Reviews by Sunshine-Sue
The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Letter Banner

Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47778
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Fuse

well hot damn!eddie sure does have some sexy dreams. the concert sounded great and eddie is so far gone it is funny. big bad rapper man needs his honey to keep him sane. so sweet!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Sailing

the control is slipping and these two are about ready to just say fuck it and give in! oh yummy things to come!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Decompensate

wow eddie kinda flew off the handle there for a bit. but hey who can blame the guy? tanya is all kinds of fucked up and she is just causing more and more trouble. the only up side will be when they go to court for abby....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Redeemed

bella is exactly what eddie and velvet need right now. a safe place to ground them and bring them back together as one person. eddie has already seen it happen a little....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Superstar

 eddie handled himself pretty well in his meetings, and bella did great in the interview. they keep connecting on deeper and deeper levels. going to the zoo!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Sacrifice

wow not really sure if bella knows what she is getting herself into with her offer to take abby. but hey she is and will continue to be a part of abby and eddie's life so as bella said why not?! time to turn on the sexy music because it is time to get it on!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Butterfly

woohoo1 finally! and boy did they both need that.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Lucky

married?!?! is this really how they wanna take that step? eddie needs to lean that bella is a big girl and oh so understanding. she keeps surprising him.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Goodbye

so sweet and sexy all rolled into one! can't believe bella asked for it hard and fast damn! just what every guy wants to hear.

up next the visit. wonder how bad that train wreck is gonna be?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Confrontation

well unfortunately for abby and bella tanya and her family choose to be fucktards again however that definately makes things easier for the court case! back together and on the road again. wonder who is outside the elevator?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Conundrum

Glad to see that bella is all right and the baby question is out. Eddie will watch her better now. Wonder what jasper is gonna do to mike?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Unstoppable

Oooookkkkkk?! What is eddie up to? Why does charlie have to be there? I smell something fishy goin on here..! The concert was great mad props to the person who wrote ec's rap!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Proposition

Wow just wow! What a way to propose! *sigh* so sweet and crazy, bet no one will ever forget it! Tanya seemedm.. Better-ish? Hope court goes well....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Sanctuary

This shit is getting bad I hope the judge sees through the shit to the trueth.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Change

wow that was a hot session in the studio, makin some sweet music! yummy. i wonder if eddie had the tapes still recording while they were in there? that would be fucking awesome evidence that eddie and bella were indispossed and sooo not thinking of anything to do with a gun.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Elphaba

tanya is dead. now eddie bella and abby can be the perfect little family they were ment to be. it is sad but this definately makes things easier for them to be happy.



Author's Response:

Hi!  I just wanted to pop in and say thank you to you for reviewing each chapter as you read.  This story has been complete long enough that most people don't review at all, let alone each chapter so I wanted you to know how much I appreciate it.  It's like reading the story all over again through your eyes and that makes each word woth writing.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!  When you get done, if you would like to read the one currently posted outtake of this story, let me know and I will hook you up!  Thanks again!  changedbyEdward

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Harmony

wow mtv! so holy shitting! and poor eddie all insecure and not wanting to hurt and corrupt bella, so adorable. i really hope these 2 can move forward to happily ever after soon

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Adjustments

love the dress so bella and velvet! obviously some foreshadowing of a sleeping pill problem for bella in the future. time for bella to step out as the wife of a star!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Paroxysm

oh shit! this is not good. em was right though eddie needs to learn to turn velvet off when he is not needed. plus eddie better figure his shit out before morning. and poor bella it may have looked bad but eddie should have known better. this will definately be an interesting morning after. and what about the press?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Exacerbation

well fuck that was so not the way i thought it was gonna go down! both the fight and the pill problem! mother fuck so thankful the story is done so i don't have to wait!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Realization

life seems to be back to as normal as these two get. glad to see that they talked and decided to work on the big stuff and get closer together.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Completion

looks like life is pretty great. everyone and everything pulling in closer and them all just being a family. therap is never fun or easy but so worth it.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

yay they finally got their happily ever after! that was a hell of a year for them. thank you taking me on the ride!

thank you for sharing your story.

suzie :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

sos

 

Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55121
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

and they meet....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oh boy he is in trouble.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

love the last line!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

boys are so easy to mess with to get what you want



Author's Response:

They sure are lol

Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

well now thet are in it deep...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

it always gets tough when dealing with the forbidden fruit. and trying to play it off just makes it worse.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oooohhhh.... how did he find out??

