Reviews by Sunshine-Sue
Leap of Faith by Missus T Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Eric and Sookie are reunited years after a devastating break-up. Eric is an active duty Marine and Sookie is still struggling to move on.  Will they take a second chance at true love, or is there too much history between them? AH/AU/OOC, etc.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, All Human
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121265 Read Count: 8282
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Daddy Mac's

the ring is gorgeous! and the perposal was sweet and heartfely, perfect for these two. now we just need to decide on when they will be having the big day.

Dead to Rights by Malanna Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary: Past Featured Story

LA has a new King, things with Eric are as yet unresolved, and new dangers lurk around the corner for Sookie. She’s always been lucky, but is her luck about to run out?

Takes place immediately following the short story "Gift Wrap" in Wolfsbane and Mistletoe – spoilers for books 1-8.

First story in my "Dead" series.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37361 Read Count: 3455
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

well holy shit!

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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow!

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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

damn it bill! you are an asshole so just give it up! she is not gonna take you back and who she loves or doesn't love is none of your damned business! erggg!

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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

holy shit it's not a modern wedding dress is it?!?!?! what is the king up to? and how will sookie be able to wear eric's pendant?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ok really pam may have come off as a bitch here but she is absolutely right sookie knows how shit works and even if it is not all of the ins and outs she gets the gist of it and she really needs to face reality and grow up or she will get herself and possibly others killed.

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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh boy can you say creepy? ick! i wonder what the king's plans are...?

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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Well the tally is in and even a 'win' isn't quite as sweet with all of the losses.

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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

They all stepped in to help her. Now we just have to see if they succeeded in keeping her alive. And what the damage was to the good guys.

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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

poor sookie. how much worse will her night get?

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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

off to war we go! and sookie is getting to see the effect she has had on so many of the supes.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow conspiricy theory batman!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

so victor is on eric's side? and the weres and shifters are there to help? i'm with you sookie i am confused!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oh boy all hell is gonna break loose and sookie is gonna, as usual, be right in the middle. i wonder what eric is gonna do?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

A sad day setting the hurt and dead to right. But I wonder what really happened last night?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I agree sookie! What the fuck was that? And the 'what are you' what the hell is up with that!?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Sookie's mom? Gonna guess not the mom she grew up knowing, but who and what is she?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

heehee sookie and the girls got the drop on eric! and he was wowed i'm sure by not just the look and the surprise of his lover showing up but the shock of getting her so close without knowing.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

well hot damn! you sure did get fucked didn't you sook?!?! and sounds like you greatly enjoyed every minute of it! heehee but alas it looks like it is time to come back to reality.

In Between by Malanna Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Companion short story for Dead to Rights, containing some set up for the sequel.  Think of it as similar to one of Ms. Harris' anthology pieces. Oh yes, it's told from Bill's POV, which I hope I'm getting at least somewhat right. Bill doesn't 'speak' to me like Eric does, and I find myself struggling to get inside his head, but it was important for this piece to be from his POV (which will make sense down the road). If you haven't read Dead to Rights, I highly suggest doing so first.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6040 Read Count: 460
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aww poor bill. NOT! you are a whiney asshole bill and sookie is so much better off with eric. and eric is right sookie would not what you to die out of vengence for what was done, she has forgiven you - as much as she can, and you should too.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

looks like bill found someone to help take his mind off of sookie.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

well son of  a bitch! i saw the sex and even the rage once bill saw eric with sookie, hell, i even get why he's so pissed but her offer to help? that was pretty unexpected

Left for Dead by Malanna Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Sequel to Dead to Rights. After the battle for Sookie's survival, a tribunal has been called, and the vampire community is facing threats to their very existence.

Spoilers for books 1-8 and the short story "Gift Wrap" from the Wolfsbane and Mistletoe anthology.

If you have not read my prior pieces, Dead to Rights and In Between, this story will make little sense.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62411 Read Count: 3617
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

arlene is a bitch and should hhave gotten a punch to the face a long time ago. glad to see sookie finally stood up to her and knocked her down a couple of notches. heehee

not sure if i trust elana, bill and sookie have both mentioned she is the least vampire-like vamp they have ever met. i wonder how much trouble the girls are gonna be walking into going to the tribunal?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow that is one hell of a plan, and like elana said it has about a snowball's chance in hell of working but at least it is something.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ok what the fuck just happened? she teleported to eric in her sleep, somehow managed to survive whatever happened in that room, got pissed and stole eric back home with her?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well she remembers what happened with victor - that's good.

do they have to go and save the eric of the past to ensure their future? has sookie taken them back so they can do it all again? and not lose all of that time she was so mad about in romania?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow sookie pulled them back in time to the night of her finding eric, the night that started the love and bond for them. but the world is frozen in that time. who is calling them? is it sibyl? and how does eric know sibyl?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

well holt shit eric was not all human as a human?!?! and he has a magical sister who is half water nymph. and his maker is sibyl? and somehow sibyl is sookie's mother? is that like some kind of magical inncest? or was eric made with sookie in mind? a kind of pre planning 1000 years in the making? wow so many questions and hubbie says it's time to go do shopping! fuck i gotta wait on the answers!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow eric's maker is the old blind seer from rhodes! that is some important news, it would make him both powerful and a threat if the world were to find out. and still how does this all tie into sookie? there is obviously more to this than simply eric's involment with sookie....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

everything is possible with love. she offered herself to him to ensure his happiness and that was what he needed to allow himself to give her all of him.

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Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

so eric's vamp mother is sookie's great great great great great great ...............grandmother. wow holy shit! and mixed in throughout the years and generations are a mixture of all different forms of magical creatures like a tie holding pieces of each and every form magic can hold.

eric was ment to be a vamp and was ment to be born from sibyl her only vamp child, and sookie was ment to be his love again coming from this magical line. the powers that be have had this in the works since the beginning of time....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

well holy shit so much information to take in! so many possibilities.....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

ok so no baby for sookie. of course she would object to having a child with someone other than eric and then having the child taken from her. but she brought all of their friends into this realm to offer them time and safety as well. what will this mean for them all?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

eric will be the hero yet again, at least this time he seems to have come to terms with his hero status as far as sokie is concerned. but again why are pam, victor, bill, elana, alelia, dawson, and sam there? who brought them? who allowed it? what will they do?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

oh boy! how safe is the oasis? will the victor look alike be a problem for sookie? will she jump sam when she finds him? will it be sam? will she end up prgnant after all?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

well elana has proven that she was not a friend but a planted spy, and she has suffered justly by meeting her final death. eric and bill are out of commision as will pam, the real victor, and the sibyl with the coming of the sun. looks like their time is up. will sookie be able to fight for herself?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

she gave herself for eric, just as she said she would. what will happen now?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

so sad. but the one night to feel his deep sorrow and regret is so eric. fight for all your worth everyday and only show weekness in private and only when truely needed.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

ok holy fuck! there are no words. just holy shit!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

that's it eric you sit back and enjoy winning back the love of your life. this should be a fun chase!

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

holy shit 24 minutes?!?!? and she still feels it. she can feel the draw and he said there was a flicker of rememberance....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

wow avel is a good guy? and sookie and eric are the chosen ones to reconnect and rebirth into something new and powerful.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

time to get your woman back!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

so close and then interupted! so who is preston? and what the hell has he done to sookie to scare her so badly? eric is gonna kill him

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

all of the players and pieces are coming together.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

she is back! eric has found his own power and is now ready to take on his aunty and complete the bond.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

she really is back and the time is at hand. all of the playrs are in place, the end is near and destiny will come to pass.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

finally they come together to meet their destiny. and hubbie says it is time to go do the weekly shopping! erg! right at the good part! ok off to the mall run store to store real quick and then come back lock myself in my room with my lappie and finish the story. plan is set now time to set it in motion.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

they are one and a spark of hope. but while back on earth they become the 2 but still joined as 1. every part of each person has been melded with the other, creating one entity in the form of two bodies

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

wow they have come together and now get to bask in the joys of eachother for a while. and eric slept! he dreams! i wonder what his first dream was? loved the way you completely drew us in to your story - a sign of a very talented writter. the depth of your world and the thought and research was visible in every chapter and layer of the story. so happy to hear you will be continuing the story to allow us to see where these 2 will go and the full reunion with their friends.

thank you so much for sharing your stories!

suzie:)

Summary:

A simple eight word acrostic poem for the word Twilight.

http://i904.photobucket.com/albums/ac250/jadionanoish/Twilightword.jpg


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Poetry
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Poetic Twilight, The Twilight Saga Acrostic Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10 Read Count: 181
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2010 Updated: 21 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

yay the deed has been done! they are bonded together and in the funnest way possible.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

eddie has to pee on her! heehee.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well at least he made a point of waking her to tell her it was nothing to do with her.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well now it would seem that eddie still has a few control issues

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

poor bella!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

why do the wolves want her?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

goodness all those prego hormones and no sex?!? wow poor eddie and bella

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow misunderstanding! these two need to learn to stop jumping to conclusions and talk to eachother!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

family is a force of love and can beat hatred's ass if given the chance

A New Normal by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's perfect world is crumbling around her. She feels as though she's drowning when she meets an angry, broken Edward. Can he save her while living in an abusive nightmare of his own? Can they save each other? 

