Reviews by nel
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 262548
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes

Such a great story. So much angst and so pain. But aslone the way there was healing and love. And Edward and Bella finally got the family and HEA they deserved. Amazing story, Kasi and Nikky. Another wonderful story by two talented ladies.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Winner of the Twi Girls Next Door 12 Days of Christmas Challenge.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32659 Read Count: 10058
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I loved this. Bella was so reluctant to participate but he chose wisely in including her in the things that he enjoyed. She loved all of them, from singiing Christmas carols with Santa to volunteering at Ms. Esme's house. She learned so much about the Christmas spirit. And the icing on the cake, when he proposed to her. That was so sweet.  Of course the sex in this story was hot too.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 477631
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Wow, I love your writing. I saw this rec'd somewhere and just had to sit down and read the whole thing. I loved it. These two and their snarky relationship. I loved the whole other aspect of it with Bella's abilities. That's just amazing. It would be so fantastic to have her intelligence. And I wouldn't mind having my very own Chaos either. Cassie and Cullen were so cute. I'm going to miss these characters.

The Body by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 403]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has a fetish that no one else in the world knows about. Except the thousands of followers on his anonymous blog. What happens when Bella works out who 'The Body ' is.

Ths was my submission to the twkink 2015 fest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121593 Read Count: 145511
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2015 Updated: 19 May 2017
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Edward really enjoyed that. Another fantasy fulfilled. That's something he couldn't do to himself.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Ooh, watching each other get off is so hot!

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

They're so honest with each other about they want and enjoy.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Ah, they discussed boundaries. And he asked her to move in with him. Looks like they're on the same pagw. Now they can work around their schedules to work on the blog.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Poor guy, he weas so wore out, lol. They're a perfect match. She's fulfilling his fantasies and getting a lot of enjoyment too.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

That was hot! He got so turned on watching her get off. I wonder how much of her he got on film. It obviously took a lot out of him as he came and came and came and dozed off after.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Edward got turned on thinking about his blog and what it does to her. Their conversation should be interesting. I bet he remembers talking to BBS.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Edward really did react to Bella's use of the word kinky. The way she said it made it sound negative. He's afraid that she will find her participation will horrify her.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

He wants, needs to be pegged but it sounds like he will love her regardless. I think she will do it because she loves him. But if she doesn't enjoy it will that be enough for him? Can he live with that?

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

So pegging is all about physical pleasure. There's no romantic making love. It's all about giving Edward an unbelievable orgasm, and maybe giving Bella pleasure at the same time using the right toy.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Edward was totally turned on at the thought of Bella using the harness with the dildo in it on him. Funny that he asked her about a drink so he could get away and take care of things. I'm sure he was very turned on seeing her wear it. I wonder if there will be some action after Edward posts those pics on his blog. Or will he post the action on his blog too. That's so hot.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Good thing Bella was by herself when she looked at that clip.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Ooh, there's something about Edward going down on her at the side of the reataurant that is such a turn on. And then him taking care of himself with such an explosion, OMG.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Mom knew what was going on. Dad disapporved. Typical family dynamic. Poor Edwaerd. He was frightened of them finding out his secret kink.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

What Edward did of making her body sensitive to his touch sounds incredible. And I didn't know the big toe was an errogenous zone.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I don't think anyone wants to hear what their parents like to do in the privacy of their bedroom. So Bella discovered another little kink of Edward's. That website actually exists. I didn't find it very helpful though.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Rose likes to drink. No wonder Edward gave Bella that look when she left. I'm surprised Bella wasn't toally out of it. What a fun shop. Can't wait to see what Edward thinks of the whole scene.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Edward is so controlling with regards to himself and his life. It really bothered him that she hasd left her shopping bags out, her clothes on the floor, and the tops off her bottles. He just had to set things right before he could relax. And even then he couldn't just relax. His curiousity got the better of him and he just had to look. What a surprise! He hadn't divulged his fantasy about the paddle to her. That will be a sexy scene when it happens, can't wait!