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

oooo.. what did edward do? and how are they going to hide this thing form em, rose, jas, and alice?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

glad to see that bella called rose out on being a bitch and letting bella take the fall.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

wonder if ben is an old friend or edward's old dealer? looks like thing are going to start getting interesting. why can the others not just give ben the cash to settle rose's debt? i mean they all have lots of it.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

oh my goodness! off to chapter 12 to hopefully see edward's pov and find out what the fuck happened.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh demitri! have not seen him as the main baddie before, i like it!!!

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

shit is gonna hit the fan now! and poor edward is not even awake to see it comming!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

well i guess the shit has truely hit the fan



Author's Response:

It really has.

Thanks for all your wonderful reviews so far x

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

no way edward is gonna leave it like that

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

yay they are comming to save her!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

yay!! wonder how the welcome home will go?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

ooo.... daddy is gonna beat his ass! and she is so gonna be grounded! lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

wonder if edward set her up there at the end with the shower thing? trying to catch her in the act.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

nice to see that daddy dearest is putting b's needs above his need to kill e. wonder what the hell rose's problem is

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

well now that sure was the dam breaking! here's to hopeing that thingsare looking up for everyone

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

yay on the way back to normal

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

yay almost at the happy ending!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

time for the big secret....

dun, dun, dun....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

well looks like it is HEA time. glad that they worked it out but it really was shitty of edward to not let bella know that he could relate.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Epilogue

good story. thank you for sharing it with us!



Author's Response:

Your welcome-thank you for all your lovely reviews and for reading!

Taming The Bear by AzureEyedI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Emmett's wish for a tryst with his brother's wife takes a turn he never expected. O/S for winner of author auction from The Fandom Gives Back. MATURE for lemons of the BDSM variety. I mean it. Don't try this at home. If you're under 18 or can't buy porn legally, turn away now!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4724 Read Count: 1432
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Taming The Bear

fuck that was hot! and the twist so cool i can just imagine the look on emmy's face - priceless!

My Prodigal Son by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake. Carlisle POV. Takes place after chapter 10 and before chapter 11. If you haven't read Edward's Clan it may not make much sense. How does Carlisle REALLY feel about Edward and Bella?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2107 Read Count: 775
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

how can he think of himself as a good father when he stole eddie's childhood and brought him into this world? i can sorta see how daddy c thought he was doing right by his family and providing for them, twisted logic but he was trying to give his family the best. but to force this life on his 10 year old son? and in such a way? no logic behind that and no way does it show love for his child. then to say that alice was too good for the life? oh my god, double standard anyone?!?!

Summary:

Bella and Edward had been together since the first day of school. Jasper also had his sights set on Bella since he first laid eyes on her in 7th grade.  Constant flirtation over the years has brought Jasper to a climax. Is Bella going to feel the aftereffects?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4294 Read Count: 2960
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow, i think i need to stop and take a breather after that one!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

the idea is cool it will be cool to see where you will take this.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

you did great on the lemony goodness. looks like edward is alittle possessive. i can't believe that he was all cool with this knowing that bella is only 17!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

omg em is gonna freak out when he hears that eddie took b's v-card! and you just know he has been talking about this hot girl he banged!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well now this nlooks like it will be fun. em can not really say anything about e&b's age difference if he is banging rose, now can he?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

it is hot to see him being all possessive like this but mainly because bella likes it. it would be creepy if it was one sided, ya know? keep him the way he is

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

there is no way in hell edward wants to spill the beans to em! RIGHT!!???!!! i mean that would be suicide. off to chapter 7 to find out!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow that was a smart move on eddie's part the whole 'what's good for the goose...'

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

very hot!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

it is nice to see that theroles were kinda reversed in this one. bella got to see the other side of the jelousy (sp?). they both got to see how far this could go - love - forever.

enjoy your time away!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

well the accident was a surprise i thought that you would have seth make a pass at bella to prove edward's point, maybe have seth push too far, not take no for an answer, then have edward come in and save the day...

this way it opens everything up for the truth about their relationship to come out.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

yay! it is out in the open! minus the parents of course.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

i understand the time ristrictions of real life annd do not hold it against you. parenthood can be hard especially with them spread out as you do a 5 year old and 2 teenagers?!?! wow! i have 2 teens of my own and an extra one that now lives with me and the house is always crazy! and i have a full time hubby here to help. as well i give you props on writing at all i do not think i have either the talent nor the self confidence to even try to write a fic. so thank you. for taking time out of your real life to write something for me to enjoy durring my down time!

as for the size of the chapters well i do like long chapters but on the flip side a regular updateing schedual is great too. and sometimes with real life it is great to sit down and zip through a shorter chapter. either way is fine by me. whatever you want to give is great with me. again this is something that you are doing for your enjoyment and for the reader's benefit do what you feel is good for you and do not let the haters get you down!

wow that was a long rant on my part! sorry

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well I bet mom and dad feel like shit! Now things should start heating up.

