Reviews by longtobeme
I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

i remain

After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77591
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am so excited that Bella is trying to learn the rules of baseball! Bella's reaction to Edward's note is hilarious!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love that Edward has a lock of Bella's hair!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I am so ready for Carlisle to enlighten Edward regarding his letters before his illness!

Author's Response:

Very, very soon!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I hope Edward goes after Bella now!

Author's Response:

Nothing like a little unfriendly competition over your reason for existing to pull a vampire's head out of his ass!

Summary:

The fairy tales and warnings Bella Swan’s grandmother used to tell her were real.  Never, ever dance in a Fairy Circle, and never be drawn in by a handsome Fae male.  One night Bella is drawn from her home into the forest – will she join the dance?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38996 Read Count: 5305
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 30 Nov 2012
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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am in love with this story! I am adding it to my favorites and I cannot wait to see what happens next!

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Queen Elizabeth is truly scary! I hope that she doesn't find out about Bella!

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well, the seed took! Edward should be returning soon!

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this story! I am so glad that Bella is reading the book on fairies. Wow! I hope that Bella picks up some other cool tips to protect herself from the fairies! I wonder what she will think when she sees Edward!

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh, goodness! I wonder if it is a good thing for Bella to remember this right now. She is already pretty upset over being pregnant.

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Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow!I can't wait to see what special power Bella has!

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Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: The Dark Dance

Love it!

Summary:

Bella, a girl with sardonic wit and a freshly printed Masters degree, finds work with the Cullen Group, being, what she deems, an overpaid secretary who finds inventors and designers worthy of some funding.

Work should be dull, and would be had she not made one of her trademark, clearly well thought out decisions: she started sleeping with her employeer's son, who is one of her bosses himself, days after meeting him.

Classy Bella, really classy.

She deems him an odd and spoiled rich kid [he is on an insane liquid diet, he has two penthouse apartments for the reason of "just because," as far as she can tell, his sweat tastes like magic (okay she concedes that here, she might be the weird one,)and he comes in to work in suits worth more than her car that are ruined from his runs in Central Park.]

Weirder than all of this, he seems to want a actual relationship with her.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10160 Read Count: 3970
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jul 2012
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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Bondage and Boardrooms

This story is intriguing! I get the feeling that Edward's family is hoping that Bella is his "match"!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I will try to keep it interesting in the chapters to come.

 

-Allie

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Leftovers.

Hmm...the ex is at the door!

Author's Response:

Yep.

The secret is I steal a lot from real life things that have happened to me or one of my friends. I did answer the door in lingerie expecting my boyfriend only to find one of my exs waiting there to give me a birthday present (okay it wasn't an engagement ring and we were good friends still so it wasn't this bad.)

 

It is actually a running joke in my life, me opening the door or looking through a window inappropriately/oddly/barely dressed to see someone I would never in my life hope sees me like that.

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Allie

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Lunacy, Loathing, and Lingerie

Jake is beyond stupid. Now, if he will just crawl back into the elevator and leave!

Author's Response:

The truth is I sort of love Jake (heck if my boyfriend of eight years is anyone in the series he is totally Jake, he is a goofy mechanical engineer that is two years younger than me), I just don't love the way my CW Jake reacts to this situation.

Even without an Edward to close off Bella's heart she was never in love with him the way he was with her and that broke his heart. Bella was the one that got away and he really thought that after being blown off, for the seventh time by his new girlfriend (who also is not in love with him,) he thinks he maybe should just go after the first girl he loved.

From what Jake had heard through Billy, Bella is just in NYC with a new job and no friends (which is basically true other than a coworker Angela and of course, Edward,) and he really thinks that maybe they could make it work, they are both at that point where they should settle, him for less love than he deserves and her for someone she was only ever good friends with really.

Finding her in lingerie waiting for her lover is a slap in the face; it is nothing she would have done for him.

I also appreciate the feeling of having a prior claim on someone and feeling like you have rights to them even after you part (I have felt that sort of jealously watching exs go out with someone new , even if I would deny it to them on my deathbed.)

 

-Allie

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Tell Me What You Want Me To Say

What is Bella getting into now? Edward seems "needy"!

Author's Response:

Yeah, when you see it from his side you will see he has been dropping hints like mad that he wants this to be more than a fling; my Edward might not be a Twilight style vamp and he may act out of character but he is still Edward at heart.

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Whatever You Like

I love this chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks, as you can tell by word count and the time delay it took some work. I was never very sure about the middle (the dancing scene,) but it makes a lot of sense with the EPOV as it is laid out now (music is very important to that side of the story.)

 

Thanks for reading and for the reviews!

-Allie

Summary:


    Elizabeth Masey didn’t believe in ghosts - until she started having an affair with one...

  

Our heroine is a trust fund baby suffering from a recently broken heart. Needing a project to distract her from her heartache, she decides to turn her newly inherited family estate into a bed and breakfast. Her plans grow complicated when she is informed by the caretaker that Stormclyffe House is haunted. Things heat up when the sexy contractor she hired to do the remodel starts showing up in her dreams. Add to that one stuffed weasel, an ancient hi-fi system that only plays oldies, and a new proclivity for sleep walking in the nude, and Elizabeth just may be in over her head.


Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2217 Read Count: 3559
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 21 Aug 2012
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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story looks interesting! I love a good mystery!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! This was a fun story to write. I hope you like it as it all plays out.

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Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow! I wasn't expecting this confession from Elizabeth's grandfather!
I hope that Blair shows up for the seance! A showdown between John and Blair would be GREAT!

Author's Response:

Of course he shows up!

The last chapter is up. I hope you like it!

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved this quirky story! Please feel free to write a longer version! I am going to miss ghost Blair, Helen and Elizabeth!

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717534
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
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Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

I love this story...so happy for the update!

Silence is Golden by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 809]
Summary: Past Featured Story

silence

Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94758
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wonderful proposal and so appropriate!

The Promise by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary:

In desperation, he made a promise... one he had every intention of keeping… but could he, when his life was no longer his own, much less any kind of a life?  Only decades of time and unseen mystical forces would hold the answer.  New Moon AU Vamp/Human Time Travel, Rated for eventual lemons


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55191 Read Count: 8818
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2014 Updated: 28 Dec 2014
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Date: 28 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Hilarious!

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Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Intriguing.

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Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can't wait to see what is in the box!

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Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love the idea of Bella being a witch.

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Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow! So, stalker Jake is getting a shock! I wonder where Bella went.

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Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The boarding house owner seems sweet, she has a wicked sense of humor.

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Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella's adventure is not turning out well.

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Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bella is going to be a real shock in this town.

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Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I wonder how Jasper will fit into this adventure.

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Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm glad that Peter and Bella are engaged. I wonder what is happening in Forks with Charlie since Bella's disappearance.

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Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Jasper is just a pain in Bella's side.

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Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I loved the lemon! I dread that Jasper is lurking in the shadows.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

I'm happy you're enjoying the story. :-)

~Spudz

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Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I really hate Jasper!

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Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow! I am so glad that Bella spoke to Peter. I hope that the baby will be okay.

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Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh, goodness! This will get interesting!

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Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Way to go with the handshake, Bella!

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Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can't wait to see if the baby is a boy or a girl! Now, I am impatient to hear from Peter. I miss him!

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Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yes! Peter is in the house...unfortunately, so is Edward. Can't wait for the next update!

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Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This should get interesting!

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Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This is getting really good! I can't wait to see the reactions of the family and Charlotte to seeing baby Holden!

The Writer by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

She thought she was writing fiction but what happens when her vivid imagination gets a little too close to the unknown truth? Twilight AU Mature language/material Vampire/Human Bella/Major Whitlock pairing DARK/DOMINANT MAJOR not a fluff story! SOME DOM/sub SITUATIONS Can't handle that, take yourself elsewhere. Full summary now heading Ch. 1.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26483 Read Count: 13515
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2014 Updated: 04 Jan 2015
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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting! I am eager to see what happens next.

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So, I wonder if shapeshifters are in this story, too.

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So, Jake is gone and what is Bella?

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Jasper is a colorful character!

Author's Response:

He is.  I really tried to make this Jasper different from any of the other's I've written before.  Thank you for reading and reviewing! Hope you continue to enjoy it.

~Spudz

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Jasper and Bella are going to have an interesting start to their relationship!

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope Bella can stop antagonizing Jasper before he ties her up and whips her!

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I like how Bella took control!

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Jasper isn't so cocky now!

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella knows how to push Jasper's buttons.

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I wanted Bella to bite him!

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I can't wait for the games to begin!

I Just want her Back by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

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When Aro's mate was taken, he vowed to do whatever it took to get her back. However, the question is, when he does... what will he find? *Repost due to request* This story is rated for language and situations.  ***Aro/Bella Pairing***


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Aro
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23590 Read Count: 4135
[Report This] Published: 14 Oct 2014 Updated: 26 Jan 2015
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Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a great start! I can't wait for Bella's POV.

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Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love the back story for Bella and Aro!

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Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thank goodness, Bella is going home, but Around is ready to destroy the Romanians.