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Thank goodness she talked to Alice and got her mind in the right head space. Edward was very worried about her and felt bad he had spoiled her surprise. I think he will be very surprised by what will happen when he gets home. What a turn on for both of them. Plus Bella will be able to get her frustrations out on Edward.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Now that's funny. He watches his diet so carefully so I was surprised when he indulged in the chocolate bar, the brownie, and the white roll. He was sweet asking what she got out of the experience. She was so focused on him this time, but I wouldn't be surprised if the next time they role play like this that he finds some way for her to get pleasure out of it too.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Whoa that was hot! He knows how to work her body.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

So the final shot on his blog will be of them together fulfilling his fantasy. That will be some video. I can just imagine the ecstasy that he will show on his face and the look on her face when she gives him that pleasure.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Wow, Edward is trying to get Bella to expand her boundaries. She's open to it so it should be good. He really liked when she used the paddles. He wants more, that's so cute.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

It's not her dad's business to interfere in Bella's relationship with Edward. He needs to stay out of it. She is a grown independent woman. Bella knew what she was doing. She knew Edward would not be able to resist helping Bella with her task. It definitely tuerned him on to see her undressed like that. He couldn't even wait to get in there. That was so hot. He did close the door when he came in though. I wonder who took a peek or maybe they were just listening. As long as no one gets them in trouble for it it should be okay.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Edward wanted to make it good for Bella as he could. The anticipation of waiting, and then the playing in the booth. He knew she was ready for him to finish and it made him so ready for her to take him too. I wonder if he opened the door in the executive bathroom when he approached her just because he wanted to heighten the experience. He did say he was an exhibitionist.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Wow, I can't believe all the things he did to make it so pleasurable for her. I wonder how it felt for him for it to be so tight while he fucked her. Would love to hear Edward's POV on this. I wonder what else he has in store for her. I know he still wants to be pegged but is there a possibility they will do it in the shower while she's using the dildo in her ass? That sounds like it would be incredible for both of them.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Is her dad a chauvinist or is he not aware of Mr. Hunter's way of doing business? I hope her mother is able to talk some sense into her dad.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Wow, he's so sweet. He really misses her. I can't wait until Bella has that talk with her dad in Paris. Meaanwhile, that new toy sounds ideal. What a way to stay connected.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

He really misses her. He sure had fun in that sexy clothing store picking up stuff for Bella. But the leather biker outfit sounds hot. I wonder what he has planned for their first sex foray in public. He gets so turned on watching her, and I think the same goes for her.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Charlie is so stubborn. I can't believe he thinks Bella and dDward are just having a fling. It's pretty obvious they are serious about each other. He needs to realize she is not his little girl anymore but a grown woman who lives with a man, and not in separate rooms like roommates.

I love Renee in this. Yay, mom for stansding up for her daughter and seeing Bella as the adult woman she is.

Czan't wait till she and Edward see each other again. Time for Bella to go home.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Wow, Edward really missed her. That was so intense. I think more than anything she missed being close to him. She enjoyed herself but this was all him.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Oh boy. I wonder what Charlie is up to now. Doesn't look like Renee is happy with him either.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

So it was Aro that was eavesdropping/peeping tom on Bella and Edward that day in the executive bathroom. She had closed that door that day. I think he's been watching her and following her. I bet he opened that door. He wants to control the company and I think he's blackmailing Charlie to do it. I don't think they will give it to him. This is their company. They'll find a way to get him out, I'm sure.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 14 May 2017 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I hope it takes my review this time. Last two times I tried to leave a review for this chapter I got an error message. So frustrating! Aro is such a sleeze. What is he doing slinkling around behind Edward and Bella with a camera. Who would do that photographing two people having sex in a private bathroom? I can't believe Charlie wants to give in to his blackmail. Especially since he's lying about what he saw. Aro needs to show proof first. I'm glad Renee kept a sane head about this. Now they need to find a way to thwart his attempt.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 14 May 2017 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I'm so glad to read you on STARS. I was always worried your content would be removed on FF. I guess Aro didn't realize his work calls would be recorded. Shows how stupid he is. I'm glad Renee set Charlie straight. He should have listened to Bella before when she told him she and Edward were serious about each other. Now that Aro is gone Charlie and Renee can go back to running their company and training Bella to take over.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 26 May 2017 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

The little incident with Aro really shook him up. She needs to get him back to his normal self and she has the right solution. His lust for the plug and the paddle hopefully will override his brain and let him give in to his desires.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 26 May 2017 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

He finally got what he wanted, his fantasy fulfilled. And she made it enjoyable for him. The spanking with the plug, the larger dildo with the ridges, and finally the pegging-it was ecstasy. But what made it the best was when he wanted to fuck himself and get her involved in the pleasure. It wasn't all about him anymore, but about the both of them reaching their climax together.

