Reviews by catwalk1945
Summary: Past Featured Story

Darcy has proposed and Elizabeth has finally accepted. But how will their engagement and wedding play out? A short story detailing the beginning of their new life together.

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Categories: Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
Characters: Fitzwilliam Darcy/Elizabeth
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9492 Read Count: 3233
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jun 2010
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Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I totally enjoyed your little tibit. Darcy and  Elizabeth are lovely.

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Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thanks I often wondered about after the wedding.

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
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Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Last Fling Before the Ring

This is indeed a long hot smoking chapter. Your Edward is sexier than any Twilight Edward any where, you captured the very essence of this sexy hot man, not leaving Bella out cause she can totally hang with him, oh mercy.

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Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 25: The End of an Era

Wonderful chapter, happy, happy, Alex ( is that his name ), is gone. Now Edward and Bella can relax.

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Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: A New Year, A New Life

Awesome new years celebration, for Edward and Bella. Victoria will probably be up to no good, maybe the Lauren bitch will try to squeeze back in, whatever I know you got it covered. Update soon take care.

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Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Newsroom Awards

Ohh la la this was one hot awesome chapter.  This couple spells love in capital letters. Truefully I'm not looking forward to a ending, I love the way you have written this story yep, more power to ya.

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Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Closing One Chapter...

Wonderful long chapter, Edward and Bella are a lovely couple. She did get drunk several times, I guess it's party time. Hot sex in her office, gave even me ideals

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Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 34: X-Rated Fairy Tales

Bella should say, " if the baby is proven to be Edward's the child will be part of our family," she should stand by her man, mostly remember that Edward always used a condom maybe two.

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Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Questions and Answers

That nice little morsel about a baby was a nice little bit of drama, especially since you will be ending the story soon. It has taken awhile to read each chapter I have enjoyed every word. Update soon take care.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Jasper are twins who just moved from England to Beverly Hills and are new to Mason high school. The second that Bella and football Quarterback Edward Cullen meet, it is love at first sight for both of them. They decided there and then that they would be together no matter what. There is only one person who stands in their way. Edward’s girlfriend Tanya. Lemons and language AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: YA - High School
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77045 Read Count: 34693
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2013 Updated: 10 Apr 2015
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Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

You know James is bad news , can Bella and Edward ever get a break. First Charlie and Edward should trust their gut feelings and demand new doctors and place security at her door 24/7. Why must the bad guys always win.

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Date: 15 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Is that all you can do, hurt in anyway possible Bella, Darn, I wish some one would allow Bella to be badass just once.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
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Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I just read chapters one thru forty two and I'm breathless, this Edward and Bell ( that you've created) are smokeing hot, damn, I am loving this story, leaving you some somethin' somethin', I am glad it's completed.

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Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

She's so damn wishy washy, I wish Edward did not want a low on the totem pole Bella, it's a mine thing and her mine can bring him down. I hate her right now, forgive me.

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Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I hate Jacob, he's like a fly thinks he can eat from your plate and not pay, they land on your food with their feet ewee, nasty.

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Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Take him so far down he will see hell. Bella is such a beautiful character, I hate having her hurting and Edward cares and loves her.

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Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Whoa, this has got to be the hottest lemon anywhere, you should offer classes on the internet, damn to glory.

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Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

I leave you more than some, I've been waiting for Edward and Bella to bring this devil down to hell, he's a slime ball.

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Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

I don't like it she slept with Edward and now she's with his brother, not cool. Angela is a name in twilight fanfiction that will do whats right, being with Emmett, not right, but I'm just a reader and I'm in love with your stuff, your way and I love this story it's great, so I will shut the hell up.

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Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

I hate you got to go, I have truly enjoyed this wonderful story.

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Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 151: Epilogue

Nice chapter long as hell, but the best ever. I love your story telling and your happy ever afters are to die for. Good bye........

