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Bio:
Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives. But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl. Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family. Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124870
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
7 vampires and they conveniently miss her father strapping her to his bed and then miss however Bella ended up in the forest.
Not the smartest crayons in the box right there, for people who suspect abuse.
Please don't insult their intelligence as vampires and have them make such stupid mistakes in the rest of the story :)
And all this talk about "ahh, we can't help her unless she asks for it... they are vampires for crying out loud. Especially Rosalie shouldn't be to bothered by Charlie having an unfortunate accident, considering her past and all.
Just saying...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! No worries, I'm not offended. Charlie won't be having any "accidents" though - sorry! His ass is being hauled to prison, where it belongs. But not for a while yet.
And the whole free choice/decision thing is a central part of this story in so many ways. I understand if that makes you not want to read on - I know I already have a lot of frustrated readers elsewhere because of the choices Bella and Edward make later on. But I do promise a happy ending...eventually. :-)