Summary:

Bella's first trip to England at Christmas isn't exactly a Dickens novel, especially when her host family's son seems to hate her guts. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35950 Read Count: 12733
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i just read what you have done of 'the girlfriend experience' i liked it so much i thought i'd read som more of your stuff.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well edward sounds like a dream!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

that is more like the edward we all know and love!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

eddie seems to be an asshole. but he better watch out or santa's gonna bring him an ass whoopin' at the hands of emmett!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

ok what is up with edward? spying on him what was he ding at 2 in the morning?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

poor bella, all alone and surrounded by love

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

poor girl, everybody does different stuff behind closed doors. to each their own.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow do not know if i would like that. i think i would want to have the big question popping done with me being the only one saying yes in the room. bella is gonna feel so left out

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

looks like eddie is trying to get closer to bella. how can a & r not notice how much the wedding talk is getting to bella?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

mad donna's sounds so cool!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

just a quiet normal day wonder how the night will go....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

ooo... who the girl?

what is gonna happen tonight?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

poor bella she feels left out and left behind

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

as aparent thank you for the PSA, loved the tidbit of how to tell if it's sex, too funny, very true though.

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

it is about time that alice and rose see that they have been self-absorbed. edward was a gent in not wanting to get too attached when it was over before it began. wonnder what is up with angela? did she break up with ben?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

well what ang did was wrong but what is up witht the way alice is going off on bella it is not like edward is a teenager or in a relationship. they were both consenting adults! alice needs to calm the fuck down and stop being a bitch!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

glad to see we are moving towards the resolution of the problems with everyone.

so happy to see that daddy c pointed out how over dramatic everyone was being!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

thank you for the insight into your writing and reasoning it does make sence.

so were is this gonna lead? i mean he is still in london and she is still in the states.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

so glad that they are getting their HEA. the phone calls from the neighbors were too funny! glad mine do not have my phone number! i have had the joy of neighbors banging on the wall god i was mortified! very satisfied but i coulda died!

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

bella is walking into a ready made family that already loves her and is looking out for her. i wonder if she will be able to deal with that?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

poor sweet girl.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

wonder what bella is gonna think of all of the things that alice and esme buy her? poor rose yes she is a bitch but it looks like for once everyone around her is not gonna explain it away with a 'that's just how she is...'it is about time!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

looks like little bella has stirred things up without even knowing it! wonder what happened to rose about a year ago...?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh boy i wonder how far the abuse goes? obviously there were enough serious injuries that bella needed medical attention often enough for her to learn to distrust doctors. but that has to be the tip of the iceburg, when you think of all of the 'punishments'that were not bad enough to see a doctor. poor girl.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

bella seems to be getting used to her new life, slowly but surely. i wonder what will happen at the birthday party?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

yay rose kinda redeemed herself. still not sure what happened to rose, and why would she think it would 'kill them both'?rape? abortion? miscarriage? cheating? oh the possibilities are endless.

thank you for writing.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

so cute! bella got a puppy. everyone got a hug. she is getting comfortable with things in her new life

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

well now the door is open for them to dig deeper into bella's history and her pain. hopefully she can really begin the healing process now.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

wow the things that happen at a baseball game! hold on bella the cavalry is on the way.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well at least everybody showed up before something really bad happened. eddie got a few shots in and then got to play the knight in shinning armor!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

wonder what happened between em and rose? must have been bad if he ended up in the beer gardens.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

well first day down the rest of the year to go. wonder how long it will be before eddie and bella realize what they are feeling for eachother and start acting on it? maybe durring class when they are apart from the rest of the group?

and what about the em and rose issue? still lots of questions there.

happy easter!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

ooooo... the first kiss together and her very first, at her first birthday party! the poor girl is gonna die of happy overload! so cute to see edward jelous of jake, but i wonder what emmy is gonna think of eddie kissing his baby sis

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well isn't little alice a fircracker? thinking that she had a free pass to jump jasper. hey at least a&j got a good kiss out of it. wonder if they will be able to stop or if they will start to sneak? poor bella, she just has to get through the trial and then she can continue down the road to recovery.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

yay renee is gone and they do not ever have to worry about her again! and eddie boy has finally admitted his feelings for bella. now we just have to get throught the asking permission of the fathers and we are on to the dating!