, great twist. Poor Bella, and oh her poor parents! Can't believe her mother was drained from her skull....shudder!

I must admit I snickered like a 10 year old at the "ejaculated" line! Yeah, didn't long for the snickering to become cringes and gasps.

Loved it!!!!!! Great work guys!