Reviews by edward4life
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella has always been the odd one out, never having many friends.
College life could turn that all around. But her friendship with Edward Cullen
might not be exactly what it seems. Does the shy, sweet Edward have a secret?
AH, OOC, DARK

 

My very dear friend (and beta) made this video for me! I LOVE IT! THANK YOU BB!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InDa53qyRhY

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96619 Read Count: 12762
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 13 Jul 2010
Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Everywhere I Turn

i love mace great story



Author's Response:

Yay, I'm glad you love Mace, cause I do too lol :)

Thanks so much for reviewing!!

Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Aftermath

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I really appreciate your reviews :)

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

great chapter and story. plz continue soon



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Here's a little teaser for the next chapter! I hope to have it out on Friday. ^_^


Bella sat, swinging on the Swan's back porch, watching as Jack and Charlie played with his new pool and water slide. She smiled as she got to see a side of her father that she had never really seen before. She didn't remember much when she was Jack's age and when she was older, it was all of the arguments and tension in the house that she recalled, none of the fun times. After Renee left, Charlie continued to throw himself into his work. 

Now, it was like he was getting a second chance. It was amazing how much this little boy had changed all of their lives.

Just then, Bella felt something whiz past her head and then splatter against the wall, wetting her slightly. She looked back at the pool to see Charlie doubled over in laughter and Jack grinning.

"Nice one, Jack," Charlie managed to get out through his laughter. She watched as Jack reached down into the water and pick up another water balloon.

"Don't do it, Jack," she tried to say in a warning tone, but could barely hold back her own giggles. She was up and squealing as he let the balloon fly towards her. 




Also, just to let you know, I submitted a pic from this part of the chapter on http://pictease.blogspot.com, which get put up on Mondays! 

There should also be something completely different from this story on Teaser Mondays at http://www.fictionators.com/

Thanks again for your review and giving my baby a chance!    <3

 

Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

omg great chapter. plz write a chapter about how edward felt when he saw jasper come in the house and all... plz update soon



Author's Response:

{There is indeed an Outtake in the works for an EPOV of Bella & Jack's first three days in Chicago!}

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

wow. haha i love the ending. what a way to ask someone on a date



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

 

Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: re live and be damned

wow. great great great chapter. i really love this story

Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: preface

great chapter. i love this story.

Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: lost, hurt, pain, and acceptance

wow. great chapter. i love this story

Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: so close but so far away

great chapter. plz continue soon

Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: story teller

wow. great chapter. i love this story. plz update soon

Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: lost

wow. great update. im a bit suprised that edward would let bella leave so easily. especially when he idd so many things just to get her. I wonder what would happen if edward gets bella back in his life

Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: head start

wow. great update plz update soon

Exclusively by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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WINNER - TEXTS FROM LAST NIGHT CONTEST - hosted on Fanfiction.net

 

Edward was a sexual predator. The bars and clubs of Manhattan were his hunting ground. Would he let the ultimate prize slip through his fingers?


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22733 Read Count: 2971
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 31 May 2011
Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Exclusively Bella's POV

great chapter.



Author's Response:

It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)

http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617

Luv BBxx

ruins by sinister thing Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

isabella is the forth oldest child out of 13. she loves her life, in her small village and beautiful house.

her siblings are forced to flee their beloved village making them go and live with their uncle.

but when the same troubles come not all of them make it to freedom, and they meet the reason behind their trouble.

please read and tell me if i should keep going with this story

stories/11921/images/ru.jpg


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7453 Read Count: 2303
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2010
Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: ??? hold on!

wow. great update. i love this story, plz update soon

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

great update. plz update soon

Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

wow. great update. plz update soon

Summary:

Just gonna stand there and watch me burn Well that's all right because I like the way it hurts Just gonna stand there and hear me cry Well that's all right because I love the way you lie I love the way you lie - Love the way you lie by Eminem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1919 Read Count: 342
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2010
Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Love the way you lie

wow. just wow. thats great.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

It mean's so much that you took the time to R&R!

Love,

Caitie

oxoxoxooxoxoxoxooxxoox

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129740
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

i absolutely love it. i hope u update real soon. i would love to read edwards pt of view on what he thinks about bella once he realizes what hes doing.



Author's Response:

Thank you! =)

I'll see if we can add an Edward's POV in there.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing. We appreciate it.

 

Summary:

cam

Edward is an Incubus, Obsessed with an impending war with the Volturi Coven.  Although he is powerful, he isn't powerful enough to take over their reign by himself. He cultivates a plan secretly using women around the world a to carry his seed, breeding hybrid warriors, that will train and aid him in his quest to over-throw Volterra. The time is comming near to take the vampire community by storm, yet the one thing he can not continue with-out, is a male heir. He will stop at nothing to find a vessel strong enough to bear his son, Unfortunately for Bella.....she just may be the one....

Warning! Contains: Very graffic content.  Sex, Violence, Murder, Blood and Guts,Somnophilia,Biastophilia,Extreme Darkward and other characters, Morbidness.

If you have some sort of hero complex and can't deal with the above issues, don't read this, keep it moving, find another fic.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23561 Read Count: 15645
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 25 Dec 2011
Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Of Blood And Ice

hey. im kinda confused as well. i love ur story. i really wanted to know if edward had found bella. did you rewrite the story? it seems that way. anywayz. love ur story. plz continue soon



Author's Response:

yeah i'm redoing you know. grew as a writing and all that good shit lmao. every chapter will be different

Reviewer: edward4life Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: All ABout Losh!

i hope u post the cambion futuretake