I loved this. Bella was so reluctant to participate but he chose wisely in including her in the things that he enjoyed. She loved all of them, from singiing Christmas carols with Santa to volunteering at Ms. Esme's house. She learned so much about the Christmas spirit. And the icing on the cake, when he proposed to her. That was so sweet.  Of course the sex in this story was hot too.

Edward really enjoyed that. Another fantasy fulfilled. That's something he couldn't do to himself.

They're so honest with each other about they want and enjoy.

Poor guy, he weas so wore out, lol. They're a perfect match. She's fulfilling his fantasies and getting a lot of enjoyment too.

Edward got turned on thinking about his blog and what it does to her. Their conversation should be interesting. I bet he remembers talking to BBS.

He wants, needs to be pegged but it sounds like he will love her regardless. I think she will do it because she loves him. But if she doesn't enjoy it will that be enough for him? Can he live with that?

Edward was totally turned on at the thought of Bella using the harness with the dildo in it on him. Funny that he asked her about a drink so he could get away and take care of things. I'm sure he was very turned on seeing her wear it. I wonder if there will be some action after Edward posts those pics on his blog. Or will he post the action on his blog too. That's so hot.

Ooh, there's something about Edward going down on her at the side of the reataurant that is such a turn on. And then him taking care of himself with such an explosion, OMG.

What Edward did of making her body sensitive to his touch sounds incredible. And I didn't know the big toe was an errogenous zone.

Rose likes to drink. No wonder Edward gave Bella that look when she left. I'm surprised Bella wasn't toally out of it. What a fun shop. Can't wait to see what Edward thinks of the whole scene.

Thank goodness she talked to Alice and got her mind in the right head space. Edward was very worried about her and felt bad he had spoiled her surprise. I think he will be very surprised by what will happen when he gets home. What a turn on for both of them. Plus Bella will be able to get her frustrations out on Edward.

Whoa that was hot! He knows how to work her body.

Wow, Edward is trying to get Bella to expand her boundaries. She's open to it so it should be good. He really liked when she used the paddles. He wants more, that's so cute.

Edward wanted to make it good for Bella as he could. The anticipation of waiting, and then the playing in the booth. He knew she was ready for him to finish and it made him so ready for her to take him too. I wonder if he opened the door in the executive bathroom when he approached her just because he wanted to heighten the experience. He did say he was an exhibitionist.

Is her dad a chauvinist or is he not aware of Mr. Hunter's way of doing business? I hope her mother is able to talk some sense into her dad.

He really misses her. He sure had fun in that sexy clothing store picking up stuff for Bella. But the leather biker outfit sounds hot. I wonder what he has planned for their first sex foray in public. He gets so turned on watching her, and I think the same goes for her.

Wow, Edward really missed her. That was so intense. I think more than anything she missed being close to him. She enjoyed herself but this was all him.

So it was Aro that was eavesdropping/peeping tom on Bella and Edward that day in the executive bathroom. She had closed that door that day. I think he's been watching her and following her. I bet he opened that door. He wants to control the company and I think he's blackmailing Charlie to do it. I don't think they will give it to him. This is their company. They'll find a way to get him out, I'm sure.

I'm so glad to read you on STARS. I was always worried your content would be removed on FF. I guess Aro didn't realize his work calls would be recorded. Shows how stupid he is. I'm glad Renee set Charlie straight. He should have listened to Bella before when she told him she and Edward were serious about each other. Now that Aro is gone Charlie and Renee can go back to running their company and training Bella to take over.

He finally got what he wanted, his fantasy fulfilled. And she made it enjoyable for him. The spanking with the plug, the larger dildo with the ridges, and finally the pegging-it was ecstasy. But what made it the best was when he wanted to fuck himself and get her involved in the pleasure. It wasn't all about him anymore, but about the both of them reaching their climax together.

Edward Masen Sr really is a very unlikable man. He thinks of his daughter as an expense, and wants to marry her off to a man with a questionable character. He sleeps with other women. I was disgusted with his thoughts that if Edward did not want to share his bed with Tanya Denali after they were married he would do so himself with no regard to his wife. He thinks only of the fact that the union between Alice andJames would help his bid for governor. And he only wants Edward to marry Tanya for her money he hopes to get his hands on. He does not care if his family is unhappy, only being selfish for his own wants.