"Growing up is hard. It's hard for everyone,however, some are luckier than others. I always thought I was one of those lucky ones, but as I sat there, I realized how wrong I was."

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138890 Read Count: 29516
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 03 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Becoming Numb

poor eddie! he sounds like cinderella, being punished and having to do chores and be his dad's bitch. 3 weeks for missing a game?!? but at least so far there is no mention of physical abuse...



Author's Response:

Hey!

Thanks so much for taking the time to review the chapters, that's so sweet! I hope you like the rest of the story! 

Katie 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The News

there is nothing worse for a child than to see their strong, powerful, 'super-hero' parent turn human and get sick. the realization that he is just a man a capable of leaving you for good.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Seeking Comfort

well i wonder what is up with eddie? and how will these 2 meet? i kinda figured her truck would die on the side of the road and eddie would roll in to save the day but i guess not.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Brown Eyes and the Crazy Man

and so they meet...

i wonder what is going on at home for eddie and em? why things are so hard on eddie and not so much em?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Girl's NIght

i feel so sad for alice no child should have to feel that way. and unfortunately too many do.

well that was wierd! i wonder what is going on in emmy's house. i guess we will find out in chapter 5!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Do you Want to Go?

they ae so cute! all unsure and innocent

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Details

so sweet that b wants to have e pick her up from the hospital so charlie doesn't miss out on this. wonder if alice will be able to change jasper's ways...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 First Impressions and Second Chances

well that was sweet and they are so cute how they are fumbling around with all of this relationship stuff.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Friends No More

well em was an asshole. doesn't matter if he likes her he should have treated her better than he did.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 All Falls Down

it is too bad that poor eddie doesn't know how to deal with adult/parental affection and caring. my 'extra kid' had issues like that when he first came to stay with us, we loved him, showed him routine and rules, and he thrived. but it was really hard for him after we had him for 4 months and his mom made him go home and he lost all of that. he still knows that we are here for him whenever the need is there. it sucks that kids have to live like this and it is amazing what happens to them when the are treated with love and respect.

as you can see this really touches close to my heart.

 

i hope charlie pulls through.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Playing Nice

what did he do????

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Seeing Red

i can not even believe that em did that! talk about a violation! good on eddie for kicking his ass.

i just wonder what awaits bella when she starts to 'slum it in public school'...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The Big Day

well i amhappy to see that charlie got his transplant. i did not know that you take on traits of the donor. is that true or just something you made up?

and as ever eddie and bella are too freakin' sweet! i mean i'm not even cussing! wow you must be a good influence on me!



Author's Response:

Hey!

Wow, thanks again for taking the time to review! Yes, with a bone marrow transplant you do take on the traits. I'm not sure if you do with other transplants. My dad had to go through this and they warned us of exactly that. He would receive her allergies and what not... kind of interesting. I hope you like the rest of the story!

Katie 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Summer Blues

i can not even imagine having to deal with all of that!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Killers, Frogs and Turkeys, Oh My

i hope charlie is gonna be ok. these people need to catch a break!

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40841
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Under the canopy

they got to have their lovey dovey time and it would seem that thankfully tanya has not completely broken eddie's trust for others in a dominant role.,

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Initiation

bella is bowing down to hot daddy c! what a lucky girl, he could spank me any day.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: At the club

well at least carl let her cum while he took off the clamps. that shit has got to hurt!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Flashbacks

wow that sounded like a hell of a punishment!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Young Bella moving to town

wow bella is loaded?!?!? and she met carlisle online, wow

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The meeting

well it sure does sound like eddie shows some submissive tendancies. i wonder if bella called him or if she just blew it off as an 'it'll never work anyways' kind of thing...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The business card

amazing how thinking of something with 'green eyes' feels like cheating to bella. i get it only because she expanded the thought from ' wow he's hot! i wonder what he looks like neked' to actually thinking of calling him and starting something with him.

i wonder what carlisle is gonna think of where bella allowed her mind to go?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Bella's daydream and Carlisle's "punishment"

well i am so happy that carlisle was open and understanding to bella's need to top

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chocolate coloured fantasy

i wonder how long it takes eddie to realize he wants to be dominated? how does he get from here to there?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: New games at the club

sounds like miss bella is anatural domme, all she needed to do was open that door.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Soap cleans all

Well just as I thought eddie-boy does not seem too happy that eddie jr. Wants to be dominated. Looks like he is gonna have to come to terms with what his body really needs.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Edward's morning

Well at least eddie realizes that dropping the card in her bag was probably a dumb move. He seems to be more accepting of his new needs

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Master Aro

Well I agree background is important. And to see that eddie is still thinking of and dreaming about miss bella, well that just makes the wait for the meeting that much better. I can just imagine eddie waiting in a room at the club all neked and in his glory, eyes down not allowed to look at his new mistress until the end when she comands him to cum and he sees her and realizes his dreams have come true. Yummy!

Author's Response:

You have a vivid imagination :-) That's not quite the way it's going to happen, but I hope you'll like it anyway ;)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Mistress Tanya

Well sweetheart I am a reformed lurker and review every chapter I read now. I figure it is the least I can do since you and all of the other authors feed my ff adiction daily, it's like paying my dealer! Lol! So you will always have love from me. And do not worry about what people want to see in each chapter this is your story! We should all be happpy that you have chosen to share it with us ;)
He has seen her! Now what is he gonna do about it?!?!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: On the floor

I think the bj thing was done rather well. Especially with edward's realization it is not about gender but about dominance and submission.
Tanya is a bitch! Just had to throw that in.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The job and harsh introductions at the club

well eddie tried to be brave and to stay 'in the game' too bad tanya broke all of the rules and forced him to this point. at least he will have miss bella to help heal him mentally, physically and emotionally. shit like this could turn someone away from what they want and need in thier life purely out of fear and pain. there are better, less insane ways to end a relationship!

tanya is a BITCH! sorry again just had to throw that in there.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

#1 - i am sorry for your loss and pray that peace finds you and your loved ones in you time of sadness.

 

ok well like you said in your reply to my review way back when... kinda like i had it but not. my meeting was happy and sexy yours was scary and painful. but their eyes met and the recognition was there and now they can move forward in all senses of the word and find happiness together in the playroom and in real life.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Reasons

poor carlisle! i mean it is kinda fucked up that he thinks his kinda step daughter once removed(?) is sexy and gets hard looking at her but still tanya is a bitch and is holding carlisle and esme hostage with her blackmail. maybe esme needs to know what she is trying to pull, maybe that would help her tell the bitch to back the fuck off. i mean carlisle and esme by default are allowing people to be placedd in danger simply so the kids don't find out their daddy was a dick head, two timing mother fucker who beat their mother and fathered a sick, sadistic, twisted bitch?!?! come on the kids will get over it and they deserve to know what kind of a bastard their father really was and that they should watch out for tanya.

ok i think my rant and rave session is over... yup pretty sure it's done now.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Awakening

am i allowed to review more than once? how smutty can you get? i think these 2 really need to have some lovin'even if their kind of lovin'is a bit more than most would want.

 

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189020
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hot and sexy! i lovedd the twist at the end.



Author's Response:

Was I able to surprise you?  Thank you so much!  I'm glad you liked it!  I hope you like the glimpse back in time to how they met :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

aww alice and jasper are just too cute!



Author's Response:

:) I know, I love them together.  They just compliment one another well and I feel like they'd be great to hang out with!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

aww see what a little misunderstanding can lead to? now they are both sad. and what will bella do to make it up to eddie?



Author's Response:

Haha I don't let them be sad for long as a rule.  I like my characters communicating :)  I promise you won't have to wait long :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well it is all better but i think b still owes e a 'proper' apology. heehee



Author's Response:

Haha "proper" you say?  And just what would you deem that?  They both screwed up a little and now they're forging ahead ;)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Game On

loved how emmy and jasper picked on eddie. too funny. and i can't wait to see more of em's pranks, seriously a double taser?!? one to the face and one to the junk! sounds like a hoot! good thing the boys were out of it for a while to give em a chance to laugh then run. heehee

the football stuff was way over my head, but i could get the gist of it, and felt the game excitement.



Author's Response:

Haha Emmett is a handful and a half, clearly!  I think my favorite things are the boys bonding though.  They are awesome together.  I want to watch The Hangover with Emmett, I think it would be an awesome experience, provided he was taser free!

I won't go that into the game from now on probably but I do want to show that action side of it.  I don't like sports fics that don't have any sports ;)  Glad you were able to get the excitement though, that's the important thing!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Kick Off

i wonder how long bella will be able to hold out?



Author's Response:

:) Good question!  Both of them are sorely tempted!