Reviews by sunnyheaven1980
Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64 Enlightening Mom

Just love love this story!!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you are still enjoying the story!  Keep telling me what you think!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 Bonding

Maybe Victoria could make friends with them?????lol



Author's Response:

Ha!  That would be something to see!  Glad you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66 Cullen Gang

Love this story!!! Love the daily updates, you must be busy!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it!  It's about to get interesting!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67 Jacob

Nice!! Love it!!



Author's Response:

As ever, thank you so much for leaving a review!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Genes

Loved the banter!!!  I want to see Edward pissed!!



Author's Response:

You know, Edward pissed would be a very scary thing indeed!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69 Sue

I don't like it......I FRICKEN LOVE IT!!!!!!     Come on, we need a seriously pissed off Edward!!!!!lol



Author's Response:

I love that you like pissed off Edward, like when he was mad at Charlie for upsetting Bella!  he will be really angry soon enough . . . especially when Tanya comes to visit!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70 Ingrained

Thankyou for the double day update!!!!! Want some pissed Edward, your pissed Edward is the BEST!!!!!!lol



Author's Response:

You are too funny!  I promise, Edward will be pissed soon!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71 Calling Sam

That would be brilliant!!!! Poor poor Alice...lol



Author's Response:

I wonder if Alice would have a sense of humor about the camo?  lol

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72 Sightseeing

Nice!! I wonder if Victoria does somehow manage to get ahold of Bella, if Mason will guide his dad to where they are or protect Bella in some way....hmmm :))



Author's Response:

Masen is already an amazing little kid! There is no telling what he is capable of!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73 Games

You know I actually like YOUR Jacob as well,...I think I like all of them better in this story.....

Heaven, Hell, & Harleys is my favorite on this site right now......  Often when I read stories on this site I am in a rush for the action to pick up, but with your chapters it is so enjoyable to just read them the way they are.  They are just never boring!!!

Thank you!!!!



Author's Response:

So glad to hear you are still enjoying the story!  Action is always good, but it has so much more intensity when you are invested in the characters!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 Fishing

Sweet...   :)))



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 Fireworks

Edward and Jake need to team up, and put Sam in his place.....haha!!!

As always loved the update, it's like my morning coffee, always there when I get up...hehe

Thank You!!!!



Author's Response:

I love that this story is like youyr morning coffee!  I usually have mine while i upload the day's chapter!  I live in Georgia, USA, what's your time zone?

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76 Encounter

I'm in Phoenix,AZ.

I love loved it as always!!!!

Victoria is one sneaky villion!!! I'm thinking they just can't be friends.....lol

I'm hoping Mason is the one to end her....that would be something!

 



Author's Response:

I love Phoenix!  My brother lives there and I get to visit so rarely!

Victoria is crafty, that's for sure . . . but then she had b een with JHames for decades and I supposed they learned from each other how to be dasterdly.

Enjoy tomorrow's update, it's a last little positive before the hammer falls!



Author's Response:

I love Phoenix!  My brother lives there and I get to visit so rarely!

Victoria is crafty, that's for sure . . . but then she had b een with JHames for decades and I supposed they learned from each other how to be dasterdly.

Enjoy tomorrow's update, it's a last little positive before the hammer falls!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77 Insurance

Seriously...you are best updater on this site!!!!  I don't always leave reviews like I should, but with your story I always want to!  I'm glad Emily is coming, hopefully she will put Sam in his place!!!! haha



Author's Response:

Thank you so for the reviews you leave, they really encourage me to continue the story and the regular updates!  Emily will be a calming factor, that;s for sure - - - maybe just not enough . . .

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Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108 Moms

lol.......Loved Esmes reaction!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for the update!!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon

Loved it!! I'm curious though, why didn't Edward hear what Jake was thinking and seeing. I can't imagine Edward being okay with Jake seeing Bella naked......



Author's Response:

Edward did know that Jake was there - he will explain it in the next chapter, but I will tell you in part . . . he was just unwilling to interrupt what they were doing, and telling Bella that Jake was there would have upset her.  Edward NEVER upsets Bella if he can avoid it!