This sounds like they had a very pleasant evening. His mother and Alice sound very nice. So much nicer than his father. I love this Emmett. He was quite intimidating.

This all seems suspicious. What is going on with Jasper? How did Alice know how far along she was? And why didn't Jasper know? It's obvious that no one really cares for Angela so why is Alice trying to force her on the family? Why won't Edward talk to Bella to find out what is going on? I just want to yell at Edward, "Wake up!"

I think Jess and lauren are good for her. They're helping her to loosen up a little but they're still watching over her. Edward is older than her but he cares about her too. He's not pushing her into anything. How did Charlie know what she's up to? Has he got people watching her or does he have some kind of hidden camera or something on her phone? I'm glad that Charlie is letting her go. It's sad that she feels so restrcited to them but it hurts her to be treated that way. They've raised her with values so now it's time for her to spread her wings. It's obvious her father didn't want her to go to college. He wants her to fail and come back home. Now she nees to prove to them, but mostly to herself, that she can make good choices for herself.

Alice is so jealous of anyone showing Bella attention. Poor Edward is stuck in the middle between Bella and Alice. Bella needs to talk to Jessica and Lauren. They are such good friends and support for Bella. Alice deserved that slap. I hope some day her family sees the selfish conniving person she is. That they see how badly she's hurt Bella.

Alice and Angela seem very involved in everything that's happened with Edward and Bella. And now to find that Edward's mom is worried about Siobahn, Alice's baby, enough to want to take her away from Alice or call social services on her. And why would Jasper go along with Alice and lie to Edward his best friend? What is going on with that couple? Did Alice manipulate Jasper into thinking something bad about Edward? I'm glad that Edward heard about all the events leading up to the night she was sexually assaulted along with that night. Now he understands more about Bella's state of mind over that period of time and just how involved Alice was. I'm also glad they both got to air their feelings about that period of time during their relationship, and again how Alice was involved in Bella's stress level. Can't wait to read how Alice finally gets what she's due for what she's caused. Then she'll finally see what it's like to be shunned by those she's wronged and possibly get her baby taken away. And maybe Jasper will feel ashamed for his part in this. I don't see how Edward will be able to ever forgive him. I think their frindship is forever ruined.

I can't believe how strict her parents are. No boys and no parties. I think Charlie hopes that when she gets this college out of her system she will come home and settle down to be a good wife and mother, with Jacob no doubt. She told them she had sex with someone else so now her folks know she had sex, so why not telll them it was Jacob she had sex with and why she broke up with him. Lauren and Jessica seem nice wanting to be friends with her. Edward seems nice but obviously obsessed with Rose and Tanya's bodies. Such a guy.

Edward's upbringing was quite different than Bella's. He doesn't understand why she wasn't allowed to talk to boys or why she doesn't celebrate her brithday. I think if Charlie had his choice he would pick the man he wanted Bella to marry even if she didn't love him. Then her husband would take over the job of watching over Bella. Poor girl would never have any freedom. But now she gets to have a life, experience it like other teenagers. Charlie wasn't even happy she got the job at Starbucks. And then the vilunteering on top of a job and school. That's the way she was raised but she's goimng to get burned out somewhere down the road.

I'm glad Edward told Alice how he feels about Angela. I don't think she'll listen though. She is determined to get Edward and Angela together. Angela seems so clingy. Edward needs to tell her that he doesn't want to see her anymore, that it's over. Bella is so uninhibited when she drinks. You can tell she never drank before coming to college. I hope she doesn't regret being with Edward when she sobers up. They're so cute together. Alice will be pissed when she finds out Edward had Bella at his place all night. I keep expecting Alice to show up.

I really hate Alice. She is probably the one feeding Angela's hope about Edward. I think Jasper might be right. Alice is so anxious for Angela to be her sister. Edward's gran didn't like Angela for a reason. Edward needs to remember what his gran said about listening to Bella when she needs him.

