Reviews by Kathmart
Relentless by StillDreaming85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 576]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by OTB

Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185510
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2014 Updated: 16 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2014 Title: Relentless

Hope Edward does the right thing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. The next chapter is with my beta x x

The Devil In Me by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

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Banner made by Fallingsnow Winter 

 

The devil is charming, sweet and manipulative and he always get's what he wants no matter the cost. A dark story of love. ON HOLD UNTIL AUG 2016.

 

And StillDreaming85

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English, French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58663 Read Count: 52217
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2014 Updated: 19 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am so hook with this story. Thank for another great chapter.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I can't wait for the next chapter. Again great story.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hope Alice keeps Bella away from Rosalie.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Hope Mr Mason saves her. Another great chapter.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This is a great chapter. Thank you so much. Can't wait to find out what Rosalie is up to.

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109440
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OMG!!! Great story. Love the roller coaster ride. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Hope Edward will find them soon

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Glad the baby survive

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Your a great writter and will definetly buy a copy.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Can't wait 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Beautiful chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Glad they finally  kiss!!!again, great story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great moments. Love how this story is going. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Glad Bella and Rosalie made up. Love your story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I can't wait for them to get married. Another great chapter..

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it!

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm hook on the story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Your a great writer

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Your a great writer

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love it

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love it

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Just keep falling in love with the story 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love it!!!!!!

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love the story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OMG!!! Can't believe he did that. Great chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Another great chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Lol poor Edward 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Another great chapter.

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

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Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97779
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So can't wait for the next chapter. So happy Bella is starting to forgive Edward. Great story 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This is a great chapter. Please,please make sure Ronnie is alive.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope Bella forgives him. Love the story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter, hope all will be okay. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

OMG what a cliffhanger, can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Another great chapter. I hope Bella stays.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OMG!!! Wonder what her present is. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Such a great story. I'm so happy the Bella talked to Nona.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love your story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I love this story 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Your are such a great writer. I love this chapter and how Bella realize what she did. Thank you hope this story never ends. Really love the characters and the story. 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This is such a cliffhanger. Great chapter. Great author, ease don't let us hang for a long time 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Perfect ending. Thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 479009
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: Kathmart Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Love your story.

Summary:

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A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126193
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the story. 

Summary:

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Summary: After her parents are murdered, Bella and her brothers flee to the protection of their Godfather. When Bella discovers information that puts her life at risk, her only choice is to marry a man that she hates. Edward is a hard man, one that wants nothing to do with his reluctant bride. Can this pair ever learn to love each other...before their enemies destroy them? AH E/B


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25286 Read Count: 66592
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Can't wait

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Glad they are finally sharing their feelings

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love it. Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love Edward and his temper.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Can't wait!! Love this chapter

Star Crossed by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 418]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She was the leader of her people. 

He was a gruff, by-the-book star ship captain. 

An interstellar war, negotiations for a peace treaty gone wrong and a taboo relationship between two species. 

Captain Edward Cullen was in charge of the starship, Volvo. He, along with his crew, were given a mission to deliver Empress Nirabelle of the Cygnarian people to the nearby planet of Lapus, to negotiate a treaty between their two worlds. For over a millennia, they have been fighting a vicious battle. For what? They don’t even know. It’s ingrained in their minds and their history. 

The Empress is to meet with the Crown Prince of Lapus, Jakob. The Volvo is transporting her and her envoy, Maralice to the planet. There are strict rules in place for the Empress’s transport. She is to not have any contact with any males on the ship, per the cultural norms of Cygnarian society. The trip should take as little time as possible and if no headway has been made within one day of being in orbit, Captain Cullen is to transport the Empress from the planet’s surface. 

However, something goes terribly wrong on Lapus. One communication to the Volvo and a brief face-to-face conversation forever changes the future of the Empress and Captain Cullen. 

Will they survive this threat or are the Star Crossed lovers doomed before they even have a chance?

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Banner by Chandrakanta!!

 

Star Crossed

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Banner created by Mina Rivera! Thank you!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206436 Read Count: 82046
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2014 Updated: 26 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loving this story. So different and I love it.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Aysy (Bella) and The Moon    

While sulking in his "woe is me" attitude concerning his lack of a love life, Edward ends up waking a centuries old wolf (Bella) from slumber who has no memory of her past life; the only thing she knows is Edward is hers. Looks like some legends are more than what they seem.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101749 Read Count: 20286
[Report This] Published: 04 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-End of another school year.

Falling in love with this story



Author's Response:

I hope you will like the rest of it, I know it is kinda short but the rest is lengthy.

Aria.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Scary stories.

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! I posted the new chapter here hope you like it.

Aria.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Prologue

Great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I feel really happy to hear that.

Aria.

Summary:

Lady Isabella Swan finds herself in an impossible situation after the death of her father, Charles. With the estate in desperate need of repair, will an arrangement made with the wealthy Edward Cullen provide a solution to Isabella's money worries or create more anguish and heartache for our heroine?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9048 Read Count: 5838
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2014 Updated: 22 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Another great chapter



Author's Response:

I feel really guilty now that I've been tardy with the updates here. The reviews on twcs are much more mature than some of the guest reviews I've been unlucky enough to receive elsewhere.  Thank you for that.

 

LD

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks Kathmart for your reviews.

More is coming very soon.

LD

 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love how you portray the characters



Author's Response:

That is a truly lovely thing to say. I admire one of my favourite ff authors for the same thing.  

I don't like bullying in any form and I try to apply that to characters aswell. Nastiness just isn't necessary.

i hope you continue to enjoy what I conjour up.

 

LD

 

 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loving the story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Can't wait 



Author's Response:

I am going to be a busy girl tomorrow trying to get a bit of a back up going. But I am intending for edward to continue his story.  Let's see if it works out that way.

 

thanks for following and reviewing, it really does mean a lot to me that people bother to post.

 

LD

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Drabble Mafia Fic. What is the ultimate act of Betrayal? For Bella is was when her husband and best friend slept together. Find out how she dealt with them and how she plans to turn her life around. Will she find happiness?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22383 Read Count: 139183
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2014 Updated: 14 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I hope they make it out alive

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Like the story already

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love this Bella

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Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love this chapter

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Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Different kind of Emmett I like

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Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella I sticking up for hereslf

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Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Interesting

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I like this Edward

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thank you for quick updates

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I can't wait

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Love it

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh oh wonder what Bella will do

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Love this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This is my favorite story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm hooked

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Just love this story 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Can't wait

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Loving this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Please update

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I can't stop reading this is great story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Love love love

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Please update soon

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Hope they will get out of this

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I'm so hooked on this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Update please

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Love it

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

So good

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Your a great writer

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Hope his okay can't wait for the exit chapter