Hope you enjoyed it, even if Jake did get an eyefull!

(Jake was only actually looking for a very few minutes - he just got an eye full!)

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79 Sam Arrives

Bumpy is to be expected with Victoria and Sam around......eeeek.

As always......loved the update!!!



Author's Response:

Well, bumpy it will be!  Hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80 Dinner & A Movie

Love the fluff, and how Jake sticks up for the cullens, I really like this Jacob, not for Bella of course, but he deserves to imprint on someone! Your daily updates are just so great, but it's so hard to wait even a day, your story is so good!!! How can we convince you to post another chapter today??? :)))))



Author's Response:

I would love to post a chapter each and every morning and afternoon, unfortunately i only write about 2 a week . . . so there will come a point when you will have to wait even longer than you do now!  sORRY!!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81 New Years Weekend

Loved all the different POV in this chapter!!! In other stories I've read, I can't wait for Edward and Bella time, but with your story I like hearing about each and everyone of the characters. I feel as though I can see what your writing, and It'll be very sad if any of them die....even Sam (for Emily's sake)...lol

Thankyou for continuing to write this wonderful story!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoy all the POV's!  It seems to confuse some of the readers, but I love getting the different ideas of each character!  Glad you feel as though you are in the room with them, that's what I'm going for!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82 Hungers

I really hope Victoria does not get her hands on Bella.....not at all!



Author's Response:

Oh my, this is going to be frustrating for you!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 Taken

LOL...not sure I wanted this update...eeek, well I guess it's all up to Mason now!

 



Author's Response:

See, now with the update the tensiion is worse!  I have to drive to Florida for my daughters graduation from college - University of Florida, tomorrow!  i will update really early tomorrow, though - I won't leave you hanging more than a day! (though the update really won;t still your fears any . . .)

And the roller coaster is approaching the tall hill, starting up it . . .



Author's Response:

See, now with the update the tensiion is worse!  I have to drive to Florida for my daughters graduation from college - University of Florida, tomorrow!  i will update really early tomorrow, though - I won't leave you hanging more than a day! (though the update really won;t still your fears any . . .)

And the roller coaster is approaching the tall hill, starting up it . . .

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84 Frantic

LOVE it!!! I want Edward to do horrible things to Victoria!!!   I'll be waiting on pins and needles for the next update!!  I was even up at 3am my time checking to see if you had posted this chapter yet, that's how much I just love this story!!!!  IT IS THE BEST ONE ON THIS SITE BY FAR!!!!!!!

Keep up the awesome writing!!!



Author's Response:

You make my DAY!

The bumpy ride continues, hold on tight . . .

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85 Queries

Well I got up at 12:30 my time to check for a chapter, and I was elated to find one!! Though I am even more worried than I was before, they got past them :(  Come On Mason you can do it!!   I'll be stalking the coffee shop waiting for your next update!    LOVE THIS!!  You deserve some awards, for this story, like Best Bella, Best Edward, Best every single one of the characters even Victoria...lol 

As always Thank You for your writing!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yep, they got past them!  Now there is indeed a problem!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86 Dispair

glad to get more pov!! glad Bella is staying strong and thinking on her toes!!!! I feel so bad for Edward, I want to see him get it together and be pissed!!!!!! lol.........ty for the 2 day update.......will will watchingfor the next!!!!!! haha

 



Author's Response:

Bella is so thinking on her toes - Edward just needs a minute, he always blames himself!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87 Demands

Thank you for another update, I am enjoying the ride :)   I am hoping Mason can somehow contact his dad...maybe if Edward is closer??

LOVE IT!!!! 



Author's Response:

Love it that you think Masen can help!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88 Complications

We understand!!!  You are too good to us with your updates as it is :-)  HHH is just so good it's hard to wait.....Bella desires to contact Edward,  maybe Mason can help them communicate via telepathy????   I will be hoping and checking for an early update tommorow....tehe



Author's Response:

No, no telepathy!

Thanks for always updating!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89 Storm

You are the best updater!! Thank you!!!! I am absolutely loving the ride...haha, it's all good as long as you don't kill off Bella :)

Drive safely!!



Author's Response:

I'm safely home, and Bella is still breathing!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90 Tracks

Silly of course we are enjoying the story,its brilliant!!!!!!! Gosh I hope they find her before its too late!!!! I hope Riley goofs up, and goes back sooner.  Thank you for the update!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Glad you are still enjoying the story!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91 Fire

LOL...I have faith in you!!!!  So glad Victoria is dead!! Um, Sam is CRAZY!!!! I am pretty sure when Bella finds out what he tried to do, she will not be happy! And what will Emily think????

I hope we get EPOV or BPOV soon!!!

Thank you for the update!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92 Discovered

Thank you Thank you!!!! I am so exicted to hear about the birth!!!! Love all the POVs!!!!!  I hope you are still able to update tomorrow!!!



Author's Response:

Yep, your update is up!  I really do try for at least one a day, till I catch up to whee I am writing the story, then it will drop to two a week!

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Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112 Playing Nice

Love it!!! Thank you for the update!!!

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Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113 Council

PERFECTION!!!!!

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Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

Love how it happened with Renee!!!!!  Thank you for the update!!!!!



Author's Response:

She was pretty determined they were not taking her grandson away from her, wasn't she!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93 Delivered

Thank you for the updates!!! Love hearing from Bella and Edward!!!!

Can't wait to read aout the birth!



Author's Response:

Hope you don't get grossed out, I was pretty descriptive!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100 Morning

Edward and Bella are SO cute!!!!!!!   Poor Jake having to make that choice, and poor Emily :( Sam deserves some kind of wake up call, Like he could accidently hurt Emily and Edward saves her.  Thank you for the update, can't wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101 Sam

Love it!! Naughty TWCS.....



Author's Response:

Really annoying that I couldn't update like I wanted to!  Sorry again about that!

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Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102 Consequences

Edward is the best!!!!!!!!

Emily will die unless she is changed...so Sam begs them to change her!!!!  That would be an interesting twist and forge a strong bond :))

Another update today???  It's a Saturday :P



Author's Response:

Really interesting thought but with LOTS of concequences!  lol

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103 Reunions

Hmmm....forgot about Renee, good thing you didn't...lol!!  Thank you for the update!!!!!  Can we plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz have one more cause it's Sunday???????????:))))))))



Author's Response:

I sent you a teaser!

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Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106 Realizations

Haha nice!! I love it!!! I think she is already pregnant!!!!

Thank you for the update!!!!!



Author's Response:

Nope, not pregnant quite yet - but it does seem like it would be hard not to be, doesn't it!

Love reading your thoughts!

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Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107 Patients & Patience

I love how protective Esme can be!!!!! Bella needs to get knocked up with those twins!!!!  Thank you for the update!!!!



Author's Response:

I love that Emmett refered to it as getting knocked up!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115 Renee

Sounds very interesting :)) Thank you for the update!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with me!

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Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116 Flight

Thank you for the wonderful update!!!!  I loved it!!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Nice to hear from you, hope you had a great Labor Day Weekend!  I enjoyed South Beach!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117 Landed

Love it!!! Thank you for the update!!!!  I guess they should visit Rome, Madrid, and Australia?????   Can't wait for your next update!!! They brighten my days :)))



Author's Response:

Can probably do Rome and Madrid (well, maybe barcelona), but Australia is a different continent completely!

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Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124 Orient Express

Thank you for the quick update!!!!

Would love to see a pissed off overprotective Edward standing up for Bella when he has a very good reason to protect her!!!

Keep up the great writing!!!!!

Love it!!!



Author's Response:

You ALWAYS want to see pissed off Edward!  lol

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125 Scenery

Mmmmm I love that you can't wait to post!!!! I can't wait to read the new chapters, it is such a delight!!!!   In some stories I get bord with the day by day with no action going on, but with yours, your Bella and Edward I could just sit and read about their day by days forever, you could write about thir lives foreveer and I don't think I would ever get tired of reading about it, You have a gift my dear and I hope you feel better soon!!!!   I LOVE your Bella and Edward, but I am certain you could do well writing new characters all on your own and really making some money off them. Just Thank you for the updates, all of them!!!! Feel better soon!!!!!

Also****I do Hate you****  is it on hold for awhile since work got yah so busy??  It's okay I am just curious, HHH is my favorite right now, so if you are ging to focus on one, I prefer this :P

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Ten thousand Stars!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words!  i do worry that with no REAL action happening, you will tire of just my descriptions of their feelings and their days.

 

I do . . . Hate you is on hold bedause I have a severe case of writers blodk!  just do not know which direction I want to take the story - but I am leaning towards back at his condo in New york . . . eventually!

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Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126 Venice

Interesting......love it!!!!  Maybe Edward can just off Tanya??? I mean he IS all about protecting HIS family...right????? that way no jelous girl goes running off and telling the Volturi?????

Can't wait for your next update!!!!

Thank you!!!!



Author's Response:

Tanya is about to get herself offed if she doesn't back off, isn't she!  lol

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127 Unexpected

Thank you for the update!! I really enjoyed this chapter!!!  Edward did a great job not loosing his temper (much to my displeasure!!))   haha......

Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next!!!

 

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad it made you happy!  Edward can't ALWAYS be mad!

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Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions

Loved IT!!!!  The girl chat was nice, I enjoyed finding out what had been going on in Bella's head lately!!   The chat back home makes me worry about what Aro might try to do..........eeek...I know it will be coming eventually..I just hope Bella and Edward get there twins first,..hmmm I also hope Aro doesn't try and kidnap Bella while she is pregnant again..... :((((

Thank you for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review!  Aro will be coming in good time, lots to happen in the story!

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Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129 Leaving

OMG I just loved it!!!  Mason is SO funny!!!!   Loved Edward tossing her out!! I bet he'll be furious when he figures out she was thinking about killing his son....eeeek!!!!!  Poor Tanya is going to do something stupid I think....  :(((  Keep it up I just LOVE this story!!!!!

 

Thank you Thank you for updating!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Not sure Edward had heard all the thoughts, or he might have dismembered her, then thrown her out!  lol

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131 Verona

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!  Thankyou for updating!!!!  I  am crossing my fingers for Tanya to behave from now on, and I am thinking the Voltori,,,whenever they do show up will be no match for Mason!!!  

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Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133 Surprises

Nice!!!!  Love It!! Can't wait for the Bella, Edward, Mason chapter :))))

 

Keep up the great writing!!! I love it!!!

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Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134 Bolzano, Italy

Love it!!!   Thank you for the update!!!!!

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Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!  Can't wait for Edward to relize she is preggors!!!!!!!!!!:)))))

Thank You for the update!!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136 Content

LOVE IT!!!  I really like how Edward discovered Bella being pregnant!!!!!!!

Keep up the great writing!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137 Content times Two

I MISSED THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

MUCH!!!!!!!!!   It is my favorite you know :)  It has made my month for sure to find it back up and being updated!!!  So glad you are back!  Hope everything is okay for you! I look foreward to more updates!

Thank You! Thank You! Thank You!!!!

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Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138 North on the Orient

Just love it!! Keep it up, you can do it :) I hope Mason is okay......

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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This awesome banner made by the awesome DivineInspiration


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

:(  poor Edward!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

eeeek update soon!!! Love it!!!



Author's Response:

It always makes me happy to hear that you like where I'm taking these two. Their story is definitely just beginning. So I hope you continue to like the paths they take to get back to each other. Thanks for the review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Much love to you - D

Until next time...let's sneak a peek at Bella's life:

"Bella." Lizzy's voice and touch startled me.

I lifted my head to see her kneeling in front of me. She handed me the handkerchief I always kept in my bag. Edward's handkerchief. It added further guilt to rest upon my heart.

"Are you okay?" she whispered.

I shook my head. "I can't stop thinking about him."