I don't believe Angela. She seems surprised that Edward is interested in trying to pursue a relationship without sex or kissing first. Since they've only had just a sexual relationship she's going have to want that.  Personally I think she wants to keep both Ben and Edward. She likes the idea of being Alice's sister-in-law because they're already best friends, but maybe she's also attracted to the Cullen family money and prestige, and Edward's occupation. Maybe she wasn't happy just being fuckbuddies with Edward, and wanted more and Edward was wrong thinking she was okay with what they had. Or maybe Alice is just so desperate for Angela to be part of her family that she's convinced Angela that she wants more from Edward than she really does. Either way, with Edward going slow I think he's going to decide that Angela is not the woman he wants to be with.

Wow, I am blown away with the theory of how Charlie might have been involved with what happened. If that's true, then it's sad how much control he wanted to keep over Bella. It doesn't excuse Alice and her actions. She always wanted her brother to be with Angela and peobably thought Bella wasn't good enough for him. By colluding with Charlie it was a way to get what she wanted. I think Bella was right about Edward and Alice. She was his sister but he didn't always approve of her treatment of Bella. But he trusted Jasper and believed whatever Jasper said because they were best friends. I think Angela videotaped Bella's rape but under Alice's orders. She went along with whatever Alice told her to do because she wanted Edward back and if they could make him believe Bella was sleeping around that would happen. Charlie will be very surprised when Bella gets a restraining order against him. He will realize that he has truly lost his daughter then.  Maybe he wanted that control because he loved her and thought he was doing right, but by setting everything in motion by what he may have done, he has lost her.

Whoa, what a chapter. So Elizabeth thought Alice was too easily influenced by others close to her. Angela is a dark person. Her infatuation for Edward convinced Alice to get Bella away from Edward by all means possible. Seems Charlie may have seduced Alice. Poor lost Alice. She needs psychiatric help, it's obvious. But now to think that Siobahn is a product of Alice and Charlie is just insane. Jasper put up with anything to be close to that little girl he considers his daughter. He must be so terrified that he will lose her. Elizabeth saw all this. She saw Siobahn being with Bella as her little sister and Edward and Bella having twins. So much for Bella to process. Can't wait to see what happens in court. I would think Alice will also lose custody of Siobahn. She's an unfit mother.

More questions. Who told Charlie that Bella was at the hospital? Who shot Emmett? Who shot Renee? Someone is pulling all the strings in this puppet show. Someone everyone least expects. Could it be Angela? Was Elizabeth right? Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Alice is crazy. I can't believe that she hates Jasper so much she doesn't wnt him to have custody of Siobahn. Siobahn is comfortable with Ethan and will get lots of love and attention from Bella and Edward. Plus their life is calm which after all the chaos surrounding Alice is something she needs. I don't understand why Carlisle is still so obsessed with Alice. Even growing up, she was daddy's girl. But the difference in the treatment the boys got and she got is just incredulous. He's still trying to step in and protect Alice from the harsh reality of life. The man needs psychological help. Does he not love his sons? Emmett was suffering from PTSD but he is another victim in this whole tgragedy. And how sick is that of Angella and Ben, picking out girls and Ben raping them, and then replaying the scene. I hope they get Angela and pit her away for the heinous role she played in this. 

Jasper did the right thing even though it hurt him. I'm appalled at Alice still. She cares nothing for that little girl she gave birth to. Maybe Charlie raped her and that's why she doesn't care. I know Alice is not blameless but maybe Charlie and Angwela used her and she feels wothless. Maybe all she wanted was love and friendship. Carlisler indulged her but if she had low selfesteem it wasn't enough, she was always striding to be accepted.

I do know Siobahn will have a good home and family with Edward, Bella and Ethan. And maybe someday she will want to see her mother.  She will probably always remember how her mother abused her though.

Carlisle has a long road to go to be accepted by Esme and Edward. If he wants it bad enough it'll happen.

Edward and Bella are moving forward with their relationship. They made love, a big step for Bella. But she's right to want to take things slow, with dating and just spending time together as a couple and a family.

I'm appalled at Angela. That she blames Bella's rape on Edward loving Bella instead of her. She thinks Ben raped Bella because Edward hurt her so he wanted to ruin Bella for any man. That's just sick and delusional. And that doesn't explain the other rapes. She is so self centered that she thinks Ben would do that for her. At least she knows she won't get out of prison till she's paroled. She also thinks she was the one holding Alice together. I think Alice was crazy from early on.

