Reviews by VRB Mariposa
Summary: Past Featured Story

Ray Steele is a former Winston Cup winner struggling to finance and keep his NASCAR team running.  He has just got Steely, a very promising new driver.  He needs funding and sponsorship.

Enter Christian Grey, who take an interest in racing a business venture, however its the new driver that really peaks his interest.

AU, HEA, 


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Elliot Grey/Kate Kavanagh
Genre: Action, Adventure, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué, Sports
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57854 Read Count: 18458
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2014 Updated: 22 Nov 2015
Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thanks for the updated chapter.  Maybe she can try the monogomous route...hhhmmm  Iguess we will have to wait and see.  I hope that her race goes well or she may ban CG from attending.

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 28 May 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well, he runs the risk of her finding someone else to love and him getting hurt.  Yes we have all done it.

Careful CG :-(

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 28 May 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Again didn't expect to express his feelings this early, but there you have it.  So he is on the otherside of what his subs usually wants with him  "more".

Interesting

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 28 May 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well, while is seems to all about sex with Ana, I thought that it would bother CG to see Elliot have sex with her and am shocked that he actually screwed Kate.

Very surprising.

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Thanks for the updated chapter and the entertainment.  I am glad that she kind of gave him some sort of hope of their future together.  I was surprised that she said "I am fond of you".... kind of hurt him I am sure.

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow, wonderful updated chapter. That Carla is a real piece of work, almost worse then in the original story.  I love how CG stood up for her despite feeling the same way in the beginning.  The relationship is changing to something special, as it the one between Kate and Elliot.  Thanks for the entertainment.  :-D

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow, thanks for the updated chapter and the entertainment.  I wonder what her answer will be to that particular question.  :-D

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well they seem to be quite monogamous...  will it stay that way.  And... when will Ray find out  and.... what will be his reaction...  hhhmmmm

 

Thanks for the entertainment.

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chater  :-D



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

A bit of a cliff hanger.  Thansk for the updated chapter

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well, well, Ana got her claws out and her back up.  Claim your man girl

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Should have known that Ray knew about them.  Great chapter.  Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yay another chapter.  Thanks for that.  Even though she says that they are not "dating", she seems to be falling also, like Ray said.  Excellent update.

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thanks for the updated chapter and the entertainment.  :-D

Reviewer: VRB Mariposa Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Boy she is falling hard.  Thanks for the updated chpater and the entertainment.  :-D