"Me either." She hugged me. "It's hard enough for me to handle. I can't imagine what you must be going through. You two cared about each other so much."

I pulled away. "What?"

"The two of you really had something good, but me and Johnny will make sure to get you through this."

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

aww how sweet!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...let's take a peek at the next chapter which will be posted soon:

I gripped my head harder, heard a crack and screamed in pain. Fingers clamped around my wrists, pulling my hands away. Struggling against the hold, my eyes finally opened. The blond man was standing over me and the instant his face came into view, my vision clouded red.

Using his grip on me, I pulled an arm closer and bit his wrist. My teeth nearly met before he ripped his hand from me. He stumbled back and I lunged for him. My body crashed into his and knocked him through a tree.

We tumbled to the ground, rolling until I had the advantage. The thunderous cracking sounds meant nothing to me as I slammed my fists into his chest.

"Murderer!" I shrieked. "You killed them!"

His hand came up to block my assault but I couldn't stop. I wouldn't stop. He killed them and I wanted him dead. His howls of pain were like music to my ears and I swung faster and harder, hitting him with everything I had.

As my hand came down again, he caught my left wrist before I could hit him. Out of reflex, my right hand punched his arm to get myself free. I froze when his arm broke at the elbow and flew towards the trees.

"Oh God!" I screamed. "What are you?"

In the Wings by SaritaDreaming Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wings

 

Summary: Bella is a disillusioned cheerleader who jumps off a cliff into the churning water below and gets more than she bargained for when she's saved by the man who's been waiting in the wings. Popularity doesn't always equal happiness. AH, Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7440 Read Count: 1459
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In the Wings: a One-Shot

SO Sweet!!!

Eternal Night by Gabrielleblue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Eternal Night

Sookie lets Eric change her and she gets a little bit more with her immortal life than she thought she would as she embraces her nature and fate. Vampires, fairies, love bubbles and lots of fluff. All Vamp. N-17 for language and lemons

 


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Canon
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Action, Erotica, Mystery, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112039 Read Count: 17861
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 07 Sep 2011
Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Oh no, he didn't!

Just found your story, and I just LOVE it!!! It's a shame you don't have more reviews......I hope you'll keep writing anyway!!!  I can't WAIT to see where you take it!!! Thank ou for writing!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

fsg

New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: A Review Reply from Starlighted.net

cute!!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events

I laughed out loud while reading the conversation between Esme and Edward!!!   Love it, keep up the great writing!!!

Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Esme (V)

I figured they would be :) Can't Charlie just be happy for her???? Oh well that he's been lied to...lol   Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Renee & Charlie (V)

good!!! Went better than I expected!!! seriously just go make Jessica drown herself.....in a puddle....lol



Author's Response:

I think Edward would be willing to oblidge!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Jessica (V)

Jessica is a pain!!!!   Bella needs to slap that B***!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 I Want to See You (V)

Love it!! THANK YOU!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Double (V)

Jessica needs to go drown herself!!!!! Twins?? Didn't see that one coming either!!! haha nice!!! Loved how they talked EVERYTHING out!!! More updates of this story today??? Please!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for blessing us with your wonderful writing!!! 

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Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)

Happy!!!! Love it!!!! Thank you!!!!



Author's Response:

I like it when they are together, too!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Ours (V)

Cute!!!! Thank you for your writing!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 New (V)

LOL...uh yah I'd say so :))) Love it!!!!



Author's Response:

Well, time to see and explore just what she has . . . don't you think?

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 Life

haha LOVE IT!!!!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 Information

ugh......I hope so!!!!!  Thank you for the update!!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 Private Eye

Love it!! Thank you for the update!!!

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Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Evidence

well at least they can blood test the baby soon and prove Jessica is a lier!!!! Thank you for the update!!!

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Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Family (V)

haha nice!!!  I wonder if Edward has something he SHOULD be worried about.....??? Jessica maybe??? I bet she gets knocked up by someone else and says it's Edward's.....

Thank you for the update!!!!