Summary:

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The Chicago Fire of 1871, also called the Great Chicago Fire, burned from October 8 to October 10, 1871, and destroyed thousands of buildings, killed an estimated 300 people and caused an estimated 200 million in damages. Can the love of one couple survive the fire or will it be destroyed along with everything else?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18171 Read Count: 7821
[Report This] Published: 09 Jan 2016 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the idea of Edward and Bella courting. That said, I don't see that his father would permit it as he considers her below their station. I hope that Edward is not deterred and remains steadfast in his desires.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward Masen Sr really is a very unlikable man. He thinks of his daughter as an expense, and wants to marry her off to a man with a questionable character. He sleeps with other women. I was disgusted with his thoughts that if Edward did not want to share his bed with Tanya Denali after they were married he would do so himself with no regard to his wife. He thinks only of the fact that the union between Alice andJames would help his bid for governor. And he only wants Edward to marry Tanya for her money he hopes to get his hands on. He does not care if his family is unhappy, only being selfish for his own wants.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

James is so disgusting. He plans to have rough sex with Alice after he weds her. Never mind that she is most likely a virgin and very delicate. Plus he's rigging a card game. That man will get in trouble. I'm sure once the man he plans on duping finds out he has been cheated, James will earn a beating. Poor Jasper, having to witness James plans. Edward's father wasted no time in throwing Edward's belongings out of his office. Something tells me Mr. Rodney does not give Edward's father his haircut and shave.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This sounds like they had a very pleasant evening. His mother and Alice sound very nice. So much nicer than his father. I love this Emmett. He was quite intimidating.

Summary:

Edgar the bullfighter needs to cowboy up and admit to his buttercup just how deep his love and affection for her goes. Before he gets the chance, danger strikes. It will be up to him to save the day and the woman he’s in love with.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10036 Read Count: 289
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2016 Updated: 05 Mar 2016
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww, loved it. I liked learning something about the rodeo. Never realized how everyone pitches in to help take care of the animals. And of course I love a good Edward and Bella story. Their romance is so sweet. OMG my heart was in my throat when Bella got thrown off of Charlie and Dusty charged her. The way Edgar, with Charlie's help distracted Dusty and got him back to a holding pen was a great example of teamship between animal and human. I really liked how Charlie, as an animal here, was protective of Bella. And Dusty's last little exchange with Edward was cute too.

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 332659
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This all seems suspicious. What is going on with Jasper? How did Alice know how far along she was? And why didn't Jasper know? It's obvious that no one really cares for Angela so why is Alice trying to force her on the family? Why won't Edward talk to Bella to find out what is going on? I just want to yell at Edward, "Wake up!"

 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I wonder if Alice had something to do with Edward/s accident. She certainly had a dceath wish for him. Maybe she's jealous of her parents affection for him. Emmett isn't around so she doesn't have to worry abou him. Or maybe it's financial. She is one greedy bitch. Edward almost met Bella before now if he had accepted Ed's invitation to eat at the diner. Now along with the DNA and he can finally see that Ethan is his son. He has a lot to make up for. I'm glad he finally broke it off with Angela. I just know Alice is tangled up somehow  in this whole sexual assault case.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think Jess and lauren are good for her. They're helping her to loosen up a little but they're still watching over her. Edward is older than her but he cares about her too. He's not pushing her into anything. How did Charlie know what she's up to? Has he got people watching her or does he have some kind of hidden camera or something on her phone? I'm glad that Charlie is letting her go. It's sad that she feels so restrcited to them but it hurts her to be treated that way. They've raised her with values so now it's time for her to spread her wings. It's obvious her father didn't want her to go to college. He wants her to fail and come back home. Now she nees to prove to them, but mostly to herself, that she can make good choices for herself.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG my heart is breaking for both of them. Why does she think Ethan is Edward's? Is she telling the truth? Has she really not slept with anyone else since Edward? And why is Edward with Angela if he doesn't love her? He knows Bella. He thought she wouldn't lie to him. Are DNA tets infallible?

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Alice is so jealous of anyone showing Bella attention. Poor Edward is stuck in the middle between Bella and Alice. Bella needs to talk to Jessica and Lauren. They are such good friends and support for Bella. Alice deserved that slap. I hope some day her family sees the selfish conniving person she is. That they see how badly she's hurt Bella.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I don't get what is going on with Jasper. Why is he taking Alice's side? Alice is such a major bitch. Poor Edward is so confused.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Alice and Angela seem very involved in everything that's happened with Edward and Bella. And now to find that Edward's mom is worried about Siobahn, Alice's baby, enough to want to take her away from Alice or call social services on her. And why would Jasper go along with Alice and lie to Edward his best friend? What is going on with that couple? Did Alice manipulate Jasper into thinking something bad about Edward? I'm glad that Edward heard about all the events leading up to the night she was sexually assaulted along with that night. Now he understands more about Bella's state of mind over that period of time and just how involved Alice was. I'm also glad they both got to air their feelings about that period of time during their relationship, and again how Alice was involved in Bella's stress level. Can't wait to read how Alice finally gets what she's due for what she's caused. Then she'll finally see what it's like to be shunned by those she's wronged and possibly get her baby taken away. And maybe Jasper will feel ashamed for his part in this. I don't see how Edward will be able to ever forgive him. I think their frindship is forever ruined.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So much regret. But talking it out will help them move on and not dwell on the past. So many mistakes made because they didn't communicate. Ethan took meeting his daddy slow but well. This was new for him and he may not react the same way the next time he sees Edward. I wonder what Pops reaction will be when he finds out his grandson is that rat bastard. And now to find out Benjamin used his own DNA for the test, that's tampering. I really hope Bella agrees about that restraining order.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can't believe how strict her parents are. No boys and no parties. I think Charlie hopes that when she gets this college out of her system she will come home and settle down to be a good wife and mother, with Jacob no doubt. She told them she had sex with someone else so now her folks know she had sex, so why not telll them it was Jacob she had sex with and why she broke up with him. Lauren and Jessica seem nice wanting to be friends with her. Edward seems nice but obviously obsessed with Rose and Tanya's bodies. Such a guy.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm surprised Jasper asked Alice to go steady (I thought that was a high school thing, lol), I thought he just wanted her as a fuck buddy. Edward is veru surprised that Bella was so sheltered. Looks like Bella may be trying to expand her life a little by having her first drink. I can only imagine how upset her parents would be to find that out. Edward seems like a nice guy. He knew there was nothing between him and Angela but sex and maybe friendship. Alice needs to stop meddling in Edwsard's life. I wonder what she'll think of Edward's interest in Bella. She probably would like to see her brother back with her best friend.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Edward's upbringing was quite different than Bella's. He doesn't understand why she wasn't allowed to talk to boys or why she doesn't celebrate her brithday. I think if Charlie had his choice he would pick the man he wanted Bella to marry even if she didn't love him. Then her husband would take over the job of watching over Bella. Poor girl would never have any freedom. But now she gets to have a life, experience it like other teenagers. Charlie wasn't even happy she got the job at Starbucks. And then the vilunteering on top of a job and school. That's the way she was raised but she's goimng to get burned out somewhere down the road.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Alice keeps trying to get Edward and Angela together but can't she see he's not interested. I like Jessica and Lauren. They can see how strict she was raised and they're trying to keep her within her comfort zone but still stretch her boundaries. They're so thoughtful of her feelings. I really like Jessica's speech about life and choices, deciding if you should remain with the choice you made or realizing it's not worth it and move on.Very good advice.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm glad Edward told Alice how he feels about Angela. I don't think she'll listen though. She is determined to get Edward and Angela together. Angela seems so clingy. Edward needs to tell her that he doesn't want to see her anymore, that it's over. Bella is so uninhibited when she drinks. You can tell she never drank before coming to college. I hope she doesn't regret being with Edward when she sobers up. They're so cute together. Alice will be pissed when she finds out Edward had Bella at his place all night. I keep expecting Alice to show up.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow, her father has been spying on her with her phone. I wonder who he has watching her too. Poor Bella is so confused with Edward's behavior. Thank goodness she has Jessica and Lauren to watch her back. her father is despicable coming into her room, dragging her out of bed and hitting her. someone should report him.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I really hate Alice. She is probably the one feeding Angela's hope about Edward. I think Jasper might be right. Alice is so anxious for Angela to be her sister. Edward's gran didn't like Angela for a reason. Edward needs to remember what his gran said about listening to Bella when she needs him.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Does Bella ever find out what happened to her the night of the party? Was she date raped? Is that how she got pregnant or did it happen with Edward? How did her father find out she's pregnant?

