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Caledonia by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 601]
Summary:

caldonia

 

Edward moves back to Seattle after working under his father’s shadow for five years. Wanting to make a name for himself, he uses his mother’s surname to establish himself. What happens when his father, and a friend call in a favor, and need him to first help a struggling restaurant. Will he want to when the owner let it fall to pieces while she vacationed and what other secrets will unfold along the way?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195622 Read Count: 57095
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2020 Updated: 15 Jun 2023
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow, Charlie just got his daughter's place shut down. He doesn't have a key to the restaurant so who has he been working with? I'm glad Alice is having that much needed talk with Jasper. I think James and Jake can straighten thing out with Bella. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow, Charlie is a sick awful man. I hope Karma gets to him. I wonder if Charlie tried to sexually abuse Bella but never did because Alice was there or she was with Granny Liz. I wouldn't doubt that Maria was someone Charlie picked up just to fuck but found out she was pregnant and abandoned her. Jasper wants to get to know Charlie but the girls are right, he needs to get to know charlie on hiis own to see what kind of person Charlie is. I wouldn't be surprised that Charlie wants nothing to do with him. Now that Charlie stole the money from the safe howw will they remodel the resaurant. Charlie probably figured he was just going to sell the restaurant after letting it go to the ground because he didn't know what he was doing and just wanted to get rid of it.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh what an awful awful man Charlie Swan is. He stole from Bella money that was rightfully hers and wanted the rest of it too. Thank goodness Esme got away from him. And the suffering he put Bella through not only from the beatings but the whole business with her appendix. To tell  a child with glee that she almost died and losing one of her fallopian tubes was a punishment for taking her mother away from him. Evil man.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I like how close Edward and Bella are. He really wants to make Renney's Soul a success. I wonder what his thoughts were about the closed business next door. Jasper is really pushy about trying to get to know Bella and finding out about Charlie. The way he's acting makes me wonder how much he inherited from Charlie. He feels left out of everything and maybe that's why he's so testy but I just sensed that he's a bit or a lot like Charlie. He doesn't seem to understand taking things slow with someone he considers family but is a total stranger to Bella. She's not comfortable around him and I wonder if subconsciously she senses it too.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

What a nice wedding. Lots of cultural things for Edward to learn. Wonder if he went commando. Worked out that Rose had her baby right before they left. I'm curious to see what name she and Emmett decide on for their baby. So thoughtful of Edward to be concerned that Bella has her cuddles. Their future is looking bright. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 31 May 2021 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Awww what a romantic weekend get away.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 31 May 2021 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Can't wait to read about Edward and Bella's wedding!

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 30 May 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Things with Charlie finally got wrapped up. The restaurant and bakery/teashop are doing well. And Tanya came by to apologize. I don't think Edward needed to hear it but i guess it made Tanya feel better.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 30 May 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

The drama with Charlie is almost over, just sentencing. Hopefully he gets a very long sentence. He was limping coming into the courtroom. I wonder if he was punished by more than just Vicky. Now they can all move on. The promotion for Caledonia and Wee Caledonia went off great. Who knew Bella had these hidden talents.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 30 May 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Wow!! Vicky knows her stuff. She's been waiting, gathering evidence, talking to victims and their families. Charlie is f*****.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 30 May 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

What is Charlie up to now? I'm glad that Bella has all this support.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 30 May 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I would love to see a picture of this cake. it sounds incredible. Bella is not used to all the praise, it's overwhelming her. The night ends on a good note.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella obviously doesn't know how to run a restaurant. That's why she has asked for Edward's help. I wish he wouldn't be so impatient with her. She has not been running the restaurant like Edward seems to think, Charlie has. I also think Bella is tired. She has not made a good impression on him. The restarant needs to close for the evening, Bella and Alice and Edward need to sit down and make a plan of how to run the restaurant. Then they all need to go home and get some rest.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I know Edward thinks Isabella was on a vacation trip. But I have a feeling it is a lot more than that. I feel like she has been in some kind of rehab or care facility, perhaps from an accident or something else. Sounds like Charlie cares for his daughter and that's why he spent 6 months with her. It's too bad that Charlie doesn't acknowledge Jasper. Perhaps he didn't know about Jasper, like maybe he was a result of an affair Charlie wasn't aware produced a child? So many thoughts going through my head. It is obvious that Edward doesn't care for Isabella even though he hasn't met her before. Edward reminds me of Gordon Ramsey.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

  I can see why Edward wants to make a name for himself on his own. But why does he feel the need to date and sleep with cougars? And why did Isabella let her restaurant go downhill? Should be interesting story. He's already antagonistic toward Isabella.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I keep thinking that the cake lady is Bella. Either way, the cooking is good and Edward is pleased. He must remember that Bella lived in Scotland for a number of years and is not used to American ways of running things yet. I hope he's patient with her.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm frustrated with Edward that he has preconceived notions about Bella. Alice makes it sound like Bella is working her ass off there. She was already there when Edward arrived. Since I have no Bella POV only Edward's I know nothing about Bella except what he sees. It seems like there is so much more backstory about Jasper. I hope he and Bella find a way to become at least friends.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I don't understand what Bella's problem with Jasper is. He's an excellent chef as they just witnessed. Eric really riles me, as does Mike. She is the owner of the restaurant. If they don't like her or how she runs it they should just quit. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 07 May 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Now so much makes sense to Edward. No wonder Bella has no experience, she's only 18 and has never run  a resturant. She has no idea what she's doing. But sher is a fast learner. And I have a feeling that if Edward showed up at 5 o'clock like Jake suggested he just might find out she is the cake lady. According to James, Bella is quite talented in the kitchen, mostly thanks to what he's taught her. I think that she was referring to when she said she wanted to be involved in the restraurant just not as a cook in the kitchen. Now that James has cleared the kitchen of Eric and Taylor, who I doubt have culinary training, and Jake got rid of Mike tthey have a good chance at making Renney Soul a success.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Nice ending. Not surprised Jasper and Bella didn't show up for Charlie's cremation.

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 68354
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds

Bella is having twins. If only she knew the woman she just met is the mother of their father.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Awwww. How beautiful. Irina wqas delusional that Edward loved her. Esme told Carmen Edward's wife had to be of irish descent. Of course, that might be true but she certainly didn't want her Edward to be joined with Carmen's family.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow

Painful for Royce to give up what he knew. Eleazar will suffer the consequences for putting the hit on Carlisle and kidnapping Bella. There will be no deals and no mercy on him and his family.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River

Seems like a fitting ending to Charlie Swan. He actually felt no remorse when he saw his wife die. She had disappointed him by not giving him the sons he wanted. Renee deserved to die because she helped her husband hold her daughter hostage. With no food how did she expect those babies to survive.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family

I very much enjoyed the ending of Carmen and Irina. Good for Esme. She showed herself to be a true member of her mafia family. As for Eleazar, his death was sweet revenge for Carlisle.

Summary:

Trust & Obey

 

Bella is a twenty-two-year-old college graduate and submissive whose trust in the community has been broken by a cruel Dominant. Her best friend Rose is getting married and she is coerced into attending the two weeks of pre-wedding activities. 

 

Edward is a thirty-eight-year-old billionaire Dominant. Since his younger brother, by sixteen years, is getting married, he is opening his home at the Cullen compound to the bride’s maid of honor. 

 

What happens when he learns her name and he secretly knows it? Can Bella’s trust be restored? Will she ever be able to obey a Dominant again? B/E R/E HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105111 Read Count: 119464
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2021 Updated: 21 Jan 2022
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Bet he wasn't expecting he would have this conversation with her so soon. Now she will understand why she is so attracted to him and feels so safe. Maybe he can put her nightmares to rest. The Pearl Suite is beautiful and so soothing.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

It did. I thought "him" might be Jacob. It's not Mike nor Laurent. Hmmm, Eric or Eleazar maybe? The family will be so surprised when they get the news about Edward's and Bella's nuptials. Hopefully Rose won't think Bella is trying to upstage her. She only wants the best for her friend. And knowin that Bella has found her soulmate should make Rose veery happy.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen

Very impulsive and yet so Edward. And that ring is beautiful. But when you know, why wait. If they can get married "he" will not have a chance to get Bella back. They need to get the ceremony out of the way and then take care of the problem. Now Edward knows Billy is working with "him." Could "him" be Jacob?

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

"He" will never admit Bella is not his. I don't think even Edward's collar will stop "him."

