Reviews by pamikulski
Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Hi Just wanted to say how much I've enjoyed your story, and I look forward to more stories from you..

Thanks again,

Pat



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C

stories/34076/images/TrueHeartsBanner.jpg      Banner By: Rachel MS

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 28910
[Report This] Published: 16 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2011
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I gotta tell ya, this story is one of my favorites, it's funny and I like that it's Bella and Jasper.. I loved the whole bee gee's storyline, it was really funny..

thank you

pat



Author's Response:

Howdy Pat, I am so glad that you are enjoying THaTH... It's a blast to write... Though this last Chappie kicked my ass... I hope you have a great New Year.. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 37. Here is your Sneak Peek at Chpater38.

Hugs~Izzy

Carlisle’s POV

Esme and I had left the house early today. Carmen and Eleazar wanted to meet up with us early. Jasper’s and Bella’s shower was not to take place until the early afternoon, so we had a few hours to kill before our presences would be needed at the Tea Cottage.

 

 

The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35494
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really like your story so far, I like when Bella is already a vampire.

I have really enjoyed all of your stories, I'm really enjoying Living through the Pain. and also all of your Lustfull stories.  Looking for to the next chapter of The Moment...



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

All We Knew by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Summary:

Bella Swan returns home after ten years and a bad marriage. Will she be able to find herself? What if her past catches up to her? AH & NC-17 for language and possible lemons. B/E, A/J,R/EM

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143567 Read Count: 114582
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2012
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Hi, I just tried finding Lustful Awakenings and couldn't find it on your page..

Thanks Pat



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

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Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204605
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

When are you gonna update again, this is one of my favs.. I love all your stories, I've read all of them.. Thank you,



Author's Response:

Soon, I hope. I am a little behind due to a family emergency but I am working hard to get caught up.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the lovely Madam Akyria

 

 

Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 144902
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

yes please i love bella and jasper stories, and i love this story so much, i dont want it to end.......

pat



Author's Response:



Hi Pat,

I apologize for the delay in posting the final chapter. 98 percent of my town was without power since Sunday (8- 28) due to Hurricane Irene so we had no working traffic lights in town, and at home: no electricity, internet, phone, hot water--all of those modern conveniences that we take for granted. We just got our power back last night (9-3) after a week, and right now I'm trying to get caught up with things that I couldn't do without electricity such as laundry, grocery shopping, etc.   I will post chapter 63 as soon as possible--hopefully in the next two days, but please understand that I absolutely must catch up with home issues.   Thank you for understanding the situation I am in.

As for my next project, I'll be posting a Paul/Bella and a Jasper/Bella, and continuing with my Peter/Bella story.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

I gotta tell ya, I was so sad about this story ending. It was like my own personal soap opera, it made me laugh alot, cry alot and cry today... But you ended it so well, and surprising. I loved the way you ended it.....Please do outakes...

I love your walmart story with peter and bella, I laugh so much with that....

Please keep writing....

Pat

Summary:

 

Bella is Domme who is in search of the right sub.  After several profiles are searched she interviews two.  Go through the interview with her, and see how her test weekend with her potential new submissive works out.  Is he the right one?  BDSM themes, Hard core Lemons.  AH, very adult themes if under the legal age to vote please move on to another story.  The top banner was made by the fantastic and awesome: Christagbanners ... You can see her wonderful work by checking her out at christagbanners (dot) blogspot (dot) com.  The Black and Red banner, below is my First place award for Fans Vote in the Dommella's Dungeon Contest.  Thank you to all my loyal readers. 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127084 Read Count: 48038
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Search Is On

I really enjoyed your story, I've read where Edward is the domme, but it's nice

that he is the sub.,can't wait for the next chapter...

thanks

Pat



Author's Response:

Pat~

thankyou for the story love!  I love a strong bella yet emotional and loving but also beign a full fledged Domme and having edward be a strong role, yet the submissive is not easy to write, but I am going to give it the good old girl scout try...LOL

Thank you for reading and reviewing I sure hope to hear from you again after the next chapter is posted.

Kasi~

Worthy of You by mimozka Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 72]
Summary:


After Bella's 18th birthday accident the entire Cullen family leaves Forks leaving behind a devastated Bella.

Four months later, when Bella seems to start healing from her heartbreak she is faced with one Edward Cullen, only he is not the same Edward she has known before.

As he reveals the reasons of his lies and actions Bella has to make a decision that will change her life forever...