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I don't believe Angela. She seems surprised that Edward is interested in trying to pursue a relationship without sex or kissing first. Since they've only had just a sexual relationship she's going have to want that.  Personally I think she wants to keep both Ben and Edward. She likes the idea of being Alice's sister-in-law because they're already best friends, but maybe she's also attracted to the Cullen family money and prestige, and Edward's occupation. Maybe she wasn't happy just being fuckbuddies with Edward, and wanted more and Edward was wrong thinking she was okay with what they had. Or maybe Alice is just so desperate for Angela to be part of her family that she's convinced Angela that she wants more from Edward than she really does. Either way, with Edward going slow I think he's going to decide that Angela is not the woman he wants to be with.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella has so many people that care about her now. I'm glad that Jessica and Lauren never gave up on their friend and are still in her life making sure she's okay. And James and Vicky are there for her too. Thank goodness for James' cousin, Mike, who saw Bella's dad for who he really was. All of these people along with Kate, Mike's parents Frank and Sasha, and Jessica and Lauren's parents Charlotte and Peter, step in to become the family she always needed and deserved. I feel the love they all have for her. And they help her to move on to a better life for her and Ethan. Now Edward returns to complicate her life once again.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow, I am blown away with the theory of how Charlie might have been involved with what happened. If that's true, then it's sad how much control he wanted to keep over Bella. It doesn't excuse Alice and her actions. She always wanted her brother to be with Angela and peobably thought Bella wasn't good enough for him. By colluding with Charlie it was a way to get what she wanted. I think Bella was right about Edward and Alice. She was his sister but he didn't always approve of her treatment of Bella. But he trusted Jasper and believed whatever Jasper said because they were best friends. I think Angela videotaped Bella's rape but under Alice's orders. She went along with whatever Alice told her to do because she wanted Edward back and if they could make him believe Bella was sleeping around that would happen. Charlie will be very surprised when Bella gets a restraining order against him. He will realize that he has truly lost his daughter then.  Maybe he wanted that control because he loved her and thought he was doing right, but by setting everything in motion by what he may have done, he has lost her.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow, each chapter just keeps getting better and better. Alice does not realize how much trouble she's in. She beats Jasper, that explains Jasper's going along with everything she said. I don't think she wanted Siobahn but I think she did it to get the attention away from Bella. I think she was jealous of the love Edward had for Bella so she tried to destroy it. But talking about slipping Edward a date rape drug so he would sleep with Angela, at Angela's suggestion means Angela is just as guilty as Alice. I think it was Angela's idea to give Bella the drug. Jasper loves Alice, I think he will stay with her no matter what. It's just too bad he lost Edward's friendship in the process. He needs help, I hope he accepts it or he could lose custody of Siobahn. I love that Ethan calls Edward, "Dad-dee."

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Whoa, what a chapter. So Elizabeth thought Alice was too easily influenced by others close to her. Angela is a dark person. Her infatuation for Edward convinced Alice to get Bella away from Edward by all means possible. Seems Charlie may have seduced Alice. Poor lost Alice. She needs psychiatric help, it's obvious. But now to think that Siobahn is a product of Alice and Charlie is just insane. Jasper put up with anything to be close to that little girl he considers his daughter. He must be so terrified that he will lose her. Elizabeth saw all this. She saw Siobahn being with Bella as her little sister and Edward and Bella having twins. So much for Bella to process. Can't wait to see what happens in court. I would think Alice will also lose custody of Siobahn. She's an unfit mother.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I see Esme washing her hands of Alice but Carlisle thinks he's helping his little girl by protecting her. He needs help himself to understand how destructive Alice really is. He should have been firm with her when she was growing up. I agree with Edward. I think Angela played a very big role with what happened. She was infatuated with Edward but I also think she wanted to be a part of Alice's family so bad. I wonder what kind of home life she had. Somehow I don't think Jasper will file charges against Alice. I think once he sleeps on it, he will change his mind. He's still afraid he will lose custody of Siobahn, especially since he's not her biological father.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

More questions. Who told Charlie that Bella was at the hospital? Who shot Emmett? Who shot Renee? Someone is pulling all the strings in this puppet show. Someone everyone least expects. Could it be Angela? Was Elizabeth right? Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