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One

Well, that eliminated one guess of who "him" was.  Billy is really delusional thinking that Edward Cullen is stupid. Someone will notice Bella's rings.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen

I liked the way Felix handled Billy. And that is just the beginning. I wonder what else Edward has planned. I also liked how Edward spoke to Bella about her scars. He was so supportive, even suggesting that if it really bothered her that much they would get in touch with a plastic surgeon. She is a survivor.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

I wonder how long it will take for the nightmares to go away. With Edward's loving help hopefully not too long. What a sweet gesture for her to move into his room.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

Poor Bella has evil coming at her from all sides. From her former Dom, from Tia and Leah, and now from Paul. Now would be a good time to tell Edward about Paul.  He promised to protect her. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

These two just can't get enough of each other. I hope Rose is happy to see her friend happy and doesn't worry too much about the other things.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

Oh, no. Edward has no idea what Billy hasa been up to. Good thing Bella told Edward what Billy said to her. Edward is very vigilant. But "he" is determined to get her back.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

Glad Bella confided in Edward. Billy is history. Interesting now that Edward will look into Billy and see if he has a connection to "him." Also, Edward could be right. There may be more women out there he has done this to. They've said the "I love you." So happy.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Oh, no. Emmett is too overbearing and over protective. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

She did good not calling him Sir or Edward. She should have left him a note telling him she was going running so he wouldn't worry. He was going to make love to her again that morning so she missed out on the orgasm he was plannng on giving her.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Yay, Esme! Edward makingt love to Bella and picturing her in his bed every night wrapped around each other, what a change.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Gah, Tia and Leah are such sluts. Who shows up at their best friends wedding announcement party dressed like that. Edward put them in their plaaces. Can't wait to see what Esme does.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

Awwww. This was a great ending. Edward was her husband, and her Dom when he needed to be and everything turned out well.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty-One

I loved the picture at the end, Edward snuggling up to Bella. Very satisfying ending. Mistress Angela gave Peter a taste of pain and he gave her a confession about himself and his father. They are both evil men and obviously the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Plus implicazting Tia and Leah Green and exposing the sins of their father. All will get the punishment they so rightfully deserve. As for the newlyweds, they will get their HEA.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

I love their banter. He sees a future with her. I wonder how he will make her previous Dom pay.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

If they decide to pursue this I can see Rose being the Dominant and Emmett being the submissive. Now at least Edward and Isabella don't have to hide their relationship from Emmett and Rose. He treats her very well.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Wow. Mommy and Daddy wanted to make sure she didn't forget that she lost not only with how "He" hurt her, but how much. I hope Edward can help her heal. I also really hope Edward can find some way to make James pay.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Sooo hot!

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two

I hope that the silence ends and everyone will be happy and congratulating them. When the news of Edward's and Bella's marriage reaches those two two evil witches, Tia and Leah, they will know they can't break these two apart. It's horrifying to think they are working with "him" to destroy Bella. But Edward will do his best to destroy "him" so he can never hurt Bella again. I don't know what you have planned for this story but I hope Bella doesn't have to deal with "him" other than to see "him" apprehended. And of course, I would love to see Tia and Leah put in their places permanently.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

I can't believe Tia and Leah. Such slutty dresses to Rose's engaggement party. Can't expect better from those two. I'm glad Bella spoke her mind. And Edward gave them a talking to they'll hopefully not forget.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three

"He" has had too much control over her. Thankfully her Dominant has brought her back  and made her feel safe and confident again.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Four

I loved how protective Esme was of Bella. Smart of her to research BDSM so she would know what her son is involved in. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Five

Nahuewl sounds like a good attorney. He thinks he has a way around the agreement. "He" violated their contract. It's too bad she can't make the NDA void.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-six

Wow, I never thought it would be him. Wonder if Jasper knows anything about the kind of monster his step-brother is.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

I feel bad for Emmett knowing he brought Jasper into their lives and Edward's home. I loved how Rose intentionally mispronounced the reporter's name, ""bitchy" instead of "Betsy."

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Peter maqde his first mistake giving Tia his real name. Good thing Tia has a big mouth and Felix oveheard her. I can't believe Peter thought Bella lied about what happened, like he thought she enjoyed what he did to her.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Tia and Leah are in trouble! They lied about being with Peter. And now they will unknowingly help to catch him. Edward and Bella are so sexy together, inside the playroom or out.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Thirty

Peter is so stupid. He should know, you should always read everything before you sign it. And admitting to what he did to Bella means she did not violate the NDA she signed. Now for him to get the punishment he deserved by another Dom. 

Summary:

Although Edward and Bella were destined to be together, there may be obstacles. But their love for each other was never questioned, as evidenced with the letters of love.

Letters of Love


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13279 Read Count: 5709
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2022 Updated: 14 Feb 2022
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Good chapter. He tried to make it very romantic with the candles and his letter. For their first time it went pretty well, especially knowing they were experiencing it together. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

His plans are in motion. But I wonder how Charlie and Renee will take the news.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

It's so lovely to see their growing relatioonship. They're already talking about plans for their future. Stay at home wife and mother is stil frowned upon even in this day and age. When I mentioned to a friend at a dinner get together that I was a stay-at-home mom she immediately turned away and excluded me from the conversation. It really hurt because she had no idea the sacrifices that came from making the decision to live on one income just so I could be hme for my kids.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

He's so protective of her, wants to make sure she ge gets lots of rest so she can get better. Tanya is such a slut with her brazen move.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Awwwww. They said those three magic words, "I love you."

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

He made it. They didn't make it to Disney but he still prposed. It was still very romantic.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Gah! What a beautiful fairy tale ending. I loved the letters Edward read to her at their ceremony. Thw whole event with thwe pumpkin carriage and the wedding in the chapel. So beautiful.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Oh, Nooooooooo! I hope Edward will be okay. This can not be the end of their love story.

Teddy and Izzy by louanne61 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 170] New!
Summary:

teddy & Izzy


Teddy and Izzy were best friends till they weren’t.


Choices and circumstances define who we are. But can we come back from hurting the ones we love? Can a bond we had be strengthened again?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 125992 Read Count: 10380
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2022 Updated: 22 Apr 2024
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2024 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Charlie carries a lot of guilt and shame. He's never known just how much he neglected his daughter. Now they all know about the treatment she suffered whilwe she was gone. Like Rose said, she's a survivor. She's damaged, but has managed to make a life of her own. No one will ever own her or tell her what to do again. Teddy thinks Phoenix is the painter. He'll be surprised when he finds out who the painter really is. I hope he gets the help he needs. His so-caled friends inflicted a lot of emotional and mental damage on him. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2024 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

It's too bad that Teddy kept himself so isolated from his neighbors. That talk with Phil Freeman was long overdue. Maybe now Teddy can deal with his panic attacks. It was wrong for everyone, including his family, to blame him for Izzy getting taken. It wasn't his fault. He was just a kid. Renee was determined to get her daughter, and like Phil said, he could have been taken too, hurt, or even killed. Charlie suspects Marie has been rexponsible for some of the  miracles happening around town. She is doing well. According to Phil she does get out. Just not as much as helen would like. Glad Beau is staying over. Don't like someone sneaking around Marie's yard. I'm sure it's not her imagination, because Phil has seen someone over there too. I hope it's not someone trying to take her again, but someone who wants her help. It might even be Phoenix. It wasn't right of him to take her to that farm, but he was just trying to find her someplace safe. He might not have known how bad they were and the way they treated Izzy. Finally the Newtons and Stanleys are getting investigated. It's about time someone looked into them. Bullies never learn.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2023 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Charlie overreacted. He wants to protect his little girl. Problem is she's not his little girl anymore, she's trying to live the best life she knows how. Leah and Seth are a great support for her, and they're doing well. Good thing Helen is there. She's making Charlie see reason. Teddy understands  he treated Izzy badly. But Izzy isn't ready to face him yet. She needs to face her fears for herself to heal. She needs to know that he's changed and cares about her. She was once his best friend and Teddy wants his Izzy back. But Teddy needs to learn about what happened to her, all of it. From the time she was shunned by him, which is why she doesn't trust him, to her time with the cult. He needs to know how damaged she is, and why she'll never completely heal and be his old Izzy ever again.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2024 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Good chapter. Teddy and Izzy learning about each other and the lifwe hhey've led since they last saw each other. Teddy abused drugs and stilL sleeps with random women. t's no wonder he's in therapy, he aounds pretty messed up. Izzy had a hard life but she survived. I guess at one point Angie was a friend?