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New Moon Alternate Universe - canon couples (perhaps a little OOC later on). Rated 'T' but if everything goes according to plan the rating will change in the future *hint hint*

I know the NM AU is a very popular theme, but give it a try it's not your usual NM AU story! And yes, I did just shamelessly promote myself... An author's got to do what an author's got to do.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31557 Read Count: 4532
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2011 Updated: 07 May 2012
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

I really like you story so far, has he become human? or contacts? can't wait to hear more!!!!!!

Pat



Author's Response:

Hey Pat,

You are observant. Good for you.

I knew those questions would come up in the reviews and I promised myself I won't answer them so that you'd find out by yourselves. The answer to that question is in the next chapter, but since you're the first one to review this story I'll answer it: yes, he is human. That is all I'm saying, to find out the 'why's and 'how's you'll have to wait till next chapter. I'll try not to take too long to update :)

I'm very glad you liked the chapter! :)

 

till next time,

 

Mimozka

Summary: Past Featured Story

You'll Find What You're Looking For At Walmart

What happens when a lonely and betrayed vampire meets his mate at Walmart?  He claims her, of course.  Join Peter and Bella as they band together with their ragtag team of friends to creatively exact revenge on those who did them wrong.  Peter x Bella pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 301749 Read Count: 81684
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2011 Updated: 12 Mar 2018
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I LOVE BELLA AND PETER TOGETHER, GREAT STORY SO FAR, PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY.........

PAT



Author's Response:

Hi Pat, 

Thanks for your review.  I absolutely will continue this story.  Expect a new post this weekend.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank you..I haven't laughed so hard in awhile....

I love all your characters..Keep up the good work, I enjoy reading your work...

thank you

Pat



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you're enjoying the story.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward left her in the woods. Bella was destroyed. Here is the reason she fell apart, why their departure hit her so hard. Vampires are the ultimate predator, everything draws you in...


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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78406 Read Count: 25112
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really love your story, it is so different from alot of ones with jasper & bella, I love the whole changing theory.

I love that Aro was grateful for their help, it's nice to see he has a good side in your story..I hope you get jasper and bella mated soon....



Author's Response:

They have a family reunion to deal with first but... they will get together.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

:)-J

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Hi I can't remember from the beginning, but is Edward adopted...could that be

his sister?



Author's Response:

No, Edward wasn't adopted. His family did adopt Beth, his cousin, though. ;) Thanks so much!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120 Spa

I love this chapter, it was funny and I loved how they let loose with each other... thank you  I love this story sooooo much...



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review!  Bells is funny in her own innocent little way!

Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102 Consequences

I don't want anything to happen to Emily, but Sam's punishment should

be Emily becoming a vampire so she can live...

Pat



Author's Response:

Wow, then he would love and hate her at the same time!  lol

Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Adjusting

I really love your story, I like the different pov's and I love Edwards sense of humor......

PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS STORY.............

Thank You

Pat



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review!  There is a great deal more story to come! Glad you like the different POV's, I am trying not to mess them up so badly!

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44791
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I so love this story...keep the chapters coming...

thank you

Master to you by vamp_luvor Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 188]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner

After Isabella's transformation into a vampire, her life changed as well. Edward changed and her whole world changed. Sweet Edward is no more and Bella has a potty mouth. Sit back and enjoy the ride between Bella and Edward. This is a BDSM story, if that offends you, don't read it. You have been warned, there are also a lot of lemons. E & B will have a HEA.

 

new banna with bella

wonderful banners both are made by:  soapymayhem

 

Beta'd by RAH07890

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43263 Read Count: 84213
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 16 May 2013
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Collared

I hope you continue this story, I really like this dominate Edward......

Keep him commmmmmmmming......

Thanks

PAT



Author's Response:

Thank you very much I like this Edward too.

** smiles to you **

Summary:

Getting the Hell Out of Dodge

Banner by LunarEclipse1

Immediately following the battle with Victoria's newborns, Bella learns that the Cullens were using her in a most malicious way.  With the Volturi wanting her to be dead or changed, time is ticking for poor Bella.  Will someone get her the hell out of Dodge?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9423 Read Count: 3775
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 25 Aug 2011
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked the story, I laughed so hard....and

I really love Life Happens....I hate that is going to

end soon.......

Thank You Pat



Author's Response:

Hi Pat,

I'm so happy that you enjoyed this oneshot.  I had a blast writing it.  I have more in the works.  XOXO

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113786
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: pamikulski Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So happy that when I opened my email there was a notice of your new story...i just finished re-reading people like us...Loved the first chapter...Out of all the stories of bdsm I love yours because you write about the couple, not just the playing...Glad to have the new story...

Author's Response: