I loved it!! Like loved it, loved it!! your spelling and grammar were superb and I just loved the storyline.  I especially liked the part about Jake!! I'm going to read Across the Hall now as you have me hooked!!

Oh Lissa, this is beautiful and scary and sit on the edge of your seat excitement. I haven't enjoyed suck a piece for a while and this is magnificent.  I absolutely love the idea of angels both fallen and "real". I am so very sorry you have had so few reviews as I think more people should read this especially now. I'll send more reviews but suffice it to say that the work you have finished is not going unappreciated.  Thank you for your time and writing strength.

Lissa-thank you. I have read written in the stars and this one and I must say this one was hard to beat.  I felt for Bella when she was so close to dying but what a surprise ending. Usually I look at the end of the story but this time I didn't and I strongly believe that it was in your favour I didn't. If Edward never ages does Bella? I got confused by that part. It was fabulous and just a sit on the edge of your seat, nail-biter.  I absolutely adored all of your characters and especially Dave.  He was so cute and the way he interacted with humans and their "puppies" was a hoot.  I could go on and on but I have tears and so I will end with thank you a million times over.

Your spelling and grammar are impeccable! Bless you as it's so rare to find. Hope you're okay and in good spirits. I love that there is UST in the story. Too much sex is boring.

See you soon, I hope.

I loved it, Clo!! It was so emotionally charged and full of angst and hurt.  Poor Elizabeth and Peter - when they find her, if they find her!!!

i love your writing and your pictures. Thank you for including them.  I missed you when you were gone but knew that things had to work out and they were far more important.

i truly wish that you had a Merry Christmas but I think the better wish is for a Healthy, Happy and the best year with a brand new start.  Xoxo

I LOVE this story!! Love it, love it love it.  I can't believe Edward is so creepy and there are so many little stories in it.  I have no idea what you have planned but suffice it to say, I can NOT wait.  Your spelling and grammar are amazing as well.

OMG, Clo, you have outdone yourself.  I have never laughed so hard or imagined such a sight in all of my life and having grown up on a farm says a lot. Your creativity and imagination are astounding.  Thank you, thank you, thank you for the ammunition for some humour on a rough day.  That page will be forever marked as a keeper.

You had mentioned someone from Bella's past a couple of chapters ago. Is it James by chance? I really don't think we have heard the last from him yet.

Keep knocking them out, Clo, I'll be sure to keep my glove on.

Oh Clo, what a chapter full of love. I can't believe you found that picture of the ultrasound but then I should expect your beautiful pictures.  Yes he did have a humdinger of a penis!! And that picture of them having sex - woo I was struggling to keep still! Thank you for you time and love and fun you put into this series.  I thoroughly enjoyed it. xoxoxo

Boy I am a little hot and bothered now!!! I'm just a little confused.  Bella is living with Edward now and oh my it's a little erotic.  I just dont understand if we know who slashed her tires or was that a long time ago or did I miss something. I love your writing and your grammar is perfect.  I'm looking forward to reading ,more chapters already here and in updates to come.

I want to say how could Caius.  The hate I feel towards him is not even close to being total. That poor child and such an older couple! I certainly pray that they are good to her especially when they have animals which they seem to take great pride in.  Clo, I love your writing, I can feel the emotions and the characters are so real to me.  Thank you, thank you, thank you.

No, no, no!! I am very happy that Brad and Louise has the foresight to the Bella what was going one but I have come to love them and their sweet manner. Stupid asshole, Aro!! It would be a wonderful thing if they thought Brad and Louise were dead but they were alive some how. Ugh this is so sad 😟

I cannot believe the woman who didn't like a strong independent woman named Bella. I don't know what she expected but obviously it's not a sweet taking Bella. I love her and I feel so bad for Edward, I really do. Clo, I know you write the stories as they come to you and I've read almost all of them. Each story is different and each character's manners are unique. That's what makes a great story. I remember telling you about how much I hated and feared Carlisle. Any word about him from your reviewer? i am starting to feel so much different. I think that once this "strong" Bella hears what Edward says, it will be the team of a lifetime. Can hardly wait.

If I said I was scared would you call me a wuss? I know this is only a M rating but the way you have written Carlisle is so wicked, l don't think that Esme or Edward have a chance. I can't wait to read the next chapter but i can. Can't I? As I shiver and hide my eyes!!!

Thank you so much, Clo. It was quite a shock when I saw it but everything is so much better now :). I still can't imagine how you plot this and think of new situations and characters personalities. You always amaze me with your humour, sexy times and your downright scary times.  Love reading your stuff.

Wow, what a departure from the other stories.  Just wondering if you're finishing The Body? Sorry, I had to ask.  I love this story and how strong Edward and Bella both are.

i think the switch is so well done. You must have thought about this story a lot because it is just perfect. I LOVE what they did to Jacob Black and the picture of that girl strung out on meth was so accurately depicted. Drugs make a very sick and selfish world.

i think you are doing an amazing job and can't wait to read more. 

Oh, I loved Deprivation so much.  Great sexy story. I am about 1/3 done with your other one.

I just caught up with The Blessing and I love it.  I feel so bad for Edward that he's hard on himself for the past. I know how he feels (sans tattoos). You wrote it well and I feel so incredibly excited that he met Bella at the right time. Your sexy part was written beautifully with a lot of thought. I just can't figure out how Esme fits into this. However, I am excited to read and find out.  Thanks Lizzie Lee. Oh I read the outtakes and loved them. I haven't joined on Facebook but you will definitely see me.

This was your first? Wow you did awesome. You got the dirty talking Edward down pat and the complete clutz Bella right so I say yep you done good. Your grammar and spelling are very good and it was a great fun read especially the lemonade lemon.  Hope you had as great a time writing as I had reading. Can't wait for your next one.

I love this story, it’s so honest and it makes me think of what my life may have been. Are you drawing this from anyone’s life life you know because it’s so honest. I am thrilled you are rewriting it and keep it going, please?

I love this story, it’s so honest and it makes me think of what my life may have been. Are you drawing this from anyone’s life life you know because it’s so honest. I am thrilled you are rewriting it and keep it going, please?

This story is absolutely different from anything I have read befor and I can't tell you how much I love it and how I can't wait to see it updated. You have everything in here. Mystery, suspense, fun, little blue foxes and most of all they just have to as Emmett says work together to get off the island.  Thanks! Can't wait to get to the next one!!

As a hand slowly creeps up in the back corner, I timidly ask, "'Ma'am, I'm not sure I know who The Endless is ?" I strongly think that Bella was right when The Endless can change to whoever you are. I'm not sure though, at all. Such supernatural/adventure I have never read. I read the chapters voraciously as soon as I see a chapter has been added. 

As a hand slowly creeps up in the back corner, I timidly ask, "'Ma'am, I'm not sure I know who The Endless is ?" I strongly think that Bella was right when The Endless can change to whoever you are. I'm not sure though, at all. Such supernatural/adventure I have never read. I read the chapters voraciously as soon as I see a chapter has been added. 

Thank you for being a Jake hater. Punching him in the gut might have been a little more tame than he deserved. Edward is so mysterious but then what the hell - a screw is a screw and fuck he would make my world go around and around etc..... I like that word dicktastic!, suits him just fine. Hmmm...now you got me thinkin

I am TOTALLY loving this story. I can't stop reading it. Honestly it is becoming one of my favourite mafia stories. You have everything in it. The importance of "the family" and the family, the respect clause like in this chapter, the strength of your characters - everything. I love how you wrote about Rosalie's character and her softness towards Bella but also being the first one who tells Bella what is what and the problems they share. And Alice? I am so freaking out about how Alice is with the family, what a unique way and certainly not her normal "Barbie Bella makeovers". Excellent writing. I had to literally stop myself from reading so I could write this review. Keep it up. You seem to know the Mafia pretty good. 

It wouldn't surprise me if it wasn't the Colletti's. I'm probably wrong but something tells me. I can't believe it's Emmett's and Rosalie's house!! Are they dead or alive? Please don't make us wait too long you talented girl.

Such suspense already? Who I'm not sure if he let the bastard know. It's Jacob right? He's angry because Bella up and left him and now wants payback? Just wondering! i can taste that forboding of frightfulness and mystery. Bring it on, I can take it!! This said while I hid under my bed!!

I like this story already!! There's already riffraff with Jessica and now James which the Cullen's don't need. I could see Eclipse totally through the description you gave and that is difficult to do. I can't wait to read more of Careful Now.

Wow! What a shocker finding out that Bella was 18! She is a conundrum indeed. Don't know want the problem with Jasper is but she is sure not having anything to do with him. I am thrilled that James and Jake are there to help her out. Now that Edward and Bella have had a little talk and sorted some things out, it will be interesting where things go. Chapter #9 I'm waiting for ye.