Summary: Past Featured Story

PUTP

Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101886
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
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Date: 15 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I do declare Bella's the saddest thing ever. Cancer is the great you can either," live with me are die," conquest. I thank god every day, it has been a vistor for years in my family, it is not welcome, but you hang on.

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Date: 14 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

It's about time Edward showed up. Royce King I can't believe Renee, he's a fool.

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Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Thank you so much for jumping ahead, this thing was draging.

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Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

This chapter was lovely, they will indeed make a great couple. Lemonade must be made," soon I hope.

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Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

It's getting hot up in there. Bella seem to be doing better, oh my, lemonade is sorely needed.

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Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I hope this chapter is a nice introduction to home made lemonade.

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Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

You do Edward and Bella so well. Nice chapter warm and inviting like Hallmark TV.

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Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Thank you again, this is the best story of love, caring, just plain old being there for someone you care about, not a lot of anything but people living life the best they can, while death as just past or is right around the corner. I look forward to every word you will write to complete this story. Update soon, take care.

Summary:

change my mind

 

When your brain tells you to give up, what can the heart do to change your mind? Will Edward give up on his feelings for his best friend? Or will Bella be able to make him change his mind? OOC, AH, Canon couples, Rated M for language and adult situations.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2085 Read Count: 3933
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 18 Feb 2019
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Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Change My Mind - Revamped

It was beautiful, was Bella a virgin with Jacob or Edward. I hope there is more to this story.



Author's Response: Thank you. :) Yes, it has a future-take which I donated to the Fandom Gives cause. I should be free to publish that after the 1st of September. Keep an eye out for it and in the meantime, you can check out my other stories as well. :) Take care. Ann

Summary:

From Elena's POV, after Christian announces the engagement. This is my speculation on how she felt and what she did after getting thrown out of the Greys' mansion.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10301 Read Count: 2707
[Report This] Published: 03 May 2014 Updated: 03 May 2014
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Date: 30 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Looking back, looking ahead

Good demise for bitch troll Elena.

Summary: Past Featured Story

CITF_Chandra

Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082143
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
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Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Smart move Bella, kiss quickly and make it better.

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Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

A grand chapter, yes indeed, the setting for their first time was awesome.

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Date: 15 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Let it be Tanya or Edward's ex, and if she comes after Bella, heaven help her cause Bella is now a total badass, she will no longer be a victim. Even if it James, the fool will regret he ever hurt Bella.

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Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Hey, a lemon is totally up to you, Scout's Honor.

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Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

It' good having Charlie there, also happy birthday Bella.

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Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yes, lighten Alice up a bit, more of a girl with sense instead of a girl with no sense and to loud to enjoy. Thank you very much.

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Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I absolutly hate Tanya,  Lord, knows she's hard to get rid of, Edward will fine out the hard way.

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Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella is always smart now she's rich, and there is always a dark, dark secret, get over it girl and have some fun.

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Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

JAMES,  he's the only mean SOB in twilight fanfiction.  I only hope she's really like her grandma.

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Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Nice car, and sweaty men go together.

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Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So sad, but thats Bella. Why can't she just kill his ass, oops, for got about her mom taking his side, evil mom from hell.

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

So far so good, I hate James and Renee Bella's mom, I wood love for them to get the shit beaten out of them, the sooner the better, Bella could use a break.

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

You are mighty tough, this is some kinda cliff hanger, so much could happen. I knew skanky Tanya with show up sooner or later, I want Edward to talke to Ana about Tanya and how he felt back then.

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Here, you have all of some you can handle. You are a wonderful story teller and I love your stuff.

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Damn James, I hope badass Bella returns if he tries beating her again, where is Charlie?

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Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Bella is sad, scare and hurting, maybe Edward and Bella can help each other.

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Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This review honors chapter twenty five and twenty six, nice is enough said.

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh wow, tell it all Bella, take what you want for a change.

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Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

A very sad chapter, and a little that will surely need someone to care for her.

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Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

You know I think Bella should badass up, and cut a fool if she has to. She has been shit on enough and enough is enough. She's rich, smart and she can be powerful if she wants to, I mean really kick some ass. 