So sorry for the loss of your friend. Please be safe driving. I hope Nikky does okay too. Wow, I can't believe Angela showed up at the hospital. And for her to tell Bella she has more right to be here than Bella is just arrogant. I hope they find what part Angela has in these rapes soon with proof. If what Edward suspects is true about Ben wanting to relive the rapes that is just sick.  For Ben and for Angela participating. It's sad that Carlisle and Esme are taking a break but Carlisle needs to get his priorities straight. He is just too obsessed with Alice over his other children. This is such a trying time for Bella. By holding it all in she's not coping well. I hope she opens up with Edward and continues to tell him how she's feeling. Poor Rose. Maybe Emmett just needs time to recuperate.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Alice is crazy. I can't believe that she hates Jasper so much she doesn't wnt him to have custody of Siobahn. Siobahn is comfortable with Ethan and will get lots of love and attention from Bella and Edward. Plus their life is calm which after all the chaos surrounding Alice is something she needs. I don't understand why Carlisle is still so obsessed with Alice. Even growing up, she was daddy's girl. But the difference in the treatment the boys got and she got is just incredulous. He's still trying to step in and protect Alice from the harsh reality of life. The man needs psychological help. Does he not love his sons? Emmett was suffering from PTSD but he is another victim in this whole tgragedy. And how sick is that of Angella and Ben, picking out girls and Ben raping them, and then replaying the scene. I hope they get Angela and pit her away for the heinous role she played in this. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Finally, the people that ruined Bella's life are tried and convicted and going to prison.  The court can never make up for what Bella and the other women suffered, but it is still punishment that will have an impact on Ben's and Angela's lives. And also Alice's life. I think Angela wanted Bella's attack to be particularly brutal because she wanted Edward and she knew with Bella in the picture she would not get him. I don't think she and Ben were ever interested in each other as a couple, I think it was just sick fun for them. Perhaps, to see  what they could get away with. But also roleplaying for them. Maybe Angela thought what they did was nothing. She didn't even think of how what they were doing could be detrimental to the women. Whatever the reason, I'm glad she'll be away for a very long time and have to register as a sex offender for the rest of her life. Alice, Angela and Ben are psychologically messed up.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Jasper did the right thing even though it hurt him. I'm appalled at Alice still. She cares nothing for that little girl she gave birth to. Maybe Charlie raped her and that's why she doesn't care. I know Alice is not blameless but maybe Charlie and Angwela used her and she feels wothless. Maybe all she wanted was love and friendship. Carlisler indulged her but if she had low selfesteem it wasn't enough, she was always striding to be accepted.

I do know Siobahn will have a good home and family with Edward, Bella and Ethan. And maybe someday she will want to see her mother.  She will probably always remember how her mother abused her though.

Carlisle has a long road to go to be accepted by Esme and Edward. If he wants it bad enough it'll happen.

Edward and Bella are moving forward with their relationship. They made love, a big step for Bella. But she's right to want to take things slow, with dating and just spending time together as a couple and a family.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Wow, what a chapter. Alice is clearly mentally ill. She takes no responsibility. I can't believe she blamed Edward and Bella for what happened. And her therapist, what is wrong with him that he clearly believes someone who is delusional.

Angela's parents can't see that their daughter is illl. She was an influence on Alice, that's obvious. But for them to think it ws all Alice is so wrong. I think Angela saw an opportunity and used Alice for her own gain. Maybe she was afraid that Ben would leave her so she role played. But couldn't she see that what she did was wrong? Personally I think Angela liked what she did. She probably thought it livened up her and Ben's sex life.

Benjamin is another piece of work. He probably thinks that by putting down in a book what he did will give him some notoriety, his own fifteen minutes of fame.

I'm really excited to see what Edward being a Chimera means for him. How this will affect his life, and the life of their child.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I'm appalled at Angela. That she blames Bella's rape on Edward loving Bella instead of her. She thinks Ben raped Bella because Edward hurt her so he wanted to ruin Bella for any man. That's just sick and delusional. And that doesn't explain the other rapes. She is so self centered that she thinks Ben would do that for her. At least she knows she won't get out of prison till she's paroled. She also thinks she was the one holding Alice together. I think Alice was crazy from early on.

How sweet that Bella and Edward are having twins. Esme kind of ruined their moment when she spoke up first before Edward got to reveal their surprise.

Wow, Edward's surprise dinner was so unique. He served the foods that reminded them of the early days of their relationship. I loved how they shared those memories. They were good ones. And I loved his proposal. I have never mastered chopsticks either. I have tried numerous times but have never gotten the hang of them.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Wow, so Angela was the mastermind behind everything. She manipulated Benjamin and Alice. I'm glad that Benjamin, Angela and Alice will get nothing from the book. I think that will piss Angela off. I bet she thought they were going to make tons of money off their story. She seems actually proud of what she did. It's hard to believe that her parents think she was innocent. They really did bury their heads in the sand regarding all of Angela's mental issues.

I feel sad for Emily. Charlie told them a pack of lies about Bella and Ethan. It sounds like Renee may have felt some remorse that Bella was kicked out of their house. It sounds like she really wanted to see her daughter.

I loved that Bella wants Pops to walk her down the aisle. He was one of the people that was there for her. He made her feel like she was worth something again.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Mrs. Taylor is a real piece of work. She and many of the townpeople blindly followed along with everything Charlie said, and that is wrong. I'm glad that Mr. Taylor felt differently.

Emily needs professional help. She seems to think that Bella should follow through and give up her child just so she won't be childless anymore. Again, she blindly followed what Charlie said. I feel bad for her but she shouldn't blame Bella, She has her facts so wrong.

