Reviews by BellaFanatic
Bella Voce by Morgan Locklear Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Past Featured Story

bella Voce

Paris 1891: Bella is a popular stage vocalist and theatre owner. She's also a very powerful vampire. Edward is a piano teacher who attends one of her performances and captures her attention. Together they explore the Bohemian Revolution and each other

Banner by Mina

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 208805 Read Count: 3654
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2011
Reviewer: BellaFanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Theatre of the Night

You definitely have me intrigued. First story I have read that basically has the roles reversed. I rather like the idea that Bella is the stronger personality so far in this story. It will be a nice change of pace for me.

The other thing that I'm looking forward to is your story-telling. If your work is anything like SR's work in UoEM, then you will have a reader for life (or until you stop writing). ;)

Now on to the second chapter!

Reviewer: BellaFanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Theatre of the Mind

Great history of the characters. I really liked the flashbacks throughout the story, it helped give more insight into the emotions involved with the current moments. Not much to say yet as we are still learning about the characters, but I can already tell that I am going to enjoy this story.

Regarding the discrepancies that you mention in your A/N: I personally will never point out discrepancies in any story because the stories are fiction and you, as an author, are at liberty to write whatever pleases you. I am here only to read in awe & enjoy the story.

You have definitely gained a reader for life (or until you stop writing) just from the two chapters that I have read so far. ;)  Thank You!

Looking forward to chapter 3 & the possibilty of learning Edward's history next.

Reviewer: BellaFanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Up In The Air

Brilliance once again. Love the sibling rivalry between Rosalie and Edward. Absolutely loved the part when the lightbulb went on for Esme & Carlisle and they both yelled at the same time "Rosalie Lillian!".  Laughed so hard.

Wow the ending of this chapter...didn't expect for that to happen. Guess I expected Edward to find out more about Bella further in the story. This will be interesting now on how the story will unfold.

Thank you for your dedication to this story. Look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I know you!  We tweet all the time!

You are the only one who has reviewed on this site and you've reviewed all three chapters so thank YOU for YOUR dedication.  I can't wait for you to read Chap 4.

 

MOG