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Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Yes, I knew Charlie loved Bella, it's time to make that bitch troll Renee pay.......

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Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

To short, but highly appreciated.

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Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Bella will need a little more time, the pace of this story will give us all that.

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Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

My god you did it, you done gone and done a cliffy, I hope Bella comes out kicking. Which skank can it possibly be...........

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Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Damn, I don't know this story seem to be taking a turn toward more drama, I only hope Bella's ready to kick ass and that Edward and the crew will help, bring it on, Tanya Irina, James, Mommie dearest and whoever else wants a beat ass.

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Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

He should talk about Irina, that fool is crazy, Bella does not need her ass beat again.

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Date: 29 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Oh yeah, she will say ILY, very soon. I am ready for drama, where is James, I need to see him get what he deserves for doing so much damage to Bella. And where is Charlie?

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Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

If there were no Emmett she'd deal, if he still loves her he must be there for her when things are better he can decide if he like to do more or be more with her. If it were me I'd kick that ass to the curve, maybe.

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Date: 11 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Why did Bella not hit her back ? She is such a door mat, she's pathetic, and where is that damn Charlie. Must Edward always fall in love with a broken Bella. I only hope she will be ready for them when they return, and they will. Poor old pitiful Bella always the shoe and the ass end.

Summary: Past Featured Story

mm

 

Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
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Date: 31 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 20 part 8

Interesting, good chapter.

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Date: 29 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 20 Part 7

I have spent a day reading from chapter one until I ended here, this is the best story and you are the best story teller, i need more of everything from you. I found a surprise in the way you kicked Tanya to the curb, plain old slut so glad she's gone. Will Jacob come after Chloe, will Charlie's true parentage be discovered, when will they go public, this is good and its the best ff I've read in a long time, good characters, humor, action,a little drama, the plot is delicious, "a baby needing breast milk and dad willing to pay", how cute is that. Update soon, take care.

Summary:

Bound and Dangerous

 

 

 

Sequel to Bound to Family.  A continuing story of Don Edward Cullen and Donna Isabella Volutri-Cullen as they begin their new adventures in combining two power crime families together, while exploring their Dominant/submissive relationship in Master Edward's playroom.  Can they keep their families safe, their relationship safe, or will outside forces tear it apart?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90815 Read Count: 229390
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2015 Updated: 19 Mar 2016
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Date: 21 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Why was Aro so mean and crazy. This is a fine chapter the killing of Aro from the beginning to his end was a rite of passage. Will his evil ass rest in peace, who knows, he will probably give the devil a hard time.

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Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good chapter, if I knew how to create Aro, then kill his ass I would. I wish Lisa had chosen to stay at the club, he hurt her so bad, when they find him they should skin him.

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Date: 09 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I had hoped Elizabeth and Sean would get together. Jessica will cause a bit of trouble, I hope Jasper is looking for her, she knows to much it seems to me that she is a loose end that should be tied up. Great chapter, great pictures.

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Date: 19 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

God this chapter is perfect, they are now available to rule. To me Charlie and Jessica must be watched, especially Jessica she will be trouble. I can only say maybe trouble, Edward and Bella will take on anyone.

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Date: 21 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, Edward and Bella are o so hot. When will they find Lisa, Elizabeth's sister, I believe she has been murdered by that evil man Aro.

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Date: 15 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Of course I am so sad for Elizabeth, Aro is indeed a evil man, I would hope that she would give Sean a chance. Good chapter and a lot to look forward to, torture of the worst humans you can find.

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Date: 18 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Such a evil man, he should be pickled and not allowed to enter even hell. Edward and Bella are totally the perfect deadly weapon, sexy and hot as the sun.

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 184179
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
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Date: 09 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Good rescue, and revenge, fuck, the Cullen's don't play. Is the threat Jessica and Charlie, I wondered when and where for those two.