Listening to Joe talk about hunters and others being killed in those woods make me wonder if Charlie ever took the law into his own hands and killed people he didn't agree with and wrote them off as accidents. I also wonder if that wolf that appeared might be Bella's spirit guide. I'v never heard of wolves having blue eyes. They might very well have that but it sounds unusual to me.

And then their wedding. Loved the toasts, especially Edward's. Emmett's is so funny. But Pops makes me feel that he truly loves Bella. She helped him live again after Elizabeth died and it's comforting for Bella to know that he and Elizabeth will always look out for her.

Finally, I loved that Bella named her daughter Elizabeth. that seems so fitting.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I am in awe at the programs that are avilable to Siobahn and Beth.  The tools they are taught to learn and achieve goals in life are awesome. Glad to hear the family is happy and Edward and Bella are doing well in their chosen careers. Bella's seminar had some very interesting information about consent and rape. Definitely learned some things to think about.

I'm not surprised Alice is still in the mental hospital. It's too bad her family didn't recognize how unstable she was, especially her father. Benjamin seemed so remorseful. Glad he realized he had a problem and worried he wouldn't be able to control it. He was where he needed to be.

Angela seemed to be the catalyst that cause all these events to happen. She was trouble. It's too bad that her parents didn't realize she had problems. They seemed content to sweep everything under the rug and were in complete denial.

Liked that all the rest of the couples had their HEA.

Whats Love? by Alyscia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 145]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is the smartest con artist with dark past.  She's tired of the con and wants to go home. Will Edward be what she has been looking for back home in Forks?

Extreme Angst and Tigger’s. 

 

An amazing author and beta wrote a summary of my story that I just had to share here. I really hope she doesn’t mind. PS (MeteorOnAMoonlessNight). 

Another new author with her first fic,  Bella is a hard hearted con artist, 4 times divorced. As things unravel for her in New York, she makes the decision to go back to Forks to start over, moving in with her foster brother Jasper. Flashbacks reveal that this genius has had a tough childhood with both of her parents dying, leading to a disaster of a foster home. She's really just trying to survive in a cruel world.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41336 Read Count: 23112
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2016 Updated: 08 Jun 2017
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmmmm this looks interesting. I wonder who she inherited her smarts from. If her mom had her way she'd never step foot outside that house. Maybe this group of kids will accept her and not just use her.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, this is the beginning of a very hard life for Bella. She and her mom didn't get along but she always had her dad as support. Now she's going to have to battle her mom to live a normal life and to take care of her. Her mom is a mess.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, her mom was using drugs. I'm not surprised Child Services pulled her out. Her mom off of her meds was no parent to her. I wonder what history she has with Jasper. Alice must not be worried.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

You wonder how people like John can be foster parents. I can only think it's for the money. I like the voice recognition computer program she has. And I like that she used her father's name to talk to.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

John really is creepy. Maybe it's all so fake because Isabella doesn't know what a real family is any more. Where is Irina, and why didn't she lock the door when she came in? Maybe she's glad to have the attention away from her and on to Bella.



Author's Response:

Bella really doesnt know what a family dynamic should be other than what her dad showed her. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Samantha knew what was going on. She didn't seem worried about the kids at all. I'm glad Jasper was there for Bella. I still wonder why Irina didn't lock the door when she came in to go to bed. Hopefully their knew temp home is better.



Author's Response:

Yes she didn't care about them. Always about her husband. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ah group homes. They don't seem to have a good reputation. I hope Jasper and Bella are safe there.



Author's Response:

They don't have good reputations but I feel the group home would be a better place then some of the other places they could be. Thank you for reading 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Poor Bella. In such a short time she's had to adjust to so many different homes. I hope her home with the Denali's will be more pleasant. I also hope Paul keeps an eye on her.



Author's Response:

I know. :( 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Lots of new people for her to get used to. I wonder how well the Cullens remember her.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

And the system fails a child again.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow, she really does know all the right people.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Bella learned how to kiss with Jasper but if the attraction isn't there it means nothing. I wonder why Eric made her feel odd.



Author's Response:

She doesnt feel anything no attraction. 

Red Light by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 95]
Summary:

Bella is having a bad day that only gets worse when she finds out her marriage of 6 years is over.  Who knew running a red light would be the end of one life and the beginning of another. 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29003 Read Count: 9833
[Report This] Published: 02 May 2017 Updated: 19 Apr 2018
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Men. They can't be friends with another woman. The other woman won't let him. James allowed it to continue past a simple lunch until it turned into an affair. Vickie fell in love with him and he didn't stop it from happening. I hope Bella(?) can find happiness in a man that wants only to be with her. Someone who considers her to be enough.