Author's Response:

Wow . . . you're a little TOO insightfull!  lol

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67 Duty

good Edward should yell it from the rooftops......cant wait till the baby is born and they can prove it is not Edwards!!!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66 Questions

ummm  me thinks Jessica will lie and say Edward did it ........ugh!!!!!! :(

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Trust (V)

LOVE IT!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Surprise (V)

So Sweet!!! I just am loving the fluff!!! :) Thank you for the update!



Author's Response:

Fluff is good.  It makes the angst so much worse!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Parents (V)

Sweet!!! Thankyou for updating!!!

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Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72 Plans

Aww poor Edward, so much against him :(((  Even though I don't like her, I hope Jessica recovers and tells the flippin truth!!!  Also I kinda hope something they do upsets Bella enough for her to go into early labor and the twins lives be at risk (of course in the end they all have to be okay) But I know we'd get to see some very pissed off overprotective Edward :)))))) WHich as you know I love!!!!!    Thank you for all your updates!! Love your stories!!



Author's Response:

Glad you love the story!  Thanks for reviewing, I love hearing from you!

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Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73 Waiting

Nice!!! LOve it!!  Glad Charlie is getting closer to the right person!!!

 

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Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70 Loosing

Awwww so sad!!!



Author's Response:

Loosing a baby will always and forever be sad.

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Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71Ups & Downs

oh no...I hope they don't make Bella go into labor or something.......Thank you for teh updates!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Well, it's almost time!  Charlie obviously wanted her to calm down as well, probably thinking about her going into lable prematurely.

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Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69 Forced

I can't believe the way things are going....ugh :(((((    Can't they figure out Jessica was married, and consider that person???????



Author's Response:

You would think so, right!

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Angela (V)

Bella will believe what he tells her :)  Thank you!!! I just love it!!! When is Jessica going to go drown herself?????

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Checking In (V)

Awww poor Edward I just love him!!! Bella better stick to what she said about orange paint!!!!!

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Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 Somewhere in a bar . . .

Tyler is Jessica's baby daddy, but Edward is a far better person, so she wants Edward to be her baby's daddy :P Poor Jessica...

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Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80 Ice Cream

CAN NOT WAIT!!!!!!!   Thank you for updating!!!!!

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Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79 Nursery

Sweet!!!!! Thank you for the update!!!

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Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78 Toy

LOVE it!!!!! Thank you for the update!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi

sounds interesting, though it's a bummer Edward didn't take her V-card, nice twist on things though!!!!



Author's Response:

I completely agree with you - but Edward himself is something of a man whore in this story!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Ticket Out by Lynzi

Edward is a jerk, but a funny one...lol!!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you find humor in him!  Is is quite the jerk, though, and SOOOO full of himself!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Promises (L)

Haha naughty Edward!!!



Author's Response:

Yep - VERY naughty Edward!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 A Night to Remember (L)

Hmm not to sure about James...maybe he will get run over by a bus!!!



Author's Response:

You were never more accurate - read on . . .



Author's Response:

You were never more accurate - read on . . .

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)

Hmmm I am seeing some considerate Edward peeking out, haven't got much of a feel what this Bella is like yet, so far she seems kinda whiney...haha



Author's Response:

Yep, some grains of honor in Edward - they were just apparently being hidden by all the partying.  He was just following the need to have challenges, and get the girls . . .

Bella, well, her personality is more difficult -

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)

Thank You!!!  Well I LOVE Your other story so I had to give this one a chance, you are such a good writer!!!



Author's Response:

You are so encouraging, thank you so much!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Married by Vickisan

I'm liking Edward, promise or not, most guys would NOT honor something like getting married to a girl he barely likes whose also pregnant!  Still don't know if I like Bella yet :)



Author's Response:

You may find it difficult to like Bella for awhile - Edward, well he seems to be coming around.  Something is happening to him that he doesn't even understand because deep down, he really is an honorable guy!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan

AWWWWW  Edwards turning into a sweetie whether he means to or not :)))  Love it!



Author's Response:

Secret - one I ALWAYS stick to - Edward is a sweetie in the end.  Always!