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2023 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

So his past is coming back to bite him in the butt. Good! He was horrible to Izzy, how could he say he loved her. He left her and treated her badly. And now that he's found out his neighbor, whom he's criticized and done nothing but cause trouble for her, expects her to believe him. He's delusional. If she could ever forgive him he has a lot to make up for. But she can't ever forget. And she shouldn't forgive him. Maybe someetime in the future they could be friends? If he finds out his family has helped and supported her he might feel betrayed by them. SMH...  Louanne, I hope your meds help you and you get to feeling better. I love this story, please don't abandon it. I really like your writing, not only this story. I think you're a fantastic writer. Your attention to detail about your characters just keep me waiting for the next update. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Teddy has really turned into a grumpy man. Glad his family is on Marie's side with the tricks. Teach him not to mess with her and her family. I'm surprised he didn't recognize Izzy when she came over to his house. She's getting braver venturing from her property.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Izzy took care of Mrs. Gerandy. That's terrible that she bullies children that are smaller or different. The principal better step in and do something. Renee is not nice to her daughter. She doesn't arrive home early enough to pick Izzy up from school and threatens to leave her to walk home alone. Izzy is too young to walk home alone.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and leaving a review. 

Izzy is going through many things at the minute

Becuase many people have sent me threating PM about what has hapened to Izzy and acorrding to one readers Teddy and Charlie can burn in hell. So I feel like I have to put the next two chapters up as its been scary.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. That's crazy. I understand people feel strongly about these characters but it's just fiction. I loved your other story btw "There's Two Sides", so I have high hopes for this one.

 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What a difference Tanya made. She's really interested in her students. I think Mrs. Gerandy was just waiting to retire.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Izzy finally got to sing, something she does so well. Too bad Renee wasn't there to see it. Charlie is always there for his daughter. I hope Jess Stanley gets disciplined for what she did to Izzy.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Izzy made it through indergarten. On to summer fun and adventures. Surprised her mom was there.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Renee is a mean mommy. Luckily Charlie has found people to step in and help. Alice and Jane were real nice to watch over her and now Esme has invited Izzy into their home when Charlie has to work nights.  Good friends that care.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh, no. The kids are still cruel. And now she's been kidnapped and no one will realize until it's late.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I wonder if Edward feels any remorse for the way he's treated his former best friend. I'm glad someone in that family cares about her. Carlisle is just covering his ass. But Esme and Jasper are worried. And when Emmett and Rose come home I bet they will be concerned too. There will be a lot of anger directed at Edward from his family. Serves him right.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Izzy is smart. I hope the Sheriff is not friends with the Wolf. Renee, or Harmony, is not well liked. Meadow wants out of the commune but Harmony saw her letter and blackmailed her to get Izzy. Harmony doesn't love Izzy but she wants favor with Wolf by getting more members to work in the commune.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward is on a downward spiral. His friends are a bad influence. Poor Izzy. She got caught. The other kids probably noticed her missing and told one of the adults.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Sparrow is back where he feels he belongs. I hope they can keep him safe and not drag him back to Wolf. Wolf is evil, he wanted to bed Sky. But now maybe they can keep Izzy safe until it's safe to bring her home to her dad. Edward is out of control. Maybe staying with his aunt and uncle and then boot camp will straighten him out. He'll be away from Siobahn, who has proven to be a bad influence on him.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts. You're right about the intentions of Wolf with Izzy.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Edward learned some valuable lessons. I hope he takes Charlie's advice to heart. Those friends of his only used him to change their grades. Edward needs to talk to a psychiatrist or psychologist to get his head and his life together. Bells is settling in with her new family. I only hope Wolf's commune doesn't see the name Phoenix or that Renee  doesn't recognize her art. I wonder what happened to Phoenix, if Bells will ever find out. 

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2022 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Edward has found new better friends. He's living with the regrets and mistakes he made. At least now he knows Siobahn is no good for him. Hopefully they can find Izzy. Maybe with Phoenix's help they can find out what happened to her. But she's at a place where she is safe and can heal. She can't go home because that's where Wolf will look for her and kidnap her again.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts. All you have to remember is Sparrow is going to find away to get her home safely to her daddy. But she has been left with people who will keep her safe.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Renee shows no remorse. She actually thinks she did nothing wrong in her treatment of her daughter. She knew Izzy wanted to go home but she just wanted to be with Jacob. I hope the commune where Izzy is now finds a way to get her hoime. The story of the trial must be in the newspapers. Maybe someone will see it and contact Charlie or  the FBI.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Finally, Charlie and Izzy are reunited. Izzy remmembers her Daddy. So heartwarming. Sad to know that he cannot tell anyone about Izzy because there are some from the cult who want to find her and take her away again.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2022 Title: Teddy and Izzy

Willow is jealous of Bell. It's a good thing Harmony and Wolf are in jail or I think she would tell them where Bell is so they would take her away. Charli wants his Izzy back but she's changed and isn't used to living in the outside world anymore. It will take adjustment and she may never want to leave.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2022 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Seems there is a repeat of chapter 17?