Author's Response:

You are correct! He got taken in by a manipulative woman and now he is dealing with the aftermath of that.  Bella will be just fine, she just needs to find herself.  She has been with him since she was 19 so she has to figure out who she is without him.  The dating will be fun though.

Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 39561
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 20 May 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, so sad. 

Caledonia by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 601]
Summary:

caldonia

 

Edward moves back to Seattle after working under his father’s shadow for five years. Wanting to make a name for himself, he uses his mother’s surname to establish himself. What happens when his father, and a friend call in a favor, and need him to first help a struggling restaurant. Will he want to when the owner let it fall to pieces while she vacationed and what other secrets will unfold along the way?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195622 Read Count: 56016
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2020 Updated: 15 Jun 2023
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Jasper is really pushy. I think it's time for him to meet Charlie and see what he's really like. Bella will be angry when she finds out who Anthoiny Masen is a. Not only because he hurt her with that first review but because Edward lied to her by not telling her he is Anthony Masen. And the longer he waits the worst it will be.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So Bella doesn't know she and Jasper are related. She feels so guilty about the way she's treated him. But that explains why she's treated Jasper with such dusgust, knowing he was with her best friend Alice but flirting with Edward. Now the mystery is who sent those letters? And what does Charlie have to do with this because he definitely does. Esme didn't like him and I'm sure Edward wants to know why.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I have a feewling Charlie just revealed to Bella who Anthony Masen is. There is so much mystery surrounding Charlie. He gets Maria pregnant with Jasper, wonder if she was a prostitute, but makes no effort to get to know Jasper. Then he gets a young girl, Bella's mother, pregnant. Yet Granny Liz raises her. Bella has surgery, also unklnown what for. Bella thinks it was a ruptured appendix but Esme is very closed mouth about the surgery. And does not have a good opinion of Charlie. Bella recovers and is sent to Scotland for eight years. When she comes back she finds a very rundown Renny's Soul restaurant. Again, Charlie ignored it and let it go after Liz died. Now he interferes with Bella again. I think he would be all too happy if Bella returned to Scotland and he could sell the restaurant. Only he needs Bella to agree because Liz left it to her. Wonder if Charlie has debts he needs to pay and selling that restaurant might do that. He's not involved in either of his kids lives. Jasper needs to quit pushing Bella and let her get used to having  brother, she's too overwhelmed. And Edward neeeds to find a way to apologize to Bella. He should have told her, but hindsight again.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

The longer time Edward spends with her, the more he sees she is trying so hard to make the restaurant work. She knows some things and is trying to find what she doesn't by asking and researching. And he has let his judgment be clouded by what her father had said. I'm glad he's willing to work with her now. Staff has definitely improved since the old crew left and Jummy and Jake have arrived. They know how to run a restaurant.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I suspected she was the cake lady. I like how Edward is seeing her as the person she is. And the lust he feels for her. And yes, I see him feeling more.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Seems there are a few working together to make the restaurant fail. But with Edward, Bella and her friends and family they are working hard to make itt succeed. I like the new theme, reflecting the Scottish heritage. I hope they catch Charlie soon because I would love to see his ass handed to him. Glad Edward finally had a chance to explain to Bella about his review of the restaurant as Anthony Masen and why he purchased the property next door.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh, I have no doubt Charlie will be back. He didn't get all the money he wanted last time. But Joe is not there to tell him when Bella is alone. I hope Edward and all the rest keep a close watch on her and never let her be alone. Good thing Jimmy and Vicky will be around to help out and keep a close eye on things.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I just knew Mike had something to do with what happened. But I thought Jessica was involved too since she was dating him before. And now Joe was possibly the one who planted the rat. I was wondering why things had been moved around in the kitchen. I thought they would suspect something when they noticed it. Good thing Jasper and Edward had that talk. They should have had it long before but Jasper probably wouldn't have believed Edward. And now to find out that Charlie wanted to buy the place next door to Renney's Soul, what was thaat all about? Was he hoping to put renney's Soul out of business by hiring staff to make it better, doubtful. I more suspect he would have found some way to enter Renney's Soul perhaps by a secret entrance. He is out to destroy his daughter. I'm glad Vicky and Jimmy showed up to pitch in and get things up and running. Aro knows someone in the health department and Vikcy wants to have a go at them too so with all that they should be able to get the place up and running again soon.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

They should just let Emmett tell Jasper the truth. They're hiding too muich from him and he's getting suspicious.