How sweet that Bella and Edward are having twins. Esme kind of ruined their moment when she spoke up first before Edward got to reveal their surprise.

Wow, Edward's surprise dinner was so unique. He served the foods that reminded them of the early days of their relationship. I loved how they shared those memories. They were good ones. And I loved his proposal. I have never mastered chopsticks either. I have tried numerous times but have never gotten the hang of them.

Mrs. Taylor is a real piece of work. She and many of the townpeople blindly followed along with everything Charlie said, and that is wrong. I'm glad that Mr. Taylor felt differently.

Emily needs professional help. She seems to think that Bella should follow through and give up her child just so she won't be childless anymore. Again, she blindly followed what Charlie said. I feel bad for her but she shouldn't blame Bella, She has her facts so wrong.

Listening to Joe talk about hunters and others being killed in those woods make me wonder if Charlie ever took the law into his own hands and killed people he didn't agree with and wrote them off as accidents. I also wonder if that wolf that appeared might be Bella's spirit guide. I'v never heard of wolves having blue eyes. They might very well have that but it sounds unusual to me.

And then their wedding. Loved the toasts, especially Edward's. Emmett's is so funny. But Pops makes me feel that he truly loves Bella. She helped him live again after Elizabeth died and it's comforting for Bella to know that he and Elizabeth will always look out for her.

Finally, I loved that Bella named her daughter Elizabeth. that seems so fitting.

Hmmmm this looks interesting. I wonder who she inherited her smarts from. If her mom had her way she'd never step foot outside that house. Maybe this group of kids will accept her and not just use her.

Wow, her mom was using drugs. I'm not surprised Child Services pulled her out. Her mom off of her meds was no parent to her. I wonder what history she has with Jasper. Alice must not be worried.

John really is creepy. Maybe it's all so fake because Isabella doesn't know what a real family is any more. Where is Irina, and why didn't she lock the door when she came in? Maybe she's glad to have the attention away from her and on to Bella.

Ah group homes. They don't seem to have a good reputation. I hope Jasper and Bella are safe there.

Lots of new people for her to get used to. I wonder how well the Cullens remember her.

Wow, she really does know all the right people.

Men. They can't be friends with another woman. The other woman won't let him. James allowed it to continue past a simple lunch until it turned into an affair. Vickie fell in love with him and he didn't stop it from happening. I hope Bella(?) can find happiness in a man that wants only to be with her. Someone who considers her to be enough.

Jasper is really pushy. I think it's time for him to meet Charlie and see what he's really like. Bella will be angry when she finds out who Anthoiny Masen is a. Not only because he hurt her with that first review but because Edward lied to her by not telling her he is Anthony Masen. And the longer he waits the worst it will be.

I have a feewling Charlie just revealed to Bella who Anthony Masen is. There is so much mystery surrounding Charlie. He gets Maria pregnant with Jasper, wonder if she was a prostitute, but makes no effort to get to know Jasper. Then he gets a young girl, Bella's mother, pregnant. Yet Granny Liz raises her. Bella has surgery, also unklnown what for. Bella thinks it was a ruptured appendix but Esme is very closed mouth about the surgery. And does not have a good opinion of Charlie. Bella recovers and is sent to Scotland for eight years. When she comes back she finds a very rundown Renny's Soul restaurant. Again, Charlie ignored it and let it go after Liz died. Now he interferes with Bella again. I think he would be all too happy if Bella returned to Scotland and he could sell the restaurant. Only he needs Bella to agree because Liz left it to her. Wonder if Charlie has debts he needs to pay and selling that restaurant might do that. He's not involved in either of his kids lives. Jasper needs to quit pushing Bella and let her get used to having  brother, she's too overwhelmed. And Edward neeeds to find a way to apologize to Bella. He should have told her, but hindsight again.

I suspected she was the cake lady. I like how Edward is seeing her as the person she is. And the lust he feels for her. And yes, I see him feeling more.

Oh, I have no doubt Charlie will be back. He didn't get all the money he wanted last time. But Joe is not there to tell him when Bella is alone. I hope Edward and all the rest keep a close watch on her and never let her be alone. Good thing Jimmy and Vicky will be around to help out and keep a close eye on things.

They should just let Emmett tell Jasper the truth. They're hiding too muich from him and he's getting suspicious.