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Date: 01 May 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This chapter is perfect, because it will allow us to see the coven in action. It will allow us to see the badness that is Bella Cullen and her side kick Elizabeth. I thought the punishment they gave Aro was horrendous, I guess they will burn Roberto alive or skin him, I hope they get them women like tomorrow.

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Date: 21 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is so intense and scary I wish this rescue was over. Bella's pregnant too, I believe.

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Date: 03 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Beautiful and deadly.

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Date: 27 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is a very good chapter, time is set, soon someone is going down. 

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Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh Crap,  Aro created this monster. When they find this fool heaven help him.

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Date: 31 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good chapter, beautiful pictures and wonderful characters.

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Date: 25 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Paul Jacobs is part of the Cullen family, I hope. I bet that bitch Jessica has Charlie believing she knows more and played a bigger role than everyone, Charlie mistreated Bella, it's time for payback. Good chapter, Alex and Maggie are adorable.

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Date: 09 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I do hope they have fun tonight. Alex said"he would be more prepared for the enemy next time", I hope he is. You can not let down your guard when you are a high profiled crime family.

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Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

The Cullen's and company are serious folks, I feel sorry for the enemy because he trusted Aro, now he will lose everything, including his life.

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Date: 16 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I wish Edward could be there. I hope they take Roberto alive and hold him until Edward is able enough to be part of whatever they decide to do with him. Aro that evil no good man even in his grave he sends trouble, maybe this will be the end of his reign of terror.

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Date: 28 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

They're home and in good spirits. Yep, that book can close, but where is  Jessica last I read she was with Charlie, Bella's stepfather.

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Date: 28 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Having friends and family altogether felt good to Edward and Bella. Good well written chapter.

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Date: 09 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

So good serves them right pigs should walllow.

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Date: 16 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Beautiful place and a wonderful idea, the club is a hit. Charlie must have a death wish, and I hope they give it to him.  I believe this is a trap, for once I hope they are prepared, do not trust his foul mouth, he is not Bella 's father.

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Date: 28 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I think Bella should face off with Charlie before he dies.  Paul should not die for doing his job. Jessica should know her mouth got her in trouble, before her demise. Damn good chapter.

Summary:

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Bella and the Cullen's prepare themselves for an impromptu visit from The Denali's. When she realises Tanya will not back off even with knowing Edward's ring is on Bella's finger, she decides to fight dirty for once.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1071 Read Count: 1690
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2016 Updated: 01 Jun 2016
Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Shame on you Tanya. Best show the bimbo what's mine, Bella you rock girl.



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you liked it  xx

AAP

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Shy, reserved Edward has a little too much Jack Daniels after finding his fiancée cheating on him. Waking up the next morning in a strange woman’s bed, he fights the pull he feels for her. Will he realize they're fated for each other, or will he only focus on their differences?

 

***So that you know up front, this story has been pulled after the first chapter. It still makes a lemony-filled one shot if you want to read it as-is. If you're interested in the published version, you can find me in the Amazon store under my real name, Lara Norman.***


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2369 Read Count: 49596
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2016 Updated: 23 Sep 2018
Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good beginning, hot sex. I'm liking this...



Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Nov 2016 Title: Jack & Crush

This girl's alright with me. Good introduction of the main characters, great chapter.



Author's Response: I appreciate that.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Nov 2016 Title: Jack & Crush

Renee is Bellas mom but she's dipshit, hello out there.



Author's Response: She is a bit flaky.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2016 Title: Jack & Crush

She Donald Trumped his ass, think about it. Good chapter.



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2016 Title: Jack & Crush

This chapter is a grand eye opner. I love .org.



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2016 Title: Jack & Crush

There is nothing like a running man, except a hiding man, or maybe he just runs and hide.  Good chapter...



Author's Response: He has a problem, lol. He's working on it.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2016 Title: Jack & Crush

Good, very good indeed.



Author's Response: They're getting there.