Well at first I thought 'No shit a Domme wouldn´t accept to be bossed aroud by her sub. how could she write that?' I´m relieved that this was just a dream.

I think the punishment was acceptable for the crime, why shouldn´t he clean up want he made dirty? But I think that a real Domme wouldn´t stop a sub from a real punisment after she had talked about it ("You will clean them and afterwards you will deal with my punishment... "), even if the sub would be very sorry, he would still have to deal with the consequences. But that could have been just Edwards idea of this lifestyle/ of a scene...

And to you don´t let you be pushed into something by reviews that isn´t your intention for this story, after all you are the Domme of this!

Happy spanking to you.

I´m glad that you decided to show how Edward was introduced into BDSM. I really loved the chapter and your style of writing.

I found a sentence that didn´t make sense. I think that you ment different words but wrote the same. Because I´m not a native speaker I don´t know which. But heres the sentence: "I felt both appealed and appealed by his advancement, and I decided to save the card for later considerations and just get wasted."

About one thing I´m unsure. I don´t know if a good Master would slap a submissive across the face while the sub still wears a gag, because the straps of the gag would be slapped as well and this could cause injuries.

Can´t wait for the my spanking even though I reviewed and looking forward for the next chapter ;)

Have been waiting for this chapter and you haven´t disappointed. The guy on guy action was really tasteful. I liked it that edward came back from the Dom impression in the scene, so that´s what kept it real about his natural submission.

Without your a/n in the end I would have thought that Tanya just used the small letter because these people were submissives. It is a normal thing in BDSM that submissives don´t get big letters. I think it has nothing to do with being bitchy there. That´s what made me wonder why Carlisle didn´t used small letters, but your A/n clarified that.

About the pushing Edward to safe word. I don´t like the idea. That just showes that Tanya doesn´t care one bit about Edward. I would rather see Tanya explaining about seth, because BDSM is about faith and trust, so she should trust Edward that he understands her situationand is okay with this. She wouldn´t lose her good reputation far quitting with a sub, but making him safe word would be. So maybe you could fabricate a scene which doesn´t make Edward safe word but where he notice that something isn´t right and they could talk about it. Just if you don´t plan on something in the future where this bad experience (and I believe it would be a bad one for Edward) is of use, than I didn´t say anything.

And last but not least about the not reviewing:

that is really sad that people who read this story and who liked it (which would be the case if they read more that 2-3 chapters), don´t reply to your ideas. I understand that you are angry with them, but don´t let that get you down.

Spanks alot ;)

I really loved Edwards POV. I wanted to strangle Tanya. I´m looking forward to see what will be the consequenses for her and the Carlisle POV about this (you promissed an insight in his thoughts :) ).

I loved what you made Bella do. This was very considerate and shows where your story will go from here. So now I´m going to answer your e-mail.

Spanks a lot.

Swoon... nice chapter. I really liked the break of drama.

I cringed when I read that Edward wore jeans and a fitting shirt. That must have hurt like a bitch on his raw skin. And I don´t know if I would be able to sit in a car after such a session even with the oil and massage.

Looking forward to the smut.

Happy spankings ;)

The chapter was worth the wait. I really liked the chemestry between Bella and Edward.

I was glad that they didn´t start a BDSM relationship when they didn´t talk about their limits in this chapter. I think it´s really important that Edward can learn how to trust again.