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Meme finally saw how Willow treated Bell and make her do all her work. She will make sure that Willow does her share like everyone else. Belll/Izzy is finally going home. Will she be comfortable living that way again. She has much to gain. At least she will not be going back to Forks.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Those girls that made fun of her were friends of Leah.  I wonder why Izzy cut all her hair off. Maybe when she gets her feet and ankles fixed she will feel better about herself. She's making such good progress with on-line schooling and working for Heidi.  Petal was right, Charlie was too busy to notice what was happening to Izzy. Plus he would have noticed the strangers hanging around town. He was too absorbed about his own grief about Renee. But he's trying to make things right with his daughter.



Author's Response:

Izzy cut her hair in frustration, stupid I know be she doesn't feel good about herself and being bullied pushed her over the edge.

I think Charlie is aware of his short falls. He truly believe the Cullen had Izzy there. So many people could take the blame.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2022 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Izzy has a lot of memories of the people in the compound. She helped identify some of them. I think the stories she was told while in the compound might be wrong. Some of the young women became breeders having children starting at the age of fifteen. Sounds like the broker sold those children.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2022 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

B was brave to go on America's Most Wanted. Because of her courage some of the wanted people who had been hiding in plain sight were captured. What a nice reunion for Jasper and Izzy. Un fortunately, because of the danger she still faces, Jasper can't tell any one about her.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

It's nice that Jazzy wants her back with her former friends but they hurt her too much. Siobahn had a bad influence on Teddy. It was mean of Izzy's mother to say that she was a bad friend and that's why she had no friends in Forks.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Jasper saw first hand the damage that was inflicted on those kids physically and mentally. Izzy may never have a normal relationship. Edward feels a lot of guilt for the way he treated Izzy. Thankfully he is away from Siobahn and will be away from Rachel. He has a lot of anger toward himself.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I wonder what Edward's reaction will be when he sees the picture Esme received from Phoenix. I'm glad Edward feels remorse for what he did to Izzy. Maybe someday he can apologize to her.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Izzy doesn't see a future with a mate fpr herself. That's so sad. No one has shown an interest in her romantically because she has so little selfworth she pushes people away. I'm sure Charlie would love to see her in a relationship but he knows she shies away from people she doesn't know. I think he worries about her future too. I wonder if she will ever meet Edward again and what their reaction  would be. He doesn't seem interested in anyone. I wonder if he ever thinks about Izzy, he's so busy living his life.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thank goodness nobody tried to hurt Bobby. I was afraid someone from the cult had found Marie and tried to hurt her through her dog. Chelsea has some nerve complaining about Marie playing her guitar on her porch at night, or putting Marie down for knitting on her rocker. If Teddy doesn't want Chelsea around why does he encourage her by sleeping with her. The rumors about him are not good for his reputation as a teacher and he needs to clean his act up and get rid of Chelsea instead of complaining. Teddy still acts like the arrogant entitled brat he became when he was younger. And now Esme recognizes Izzy? What will be Emmett's reaction? And will anyone else find out who Marie is? Caan't wait for that next update!

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 15 May 2023 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Izzy is very careful around people. But Esme took her time, and Izzy remembered her kindness.

Summary:

One night, an empty road, and a girl who needs a savior. Heavy Angst, Tough subject matter, possible triggers. Read with caution. Canon couples, non-canon families. Buckle up and enjoy the ride.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 176386 Read Count: 28048
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2022 Updated: 06 Jul 2023
Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

This story is killing me. The more that's revealed about the people who facilitated or turned a blind eye on what was going on sickens me.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

She did name him. Wow. And she declared he doesn't own her anymore. Very big moment for Bella. How will Bella react to meeting the peole that adopted her baby. And they agreed to visitation. But Bella is not ready to take over care of her daughter. Maybe Maggie can work out some kind of agreement that leaves an open adoption option for Bella to get her back later.

Reviewer: nel Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Tia must have seen the article of Bella in the newspaper, otherwise why did she keep glancing at Bella. "Tia smiled, though it seemed almost as timid and nervous as Bella's..." Could she be a survivor too?